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since: 11-02-06, id: 1158117, Profile Updated: 04-19-13
country: UK
Author has written 42 stories for Naruto, Sailor Moon, CSI: New York, House, M.D., Criminal Minds, Pokémon, X-Men: The Movie, and Wicked.

Name: Lucy

Age: 20

About my writing:

I am a fanfiction reader and writer of Wicked, Sailor Moon, CSI: New York, House MD, X-Men and Criminal Minds. My favourite Sailor Moon pairing is Minako/Setsuna, Setsuna being my favourite character out of Sailor Moon. There aren't enough stories about dear Setsuna so I make it my business to write them. She's a really deep and mysterious character and I love writing about deep stuff. :D

Setsuna, i.e. Sailor Pluto, is my favourite character to write about and is the focus of my deepest fics (especially the more recent ones e.g. 'Duty Driven'). I like her air of mystery and stoic personality that comes with regard to being the guardian of time, and this has led me to write fics which explore deep into her mind, especially with regard to her solitude / loneliness and the fact that she's been around centuries longer than the other senshi. I have a tendency to exploit the darker, lonelier side of her personality so my fics about her can seen a bit angsty (Especially 'Duty Driven' which was so angsty that I upped the rating) but they hopefully do a decent job in discerning the way things are from her perspective, because she is so different from the other senshi.

I consider myself an extremely emotional writer, this meaning that I take any situation and write all the thoughts and feelings behind it. I seem to have a knack for writing very depressing things. Just read 'Duty Driven' - someone actually sent me a message asking me if I'd been through depression. Just for your reassurance, don't worry, no I haven't. I've just written about it. I'm not as keen on inventing and writing big, fancy, complex plots which renders me a little crap at action fics. My thing is romance and emotions. So, for example, with something like CSI: New York, I prefer to explore the character pairings, or the hardships in the characters' lives than, say, invent some grand murder scheme with a really clever twist that completely throws off the readers.

I like to think that when I write, I succeed in creating a basis for my character pairings. One thing I get so fed up of is stories where two characters are already in an established relationship, or where they randomly end up hopping into bed with each other. When I want to write a relationship, I try to write the events so that the resulting relationship is realistic and believable. Simply saying that two characters are together just for the sake of it doesn't work and is, in my personal opinion, lazy.

Things that bug me in fics:

1. People always make out that Stella (CSI: New York) is this superwoman who does everything by herself. And ok, I get it. She's strong, independent and feisty. But one thing that some writers fail to acknowledge is that Stella does in fact know how to ask for help and she does sometimes cry in front of other people. Look at episodes such as 'All Access' and 'The Ride In' - both of these are good examples of Stella's more vulnerable side, and clearly show her reaching out to other people.

2. Another CSI: New York one - 'Peyton and Stella hate each other and have a bitch fight' fics: It is clearly shown in the episode 'Point of View' that Stella and Peyton do not actually hate each other. In fact, Stella is glad to see her again. The concept of Peyton being a bitch or rivalling with Stella might work well in SOME AU fics, but if you're writing canon stories, DON'T DO IT.

3. Character X realizes they're in love with character Y and character Y realizes they're in love with character X but both think the other one doesn't love them so they mope around for ages while all the other characters can see it's obvious they're head over heels for each other, then loads of drama happens and they finally confess their love to each other and live happily ever after. What a cliché.

4. X/Y Established relationship. No, people, that's not the way it works. You do not simply take two characters and decide that they're randomly together. That's not how it works! If you want two characters to be together, you have to create a basis for their relationship or else it's just not believable. Nor is it believable if you get two characters hot for each other then they hop into bed together. NO. PLEASE.

5. Really awful sex scenes. There is a way to write them well, and so many people don't do it. Writing a sex scene in fanfiction is ENTIRELY DIFFERENT to writing a sex scene in erotic fiction. It's not supposed to sound like a porno! So please, PLEASE stop going into such graphic detail and using crude language because it's extremely off-putting!

