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Author has written 4 stories for Companions of the Night, A Well-Timed Enchantment, and Vampires.

OATH TO THE REVIEW REVOLUTION

I, AiDeeKay, do solemnly swear to review all the chapters of the fics I enjoy, regardless of the number of reviews, its age, or anything else.
I have joined the review revolution, post this in your profile and join the revolution!

.x.x.x.

I comment every chapter.
Like, seriously.


I LOVE to read, and because I can't have enough La La Land, I decided to write, and lo and behold...I LOVE it! I am an immature writer, integrating some inside jokes, giggling when I'm writing/reading something even remotely sensual, and love some good twists. I'm not the biggest fan of Twilight (or much of a fan to begin with, even if I did read the books), so I like my vampires dangerous, moody, non-glittery (thank you very much), and mysterious. And hey, sexy works too, but mostly a sense of mystery that makes you want to know him, even though you know that if you do, you're basically dead. So yea, a vampire who can get all sorts of hormones running, from adrenaline to...hehe...yea.

I beta! Here are my beta children and their stories!: MyButterfly364's Sweet Seduction, Oathie's Moonlight Sonata, and I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT's this is my LIFE.


On Hiatus: 05-22-09 to ?: How Strange and Michel's Perspective, 06-17-09 to ?: Night Walk: Blood Dress, 06-05-09 to ?: Untitled

Characters

NW:BD: Tucker,

Unttld: Constantine,


Diary

29 October 2009

Well, I honestly haven't been doing anything. But that will change! You wanna know why? Because it will be MyButterfly346's birthday on Christmas Eve! Can you believe it?! My beta child will be another year older. Makes me want to go "AWW!" Well, for her birthday present, she wants me to update NW:BD. And you know what? I love that girl so much, I will do it! Just as FYI, Courtnee, I think it's still awesome that you call me saucy...even though it means what it means! /thoughts

3 October 2009

Well now, it's been a while since I've updated anything! College life is very lax, but demanding at the same time. I'm basically only updating for the one-year anniversary of my first chapters for my stories! The next updates will definitely have to be on hold for a long while. I've just not been in the mood to write much lately. I mean, I THINK I can write one-shots, but then again, when can I leave things as one-shots? Three more days until my birthday, which I only noticed because Unttld was published on my birthday. You will see an update for it soon :) /thoughts

22 August 2008

I have not updated in almost a month. Wow, that is something... Anyways, I finally started just today, not ten minutes before, typing up HS's next chapter up. I feel very proud of myself, cuzz I haven't bothered reading the previous chapter, yet I remember, for the most part, the jist of it. Goose Girl will get a bigger role here, as the soccer mom! She will also be saving lives by just interrupting a couple things. Oh yeah, I hope everyone likes the American Revolution. I'm writing about that rather than the American Civil War, cuzz my buddy xxdarknessxfallsxx is going to write about it. So, if any of you read her Vengeance is Written in blood novel, you'll be reading about the Civil War. /thoughts

24 July 2009

I just saw that someone in El Salvador saw my story NW:BD. Let me say: LOVE LOVE LOVE to you. I always wondered if anyone in El Salvador read FF. Keep reading my fellow Salvadoran!

5 July 2009

M'sP will get an update, but only because of it's one-year anniversary. I've been writing this baby for a year almost! Expect an update 17 July 2009 :) /thoughts

22 June 2009

Hiatus for all my stories...again. No real reason, just lost interest in writing at the moment. I'll just be doing my beta-ing job (cuzz I love it, to be honest:)) /thoughts

15 June 2009

In a review for NW:BD, someone asked me if Dre was a virgin, and it got me thinking. I mean, the last sentence was somewhat provocative (ritual of kissing and blood), and they were in a bathroom, and...yea.

So, I decided she would not be a virgin, even before meeting Asher (:O). Too bad, I am having too much fun with that, and making Dre seem like a bitch (which she is. I think I might need to do a little Get to Know... about her to show the world she isn't that white and pure. So yea, posting early this time! Aren't I nice? I will update just NW:BD today or tomorrow, and THEN Unttld and NW:BD again this weekend. I graduate on Wednesday! /thoughts

11 June 2009

Dude! Six more days for me and I graduate! That means I'm getting lazy for EVERYTHING! Hiatus for VVV's FFs extended, and I might make a hiatus from FF in general (except betaing and reading FF). I'm so excited! So THIS is what it feels like when you know you'll pass, but you want all As and Bs? Wow...it feels refreshing :) /thoughts

24 May 2009

So, I have been planning to do "Get to Know..." special parts in NW:BD for a while now, and I have four character profiles done with: Tucker, Ayrilyn, Karl Kilbourne, and Annaliese Kilbourne.

