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since: 03-11-07, id: 1236165, Profile Updated: 07-27-09
country: United States
Author has written 8 stories for Code Lyoko, Law and Order: SVU, Harry Potter, Twilight, Bones, and NCIS.

Hi pplz... i'm Chocochino...(DUH)... i'm not good at profiles so i'll make it simple... i'm 15 years old (16 in October)... yes i am a girl... i love tv... (really who doesn't)... i write things that are often weird and crazy (and occasionally nearly impossible)... i write mostly for myself so if you don't like it thats fine and if you do thats great! ummmmmmmm... i am currently obsessed with many things at once, and i'm starting so many new stories that i'm probably gonna kill myself with the pressure of them... but hey, that's the fun of it, right!! =)... due to 'the fun of it' pretty much all my stories are on hiatus, but i'm working on a few actively... yay!!

ORIGINAL CHARACTERS: the size of this list is subject to change

Carys: a smart, upbeat, tough-attituded girl... she doesn't like taking crap from anybody, but is really kind and caring... i'm using her in "The TimeGame," and "TimeGame 2: Lessons in Time," as odd's granddaughter... but i love that name so i might use it in other stories as a different person, just if i write another story and you wonder how she can be both people... and that's about it

Cori: Carys's twin sister... she is in the TimeGame 2... she is trying to find Carys... a little softer than her twin... a juvenile on the run... very nice and matter-of-fact tone

Christina 'Chris' Wickett: a very adventurous, fun loving nine-year-old... Olivia's foster sister in the past... using her in "Black November" for that purpose... never backs down from any challenge... caring in her own special way

Joycie: very smart, tough 11-year-old... zack becomes her guardian in "Strange Gifts" after her mom and step-dad die... has a younger half-brother named Eric... a compulsive liar, but very compassionate and caring... her biological father is crazy and trying to kill the 'squints' (sorta)

so now, i really don't like these copy and paste chain things, but since i really really hate stereotypes i decided to add this in...

For people that hate stereotypes: If you think people should just shut up and stop, put this on your profile. (BOLD the ones you are.)
I'm SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic.
I'm EMO, so I MUST cut my wrists.
I'm a NEGRO so I MUST carry a gun.
I'm BLONDE, so I MUST be a ditz
I'm JAMAICAN so I MUST smoke weed.
I'm HAITIAN so I MUST eat cat.
I'm ASIAN, so I MUST be sexy.
I'm JEWISH, so I MUST be greedy.
I'm GAY, so I MUST have AIDS.
I'm a LESBIAN, so I MUST have a sex-tape.
I'm ARAB, so I MUST be a terrorist.
I SPEAK MY MIND, so I MUST be a bitch.
I'm a GAY RIGHTS SUPPORTER, so I WILL go to hell.

I'm a CHRISTAN, so I MUST think gay people should go to hell.
I'm RELIGIOUS, so I MUST shove my beliefs down your throat.
I'm ATHEIST so I MUST hate the world.
I don't really have a RELIGION, so I MUST be evil and have no morals
I'm REPUBLICAN, so I MUST not care about poor people.
I'm DEMOCRAT, so I MUST not believe in being responsible.
I am LIBERAL, so I MUST be gay.

I'm SOUTHERN, so I MUST be white trash.
I TAKE ANTI-DEPRESSANTS, so I MUST be crazy.
I'm a GUY, so I MUST only want to get into your pants.
I'm IRISH, so I MUST have a bad drinking problem.
I'm INDIAN, so I MUST own a convenient store.
I'm NATIVE AMERICAN, so I MUST dance around a fire screaming like a savage.
I'm a CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be a whore.
I'm a DANCER, So I must be stupid, stuck up, and a whore.
I wear SKIRTS a lot, so I MUST be a slut.
I'm a PUNK, so I MUST do drugs.
I'm RICH, so I MUST be a conceited snob.
I WEAR BLACK, so I MUST be a goth or emo.
I'm a WHITE GIRL, so I MUST be a nagging, steal-your-money kind of girlfriend.

I'm CUBAN, so I MUST spend my spare time rolling cigars.
I'm NOT A VIRGIN, so I MUST be easy.
I FELL IN LOVE WITH A MARRIED MAN, so I MUST be a home-wrecking whore.
I'm a TEENAGE MOM, so I MUST be an irresponsible slut.
I'm POLISH, so I MUST wear my socks with my sandals
I'm ITALIAN, so I must have a "big one".
I'm EGYPTIAN, so I must be a TERRORIST!
I'm PRETTY, so I MUST not be a virgin.
I HAVE STRAIGHT A'S, so I MUST have no social life.
I DYE MY HAIR CRAZY COLORS, so I MUST be looking for attention.
I DRESS IN UNUSUAL WAYS so I MUST be looking for attention.
I'm INTO THEATER & ART, so I MUST be a homosexual.
I'm a VEGETARIAN, so I MUST be a crazy political activist.
I HAVE A BUNCH OF GUY FRIENDS, so I MUST be fucking them all.
I HAVE A BUNCH OF GIRLS WHO ARE FRIENDS, so I MUST be a player.
I have Big BOOBS, so I MUST be a hoe.
I'm COLOMBIAN, so I MUST be a drug dealer.
I WEAR WHAT I WANT, so I MUST be a poser.
I'm RUSSIAN, so I MUST be cool and thats how Russians roll.
I'm GERMAN, so I must be a Nazi.
I hang out with GAYS, so I must be GAY TOO.
I'm BRAZILIAN, so I MUST have a BIG BUTT.
I'm PUERTO RICAN, so I MUST look good and be conceited
I'm SALVADORIAN, so I MUST be in MS 13
I'm POLISH, so I MUST be greedy
I'm HAWAIIAN so I MUST be lazy
I'm PERUVIAN, so I MUST like llamas
Im a STONER so I MUST be going in the wrong direction
I'm a VIRGIN so I MUST be prude.
Im STRAIGHT EDGE so I must be violent.