Favourite pairings:

CSI: New York
Mac and Stella
Flack and Angell

Sailor Moon
Minako and Setsuna
Haruka and Michiru

House
House and Cuddy
Thirteen and Cameron

Criminal Minds
Emily and JJ

X-Men
Jean/Storm
Jean/Phoenix (Psychological, not romantic)
Jean/Rogue

Wicked
Gelphie

ON HIATUS: 'The Concept of Self-Discovery' is on hiatus, and may or may not be picked up again at some point.

How I know I'm obsessed with 'Wicked':

  • I created Gelphie on 'The Sims 3' and made them fall in love with each other. I also made Frex, and made him an abusive bastard who hated Elphie.
  • I started writing piano music based on a theme made up from the notes that spell 'Fabala' (F, A, B, A, A in musical notation).
  • I referenced 'Wicked' (the book) in my contextual commentary for my creative writing project, for one of my degree modules.
  • I started learning some of the 'Wicked' music on the piano ('I'm not that girl' and 'For Good').
  • I greenified for my best friend's birthday party. And fully intend on doing so again for Halloween.
  • I created a DeviantArt account for the sole purpose of uploading some Gelphie drawings I did, and for favouriting some Wicked pictures.

  • 1. I See You » reviews
    There was that one person who was not deceived by the flares of a rich, well-bred society. That one person who and searched for the human being inside of the strange, green skin. How could she not, when she looked into her eyes and saw a lifetime of pain and torment?
    Wicked - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,545 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 4-29-13 - Published: 4-27-13 - Elphaba T.
    2. Moment of Weakness » reviews
    One weak moment is all it took to change everything. Gelphie friendship. Shiz-verse.
    Wicked - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,494 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 4-2-13 - Published: 3-30-13 - Elphaba T. & Glinda U. - Complete
    3. Deep Thoughts of a Shallow Mind » reviews
    Just like that conversation about hate and indifference, Glinda also shied away when Elphaba implied that Glinda was capable of deep thought, and yet here she is now, cogs turning in her head, trying to make sense of a bunch of deep thoughts that have been bothering her recently.
    Wicked - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,745 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-13-13 - Published: 2-11-13 - Elphaba T. & Glinda U.
    4. Immortal Phoenix » reviews
    When a phoenix dies it rises from its ashes and is reborn again. I realised I was a lone being. There was no place for me in this world. I was unable to die, but could never be allowed to survive amongst humans. Post-X3 fic.
    X-Men: The Movie - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,859 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-21-12 - Published: 9-10-12 - Jean G.
    5. The Phoenix Knows reviews
    The Phoenix is a part of Jean that she mostly ignores. But the Phoenix knows of things of which Jean is in denial. When Jean is hit by an unexplainable feeling, she must face the part of herself she hates the most in order to find the answer. Post-Alcatraz fic.
    X-Men: The Movie - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,358 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-28-12 - Jean G. & Storm - Complete
    6. Essence of Time: A Theory reviews
    If time had a beginning, then there had to be a point where time had not existed, and if time hadn't existed there wouldn't have been a 'when' for time to be created. Therefore, if time hadn't existed, it would have been impossible to make it exist. So, Setsuna reasoned, time had to have always existed.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,374 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-11-12 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto - Complete
    7. Absolution reviews
    She knew what the water would show her. Death. Betrayal. Star seeds. Sailors Pluto and Saturn's bodies disappearing. The gold bracelets. Galaxia. Traitor. TRAITOR.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,385 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-8-12 - Michiru K./Sailor Neptune - Complete
    8. The Cry of her Inner Child » reviews
    At best, she was Makoto-san. At worst, 'that violent bully.' All they saw was a raised fist and a violent temper. But they didn't understand. It's not that Makoto wanted to hurt people. She was crying on the inside but no one would listen.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,946 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 7-1-12 - Published: 6-18-12 - Makoto K./Lita/Sailor Jupiter
    9. Everybody Hates Pluto Rewrite reviews
    This is a rewrite of my fanfiction 'Everybody Hates Pluto'. At the same time that the IAU demote Pluto to a dwarf planet, Sailor Pluto loses her powers. Unknown to her, a powerful enemy is trying to access Crystal Tokyo via the time gates, and Sailor Pluto is the only thing that stands in their way.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 996 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-30-12 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto
    10. Duty Driven » reviews