Next up will be Sayira, Josef, Friedrich, Andrea, and then, Asher Benjamin Kilbourne (I still can't believe I could have ever come up with a name like that. Very happy indeed). So, tell me which character's profile you would like to see for Chapter Fourteen: Big Changes :) /thoughts

13 May 2009

So, I added a new thinger so you can see what I see when I write about my characters. I also have something to say: after this next update, M'sP and HS will go on a hiatus for two updates, so the next time is in about a month that I will post again :) /thoughts

11 May 2009

Only came to say: House was motherFUCKING INTENSE today! Holy shiiiiiizzzzz...GOD! /excitement and thoughts

9 May 2009

I think I might be able to post today! Even though it's 12:11am right now...haha. I will sleep, write another 4k and post! Don't want this chapter of NW:BD to be too exciting. Maybe more of a teaser, or a little build up to my dark theme.

I'm kinda happy my dark theme can't be seen clearly. I asked the reviewers to tell me if it was spotable a mile away. I'm glad it's not. It'll (hopefully) make the ending that much more interesting!

Mhm. Nowadays everybody trying to talk like they got something to day But nothing comes out when they move their lips Just a bunch of gibberish And motherfuckers act like they forgot about Dre. /thoughts

2:30pm later that day

So, I decided Dre wasn't the only one who was going to have competition. Since we know all of her thoughts, we know Asher has no solid competition (cuzz I'm a Libra), and because he is fucking amazing.

Drunk, Dre will show all her jealousy! Am almost done with the chapter, so yay! /thoughts

2:57pm later that day

Am done! Woot! Hope no one hates me for what I did in NW:BD. /thoughts

7 May 2009

Holy crap I feel so tired. I took two days of IB testing, and it nearly killed me! I went to sleep yesterday at 6pm! Like, NO joke! So, for two days, that means I didn't work on my stuff. I want to post them on Saturday, but yea...it doesn't seem possible now. Oh well. Sunday again. /thoughts

9:51pm later that day

Am fucking pissed. Warning: NW:BD is not going to be nice at all. /thoughts

11:57pm even later that day

Am done with HS! With 2k words! I surprised myself. I hope you all like the ending. Now, to NW:BD. My temper went down, but I have no means of making it a perky chapter...well...I have a plan for it for a while, and I don't want to change it, so I guess it will have some fun stuff, but grudgingly. Everything shall be bad for the rest of the time! (I won't, I'm just bluffing...but really, not in the best of moods right now) /thoughts

2 May 2009

I hope all you high school seniors sent your Intent to Enroll stuff yesterday! If not, SHAME ON YOU!

Anyways, wanted to say that I have finished Untitled AND Michel's Perspective AND am now working on How Strange (Well, really, I finished M'sP yesterday and started HS yesterday as well). Aren't I doing goooooood?

I feel very happy that I'm on schedule. Last time it was a PAIN IN THE ASS because I was starting to get used to the whole writing and updating thing AND everything at once, but now it's easier.

Will take my time with HS and NW:BD, don't worry.

(Sorry. Got lazy with writing out the whole freaking titles)((Think will go sleep for a little)) /thoughts

30 April 2009

I love this Zack from FanFiction, whoever he is. A Well-Timed Enchantment is NOW a category under books! I LOVE it! /thoughts

10:23pm later same day

Have been done with Untitled :) Started working on Michel's Perspective. Next will be How Strange, then Night Walk: Blood Dress.

Yea, I switched priorities. Need to distance myself from all the stories because then I get carried away (except How Strange; AWTE used to be my FAVORITE book until I discovered CotN, then it was D'sB, THEN...haha...jk). VVVelde is my favorite author, THAT is a given. I have four of her books, and I want to get more (and I have read some of the other ones in Google...guilty pleasure). So yea. I KIND OF want to start a D'sB fanfic, but then I would have to worry about ANOTHER set of characters from being deviated too far from their original personality...which just brings a headache, ESPECIALLY when I jetlag and have to write SOMETHING to get my creative juices flowing again.

Anyways, gonna write some poetry, or some kind of love story. I need to vent my Libra-ness out of my system :/ /thoughts

28 April 2009

I am now more interested in my Untitled story than Night Walk, since I wrote it a week after I posted it, and had one week to take a break from it. I am working on Untitled now, then I will work on Companions of the Night, then How Strange (a reviewer gave me an idea!), and THEN, I shall work on Night Walk: Blood Dress. I already know where it's going, so no worries there. Anyways, I like how I'm doing this system. Forces me to use my creative juices. Wow, I have (re)read this CotN story, and apparently, I HAVE read lemons before, I just didn't know it...haha. Or smut. I've read smut before! Really. If anyone can give me a list of FF terminology, it would be much appreciated. /thoughts

26 April 2009

I kept my promise of updating every two weeks! Anyways, I LOVED the reaction to my being back. It makes me want to write more for you guys (even though I write because some of these stories captivate me, even if my imagination contains too much humor and horror at the same time).