I'm a FEMALE GAMER, so I MUST be ugly.. or crazy.
I'm BLACK so I MUST love fried chicken and kool-aid. (Okay, seriously though, who doesn't.)
I'm a GIRL who actually EATS LUNCH, so I MUST be fat.
I'm SINGLE so I MUST be ugly.
I'm a SKATER so I must do weed and steal stuff
I'm a PUNK so I must only wear black and date only other punks
I'm ASIAN so I must be a NERD that does HOMEWORK 24/7
I'm CHRISTIAN so I MUST hate homosexuals.
I'm MIXED so I must be screwed up.
I'm MUSLIM so I MUST be a terrorist.
I'm in BAND, so I MUST be a dork.
I'm BLACK so I MUST believe JESUS WUZ A BROTHA.
I'm MORMON so I MUST be perfect
I'm WHITE and have black friends so I MUST think I'm black
I'm GOTH so I MUST worship the devil (So I’ve been told)
I'm HISPANIC, so I MUST be dirty.
I'm NOT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE, so I MUST be a loser.
I'm OVERWEIGHT, so I MUST have a problem with self control.

I'm PREPPY, so I MUST shun those who don't wear Abercrombie & Hollister.
I'm on a DANCE team, so I must be stupid, stuck up, and a whore.
I'm YOUNG, so I MUST be naive.
I'm RICH, so I MUST be a conceited snob
I'm MEXICAN, so I MUST have hopped the border.
I GOT A CAR FOR MY BIRTHDAY, so I MUST be a spoiled brat.
I'm BLACK, so I MUST love watermelon.
I'm BI, so I MUST think every person I see is hot.
I'm an ASIAN GUY, so I MUST have a small penis.
I'm a GUY CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be gay.
I'm a PREP, so I MUST be rich.
I don't like the SUN so I MUST be an albino.
I have a lot of FRIENDS, so I MUST love to drink and party.
I wear tight PANTS and I'm a guy, so I MUST be emo.
I couldn't hurt a FLY, So I MUST be a pussy.
I support GAY RIGHTS, so I MUST fit in with everyone.
I hang out with teenage drinkers and smokers, so I MUST smoke and drink too.
I have ARTISTIC TALENT, so I MUST think little of those who don't.
I don't like to be in a BIG GROUP, so I MUST be anti-social.

I have a DIFFERENT sense of HUMOR, so I MUST be crazy.
I tell people OFF, so I MUST be an over controlling bitch.
My hair gets GREASY a lot, so I MUST have no hygiene skills.
I'm DEFENSIVE, so I MUST be over controlling and a bitch.
I'm a NUDIST, so I MUST want everyone to see my boobs.
I read Comics, so I MUST be a loser.
I hang out with a FORMER PROSTITUTE.. So I MUST be a whore myself.
I'm TEXAN so I MUST ride a horse
I’m a GOTH, so I MUST be a Satanist
I’m a CROSSDRESSER, so I must be homosexual.
I draw ANIME so I MUST be a freak.
I am a FANGIRL so I MUST be a crazy, obsessed stalker.
I WATCH PORN so I MUST be perverted.
I'm an ONLY CHILD so I MUST be spoiled.
I'm INTELLIGENT so I MUST be weak.
I am AMERICAN so I MUST be obese, loud-mouthed and arrogant.

I'm WELSH so I MUST love sheep
I’m a YOUNG WRITER, so I MUST be emo.
I’m CANADIAN, so I MUST talk with a funny accent.
I'm a GUY, so I MUST ditch my pregnant girlfriend.
I'm CANADIAN, so I MUST love hockey and beavers.
I'm DISABLED, so I MUST be on Welfare.
I'm a FEMINIST, so I MUST have a problem with sexuality and I want to castrate every man on the earth.
I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE.
I WEAR A BIG SUNHAT when I go outside, so I MUST be stupid.
I like BLOOD, so I must be a VAMPIRE.
I'm an ALBINO, so I MUST be an evil person with mental abilities and is A MURDERER!
I'm ENGLISH, so I MUST speak with either a cockney or a posh accent, love tea and cricket, and have bad teeth.
I’m WHITE, so I MUST be responsible for everything going wrong on the planet: past, present, and future
I don't like YAOI or YURI, so I must be a HOMOPHOBE
I’m not the most POPULAR person in school, so I MUST be a loser
I care about the ENVIRONMENT, so I MUST be a tree hugging hippy
I have a FAN CHARACTER, so I MUST be an annoying Mary-sue.

