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since: 12-10-06, id: 1179655, Profile Updated: 11-03-09
country: Indonesia
Author has written 17 stories for M*A*S*H, Forgotten Realms, Princess Bride, Young Jedi Knights, and Diana Gabaldon.

About me:

Hi! I'm Penny. I'm Canadian.

I currently live in Indonesia, and just finished Indonesian language study!

I love getting feedback on my stories; I welcome any and all reviews.

Some Things I Like:

Music: Johnny Cash, Loreena McKinnett, The Proclaimers, etc... I also play the piano and (acoustic) guitar.

Books: Forgotten Realms, (particularly R.A. Salvatore), Outlander (Diana Gabaldon),The Princess Bride, Battlefield Earth, Lord of the Rings, some Star Trek, well-written adventure, survival stories, etc.

TV & Movies: House M.D., Firefly, Smallville, MASH, Prison Break, Fruits Basket, Naruto, One Piece, V for Vendetta, The Sound of Music, The Princess Bride, Zorro, Pirates of the Caribbean, Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, Serenity, A Knight's Tale, The Godfather, most Star Trek, Star Wars...

Etcetera...

I have an excellent grasp of the English language, including those wonderful nuances of spelling and grammar, and I would love to beta read for you.

Enjoy the stories. :)

Its or It's - Have you ever wondered whether it should be "it's" or "its" to show possession?

Awhile back I learned that "its" is always used to show possession, and "it's" is never used to show possession!

For example, "I put the candle back in its holder" is correct. (I thought this must be wrong, but four excellent webpages devoted to English grammar concur.)

The word "it's" is always a contraction, as in "it is" or "it has". For example, "It's cold outside," or "It's got huge teeth!"

Another way to remember which one you should use: substitute the words "his" and "he is" (or "he has") and see which one fits. If it seems to be "his", then you need to use "its". And remember, surprisingly enough, no apostrephe for the possessive "its"! This has really helped me with my writing and hopefully it can help you improve your writing and beta reading too.

Disclaimers: The recognizable characters in my stories are the property of their respective creators. They are used without permission and for entertainment purposes only. No profit is being made by me, the author, for the writing of these stories. No infringement upon nor challenge to the rights of the copyright holders is intended; nor should any be inferred.

Questions about the After-life? Salvation is free!

http://www.billygraham.org/SH_HowtobecomeaChristian.asp

http://www.focusonthefamily.com/faith/becoming_a_christian/how_can_i_be_saved.aspx

