| Carla on a challenge |
Author has written 5 stories for Drop Dead Diva. I really need, need a Beta or I really need to improve my skills on this language but since that takes longer and I wish to publish sooner PLEASE if anyone care to beta for me it would made my day. Also, it would create a mini monster happy to keep writing the crazy ideas in her head... =) I love FF of DDD, Criminal Minds, HP, House M.D., Law & Order SVU and in ancient times of X-files (not anymore I just lost interest and I couldn’t find stories for the finale I always pictured). I’m Mexican, from Puebla it’s a very cultural city close to Mexico City. You most have guessed but I’ll say it anyway; I speak Spanish, English (not as god as I once thought, this is the test and the prove) and some french. What else, I’m 28 years old and I’m a female, I just write it ‘cause often I read profiles and I can’t tell and sometimes it bothers me so here it is...I was born a girl..yey Other then that, please be honest whit your opinions but don’t be rude, if you don’t like it just say it like that if it’s constructive criticism please tell, the more I get from those the more I can learn and improve. So this is right now a big adventure for me since it’s a challenge, I just realize that no matter the language you write in you don’t loose your style although you do fight more to keep it you way, it’s way easier in Spanish also the verb times that don’t exist in english it’s hard for me to explain the idea, sometimes I feel like it’s just the gist of my idea and not the hole thing. I have to confess...i suck at describing and keeping the story in a time frame and the way the voice is or should be, let me explain i get all mixed up with the way and temp the narrator or explanations are I use it wrongly. In the same story a description with the voice inside the story and outside or just as a description.. i mean it i suck...so thankfully I’ll get a Beta reader soon enough and fix that!! (Anyone up for the challenge?) Let’s get this ride going and write some fluff ? Since I can’t write anything that it’s not. And to think I wanted a short profile...pfff!! CARLA '@' About my stories, well... The road is on progress but the good news i have all the layout for the story, this time I know where it's going and not only how I wanted to start or just the idea. I have written till chapter 4 so far but it's not fully finished 'cause it's not translated that's why i have posted the version in Spanish too "Para llegar a tí..." Soon to be publish a second and third story one starts from the moment Tony leaves and the other with the way i picture things to be if Jane tells the truth, the impact and consequences in her life and the people around her, it's post season one but not taking season two as the rule. Hopefully this two stories would see the light by the end of the week, month, year jeje. | |||||||
1. Flight to my heart reviewsI wanted to post this idea before tonight's premiere, it's a bit rushed and flawed but I think someone might like it. My take on Jane's fashionista trip to Milan and how Owen changed her forever. Jane/OwenDrop Dead Diva - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,735 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-3-12 - Complete2. Dormant lover reviewsI'm still hooked with the chemistry Tony/Jane. 3rd season and what it would be. Right now it's a one chapter story, since I don't see where to take it. Anyone thinking it can be longer? Sorry who saw it in spanish. FIXED NOWDrop Dead Diva - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 493 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-2-11 - Complete3. Amante latenteSigo enganchada con la pareja de Tony/Jane asi que sobre temporada 3. Lean una idea de como podría ser. Muy corta por que no se si continuarla ni para donde iría. ¿Opiniones?Drop Dead Diva - Rated: T - Spanish - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 483 - Published: 10-2-11 - Complete4. The Road » reviewsIt's ready i finished re-written the chapters published before.The story goes with the premise "Can Jane have a full life with a half truth". All the way team "Tony" I just don't accept him out of the picture. You don't like the couple don't read.Drop Dead Diva - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,572 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-24-10 - Published: 12-31-095. El camino a tí, a mi, a nosotros » reviewsComeinza justo donde termina la temporada 1 y sigue la premisa "Puede Jane puede tener una vida plena viviendo una mentira" Por cierto Jane/Tony Grayson se me hace que sería muy extraño si pasará Pero más adelante tendrá un poco de Jane/GraysonDrop Dead Diva - Rated: T - Spanish - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,094 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-12-10