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since: 12-21-06, id: 1185677, Profile edited: 07-14-08
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Author has written 8 stories for Outsiders, and Four Brothers.

I am an eighteen year old student in England. This means that I use British spelling, and terminology occasionally, though I try to use American terms where I know them, the spelling however is too much second nature for me

I write for both the Outsiders and Four Brothers fandoms, though the majority of my work is for the Outsiders fandom.

When getting reviews for my work, I appreciate constructive criticism and will take any suggestions into consideration. I would like to know what you did and didn’t like, what could be improved on, etc. I’m trying to create original ideas that are not taken over by Mary-Sues or poor characterisation, etc. so truly appreciate your feedback here to try and stray away from clichés. Also I like it when people point out precisely what may be wrong and give examples because I find that much helpful then a vague but potentially correct comment that I then cannot see where I went wrong on, forgive me but I would appreciate it! If you do read my work I really would appreciate a review of some sort though.

When I review people's work, I try to be as fair and nice as possible, if I couldn't take it myself then I probably won't write it. I'm a big fan of constructive criticism and advice -- as said before I appreciate receiving it -- and will try and point out any errors I see, or potential Mary-Sue characteristics, OOC behaviour, etc. but I will always mention the good things I find in the fic because I don't want to dishearten people.

I love stories about Tim Shepard, Darry, Two-Bit and a good Dally fic. I also like reading Steve fic because he is often demonised and I like to see other takes on him.

As my Outsiders fics all eventually tie into one another, I cannot really progress past a certain point until I have finished Keep On Trying, so don't think I've abandoned them for good yet.

In the Four Brothers fandom, my current fic is The Way It Was. I'm aiming for it to be around ten to fifteen chapters.

Thank you for reading this and I hope you read, enjoy and review my work.

Another Illusion.




1. On The Periphery » reviews
Darry was on the side-lines of both the gang and his peers -- working two jobs, however, and trying to take care of his brothers was more than enough to deal with. When someone completely on the edge of Tulsa appears, Darry's life is thrown into disarray.
Outsiders - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,504 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-16-08 - Published: 5-21-08
2. The Way It Was » reviews
Jack was just settling into his life at the Mercers when an unexpected ghost from his past resurfaced. Now thrown back into the world he thought he had left behind, the brotherhood he has with the Mercers takes on a new importance.
Four Brothers - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,974 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 7-7-08 - Published: 3-19-08
3. Keep On Trying » reviews
Dealing with the deaths of two friends, Two-Bit uses all his wit to try and keep his remaining friends together, and on meeting someone within detention realises the importance of family and friendship to get through these difficult times.
Outsiders - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 62,986 - Reviews: 106 - Updated: 6-27-08 - Published: 10-19-07
4. Do What You Have To Do » reviews
Sandy never forgave herself for her actions in Tulsa. When her husband tries to understand her better, he pushes her back to Tulsa, where she must confront everything she has kept to herself over the years.
Outsiders - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,824 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-30-08 - Published: 1-16-08
5. An End Has A Start reviews
It was just another day to Jack, but they wouldn't let it be, and now he was trying to escape from celebrating something that had always meant very little to him: his birthday. Oneshot, Jack POV
Complete - Four Brothers - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,815 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 1-3-08
6. Perspective » reviews
Tim Shepard had a score to settle with Officer O’Keefe and he knew just how to do it. What he didn’t bank on was what would happen next.
Outsiders - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 17,281 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 11-24-07 - Published: 7-4-07
7. For What It's Worth » reviews
Just as her life was falling into place, Evie Saunders found out her boyfriend had been drafted to Vietnam and it felt like her world was over. How will the gang adjust, and will Steve cope with the turbulence of war? Steve, Evie and gang POV.
Outsiders - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,099 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 11-16-07 - Published: 8-31-07
8. Solar Eclipse reviews
For one moment Evie wonders whether he is worth the arguing, and for one moment Steve lets his guard down after a blazing row with his girlfriend and his father. [Steve and Evie.] [Oneshot] [Prebook]
Complete - Outsiders - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,144 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 7-24-07 - Published: 7-24-07
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