| locopiccolo |
Author has written 3 stories for Marching Band. 11/03/06 Last week, RyukoVulpix and I got together and made some edits to "Murder in G Minor." (We go to the same high school.) So, while some of the changes are very insignificant, there are others that could potentially impact the plot, slightly. RyukoVulpix also finished the next chapter, so in addition to the changes dispersed throughout the first eleven chapters, there's a new chapter out there for everyone to read. The beginning of December will mean that it's been a year since we started writing "Murder in G Minor," so we hope to have it completed by then. Keep in mind that it's only a goal. It could still be several days, weeks, months... heck, I sure hope it doesn't come down to years, but... ~ 10/24/06 There's a new chapter to "Murder in G Minor." It's only taken me, like, a month to write it. I have been extremely busy, though, just for the record. All-State auditions were last Saturday, and I got recalled. (Which is really good, considering that I play the flute. You wouldn't believe how many flutes there are around here. It's ridiculous. I was competing against about sixty flutists.) Mind, I didn't actually make All-State... but I got recalled. It's better than nothing. Also, I posted the revised edition of "Ode to the Piccolo." (It's the version that I actually turned in to my Composition teacher.) I only changed the middle two stanzas, so it's just about the same as it was before. Read it, if you want. ~ 10/11/06 Check it out. I've got an ode to add to my list of accomplishments. Sweet. It's probably the best poetry I've ever written. Considering that I don't really write poetry, though... well, it's not bad. If anyone has any suggestions, feel free to leave a review. In fact, I encourage you to leave a review. I'd like to know what everyone else thinks. (My opinion of my own work is probably biased.) And while you're at it, go ahead and read that other story, "Murder in G Minor." ~ 9/23/06 I've got a story now. RyukoVulpix has allowed me to post "Murder in G Minor." It's pretty sweet. We wrote it together, via email. It may be finished... eventually. Hey, it's marching band season. We've got a couple of big competitions coming up, in addition to countless football games. And I've got absolutely nothing against AP Biology and AP American History, but they really do suck. Go ahead and take them if you don't believe me. I'll just laugh. Anyway, I don't know if there'll ever be more than this one story, so don't get your hopes up. But it's better than the nothing I had here before. Read it and enjoy. ~ 9/19/06 Well... this is great and all, but I doubt anyone will actually read this besides the people that I know. I mean, I don't have any stories. Who would know that I exist, unless I leave a review? Anyway, AP classes suck. Band rocks. That's about all I've got. | |||||
1. Murder in G Minor » reviewsAn attack on a high school band director puts everyone on edge. Will the perpetrator be caught, or will the safety of the entire band and its directors be in jeopardy? Written by RyukoVulpix and locopiccolo.Marching Band - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Suspense - Chapters: 12 - Words: 6,178 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 11-3-06 - Published: 9-23-062. Ode to the Piccolo REVISEDThis is a slightly edited version of 'Ode to the Piccolo,' with the two middle stanzas somewhat different than that of the first edition. I'd like give a shout out to my editors, so... thanks, editors!Marching Band - Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Published: 10-24-06 - Complete3. Ode to the Piccolo reviewsA simple ode to an instrument worthy of praise... somewhat. Sure, you can't tune them to save your life, but it's all good. Written for my Composition class, after reading 'Odes to Common Things,' by Pablo Neruda.Marching Band - Rated: K - English - Poetry/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-11-06 - Complete