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since: 01-09-07, id: 1192905, Profile Updated: 08-24-08
country: United States
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Author has written 4 stories for Avatar: Last Airbender.

All right. I finally figured out how to work this thing and how to do it. I guess I'll do it in a list way of my bio and about me, TMT.

NAME: Jacob (not gonna say my full name!)

NICKNAMES: TMT, Damental, Mental Teen, Jake, Snake, J44

AGE: 15

LOCATION: Monterey County, California, USA, North America, Planet Earth, Solar System, Milky Way, Universe, One of God's Cells.

EYE COLOR: Blue

HAIR COLOR: Brown

GENDER: Male

FAVORITE SHOW/MOVIE/GAME: Avatar: The Last Airbender, Star Wars, Call of Duty 4

AUTHOR OF: The Outcast series, The GAang and the Fire Nation School, and The Blue Dragon FanFics of Avatar: The Last Airbender.

HOPEFULLY: Finish a quality of FFs with them getting a good # of positive reviews on each of them.

RACE: White

LIKES OF STORIES: Action/Adventure, Romance, Fantasy. However, if the show, story, etc. is made to be an action thing only but they try to fit in romance, like the show 24 on Fox, not interested at all. Fantasy is what really puts your imagination to the test as it can get to the limit of bizarreness while still perfectly imaginable. Who doesn't love action?!

GOALS:

1. Make friends by replying to their reviews or messages and then talking to them.

2. Get over 50 different reviewERS on 1 FanFic

3. 1 review saying it was the best by either action, details, romance, moments, quotes in 1 or multiple chapters.

I'll start some journal things on everyday stuff.

7/02/07 - Finished Chapter 24 of The Outcast's Book 4 a few days earlier; making it one of the longest chapters it took for me to do. Finished the Intro/Pilot for a Star Wars FanFic that might be called The Wormhole (title still in progress) and plan to post it sometime soon. Returned from a vacation with my distant relatives from the capital city of California and still wrote Chapter 24 in my free time. I know, I have no life, but that's what I love! WOO-HOO!

7/07/07 - The day of lucky 7's! HA!! Welp...uh...not lucky for me. My labtop's charger is busted for some reason and so I can't post any more chapters of ANYTHING until it's fixed. I'm at my dad's house, and the labtop is with my mom, and she told me she would take it to be fixed on Monday, which means (to my readers), PLEASE be a bit patient! I feel the worst out of everyone because ALL of my upcoming chapters for The Outcast and possibly the Star Wars fic The Wormhole (working title) are in there. One thing goes wrong and it's down in the dumps for me.

7/30/07 - The Avatar Season 3 trailer came out 2 days ago!! I saw it then but forgot it update here! In case you haven't seen in on YouTube: http/youtube.com/watch?v=EqFjzzMb5Xk. IT'S SO AWESOME! Thank the guys from AvatarSpirit.net!

9/26/07 - Watched The Awakening of Avatar: The Last Airbender when it premiered and even saw The Headband on TurboNick (2 days before it airs on TV). Last time this happened was with Lake Laogai from Season 2.

10/02/07 - Awhile ago, I started on another A:tLA FanFic (that isn't connected with The Outcast) called The GAang and the Fire Nation School with my alternate ending of The Headband. That's the short summary, the full summary is in the FF.

10/12/07 - A very tragic day for me and my family. My grandpa died this day. My mom was very unlike herself that day and the following day, very quiet and all. I'm a guy and HATE crying, but I think when it's personal and family-related, it's showing your light side without being as weak as you think you would in another situation (injury, etc.) I hope when I return to my mom's house on the 17th (I'm at my dad's now), she'll be back to normal. The worst part of it was that I wasn't even that close to him and felt so much sadness hearing the news. That means when someone closer is lost, that means it'll be much worse...

10/15/07 - For those who didn't notice, I now have a Naruto FF up called Team Yori of Konoha. It's my version of what happens 10 years after when we 1st see the show begin. This is my most complicated FF since this show has a background and Fanbase like Star Wars (in which if you get something noticably wrong in the FF besides grammar, you get cursed and told). I had to go onto Wikipedia just for the information I needed. Not only Wikipedia, but also a site for new parents that tells you many names for newborns as well as pregnany tips. Why I go here? Because 2 options of the names are Japanese and Chinese, which include what the names mean. A baby site ended up really resourceful!