I hope this chapter doesn't disappoint you guys! I worked my ass off for the last two stories (though How Strange, the very last one, was extremely short. I might end it quickly, or just drop it, even though Castle Belesse is so enticing). /thoughts

21 April 2009

Yea, I'm back...again. Anyways, am looking for quotes for Blood Dress, and found some VERY good ones for this one and the next one! Am very happy. Think will work the rest of Untitled (only one part left) tomorrow, and then Michel's Perspective right afterward to start something, and then How Strange. I swear, I am working on the stories based on the poll (though I like Blood Dress better cuzz I FINALLY have a hardcore-ly finalized ending for THIS installment. The next one...well, I have the beginning, but yet to finalize the middle, and early end. The end is solid, I am SURE, unless I decide to extend it, which I really doubt, but who knows? /thoughts

20 April 2009

Seems I have been getting on here and babbling a lot huh? I swear, it's only the rush of being back! Anyways, I'm talking to Restless Dreaming Spirit, and her message is just too funny. And yea, I'm going to share that one piece which made me gasp AND laugh for a good two minutes before I was able to reply:

I like how I got to see Michel back then as well as
Luke. It's good for background characters and you know, now we know Luke. We
know his past and his heart aches and yada yada. I'd like to know what Michel
was doing New York however w/o him. besides drinking blood and getting laid xp

Seriously. I love this site and the people in it. Haha. If you read such a PM, wouldn't you feel as if you'll die from laughter but of happiness that someone liked you story so far?

Haha. I told a friend about this cuzz I was laughing my ass off, and I told her about Companions of the Night...now all I think is this: "God, Michel is one sexy vampire."

(I blame Restless Dreaming Spirit for this u.u) /thoughts

19 April 2009

I am done with the newest chapter of Night Walk: Blood Dress. Yea, it's a huge plot twister. Yea, it's a little lighter, but darker at the same time. I tried to have more light than dark in this one though.

Working on Untitled, then I shall work on Michel's Perspective, then How Strange.

I love how I am BACK on TRACK! Well...not ON track, because I changed course for one of the (actually, two) of the stories, but I am GLAD I changed it! It'll be much more exciting, and will offer a little more closure, and a bit more realistic ending. Especially for Night Walk: Blood Dress. My buddy MyButterly346 has caught the intentional sexual tension I have between Asher and Dre, so woot! Yea, more to go. It's funny, and I realize just how guttered my brain is. But I don't want to clean it! I personally love it when the sexual tension in a story is present. It gives it that "GOD! The writer is torturous" feeling. Am I being torturous? I hope so. I would love it if my writing kept someone on their feet every time they read a new chapter :)

But yes, chapter a little darker, and a budding relationship! I just couldn't resist. /thoughts

18 April 2009

If any of you read this section at all, you'll see it's a little different! Mhm! Updates are now at the top! So you don't have to scroll all the way down to see what's up (for those who give a damn). So yea, I think I finalized my ideas for Night Walk: Blood Dress! I shall continue it, regardless! Yes, people will die, and no, it won't have a happy ending, and yes, I have changed my mind for the direction of this story (again). Yes, there will be a sequel, and no, Asher will not be in the beginning of the plot, and NO, I am not making it Twilighty. FUCK NO. So, yes-no continuation: No, Dre will not become a vampire by the end of this, yes, her life is miserable, and no, she will not go to an insane asylum, and yes, she will die in the end of the sequal (or trilogy, if I go overboard with chapters and change my mind...AGAIN).

Anyways, I think I'm going to start posting every two weeks now. So, am almost done with Night Walk: Blood Dress, and Untitled, then Michel's Perspective, then How Strange.

(If you want me to prioritize on a story, check out my poll! Night Walk: Blood Dress and Untitled are tied right now! /thoughts

12 April 2009

This is the day I've been waiting for--MY STORIES ARE GONNA BE UPDATED! I'm just doing the final touches for Night Walk: Blood Dress, and I'm ready to post! Night Walk: Blood Dress is immensely short, compared to the last chapter (A whopping 8k words). This time, it'll be the standard 1.5k. Like I said, don't expect much of any of my stories. In fact, I'm going to re-read How Strange, since I have a bad feeling about it. /thoughts

2:55 pm later same day

I have, AT LAST posted. Now, if you have not reviewed...what are you waiting for? /thoughts

9 April 2009

So, I wanted to post everything up today, but alas, I have a Lab to type up, so this might take a few hours or days longer. I swear to you, however, that I will get it posted soon.

I do, either way, only have one story left to do :)

BUT! I think that if I don't get it by the end of this week, another month will be enough time for me. But fear not (for those who still give a damn about any of my stories), I shall update!

OH MY GOD! Today, I read this manga, called Superior, and I think I am in love with the manga! Yea, shoujo. So? Sue me! I love it. And it all started when I was done with Naruto and Bleach on a Saturday morning, and I wanted more manga...and Wallflower hadn't been updated in FOREVER! GRR. But yea.

