| Tonzura123 |
Author has written 20 stories for Chronicles of Narnia, Merlin, and Jane Eyre. Dear Unsuspecting World: I have been unleashed upon FF.net. What was initially an innocent indulgence in reading well-written fan-fiction has now morphed into something far worse; I am actively writing for Narnia, Merlin, and have even started an original novel. Now. Despite the nefarious nature of my writing (here, I use the word "writing" loosely), there is a code that I have recently adopted, and that is to challenge my readers; I do not believe in stooping to the lowest standard. I do not think that I should write anything that simply pours drivel over readers like some superfluous syrup. I am going to write plot and I am going to write plot that is grossly complicated. Readers (good readers) flock to FF.net. I've seen them. They look for context clues and admire metaphors and go absolutely giddy over symbolism. Yes, dear reader, you're probably even one of them- that means that what I write is meant for you. I pray that you will enjoy reading my writing, because I sure do enjoy writing it. As Always, -Tonzura123 Contact/Links: Also, if you'd like to see fanart for P.E, MonkeySaru has taken the liberty of illustrating the Aslan and Edmund scene from chapter five here: http://i39.tinypic.com/2ccxqmx.jpg. Cover Art for "Monochrome" by OlaNaTungee can be found here: http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=5&q=olanatungee#/d5b6se9 1 Timothy 4:12- "Let no one despise your youth, but set an example to believers in word, in conversation, in charity, in spirit, in faith, in purity." Proverbs 16:3- "Commit to the Lord whatever you do, and your plans will succeed." List of Stories In Chronological Order: NARNIA: Circa 1900-- Rend the Worlds (IP); Circa 1940-- Monochrome (Nineteen IP); A Convivial Christmas; Hover Over This; Mawkish Melee (Battle Scene); King Camlann (Winner of the 2012 Epic Award); Set in Stone; Circa 1941-- I'll be Frank; Mawkish Melee (Finchley Setting); Circa 1943-- Somnambulist Sagittarius (Winner of the 2012 Underground Award); Circa 1944-- P.E; Circa 1945-- Silent Kings Seeking; Save For Three; The Walsburg Pub; Juvenalia; Urban Fantasy (Time ranges to either end of the spectrum);Kettering; Circa 1948-- The Magician's Cousins (Three IP); Circa 1951-- P.S (In Planning); MERLIN: Kay; The Precious of Gaia; The School of Barke (IP); Emrys Emergent (Ten POSTED!); An Explanation of the Gifts (P.E Verse) Peter: Sanity Peter has the pleasure of representing the two parts of mankind: flesh and spirit. Without Aslan, Peter is in danger of falling into a sort of beast mentality. He becomes savage, merciless, and childlike. If you've watched Prince Caspian you'll have seen the beginning warning signs that he has started to "forget Aslan." His territorial temper, impatience, and carelessness with his family are all baby steps towards his insanity. This insanity has only taken over Peter three times in his life. Once at the Battle of Beruna, when he fought the White Witch. A second time when Ogres invaded and injured Edmund. The third time is in "P.E." Another note of interest: Peter's siblings refer to that insanity as "Other Peter" or just Other. Peter never remembers anything he's done while he becomes Other, i.e, Peter doesn't remember fighting the White Witch. It falls to Edmund, after the second appearance, to sort out what's happening to his brother. Susan: Discovery Susan takes on the verses about seeking and finding. Once she sets her heart on locating something, clues appear before her almost like magic. In Narnia, where all the Gifts are stronger, Susan was even capable of closing her eyes and knowing exactly where something or someone was. The key is, she has to want to seek first. Susan's character rarely searches independently. Her siblings dragged her into finding Narnia, into exploring Narnia, and into staying in Narnia. She has very little to do with seeking out new adventures. This, of course, changes after the events of "P.E." Another note of interest: Susan actually uses the watered-down verse of her Gift in "P.E" to locate Lucy at St. Finbar's. Her Gift's potential, like all the Gifts, grows stronger the closer she becomes to Aslan. Edmund: Sight Edmund's Gift comes from the Proverb, "A king winnows out evil with his eyes." In Narnia, Edmund could look into the eyes of an enemy and see their misdeeds as if through their own eyes. Also, in the event that an enemy intends harm on any of Edmund's siblings, a terrible Feeling would begin