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Author has written 15 stories for Naruto, Drakengard, Harry Potter, and Death Note. I am Lightning...The Rain Transformed More and more explainations. I'm getting tired of them myself, to be honest. Something big came up (something I'm not comfortable with explaining to the entire Internet), and I wasn't able to finish the chapters I was working on and update during August. I've also got to deal with my studies now, so writing is slowing down too. I'll keep trying, and as I say, I keep working on my fics, even if one paragraph at at time. Each word I type brings me another word closer to completion. I used to use this part of the profile for insulting bad things, but now, I think I should use it for more nice things. As in, tips for your own fanfiction- hell, fiction in general. The Many Tips and Tricks, as told by a somewhat average yet mildly interesting author Tip Number One: Grammar. Spelling. Correct use of upper case and lower case. Paragraphs. Do you think people like seeing massive lumps of words crammed together? Do you think people like seeing incorrectly spelled words? Do you think people like reading words written like "i'M fUcKiNg StuPid, pLZ ReViW I hVE iSuses" and with no paragraphs? Tip Number Two: No author notes in the middle of a fic, leave them for the beginning and end. That really breaks up the flow. It's okay if used in a comedy fic, but otherwise, no. And then, they shouldn't be in author note form, but as proper writing. Tip Number Three: Bad spelling and grammar ruins a good story, but good spelling and grammar won't save a bad one. Ensure your idea is interesting and original. Tip Number Four: Enjoy yourself. If you don't enjoy writing the fic, you'll think of it as a chore, and lack in updates. Yeah, that happens to me sometimes. Tip Number Five: I know it's annoying when no one reviews, but urging people to review often comes across as pathetic. So try replying to reviews when you get a few, or put things in the authors notes to encourage people talking about the fic. And for that matter, bonus tip- don't write any of that "bad summary, read for yourself." I can't fucking stand that. Tip Number Six: Try not to appeal to mindless masses. If you get some idiot screaming at you to make a certain pairing (seriously, when someone fills an entire paragraph just by repeating the pairing, ignore the wanker), or change your storyline for their sake, tell them to fuck off. But if they're not an idiot, and they're raising a valid point, think about it. And if you find yourself writing out of instinct, when the characters are directing you, and showing you how they'd act and react, that's good, and it's often a sign that you have a good fic going there. Everything seems so different from the world of being nice to people. Don't worry, I'll be a bastard again in a few moments... go suck off a goat, mpreg writers. Yeah, I'm back. Profile Last Updated: September 09 2009 | |||||||||
1. Toad Hermit » reviewsGamabunta realised Yondaime's last wish would not be accepted by the villagers, and so gave the baby Naruto to befriend toads, summoned or not. COMPLETELY RE-WRITTEN, IF YOU READ IT ONCE, READ IT AGAIN!Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 14,821 - Reviews: 190 - Updated: 5-10-09 - Published: 2-17-07 - Naruto U. & Jiraiya2. The Obsessed Successors reviewsA short story wondering what could've happened if L's successors were even more obsessed with their respective obsessions. Short humour one-shot that has a very weird ending.Death Note - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,111 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-10-09 - L - Complete3. Struggler reviewsA world where the ninja act like real ninja- real assassins and killers. Naruto's going to have to be something really special to survive in this world of sneaky cut-throats.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,035 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 5-10-09 - Naruto U.4. Zero » reviewsAU. ANBU Naruto. He'd be in a lot of dark places, and would be fighting with the darkness itself. To erase his enemies, he became Zero. And with Konoha and the Rokudaime behind him, but still. Would it be enough for him to finally erase them?Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,011 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 12-31-08 - Published: 12-22-08 - Naruto U.5. Elementary » reviewsPerhaps LightningHunter's best yet. AU where Naruto used brains over brawn. Where he could deduct in less then seconds and became a legend, not a nutcase in a jumpsuit. Naruto is slightly based on Sherlock Holmes, not a crossover. Naruto will leave KonohaNaruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Crime - Chapters: 9 - Words: 78,583 - Reviews: 312 - Updated: 11-22-08 - Published: 12-10-07 - Naruto U.6. Screaming for Vengeance » reviewsNaruto's the Rokudaime, and the world looks fine- but as Konoha is destroyed by a mysterious army, Naruto barely survives, losing one eye, as well as most of his control of his chakra. But Konoha's last shinobi must avenge her. This is his final mission.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 27,852 - Reviews: 48 - Updated: 11-4-08 - Published: 9-23-08 - Naruto U. - Complete7. Dirge of Cerberus » reviewsAfter kidnap, loss of love, death, resurrection,sharing his body with four entities, and sleeping in a coffin for several years, a new Harry walks the earth. VincentValentine!Harry. Not a crossover. Upcoming chapters will be longer.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - General/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,485 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 10-2-08 - Published: 3-11-08 - Harry P.8. Invisibly Jaded » reviewsContinued for Quatreastrophe. Harry's twin vanquished Voldemort. Harry believes he is unwanted, unworthy and unneeded, and by accident, Apparates across the globe. Eleven years later, he returns, staff in hand, and war drums in his ears.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 40,421 - Reviews: 401 - Updated: 10-2-08 - Published: 5-14-08 - Harry P.9. Newfound Memories » reviewsAfter Orochimaru mucks around with his seal in the Forest of Death, Naruto discovers another set of memories in his head. Memories that belonged to the Yondaime Hokage, Konoha's Yellow Flash, Namikaze Minato, and Naruto's father.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,910 - Reviews: 197 - Updated: 7-28-08 - Published: 6-28-08 - Naruto U. & Minato N.10. LightningHunter's Parody of Abused Naruto Fics reviewsLightningHunter laughs at all authors who like to feature villagers beating the crap out of Naruto daily. A Naruto who isn't immune to getting drunk because of Kyuubi, isn't hated by the council,and definitely isn't turned on by an insane Hinata.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,126 - Reviews: 41 - Published: 4-24-08 - Naruto U. & Jiraiya - Complete11. Two Sons Who Are Older Then You WTF! reviewsI compared your medical results, and it seems you three are very, closely related. In fact, it would seem that Naruto travels into the past, where he sleeps with your mother on different occasions, and she gives birth to you two, Itachi, Sasuke."Naruto - Rated: M - English - Parody/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,585 - Reviews: 113 - Published: 2-11-08 - Naruto U. & Mikoto U. - Complete12. LightningHunter's Parody » reviewsLightningHunter's Parody of fics we hate. Parody of badly written fics, high school fics, selfinserts, male pregnancies, people who can't write summaries, and unoriginality. Mrated for a lot of language. Chapter 2! Also features LightningHunter's flames!Naruto - Rated: M - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,357 - Reviews: 62 - Updated: 12-25-07 - Published: 11-25-07 - Complete13. Create a Paradise, or a Hell reviewsThe fate of humanity rests in human hands, said Seere. They wanted to make a paradise. But the people made it a hell. And Nowe, hardened warrior, will not accept it. Even at the cost of his life. Rated for violence, blood, gore and mentioned rape.RewritteDrakengard - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,602 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-24-07 - Complete14. Reaper of Death » reviewsAfter nearly being executed by my village, I wandered a harsh road for several years. And during this time, I became the creature that all beings fear. I became the Reaper of Death. I am the judgement, and my verdict is always...death. All Chapters RedoneNaruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 37,105 - Reviews: 158 - Updated: 11-3-07 - Published: 2-25-07 - Naruto U.15. Naruto takes a Genin Squad » reviewsNaruto has achieved his dream. But when Tsunade threatens to ban him from Ichiraku Ramen, he's forced to take on a genin team. And Naruto has hardly ever been the most responsible of people...Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 9,201 - Reviews: 34 - Updated: 10-27-07 - Published: 2-17-07 - Naruto U. & Konohamaru S.
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