First, it was Special A. It took me a couple weeks to read up to chapter 97, but it was allllll goooood.

Then, it was Vampire Knight. Well, for those who have read my stories, about 3/4 of them are about vampires...seeing as how I only HAVE four stories.

Now, it's Superior. But really, this story is just too cute! I'd tell you how to find it, but I'm not in my usual whoring mood u.u

That, and I don't want to share Yuusha /thoughts

7 April 2009

I know I have this at the top of my page, but whatever, go to this link if you want me to beta you! https://spreadsheets.google.com/viewform?formkey=cHhUNWw1M0dTdFMzV2tCVmo0cHJLU2c6MA..

Later Today

So, I finished Lee-Ook's Emmalee Part Three! Didn't end beautifully, I am afraid. Am ACTUALLY working on Night Walk: Blood Dress, and am planning on writing Night Walk: Vicious Cycle soon. Vicious Cycle is the one that I had planned, but me being me (aka a Libra), it had to go to the lovey dovey scene.

Okay, so yea. I kinda wannado the "Six Months Since I've Updated" thingy, but it's only been five, but I can't wait! I am (kind of) back in the game! If you're reading this, be kind to me, and review. I would appreciate is like no other if you do :)

Oh, by the way, I went to New York last week, from the 28th to the 30th :) It was GREAT. Can't wait to go back there! /thoughts

30 March 2009

I received something that welled me up, and actually made me feel something, which I haven't felt lately, as last post shows. Anywho, I want to share it with the world!

AiDeeKay,

I want to thank you for all your reviews, they inspire me to keep on keeping
on when I haven't updated in awhile.
Also, I wanted to let you know that "I'm begging to be" in 'Dragon's Lore'
was actually a grammar typo that was supposed to be "I'm beginning to be."
But, I'm so dyslectic I didn't even catch it until I read through the chapter
three times. However I'm not changing it since you were the first to review
and specifically stated it was your favorite quote. It shall remain "begging
to be." :D

~Boo.

I shall read that whenever I feel no one in FanFiction loves me (haha) /thoughts

26 March 2009

I think I'm emotionally detatched from things when I get forced to be away from them, eh? Well, I still only have those two things to do, and I still haven't done them.

I haven't done a good job being a beta-reader for my friend MyButterfly346, and I feel horrible.

Hopefully, this spring break will help me refreshen, and be a live!

Maybe a new story! So that THOSE fresh ideas bring in OTHER fresh ideas for my PRESENT stories.

I hope I get through this writer's rut. I'm going deeper instead of climbing up.

God. Pray for me. /thoughts

4 March 2009

Ida Tarbell is one fierce woman :)

Wow, so I did get accepted to my first choice after all! After three months of trying to complete my application, I got the Congratulations! We are pleased to offer you admission as a freshman for Fall of 2009.

Do you have any idea how EXCITED I got? Well, it's East Coast (I'm West. Yea yeaaa!), so it's like, only 2,225 miles away! Homesickness, anyone? You motherfucking bet I will have it the second I get on the plane...even if my parents and sistas sit right next to me.

Okay, so I haven't posted anything yet. I want to post everything at once, I told you that. Again, don't expect greatness. I'm just lagging. I wonder if I will even DO finish a story. I get carried away with the new ideas that always pop in my head. Anyways, I think I will finish Michel's Perspective either tomorrow, or Friday, and then prioritize Night Walk, as it's the only one not yet on the computer, even a part of it. I don't want to let myself get easily carried away as I have been. What's-her-face-that-travels-with-Dre was supposed to die, and Dre was supposed to realize she was in a vicious cycle that will never stop. Well, I might post it someday...when I actually write it on my own accord, and not swifted away by the lovely readers.

So yea, now I want to do Night Walk: Vicious Cycle. I should rename the other one I have right now to Night Walk: Blood Dress or something. Well, it sounds like a GOOOOOOOOOD idea :)

Expect something soon...well...not TOO soon...maybe like...another year.

Wait...no. My baby sister's first birthday is on the 20th of this month! Yay! So, that will be my birthday gift for you guys...however that works out. But really, review my shit. I'm starting to get lonely haha.

And Michel, my dear Michel is getting RAPED constantly. Not that I mind...much, but it would be nice if they reviewed to tell me what they thought about my painstakingly written story. Luke's Perspective will end soon. I have plans for that one to enter back into Michel's Perspective. But yea, now I can't wait to write something!

Dude! I should totally finish up my homework! But I don't want to! So what do I do? Hmm..maybe finish rambling here...

Bye FanFiction lovers. I love you as much as I love this site. /thoughts

24 February 2009

Oh damn oh damn. Read Beauty by Robin McKinlrey and Dragon's Bait :) Idunno if I told you or not, but I did. Haha. I feel naughty for breaking my own promises...and lame for not even being able to keep my own promises.