    All Setsuna's ever known is her duty to guard the time gates and save the world, so after Galaxia's defeat she finds herself struggling to let go of Sailor Pluto and adapt to a normal life. *MINAKO/SETSUNA*
    Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 21 - Words: 30,290 - Reviews: 82 - Updated: 6-25-12 - Published: 2-28-10 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto & Minako A./Mina/Sailor Venus
    11. Crash » reviews
    A different take on Emily being haunted by the Doyle situation. Short, but vivid I hope .
    Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 6 - Words: 1,572 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 12-1-11 - Published: 11-23-11 - E. Prentiss & I. Doyle - Complete
    12. The Concept of Abandonment reviews
    After the Pokémon get washed up on the island of giant Pokémon, old ghosts begin to hit Charmander as it questions the loyalty of its trainer.
    Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 457 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-12-11 - Charmander/Hitokage - Complete
    13. Misguided reviews
    This was inspired from a quote in 'The Island of Giant Pokémon' about why Ekans would not hurt the other Pokémon.
    Pokémon - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 536 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-10-11 - Ekans/Arbo - Complete
    14. The Concept of Self Discovery » reviews
    One night after a hard case, Emily and JJ sat there wallowing, drawing on each other's strength for comfort, from which emerged a new realization.
    Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 16,730 - Reviews: 74 - Updated: 5-14-11 - Published: 10-29-10 - E. Prentiss & Jennifer J./JJ
    15. The Bat Who Couldn't Fly reviews
    Based on 'The Dig' - Thirteen would never be able to spread her wings.
    House, M.D. - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,037 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 4-13-11 - Thirteen/R. Hadley - Complete
    16. Penelope Garcia, ever the optimist » reviews
    WARNING - Season 6 spoilers! This is set at the moment where Garcia is having her assessment with Hotch. Short, but in my opinion deep - please R&R!
    Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,186 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-9-11 - P. Garcia & A. Hotchner/Hotch - Complete
    17. Layers of False Identity reviews
    JJ was the only person who really and truly knew the woman who lay beneath all the false identities.
    Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 706 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-6-11 - E. Prentiss & Jennifer J./JJ - Complete
    18. Bubbles reviews
    This is a one-shot about Emily and JJ, which focuses on the way Emily channels her grief following a difficult case.
    Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 767 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-4-11 - E. Prentiss & Jennifer J./JJ - Complete
    19. Graveyard Memories reviews
    All around her there were tombstones, but buried beneath them were not bodies but memories Emily just wanted to forget.
    Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-31-10 - E. Prentiss - Complete
    20. The Concept of Denial » reviews
    Set after Minimal Loss - What Cyrus did to Emily is far worse than the team can imagine, but how can they help her if she won't even admit it to herself?
    Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,835 - Reviews: 36 - Updated: 10-25-10 - Published: 10-18-10 - E. Prentiss - Complete
    21. Emily's Profile reviews
    Emily Prentiss finds herself approached by a university student who's seen her on TV and ends up considering certain aspects of herself.
    Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,375 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10-15-10 - E. Prentiss - Complete
    22. The pink and blue jail cell
    Remy has a dream about her Huntington's disease.
    House, M.D. - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,186 - Published: 9-16-10 - Thirteen/R. Hadley - Complete
    23. Existential Crisis reviews
    Thirteen thinks about her impending death sentence.
    House, M.D. - Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 856 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-8-10 - Thirteen/R. Hadley - Complete
    24. The last boyfriend I had, I shot reviews
    Shooting your boyfriend isn't something anyone expects to happen to them. It happened to Stella. Looking back, she wonders why.
    CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 969 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-1-10 - Stella B. - Complete
    25. Mac gets shot again » reviews
    This is based on the fact that in Mac/Stella fics, Mac always, ALWAYS gets shot. So I thought I'd make a joke out of it. SMacked
    CSI: New York - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 8 - Words: 3,674 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 5-21-10 - Published: 5-5-10 - Stella B. & Mac T.
    26. Frankie's Demise reviews
    This is set straight after 'All Access'. Stella wasn't okay after she shot Frankie, no matter how hard she tried to pretend to be. Kind of Smacked but not romantic.
    CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,794 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5-12-10 - Stella B. & Mac T. - Complete
