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Marjolein222
Poll: I'm planning on writing a new one-shot, just to get into writing again. I think it'll be a Sasuke Sakura one. My question is: what kind of genre do you want? Vote Now!
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since: 05-05-07, id: 1272133, Profile edited: 09-04-08
country: Netherlands
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Author has written 12 stories for Naruto, and Lord of the Rings.

GAAH! The search engine thing got all error-y on me once again!

Hi!

My name is Marjolein and I'm from Holland. I'm 16 years old, and I live with my mom, brother, and my adorable cat Foppe(It's Frisian!).

I am a very bubbly person. I say a lot of things that make no sense, and, like I read on some post card: "I think for a long time... and then I say something stupid"

That does not mean I can't be serious. I have been suicidal, depressed, and I've been through a lot of shit in my life. But I have decided it is best to move on, and enjoy the ride; you never know when it's over.

I love occult things like Wicca, tarot cards, tending my altar, etc. I AM NOT a follower of Satan. Thought I might point that out. Also, I'm not Anti-christian. Sure, I don't go to church, but I DO respect other peoples' religion.

I love chocolate. It gets me through these tough schooldays.. Recently, I have fallen in love with Ben & Jerry's New York Fudge(?). In my opinion it's like a little piece of heaven crammed in a 500 ml. container.

My favourite colours are: Red, purple, black, dark blue and dark green.
Favourite Gemstones: Amethyst, Diamond, Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby, Onyx.
Favourite (incense)scents: red roses, lilacs, the moon(incense), lavender, musk, amber, and many more. Incense helps me to relax, and retreat from this hectic life.

My hobbies are :

Reading - LotR, HP, and all fiction books or historical stories. I'm planning on reading the silmarillion, and have tried countless times, but I get stuck around page sixty.

Computer : I love just to surf around, and read fanfics, and of course review them. I also play on freerice.com. If you have spare time, I suggest you go there. It boosts your vocabulary, and you help people in Africa.

Writing- I write almost everything, from fanfics to poetry and columns, from dark to normal. Really, it depends on my mood, which can change every hour. If you click on the Homepage link, you'll find my LiveJournal page.

Listening music- I like almost every sort of music- it depends on my mood. A selection of singers/bands I listen to on a daily basis: A-teens, After Forever, Akeboshi, Asian Kung-Fu Generation, Avril Lavigne, Breaking Benjamin, Christina Aguilera, Danity Kane, Delain, Enya, Evanescence, Fergie, Hinder, Kamelot, Kat DeLuna, Kelly Clarkson, Kelly Rowland, Madonna, Maroon 5, Metallica, Miley Cyrus, Naruto soundtracks, Nickelback, Nightwish, Panic! at the disco, Paramore, Phil Collins, Pink, Pussycat Dolls, Rascal Flatts, Rihanna, Skillet, Sugababes, Tamaki Nami, Tarja Turunen, TaTu, The Spill Canvas, Utada Hikaru, Within Temptation.

Believe me, this is only a fraction of what I listen to. As you may have noticed, which you haven't, I listen to almost every type of music.

I love cartoons, I watch them more than my brother.Naruto is, currently, the only anime I'm interested in.

My favourite movies are: Everything that's fictional or historical. And, of course, Disney movies.

Dislikes: White clothes. people who judge (me) too soon, school, PE class, cheese.

My favourite pairings:
As you may have noticed, I love the character of Haruno Sakura. To me, she is a very complex person who needs more love and attention, if not for the fact she will be the one to knock some sense in Sasuke-the-horrible-avenger.

I like:
GaaraXSakura.
NarutoXSakura. Because he deserves it.
ItachiXSakura - Only if it's well written.
SasoriXDeidara - (sigh) My guilty pleasure, I guess... One of my friends recommended a story to me, and I got addicted. You can go ahead and shun me, I don't care.

Sidepairings
ShikamaruXTemari.
NejiXTenten
NarutoXHinata

Pairings I don't really like:
SasukeXSakura.
ShikamaruXIno(sort of). I think Ino's too bossy.
GaaraXMatsuri. He was her teacher. I'm not a huge fan of KakashiXSakura either.
SasukeXHinata.

I rarely read:
Stories which have a pairing in it with an OC. I DO, however, make exceptions for really well written stories.
Yuri stories.

I'll never read:
Incest fics.
Naruto Chatboxes. Not because I think they're stupid, but because they confuse me.
I aboslutely HATE Mary-Sues.

Stories I almost hate to read:
Stories with lots of TYPO'S!