Okay. So I hyped myself too much for Dragon's Bait, so when I read it, didn't really feel much of "AHHHHHHHHHHH!" Oi. It was GOOD don't get me wrong, but really, I like the fanfiction floweryness and descriptiveness some people have posted. So yea.

I think the screen name is dirt bag.

I must say, I am ADDICTED to his/her writing. If you ever read Thirst (CotN Michel one shot), or Dragon's Bait (kinda forgot the title), you will SEE and FEEL what I mean. It gives me shudders just thinking about those stories.

They're that good.

So yea. I'm a book whore. Can't say I mind much, cuzz I don't :) /thoughts

17 February 2009

Okay. So I lied. Sorry. I know I said I had things ready, but really, it was in my mind. Like, I really want to post a dream I had the other day. It was extremely weird, but cute, if you catch my drift. Maybe I'll write a story about it later. You know. It is probably from the early 1900s, so it'll be fun :)

I digressed. I have two stories done: How Strange and Untitled. I need Michel's Perspective and Night Walk, in that order of importance.

Warning! Don't expect a masterpiece for ANY story. It is regular writing, with no "oh, does this soudn good?" kinda thing. I mean, yea, I'm talking with someone I beta (MyButterfly364), cuzz she loves Con (yea. he's amazing), and likes how I am drawing the ghost as of far. She likes what I plan to post soon too, so I am happy to hear that.

Anyways. Oathie, someone I just aquired that I beta as well, is...well...a new recruitment. You want me to beta something, don't be afraid to tell me :)

I will beta (gladly): Companions of the Night (no. fucking. duh), A Well-Timed Enchantment (I am better at reading it than writing it), Dragon's Bait (I FINALLY read it in the weekend. Guilty pleasure), Vampires (the section).

I will beta (grudgingly but shouldn't stop you from asking!): Twilight (Good book. Just not as GREAT as people make it seem. I already fell in love with a vampire...book...)

So yea :)

I've been in such a whoring mood huh? :p /thoughts

9 February 2009

Okay, so I should really be getting ready to go to school, since I leave in 12 minutes, but whatevas, I love this site :)

So, am now a beta reader for two people :) Am very happy, cuzz I get sneak peeks bwahaha. Yea. You can be jealous.

Anyways, if ANY of you read my Methodology section (which is this), I'm here to whore my two lovely people.

Sweet Seduction, written by MyButterfly364. It's about a girl named Kayla who meets a strange young man who instantly starts getting into her life. Meh. We've talked about this, and I promise you, it's NOTHING like Twilight. Original story here. Sorry for the Twilight lovers, but she wants something that won't compare to Twilight every stinking minute...which once in a while does (will he sparkle like Edward?). No he will not. His name is Ashton, like MY Asher, and they are both similar. Can hardly be romantic, can get hot in there, and alluring (wow...the second part souds dirteh haha). So yea, read her story. Wonderful creativeness, I promise you. Go read. NOW.

Moonlight Sonata, by Oathie. It's a COMPANIONS OF THE NIGHT fanfic. Okay, so we all know Ethan/Michel is THE BEST vampire ever written (by anyone famous), and he should have gone main stream SOOOO long ago. Anyways, she is my recent beta child. Kerry isn't as helpless as other people have made her be, though there is the TINIEST bit of desperation. She, like most teenagers, manages to move on, though with some difficulty. She raves, and someone grabs her to dance. She sees his eyes. Its...well, go read and find out. You WON'T be disappointed. Good grammar, great plot. Well rounded too :)

Okay. My whoring is done after nine minutes. I have three left to get ready :p /thoughts

4 February 2009

Dang. I have had Dragon's Bait for a couple of weeks now, AND I CAN'T GET STARTED! I MADE myself promise myself to read all the books I had before Dragon's Bait. Wanna know what I'm left with since I bought it?

--Hood--, Lawrence Lawhead (it was an AMAZING book, no doubt)

Orcs, Stan Nichols. It is also pretty good, though I am still in book one of the trilogy. And THEN there is another book, but I don't have it, so I won't worry about it.

Insomnia, Stephen King. Ah. Good old Stephen King. He is amazing, like seriously. But yea. I think it's his thickest book EVER, or so it would seem. Haven't started it yet.

Beauty, Robin McKinley. When I got her book, THIS is where I promised myself I would read all the other books I had left.

Well, there you have it. My list of "Books I Have to Read Before I Can Read VVV's Dragon's Bait", which, I have read stories from here already, AND it's by VVV, so we ALL KNOW it's going to be amazing. Just like that. Dare to disagree with me.

note: --Hood-- means I'm done with that book. FF won't allow strikethrough./thoughts

27 January 2009

OMG. I love you all so much, that I'm posting something new on my Methodology section. Well, it's about FUCKING TIME! I FINALLY have two things done, though you can tell I lost a bit of my original touch, and the whole chapter might feel different.