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1. Epiphany » reviews
AR. Drizzt's son, 19yr old Zaknafein Do'Urden wonders where he is going in life, but an unexpected event suddenly makes things crystal clear. Meanwhile, his daughter Violet must make some decisions of her own. Ch.7 up - R&R please!
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 6,128 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 11-24-09 - Published: 10-16-09 - Zaknafein D. & Drizzt D.
2. Darah Pertama reviews
Zaknafein Do'Urden memulai mengajar Drizzt, yang masih muda. Mereka berlatih jurus serangan. "Zaknafein sudah mengerti realitas yang kejam di dalam Underdark. Yang lemah, mati. Dan yang kuat, terus hidup. Namun, Drizzt masih muda..."
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - Indonesian - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 820 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-18-09 - Zaknafein D. & Drizzt D. - Complete
3. Bête Noire reviews
We find 19-year-old Zaknafein Do'Urden chained up in a dank, oppressive drow dungeon. Bête Noire: French -Literal meaning-"Dark beast"; Common usage-"Nightmare". AR; One-shot...or maybe more? Zaknafein Do'Urden is an OC, son of Drizzt Do'Urden.
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 986 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-31-09 - Zaknafein D. & Drizzt D.
4. Because I Love You reviews
AR. It's raining and Drizzt's daughter Violet hates being stuck inside. What's worse, she has a new ball and Cattie-brie won't let her play with it in the house. But it's so hard to be good...follows "Of Furred Lizards" but can stand alone. Review plz!
Forgotten Realms - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,762 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-17-09 - Drizzt D. & Catti-brie - Complete
5. Of Furred Lizards reviews
Wherein Drizzt's 6-yr-old daughter Violet learns about furred lizards the hard way. Follows Camping, but can stand alone.
Forgotten Realms - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,126 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-9-09 - Drizzt D. - Complete
6. Lost & Found » reviews
AR. Drizzt's son Zaknafein goes hunting and gets lost in the woods...can the nine-year-old hang on until Drizzt finds him? Can Drizzt get there before the wolves do? Follows Insomnia & Camping, but can also stand alone. All reviews appreciated.
Forgotten Realms - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Family - Chapters: 5 - Words: 4,778 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 11-10-08 - Published: 10-31-08 - Drizzt D. - Complete
7. For Want of Blueberries reviews
Jamie walks in on a fight between his nephew and niece and feels he must resolve the matter. Brief cameo; I hope you'll leave a review!
Diana Gabaldon - Rated: T - English - General/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 881 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-15-08 - Complete
8. First Blood reviews
An early sparring match as a young Drizzt begins his training under Zaknafein. "Zak knew the harsh realities of the Underdark. The weak died. The strong survived. Still, Drizzt was only a boy..." Please review!
Forgotten Realms - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 731 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-27-08 - Zaknafein D. & Drizzt D. - Complete
9. The Assassin's Blade reviews
“You could be dead right now, but I like to see who's the stronger.” How a young Artemis Entreri comes to possess the jeweled dagger. One-shot. R&R please!
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,158 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-17-08 - Artemis E. - Complete
10. Atonement reviews
One-shot. Jacen has a taste of the Dark side and is conscience-stricken. Set immediately after Heirs of the Force. “Jacen stood hesitating outside the closed door of Luke Skywalker's office. He tried a Jedi calming technique, but it didn't seem to work...
Young Jedi Knights - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,217 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-28-08 - Complete
11. An Oath Unbroken reviews
Suppose Wulfgar hadn't died, and Cattie-brie had married him. How does she feel after one year of marriage to the Barbarian? Well, here, she is telling Drizzt.
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 772 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-19-08 - Catti-brie & Drizzt D. - Complete
12. Camping reviews
If Drizzt were a father... Drizzt takes his young son and daughter camping, but things don't go quite as planned. This story follows my fic Insomnia, but it can also stand alone. R&R please!
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,999 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11-27-07 - Drizzt D. - Complete
13. Insomnia reviews
What is Drizzt like as a father? Well, this is what came to mind! Drizzt has an 8yr.old son, Zak. And tonight Zak can't sleep... This is a short oneshot. Please R&R or PM. It's meant to be cute. I hope you like it!
Forgotten Realms - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,028 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-5-07 - Drizzt D. - Complete
14. An Exception reviews
Westley and his shipmates from the Queen's Pride have been captured by the Roberts' ship Revenge. What happens immediately after the capture and before Westley's life is spared? What is going through his mind? Please R&R or PM. Enjoy! Short one shot.
Princess Bride - Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,077 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 10-4-07 - Complete
15. Burdens reviews
Is something wrong with Cattiebrie? That is the question burning in Drizzt's mind as the 2 set out on a hike in the mountains. Set between Seige of Darkness & Passage to Dawn. A oneshot quick fic. I hope it makes you smile. I crave your reviews! :
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,169 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-15-07 - Drizzt D. & Catti-brie - Complete
16. Lessons reviews
Drizzt agrees to teach school for one month as a favor to CattieBrie, but the task is not as easy as he expected. Set between the Dark Elf trilogy and the Icewindale trilogy. Please R&R! My first Forgotten Realms story.
Forgotten Realms - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,763 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8-21-07 - Drizzt D. - Complete
17. Radar's Battle reviews
Radar is forced to confront an old fear when a South Korean soldier is brought in with an unusual illness.
M*A*S*H - Rated: K+ - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,049 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-28-07 - Radar O. & Hawkeye P. - Complete
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