'your' and you're are two whole different things! Just like 'their' and they're! Seriously, I can't stand reading fics in which this is done wrong all the time. A few mistakes, alright, it happens. But seriously. Use the spelling check on this site. It's there for a reason. Also, there happens to be a beta section on this site. There, you will find a beta who fits your standards and your story. I'm a beta too, by the way.

And I don't like it when authors use i instead of I. It annoys me. The Shift button was invented for a reason, and hates to be neglected.

A basic review guide. I wrote this myself, so I may have missed a lot.

1. If possible, compliment the writer on writing a character very much like the canon, for coming up with an original plotline.. anything which is unique, or extremely well done. Always start off positive, especially if you plan on criticizing parts of the story, or spelling.

2. Share your thoughts about the story/chapter you're reviewing. 'I loved the part where' 'I liked how' 'I think that..'. Authors love to know what their readers felt when they were reading one of their stories, and if their readers actually have got a clue of what's going on.

3. Point out some flaws or mistakes if you find them. Being an author myself, I know it is annoying when you have typo's or any other flaws in your story. Try to put it nicely. Don't call the author stupid or something, just point it out. We're human, you know. Also, if you think a sentence should be tweaked a little, say it, don't force the writer; it's still their story, after all.

4. If your review is quite long, which mine usually are, recap. If you're adding the story to your Favourites or something, mention it.

5. Lastly: be creative. And be honest. Don't hesitate to point out mistakes, or tell the author what you DIDN'T like. As the review window says, a well rounded review is the most rewarding thing for an author. And really; what goes around, comes around.

Questions, or criticism? PM me. Or just for fun, of course.

Thank you for visiting!




1. Captivated reviews
Ever since Sasuke left, Sakura has been unable to break free from him, and is willing to give up on trying. However, one night she discovers it only takes some sake and startling blue eyes to let go of the past, and start anew.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,234 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-3-08 - Published: 8-3-08
2. One last time, one last try » reviews
The Konoha 11 have decided to try one more time to bring Sasuke back to Konoha, whether he likes it or not. Are they willing to sacrifice their own lives, and the people they had to leave behind, for this mission? And will Konoha survive without them?
Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 22,619 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 7-12-08 - Published: 5-14-08
3. Return reviews
There is no turning back. She knows this, yet she keeps hoping, fooling herself. He knows this too. He has tried to deny it, but now, he embraces this fate. Because it makes things so much easier.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,252 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-6-08 - Published: 7-6-08
4. Maybe? reviews
Today is a normal day. The same training, the same teacher, the same teammates. However, some things will change. The weak one beats the strong one at a challenge this time. How hard will it be to step out of the normal routine, and act the opposite way?
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,976 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-26-08 - Published: 6-26-08
5. Once upon a shore reviews
It is finally time to say goodbye. They will go their own way now. A short poem about the choice that would tear them apart in the end.
Complete - Lord of the Rings - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 218 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 6-23-08 - Published: 6-23-08
6. Paranoia » reviews
What would happen if the hard life of a shinobi became too much to bear for her? How can you live with yourself, knowing you killed many and saved few? When Sakura finally snaps, the line between reality and hallucination is blurred beyond recognition.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,849 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 6-21-08 - Published: 6-15-08
7. DreamNight reviews
A woman stands in a clearing, in the middle of a forest, and admires the things around her, knowing she will never be the same person she once was again.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Mystery/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 900 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-3-08 - Published: 6-3-08
8. Picking up the shards reviews
Here she was, left alone to pick up the shards of what was once her life, her being. And to think, it was only seventeen hours ago the world started to fall apart around her, and she couldn't do anything but watch as it happened...
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,159 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 5-30-08 - Published: 5-30-08
9. Off the hook? reviews
Years ago, Sasuke left Konoha for power and revenge. Have all those years changed Sakura, or will she still be the besotted girl she was back then? One thing's for sure; their reunion doesn't exactly go as planned. Sort of sequel to Sakura's determination
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,550 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 5-22-08 - Published: 5-22-08
10. The other one reviews
She had always had her eyes on him. Now, she had him, but nothing more. With a heavy heart, she watches as an other woman claims what should be hers, what she wants to be hers. It clouds her mind, poisons her being, until she can't see what's real.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 732 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 4-26-08 - Published: 4-26-08
11. A very typical morning reviews
A short one-shot about Sakura having a hard time getting out of bed. It has about everything; smashed alarm-clocks, teachers who can't seem to be on time, and annoying teammates. How a bad day can get even worse.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 782 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 2-29-08 - Published: 2-29-08
12. Beginning of a transformation reviews
Sakura is reflecting on how the departure of Sasuke, and the opinions of people around her, are slowly but surely changing her. And once the change begins, there will be no way to go back. Because she promised she would never back down again.
Complete - Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 701 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-24-08 - Published: 2-24-08
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