Okay, so I really think I might have to like threaten to get like five reviews or something. Really. It sucks ass. Michel's Perspective is getting RAPED and no one stays to leave him a little love. They get the bam bam and don't leave a telling kiss.

Well, I'll stop my ghetto sayings, and get to work on Michel's Perspective. I knida know where it will go.

Here is what I finished so far (and in this order):

Untitled -- Actually, I have been writting snippets of this, so everything is left at half a sentence, but whatever. I really like it, though it gives a feeling it's only "filler." I swear, it's not. I just write too much.

How Strange -- I know, right? About time, since I hardly write anything for this poor story. I have to re-read it, to get the jist of the characters again. Right. Shall start ASAP...like REALLY ASAP.

And am now working on Michel's Perspective. Night Walk might have to wait a little more. I already hand wrote the beginning of my chapter, since I like what I hand wrote better than what I wrote right after posting my infamous ninth chapter. Should have done this from the beginning. My writing could have been a little more centered. But, meh, whatever. It got Asher and Dre in that...hott predicament. /thoughts

26 January 2009

Poor Michel. He's been getting raped lately. Like, for the past two months, he hardly gets any views (from my story at least), and then suddenly BAM!

It almost makes me jealous that people are taking him from me. But, oh well. I just wish they would review.

But we can't all get what we want, right? /thoughts

22 January 2009

Well, it was an ouch. On the day I wrote that, they were on their way to tell me negatory.

Well, onwards: I finally have started the new chapter for Night Walk. Planning on typing some stuff for Untitled. Will definitely write something for How Strange (I miss them, actually). Michel's Perspective died kinda. Should have left it as a vague memory, and just have him tell Kerry or something.

:O Well, Michel is an evil mastermind. That shall happen.

Well, it looks like they are all back in action.

Just don't expect anything soon. /thoughts

14 January 2009

Okay. So apparently, I am accepted at one of the two colleges I applied for, CSU San Marcos. Happy, because there is a 50 that I do get accepted somewhere, but not happy, because it is not the place I want to go...not completely. Well...not at all. /thoughts

7 January 2009

It's officially been a month since I've written anything. LeeOok and Asher and Michel and Kerry and Dre and even Zacky are at the back of my mind at the moment.

I would love to see the snow...I live in sunny California, and only seen the snow from pictures and from Palomar mountain...which seems far when I drive.

Okay. Enough babbling. Three papers due tomorrow. 10:10pm. All nighter highly possible. No stories for a while. Miraculously getting views every day, even if they aren't much, they are still something...which I find miraculous.

My poll shows people want to hear more of Raechel's thoughts. She is obssessed with Zacky and loves Lucas like a son. They will basically adopt him when her family dies. Whoops. Did I say that? Well, I might as well kill them off. They don't make a huge part of the story, other than not liking Zacky. Manny is still somewhat tripped for her, though he likes/loves Leslie. Vampires hardly love, but when they do, they never forget. The rest are strolling, not really looking for love, but they wouldn't mind if it came a long the way, like world domination.

My favorite characters are Con and Matt. One of them was actually from the upper class, and one of them was a greaser. He is best friends with Dustin. I think I might make a separate thing to describe my characters :)

Sounds like fun getting away from homework and writing what my mind sees, and not what people tell it to see or write.

But more later. /thoughts

1 January 2009

Oh me oh my! It's the NEW year! And that should mean NEW chapters...or better yet because this retard that is typing this has yet another writing block and can't seem to get the boring part done and get to the good parts...for ALL four stories--

How Strange: Is it REALLY Oliver? Well, I plan to make it that he is, but that they have vague recollection of each other. This type of daja vu that imposes in the way of them falling in love all over again. Sounds good eh? How to get there? No clue.

Onwards!

Michel's Perspective: LeeOok (that's how he pronounces his name) doesn't get with Emmalee. Kerry and LeeOok get to know each other better and actually get along. Kerry WILL get back to her usual smart mouth routine. How to make Emmalee's and LeeOok's good bye bittersweet? Dear me. I have no fucking clue.

Night Walk: Asher and Dre are a bit awkward after the deal, but he keeps his promise of returning her. Of course, Friedrich has all the money, and he left off without a word. Guess what? They're stuck in the bus. But that means a chance to be together longer, and something good err...hott might happen. Yes. Easier said than done. I have no clue how to get past the awkward part.

Untitled: Raechel and Zacky discuss about Malvoro's history. He is one fucking scary ghost. Jane is the medium which presents all these horrific nightmares. I keep getting caught up with adorable Lucas. I mean, he means so much to Raechel, right/ Zacky and Lucas means the world to her. I wish I hadn't done it in first perspective. I feel compelled to write all her thoughts at the moment of when the chapter is taking place. What she hears, what she sees. Etcetera. Bleh.

--that maybe I should start something new. For something completely different :) Like...maybe...ghosts? :O Is there Jade Green in here? /thoughts

23 December 2008

Two more days for Christmas, and it doesn't feel like it's the month where we go buy weird things to give to people wrapped in paper. No tree to put said weird things wrapped in paper, and no money to to said tree to put said weird things wrapped in paper.