I CHAT, I MUST be having cyber sex.
I'm PAGAN so I MUST sacrifice babies and drink the blood of virgins
I'm PAGAN so I MUST worship Satan
I'm CONSERVATIVE, so I MUST be against Abortion
I'm SWEDISH so I MUST be a tall blond blue-eyed lesbian.
I'm a LESBIAN so I MUST want to get with every single girl that I see.
I like CARTOONS, so I MUST be IRRESPONSIBLE.
I like READING, so I MUST be a LONER.
I have my OWN spiritual ideology; therefore I MUST be WRONG or MISGUIDED.

I am WICCAN, so I MUST be a SATANIST.
I DISAGREE with my government, so I MUST be a TERRORIST.
I am a WITCH, so I MUST be and OLD HAG and fly on a broomstick.
I love YAOI, so I MUST be GAY.
I'm a PERSON, so I MUST be LABELED
I DON'T CURSE, so I MUST be an outcast

I like GAMES, ANIME and COMICS, so I MUST be childish
I'm SWEDISH, therefore I MUST be WHITE.
I SPOT GRAMMATICAL ERRORS, so I MUST be a pedantic bastard.
I'm GOTHIC, so I MUST be mean.
I’m STRONG so I MUST be stupid.
I'm Australian so I MUST hunt crocodiles and talk to kangaroo’s
I go to RENFAIRES, so I MUST talk weird, be a loser, and not be up with the times
I’m GAY so I’m after EVERY straight guy around.
I don’t want a BOYFRIEND so I MUST be Lesbian.
I'm NOT CHRISTIAN so I MUST just need converting.

I love marching band, so I MUST be a friendless freak.
I DRINK and SMOKE, so I MUST have no life.
I am friends with a CUTTER, so I MUST be a CUTTER too.
I cry easily, so I MUST be a wimp.
I can't help pointing out mistakes so I MUST be an over-controlling perfectionist
I'm a PERFECTIONIST so I MUST check everything ten times, then burst into tears at one mistake.
I DON'T LIKE to talk about my personal life so I MUST be having problems

so thats it for my profile, told you i wasn't very good at this... anyway congratulations if you actually read all that...UMMMMMMMMMMM... OH YEAH...Be sure to read my stories (there's too many and i don't feel like listing them)... and please review them, i do better when i know what i need to work at... and i'll update this thing when i think i need to again...BYE!!

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1. Retribution » reviews
Tony is kidnapped and tortured by a man with a vengeance... can he survive with the help of his two fellow captives?... only rated M for chapter 5
NCIS - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,774 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 10-18-09 - Published: 7-14-09 - Tony D.
2. Strange Gifts » reviews
When Zack was little he had one friend. 12 years later, her brother shows up bearing an unusual gift, and this gift brings more trouble than Zack ever bargained for...
Bones - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,317 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 6-28-09 - Published: 5-17-09 - Zach A.
3. Bones High reviews
how the team meets in high school.. thought i'd try my hand at it. R&R!
Bones - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 731 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 6-16-09
4. Puzzles » reviews
Taking apart a puzzle is easy, the hard part is putting the pieces back together... what if the scene in the clearing during Breaking Dawn had gone differently?
Twilight - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,207 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-7-08 - Published: 9-22-08 - Alice
5. Learning How to Live » reviews
TEMPORARY HIATUS...Missing for six years, she's back now. But she's been corrupted, school isn't helping, and it seems there is only one boy who can help her. After being lost for so long, can she learn how to live?
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Mystery - Chapters: 3 - Words: 15,211 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 5-4-08 - Published: 2-2-08 - N. Tonks
6. TimeGame 2: Lessons in Time » reviews
ON HIATUS.. Sequel to The TimeGame..the gang ends up in Carys' time to find that the future is nowhere near perfect, and Carys isn't really the girl they thought she was..other unique surprises challenge the value of the friendships shared by all the kids
Code Lyoko - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,669 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 1-3-08 - Published: 11-1-07
7. Black November reviews
TEMPORARY HIATUS... I'm scared. You were supposed to be gone but you came back. You know who I am, where I live. I don't know you, but I am a part of you. and now you're watching me, always watching me...
Law and Order: SVU - Rated: T - English - Family/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 627 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-5-07
8. The TimeGame » reviews
odds grandaughter has grown up listening to him tell stories about lyoko,stories she doesn't believe. but when a game sends her back in time she meets odd and his friends and has a good time..until things start going very wrong..finally complete
Code Lyoko - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 8 - Words: 10,512 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 10-21-07 - Published: 3-15-07 - Complete
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