    27. A cold case close to home reviews
    Stella doesn't cry…much. And when she does it's because she's hurting so bad that she's lost the will to care that other people are watching the tears fall down her face. Stella only cries when it's something that hits close to home. SMacked, slightly
    CSI: New York - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,031 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-24-10 - Stella B. & Mac T. - Complete
    28. Omniscient: Powerless to change reviews
    Rei/Setsuna, non-romantic. What is the point in having a psychic ability if you are powerless to change the outcome of your visions? Rei is confused but Setsuna understands.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,373 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-2-10 - Rei H./Raye/Sailor Mars & Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto - Complete
    29. Not at all stalkerish, nope reviews
    "Hypothetically, if you're in love with her you can show her how amazing she really is." "Of course that's all hypothetical, right?" "Naturally." *MINAKO/SETSUNA 1-SHOT*
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,849 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-8-10 - Minako A./Mina/Sailor Venus & Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto - Complete
    30. Christmas with the Outer Senshi reviews
    A christmas dinner somehow evolves into a struggle to get Setsuna to wear a Santa hat.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 601 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-31-07 - Complete
    31. A Love Lost » reviews
    WARNING! CHAPTER 330 SPOILERS! AsumaKurenai, after Asuma's death. Kurenai's thoughts and feelings, and how she deals with it. Rated T to be safe
    Naruto - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,885 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-15-07 - Published: 10-2-07 - Asuma S. & Kurenai Y. - Complete
    32. The Guardian of Time reviews
    2 poems about Setsuna and her life as the Guardian of Time. The second one's from Michiru's POV
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 354 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-25-07 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto & Michiru K./Sailor Neptune - Complete
    33. Never Forever reviews
    Setsuna felt that she was destined to be alone. However, she finds out that never forever is one condemned to such a horrible fate.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,302 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-21-07 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto - Complete
    34. It's All Coming Back To Me Now reviews
    Haruka leaves Michiru and Michiru feels no pain however, that day at the bus stop changes everything…
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,764 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-16-07 - Haruka T./Sailor Uranus & Michiru K./Sailor Neptune - Complete
    35. Love is a twoway thing reviews
    Makoto gets verrry depressed. Rated M for character death.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: M - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 890 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-22-07 - Makoto K./Lita/Sailor Jupiter & Ami M./Amy/Sailor Mercury - Complete
    36. Take Me With You reviews
    Mako dies and Ami can't live without her. Rated T for safety.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 441 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-7-07 - Ami M./Amy/Sailor Mercury & Makoto K./Lita/Sailor Jupiter - Complete
    37. I Will Return reviews
    PGSM: A oneshot based on Minako.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 556 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-5-07 - Minako A./Mina/Sailor Venus - Complete
    38. Two Musicians » reviews
    A flautist and a harpist are drawn together...
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,063 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-1-07 - Ami M./Amy/Sailor Mercury & Makoto K./Lita/Sailor Jupiter - Complete
    39. They Who Can Truly See Me reviews
    A short poem on Makoto's 2sidedness.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-23-07 - Makoto K./Lita/Sailor Jupiter - Complete
    40. Two worlds: The Wind Master » reviews
    A 14 year old girl gets transported to Naruto's world, and not for no reason.
    Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 7 - Words: 10,929 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 1-28-07 - Published: 11-5-06
    41. Everybody Hates Pluto » reviews
    Yes, I know, it's ANOTHER fic about how Pluto's been demoted to a dwarf planet. But this one's more than just a oneshot...What happens to Pluto's power when her planet gets demoted? And how do the Senshi get it back?
    Sailor Moon - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 13,553 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 1-27-07 - Published: 11-12-06 - Setsuna M./Sailor Pluto - Complete
    42. One Day
    A poem from Ami's POV on Mako.
    Sailor Moon - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Published: 1-26-07 - Complete
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