Well, on that happy note: Happy Holidays everyone :) /thoughts

22 December 2008

Well, it seems like Chapter Nine: What Goes Up Must Come Down (which, in itself is a part of the lyrics of the song Wat Da Hook Gon Be by Jermaine and Murphy Lee) really IS my best chapter for anything. The only thing that beats it is the first chapter. But really...it's flattering to see I made a good chapter. It almost makes me want to stop writing the story just to leave it at a good note. Or maybe that COULD be my end. You know, Dre dies! Mwahahaha!

No, I can't kill her off. I have one more hot scene between her and Asher later on. And I think I might make Chapter Ten: Title Pending funny.

On a darker note, I still feel like killing Karl off haha. I wonder how long I have been saying that. Hmm. Well, anyways, I'm going to see if I can still interwine, err "synthesize" lyrics into the story. /thoughts

15 December 2008

I think school is killing me. Is that possible? Like, it's slowly but surely sucking my imagination, leaving nothing but me. And trust me, I malfunction. Constantly. 12.40am, and I'm ready to drop dead. Like, seriously. Dead. Maybe not dropping, but maybe falling into a nice soft pillowy surface.

I sound emo don't I? Sorry, truly. I think I'll look at life as Michel does. Keep it all inside, say the right things, smile the false pretense and wish I could see the person I love getting the mailbox, with the light dancing on his hair. The sun will be going down, and he will almost be pure shadow.

It is not imagination. It's a near wish...one that won't be near coming true.

If my writing is dark, depressive, and moody, if you read this, you'll know why. /thoughts

11 December 2008

Can it be, that people really, really, really like What Goes Up Must Come Down chapter for Night Walk? For that, I am very excited. However, only two people have commented it. Makes me feel paranopid, but I think it's a good chapter, by what they have told me. And what they told me was a LOT. Like, no joke. Anyways, the story might be coming close to an end. I might kill someone off. I think I said I might kill Karl, or Annaliese, just so that Dre can spend more time with Asher Kilbourne. I love that name. I can't believe I came up with that one.

Anyways, I think my BFFs are seriously MyButterlfy436 and xxdarknessxfallsx. They help me bunches. Shout out to you both :) Of course, my wonderful idea machine, Songs From the Heart, thank you for helping me steer the story in a direction where it would get to be so good. I will definitely write a sequel concerning Taelia. just because she is amazing. Maybe we can do a collaboration? :)

Okay. Done rambling. I still have what Asher looks like in my head. Dayum gooood. Okay. I'll stop mentioning imaginary hotness, and start writing the next chapter. Tension? Not that much, to be honest. Maybe some distance. One more battle with Josef. He is that amazing. He will fail...again...but only because someone dies! Mwahahaha! I'm a killa! I like that song haha. /thoughts

5 December 2008

Okay, well, I'm STILL writing the ninth chapter, and I must say, I think I'm three fourths of the way done. Yea. And it is at 6,655 words. So that would mean...hmm...eight thousand words about? I'm working with two people, and they're giving me insight on how the chapter is. I don't know if they're being nice, but it looks like it's going good for mo. This is good, right? I hope so. Well. Just off to tell ya, you know, like a sneak peak: Andrea and Asher are highly attracted to each other. You know. Like, there is some twisted chemistry. And another thing: Asher lowers Dre's inhibitions. You would never have sex in the mall, right? Meet Asher. You'll be more than happy to. :O Yes, I said something dirty. /thoughts

1 December 2008

I don't want to do homework, so I'm adding stuff here. Night Walk is still in progress...with a whoppin 5.something kay words. Yea. I'm making it such a tease. The girl's name (FINALLY) is Andrea. I like that name. I also like Raechel. But, Dre sounds cool, as a nickname, don't you think? So, he will finally get her blood, and he will make it as if...wait...I haven't posted it yet. Meh. Whatevas. Basically, he shows her that he knows his ways with the ladies. So, instead of thinking him as a monster, if you ever meet him, and he takes your blood, know he will be sexy while he does it. AHAHAHA! He has a nice smile.

Alright then. Back to worrying about my grades which have been slipping because instead of writing about the Treaty of Versailles, I have been thinking about how to make Dre's situation suspenseful, funny, romantic, and slightly dramatic. Must I remind you? I'm a Libra.

