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Author has written 5 stories for Outsiders, and Four Brothers. As I'm English, I use British spelling, and terminology occasionally, though I try to use American terms where I know them, the spelling however is too much of a second nature for me. I write for both the Outsiders and Four Brothers fandoms. When getting reviews for my work, I appreciate constructive criticism and will take any suggestions into consideration. I would like to know what you did and didn’t like, what could be improved on, etc. I’m trying to create original ideas that are not taken over by Mary-Sues or poor characterisation, etc. so truly appreciate your feedback here to try and stray away from clichés. Also I like it when people point out precisely what may be wrong and give examples because I find that much helpful then a vague but potentially correct comment that I then cannot see where I went wrong on, forgive me but I would appreciate it! If you do read my work I really would appreciate a review of some sort though. When I review people's work, I try to be as fair and constructive as possible; if I couldn't take it myself then I probably won't write it. I'm a big fan of constructive criticism and advice -- and as said before I really do appreciate receiving it -- and will try and point out any errors I see, or potential Mary-Sue characteristics, OOC behaviour, etc. but I will always mention the good things I find in the fic because I don't want to dishearten people. Another Illusion. | |||||||
1. Keep On Trying » reviewsDealing with the deaths of two friends, Two-Bit uses all his wit to try and keep his remaining friends together, and on meeting someone within detention realises the importance of family and friendship to get through these difficult times.Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 79,795 - Reviews: 121 - Updated: 5-22-09 - Published: 10-19-07 - Two Bit M.2. Only By The Night reviewsSenior year was just about making it to graduation and making his band more prolific for Jack Mercer… or at least that was the intention anyway.Four Brothers - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,275 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-17-093. The Way It Was » reviewsJack was just settling into his life at the Mercers when an unexpected ghost from his past resurfaced. Now thrown back into the world he thought he had left behind, the brotherhood he has with the Mercers takes on a new importance.Four Brothers - Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,974 - Reviews: 48 - Updated: 7-7-08 - Published: 3-19-084. An End Has A Start reviewsIt was just another day to Jack, but they wouldn't let it be, and now he was trying to escape from celebrating something that had always meant very little to him: his birthday. Oneshot, Jack POVFour Brothers - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,815 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-3-08 - Complete5. Solar Eclipse reviewsFor one moment Evie wonders whether he is worth the arguing, and for one moment Steve lets his guard down after a blazing row with his girlfriend and his father. [Steve and Evie.] [Oneshot] [Prebook]Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,144 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7-24-07 - Steve R. - Complete
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