| Banquo'sGhost |
Author has written 2 stories for She-Ra, Princess of Power, and Transformers/Beast Wars. I have a deviantart account where I am known as Khenmes. There is a link to it on this profile page on the website button. Not much to say here other than I prefer to write stories to shows that I feel didn't get the epic ending they deserved. For instance, my fanfic 'Doubt' is about a show in the 80s known as She-ra: Princess of Power. This program was about a small team of rebels trying to fight against a galactic dictatorship in order to gain the freedom of their planet. The hero, as seen in many cartoons, would often just let the villain escape while everyone laughed happily in the end. Oddly enough, a lot of background information was given on some characters. Sometimes the writers made you understand the pain these people were going through, but two seconds later they'd add a cutesy character to try and make you forget about the suffering. 'Doubt' gives the characters a wake up call while keeping the cast in-character, and giving the series some closure by making the rebels truly work for their freedom. My newest story, 'Transformers: Machine Wars', is one that I value deeply and resolves some frustration about the series I had when it was aired. As many Beast Wars fans will say about the show Beast Machines, you will often hear the phrase "It wasn't great but I didn't think it was THAT bad." After all the show ended on a pleasant note, seemingly resolving all the issues presented as a group of Cybertronians skip along the horizon. Recently, I've re-watched Beast Wars and then DIRECTLY after that I saw Beast Machines. It's like they are two completely different programs with absolutely no relation to each another. In my journal on deviantart, there is a detailed review of the show Beast Machines which takes evidence from specific episodes and continuity problems between the two shows. Beast Machines has been a bit of a frustrating topic for me and in that entry on DA, I explain why. Still, because of Beast Machines, I feel that Beast Wars was cheated out of a sequel and 'Transformers: Machine Wars' is my way of closure for the characters. Please comment and leave a review on my stories, it motivates me to finish! (critiques are welcome) 6/13/10- I've been noticing lately that FFN has drastically changed the way we can upload each chapter. For instance, in my story 'Doubt' many of the italicized words (such as a character's thoughts) were un-italicized, making it more confusing for the reader to know the difference between the description over what a person is saying to themselves. Another thing that has been omitted from the initial upload of the story is that any self-made breaks in each chapter (i.e. a line that separates one scene from another) have been removed and we must use the lines given to us in the document manager setting. I wrote 'Doubt' in high school, and even though I have gone back in each chapter to add the separation lines, I will not upload each chapter again and put italics for every moment that needs it. That story was written some time ago and, to be honest, I am a little ashamed at how some of the chapters are written. Still, for any first timers who are interested in that story, I want to apologize for the confusion in the later chapters for the non-italicized words. | |||||
1. Transformers: Machine Wars » reviewsA fan take on what would have happened if Optimus Primal and his crew brought Megatron back to Cybertron without any problems. The Predacon Alliance faces injustice under a Maximal-ruled Cybertron and Transwarp space is deemed too dangerous for travel.Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 6 - Words: 47,079 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 6-27-10 - Published: 5-11-10 - Optimus Primal & Megatron2. Doubt » reviewsThe Great Rebellion fights for freedom and liberty. With the help of Shera this seems possible but, if that's so why haven't they won yet? There have been many opportunities to defeat Hordak, but Shera has let him live each time.She-Ra, Princess of Power - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 33 - Words: 141,961 - Reviews: 101 - Updated: 9-13-09 - Published: 3-25-07 - Complete