10/28/07 - I deleted Book 4 of my The Outcast series and decided to stop there. I gave myself a task I couldn't do. I wished I could've done more, but with the lack of hits and reviews for something I spent a lot of time on, what's the point. But I hate doing this since I always say to myself "don't start what you can't finish." I guess I couldn't finish it, so I'm no Mr. Perfect, lol.

11/10/07 - The GAang and the Fire Nation School has finally been completed with a total of 13 chapters and 30, 972 words in total, with the average of 2, 382 (and several decimals) words per chapter. When I make my next Avatar-related FF, I hope to increase those numbers while still getting all of the reviews, hits, and favorites I got from TGatFNS. Thank you to everyone that has read the now-completed FF, and thank you more if you've reviewed.

11/11/07 - Happy Veteran's Day! I have, I think, only 1 relative that's fought in a war that's alive now. He's my uncle and he fought in the terrible Vietnam War. And my cousin currently is a Marine in Iraq so when that war is over, he can be called a veteran. I pray for those who are stuck in the Middle East and wish them good luck with their tasks. Even if the war is pointless, you still have to support our troops since if you think about it, they don't really have much of a choice but to obey the few men that give the orders and then sit in a room while the guys are out doing the life-or-death mission.

11/16/07 - I got Call of Duty 4 as an early birthday present (which is on 11/23) and I'm addicted to it. Everything the reviewers and friends said was right. Awesome, epic, rad, no words can explain the action and fun this game has, BOTH single-player and online. If you have a PS3, Xbox360, or a good PC (I think it's for the Wii also), you MUST get this game at all costs. For Christmas or right now, I don't care, just get it! Oh, and if you get it for the PS3, my name's DaMentalTeen in case you want to add me, lol.

11/17/07 - Going to start on Chapter 5 of TYoK now. Yeah, I'm that bored right now just to say that, lol.

11/23/07 - I'm now 15 years old. As my gifts, I got a brand new labtop, an Xbox360, and Halo 3 with it! With the hour special of Avatar: The Last Airbender airing on the last day of November, I think the month of November is my favorite for 2007. Take that December and your Christmas joy!

11/25/07 - I'm starting to make a non-FanFic story called "A Corrupted Nation", but I don't know what to do. I'm used to posting chapters here as soon as they're done, but since this isn't a FanFic, I can't. Is their a site exactly like this that's for original ideas? lol. The story was inspired by the game Call of Duty 4, which will get my vote to win the Game of the Year award. :)

12/1/07 - If you didn't see The Day of Black Sun hour special yesterday, I have to say this, "WTF MAN/WOMAN!" To me, it was the best episode (or 2 combined) in all of Avatar in more categories than 1. The action, the new technology (the Fire Nation floating ships reminded me of the Star Destroyers from Star Wars), and the shipping. Kataang got its moment that the shippers have been waiting for for 3 seasons, and the best part was, it wasn't blacked out or a daydream! It was the real deal!! As for Zutara, it's also stronger than ever. Why? Zuko's going to join the GAang and that = him spending more time with Katara. I blame Haru using Sexyfine on his facial hair (from the Avatar Abridged Series as a side effect)! Why Haru?! WHY! Sorry, I seem to be more hyper at night than during the day. 0_o

12/7/07 - Is something wrong with me being obsessed with Call of Duty 4 so much? For Christmas, I asked for toy replicas of real-life weapons that were also in the game, such as the AK-47, the M16, and the M9 pistol. Please tell me that I won't be a war-freak in a bad way when I grow up!

12/14/07 - FINALLY!! Christmas Vacation for me (or Winter Break for others)! Maybe I'll stop playing Call of Duty 4 now and start actually writing the next chapters of both FFs, lol.

12/17/07 - I'm almost done with the next chapter for Team Yori of Konoha, so for those who're being patient and reading this somehow, it'll be out soon! Oh, and my cousin got me into his clan on Call of Duty 4 (I mention that game a lot, huh?) on GameBattles.com, and I'll be in my first match in 2 days. I hope we win and kick major ass when I play, for when you do something for the first time and get it done better than you could ever do, it feels so good and that makes you want to party (at certain occasions).