One more muse: Are there any boys that write fanfiction? Seriously. I would be curious to see what they would write for the vampire section. Would they try to scare us? Would they keep the vampire sees girl, girl sees vampire, they kiss, love, scream, and make up? Or would they make the vampire a total badass, like, girls fall for him/her, but they stay obvlibious? (Or am I superimposing Asher in there?) I seriously wonder, like enough to make me want to look for said story through the 1.6k stories archived. Well, it's almost one in the mornin (1am), and I don't feel sleepy! Woot! Homework time! crap... /thoughts

6:16pm later same day

Okay, so I found THE PERFECT picture for Asher. No, he is not Alex Evans. I mean, he is cute and all, but he screams feminine to me. THIS dude...he has Asher written all over him. I'ma stop here, because seriously, my friend and I just got done with our talk about her not going to stalk him or save his picture. Seeing as how I teased her, I will do the same thing. So you are stuck with knowing there is a tres hot Asher out there, but never know who he is. Or...you never know. I feel generous (I told my friend about him after all). /thoughts

28 November 2008

Oh dear. The jail scene is getting...interesting. I can't help it but shove those two into some romance. Don't blame me! I'm a Libra. Well, it's surely getting past the 1.5k word minimum I put on myself for the story. It's actually close to...4k! My new limit I think will be 3k now, because yea, my descriptiveness is coming out of nowhere. So yea, expect a very very very long chapter here. And don't be surprised if it gets that way for the rest of the chapters. /thoughts

23 November 2008

Wow! Six chapters for Night Walk out already! Seriously. I think Asher is beyond tres cool (I know, how lame am I?). And so many people are helping me out, that I find it hard NOT to run out of ideas...the only problem is the detail. I get ahead of myself and lack detail sometimes, BUT I am trying to take it step by step...like...I am actually saying what I think twice in my head just so that I don't forget what I'm supposed to be typing.

I have one problem: I keep mixing Luke and Asher up. Think about it: They both love violence, they both have crazy smile/eyes...of course, Asher doesn't have Emmalee (she wouldn't deserve him anyways). I'm trying to think of a way that Asher and the main character (STILL fucking NAMELESS) would get some romance. Or maybe at least in an equal relationship...but that would mean making him good. I want him to remain unchanged, because I see vampires as people who have what they love in their genes, be it violence, tenderness, trust, etc.

And ONE more thing: I keep listening to Vampyres by Gothic Knights. It's eerie (but amazing) beat makes me think of Night Walk ALL the time. I should compile a playlist huh? Hmm..maybe in the next chapter, I'll make yet another boring Author's Note, and share inspiration, just so they can get in the mood of my vampires, eh? /thoughts

9 November 2008

Three things in two days! Well, Night Walk yesterday, and Untitled and How Strange today, respectively. I wanted to write about Luke more (I think I might love him haha), but Emmalee will take him away from me. I still need a description of him...I only have that he has grey eyes and has that sinister smile. /thoughts

4 November 2008

Elections Day! I am working on both my IB History of the Americas homework and something new I also wrote about last year...well...the beginning actually, but changing the character indefinitely. She needs to be different from all the other ones I wrote about, because then I start getting confused on which character is which, and then I feel like I have kids...which isn't cool when you have all this homework, and they demand attention. Write about me you dumb fart! is what they always tell me.

Anyways, I swear, I am a mentally sane person. Just wanted to get it out there that I am writing something new, as I have writer's block for all my other stuff. If you have ideas for all my old stuff (especially Michel's Perspective) TELL ME! I appreciate both good and bad criticism. /thoughts

25 October 2008

I haven't written anything for How Strange and Untitled for a while because...They are hard?

I want to make How Strange seem like it is Deanna, and how she thinks...but it's kinda hard.

Untitled is hard, because I always write more than 1k words per chapter...but I like sharing my ideas with people...

Sigh. I'll prioritize Michel's Perspective and How Strange, since they are shorter, and I enjoy them more...and the ideas just seem to pop more and more past the minute :) /thoughts

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1. How Strange » reviews
Deanna goes back to Colorado, after her wish to get Oliver back fails. Or so she thinks. A Well-Timed Enchantment by Vivian Vande Velde.
A Well-Timed Enchantment - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 12,351 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 9-14-09 - Published: 9-14-08
2. Michel's Perspective » reviews
Companions of the Night by Vivian Vande Velde. Always wanted to know what he was thinking...After she left, he realized this woman was her all. What can he do to turn this human into one of his own...into an ETERNAL companion of the night?
Companions of the Night - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 21 - Words: 29,767 - Reviews: 70 - Updated: 7-15-09 - Published: 7-17-08
3. Night Walk: Blood Dress » reviews
One night fear surrounds her as she is knocked cold. She is abducted by vampires who want her blood badly, even fighting amongst themselves. With the help of one of those vampires, she tries to go back to the way things were, but nothing is the same again
Vampires - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 15 - Words: 65,977 - Reviews: 51 - Updated: 6-15-09 - Published: 11-5-08
4. Untitled » reviews
Raechel moves to forget she ever had the perfect life with the perfect guy. She happens to stumble across vampires who happen to know her past, an insane ghost wanting retribution, and someone who liked her before she ever became so messed up...
Vampires - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 16 - Words: 46,768 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 6-5-09 - Published: 10-6-08
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