1/4/08 - First post of 2008 for me! Just watched The Firebending Masters for Avatar: The Last Airbender on YouTube. It was a different and neat episode. I liked it because of the many references I could connect to it: the movie Indiana Jones, the ancient civilations in Central America such as the Aztecs and Mayans, and just the basic history with dragons and fire. It was also cool seeing Zuko and Aang work together for the 1st time without hiding it (from The Blue Spirit). It was funny too. The only thing I didn't like was the lack of the other characters we're used to seeing a lot. And Katara hasn't changed once from the last episode, and same goes for Sokka, for they both tease him every time they talk to him. Zuko does manage not to blow their freaking minds away, which means he has changed. And lastly, Aang isn't afraid to firebend anymore. WOO-HOO! Oh, and I posted the 3rd chapter of The GAang and the Lotus Society today. :)

2/7/08 - Been a while since I updated this, but I doubt anyone reads this, lol. The 2nd chapter to the FanFic Halo Future: Virtual Reality is undergoing serious work and will be my longest chapter ever. I'll say a lil' spoiler to those that actually read this: it'll be based on a new mode called "Team Runaway" that's basically like a police chase/pirate raid. You'll understand when the chapter is released. For those who're waiting for a new chapter from one of my two others FFs, I'm sorry that I haven't been working on them much, but I'm working on 3 FFs at a time + high school and laziness are distracting (mostly high school :) ). Team Yori of Konoha will get a new chapter after my Halo one and then The GAang and the Lotus Society will get its next chapter, and then it'll be a pattern of Halo, Naruto, and Avatar chapters being posted.

2/9/08 - Chapter 2 of Halo Future: Vitual Reality is up. It's my longest chapter ever (by a little bit) and it's full of Halo-multiplayeraction of the new "Team Runaway" mode. New Character: Blk Oct 25. Based on the information by my first reviewer, Black October 25, and is a female baddy. I find her similar to the character Tex from the Red VS Blue online series (same primary armor color, gender, etc.), but that's what I like about the character. Plus, it makes the number of main players from 4 to 5. Now onto my Naruto FF...

3/20/08 - Seriously, I have a problem, lol. I keep telling myself to update this but instead months go by. Well, here's the blog update. Blk Oct 25 and I played a few times over XBL on Halo 3 and had fun. Not every day, but still a lot of fun. It was the first time I played with someone that I met on a website rather than the actual XBL Community or in real life. Kinda neat, hehehe... Also, I have NOT abandoned my FFs. I just don't type nearly as much as I used to. My next update is on The GAang and the Lotus Society for the show Avatar: The Last Airbender. After that's done, Halo Future: Virtual Reality will get its next chapter. Please be patient!

3/21/08 - I feel like a hypocrite. I keep saying to myself "don't start what you can't finish" but the opposite happened again. I never thought of a climax and ending for Team Yori of Konoha and didn't get much reviews. I got lots of hits, but that's probably because it was in the popular Naruto section. Sorry to those who actually liked it, but I didn't know an actual place where I could end it without making it so many chapters. This'll actually help me in my other 2 FFs though; I have 1 less to worry about, so it'll be easier to update one and the other. The pattern will still go A:tLA then Halo and repeat itself. Once I have those 2 done, I'll get started on my hopefully-epic Star Wars FF. Again, sorry to those who actually liked TYoK...

4/19/08 - The new trailer from NYCC 2008 for the newest Avatar episodes has been released on YouTube! I can't provide a link here, but it's on YouTube (for now) and I think on LiveVideo as well. Every Avatar fan right now probably had a fangasm after seeing that. Speaking of which, I gotta change my pants. :P

6/4/08 - WOW. I have not updated this or any of my FFs in a long time. My Freshman year at the high school just ended today, so that means I'll have all the free-time in the world (until our family starts going on vacations). Don't worry, I'm not gone yet.

6/28/08 - I have deleted my two current FanFics, The GAang and the Lotus Society and Halo Future: Virtual Reality, for reasons that won't seem good to readers that actually liked one of the two a lot. For TGatLS, I didn't exactly know how to get to where I was at to where I wanted to be at. I wanted my own version of the finale, but I didn't know how long it would take without seeming too long and uninteresting. I like to entertain the readers so that they want more and like it, not because they're bored or have few alerts. Plus, it was a SEQUEL to another previous FanFic, so it's almost telling the person to read the other one first. For HF:VR, I simply didn't know what to do from there, and there was no official plot to the FanFic. It was fun while it lasted, and I even made 3 friends to play with on XBL because of the FF, but honestly, I didn't know what official plot I would have. To me, a story should be like a movie, not a comedy TV show (where the episodes aren't connected) unless stated like drabbles or one-shots. So sorry to those who enjoyed one or both of 'em. I do feel bad, but I'm at a point where my mind wants less pressure of updating if I don't really want to do it and how to do it. Again, my apologies. Maybe I can think about that Star Wars FF now, huh? Maybe...

8/23/08 - I guess not, lol. I made another Avatar FF called The Blue Dragon. It's basically a post-war FF set two years after the series finale. Summary will be down below in the bold texture. I plan on this one being a long one like The Outcast, only multiple times better, not in seperate FFs (I realized how dumb that is), not featuring a Gary-Stu-ish character, and not as long. I considered The Outcast as my shameful starter. I mean, sure I liked typing it at the time, and I did get fans, but if I put myself in the average person's shoes and read it while comparing it to better ones, it wasn't good.

I used to have other news here, but now I'm updating as of October 28th. I now have 3 seperate FF's; The Outcast, The GAang and the Fire Nation School, and Team Yori of Konoha. For those who just go through profiles and read these, I'll summarize the 3:

The Outcast: Setting: In between Lake Laogai and The Earth King. Plot: When the GAang is on the run with Appa again, they go somewhere else instead of the desloate island. They travel out of the city and run into a rouge Firebender (OC of mine) that becomes the Avatar's final teacher. It also takes place after Season 2, but it's my version since I wrote it before the S3 premiere, but hey, that's what ALL FF's are! Rating: Teen for some mild language, violence, and some mentions of blood and gore. My Thoughts: It was my first FF-turned-FF-Series, but it could've been much better and lacked many things in the first two books, and the third still seemed rushed at times. Also, no one likes an OC that's as strong as the Avatar. But I did get many fans from NICK.com (before it was taken down somehow) and several thousand hits on each of the books, so I guess at least a few people liked it. Overall: Ok, I guess, but could've been much better. COMPLETE

The GAang and the Fire Nation School: Setting: After The Headband, but with an alternate ending. Plot: What would the GAang do if Hide didn't tattle on the kids at the dancing party? I think they would've stayed a bit longer! My version of the extended episode of The Headband. Rating: Kids + for some violence. My Thoughts: This was one I liked doing. It was after my first FF, so I had some experience, and I managed to make an OC that the readers actually mentioned and liked (Gramps). I did this because The Headband episode of the real TV series was my favorite filler episode ever, I don't know why, but I was encouraged to make a whole "what if...?" FF off of it. This 13-chaptered FF has more hits than Book 1 of my first FF ever that contained 24/25 chapters with several times over more reviews than it. Overall: Pretty proud of it, and I had almost 100 reviews to prove it was at least decent, but again, noticeable mistakes in a few parts that should've been changed. COMPLETE

The Blue Dragon: Setting: Two years after the series finale. Plot: The GAang is no longer together, and Azula has been freed from her prison by Ozai Loyalists. What'll the Avatar do to stop her from finishing what Sozin started? Rating: Teen for violence and references. WORK IN PROGRESS

I'll update as soon as I think of more to add to this.

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1. The GAang and the Fire Nation School » reviews
An alternate ending to The Headband. This is what would've happened if they weren't tattled for having the dancing party and things went smoothly. Aang continues going to the school while he and the others of the GAang become popular to the kids there.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 13 - Words: 30,972 - Reviews: 91 - Updated: 11-10-07 - Published: 9-29-07 - Aang & Katara - Complete
2. The Outcast: Book 3 » reviews
Sequel to the other books. The Army of Freedom is formed, readied, and sail to the Fire Nation with the GAang leading. A big secret will be found, sacrifices will have to be made, and Aang will have to finally face Ozai on his own turf during a battle.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 44,527 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 3-31-07 - Published: 2-27-07 - Aang & Katara - Complete
3. The Outcast: Book 2 » reviews
Sequel to The Outcast: Book 1. The GAang, along with The Outcast, are defeated in Ba Sing Se and must find a way to still beat Ozai before summer's end. However, in this time, personal feelings rise, new powers are gained, and perhaps even an army is made
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 22,382 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 2-27-07 - Published: 2-11-07 - Aang & Katara - Complete
4. The Outcast: Book 1 » reviews
Takes place in between Lake Laogai and The Earth King. When you are a rouge Firebender with no one to watch your back, what do you do? What can you do? What could happen to you? Apparently, this one, called The Outcast, never expected to meet the GAang
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 24 - Words: 16,989 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 2-11-07 - Published: 2-3-07 - Aang & Katara - Complete
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