in his gut like an alarm. It comes in handy much more often than one would wish. This Gift, like all of the Gifts, is Aslan-sent, first appearing in chapter five of "P.E." The only catch is that in England, it becomes only a muddled feeling of panic. Edmund also doesn't often know the who, what, or when of a pending disaster before it happens. Point of interest: This Gift is the most prominent in "P.E" Edmund's Gift was the first one to manifest itself- at his eleven-year-old birthday and with a character that hasn't appeared for a while in Monochrome. Lucy: Foresight Lucy's Gift is premonition, plain and simple. She has dreams where Aslan warns her of what she needs to do to prepare for the future. In Monochrome, Lucy warns Edmund that he needs to protect Peter after she has a vivid dream. It is not until much later that they fully develop, or even become a routine experience. In England, these dreams are reduced to obscure and symbolic events. The most prominent of these takes place in "P.E", when she dreams about a Fox, a Lion, and an Asp. The entire prophecy is not fulfilled for many years, before which Lucy's final prophecy is written down and saved for Susan. Point of interest: In Prince Caspian, Lucy has one of her vivid dreams about moving trees and Aslan warning her that nothing happens the same way twice. | |||||||
1. Emrys Emergent » reviewsIn the first magic competition that Albion has seen in over a quarter of a century, King Arthur volunteers his Royal Counselor. The result? An unusually original Reveal story. No slash. Slightly AU. 5x13 spoilers. Bromance galore.Merlin - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Suspense - Chapters: 10 - Words: 32,702 - Reviews: 135 - Updated: 5-18-13 - Published: 12-21-11 - Merlin & Arthur2. Monochrome » reviewsStranded and hunted in the deep of the Western Wood, Edmund struggles to fill the mantle Aslan has Gifted him: protecting his family at all costs. Year 1000, PE-verse. Rated for violence and death. Cover art by the amazing OlaTungee.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 18 - Words: 67,103 - Reviews: 338 - Updated: 4-20-13 - Published: 12-11-10 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie3. Kay reviews"No one remembers Kay, but Kay is the first thing Arthur remembers." A BeforeMerlin! fic, wherein some of Arthur's story is explained and bromance abounds. Rated for swearing, violence, and gore. Companion fic for "Emrys Emergent".Merlin - Rated: T - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,552 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 3-14-13 - Merlin & Arthur - Complete4. The Magician's Cousins » reviewsEustace's gift is a little more... volatile than his cousins'. No slash. Rated for explosive spells and dragonish tempers. P.E-verse.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,281 - Reviews: 33 - Updated: 3-14-13 - Published: 12-7-12 - Edmund Pevensie & Eustace Scrubb5. Scrap Chaps » reviewsPreviously "Urban Fantasy." A collection of abandoned, can't-quite-go-their-own-way bits and pieces. Now up: A bromantic moment with Edmund and Peter, deleted from Monochrome.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,851 - Reviews: 34 - Updated: 11-26-12 - Published: 9-13-11 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie6. Host of Eyre reviewsMrs. Reed can see the Devil in her eyes. Rated for hinted murder. Written for class, published for fun.Jane Eyre - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,795 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-26-12 - Complete7. King Camlann reviewsHigh King Peter discovers the fate of his predecessor and King Edmund speaks common sense. No slash. PE-verse. Golden Age, year 1006. Winner of the the 2012 Epic Award.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,724 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 6-26-12 - Peter Pevensie & Edmund Pevensie8. Silent Kings Seeking reviewsAfter the events of P.E, Mr. Pevensie attempts to reconnect with his sons, only to find that he and they have been irrevocably changed during the War. PE-verse. No slash.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,904 - Reviews: 30 - Published: 6-21-12 - Peter Pevensie & Edmund Pevensie - Complete9. Somnambulist Sagittarius reviewsThey meet again in a land called England, in a year called 1943 A.D. And they're both shadows of themselves, but only one of them knows it. No slash. P.E Verse. Winner of the 2012 Underground Award.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,804 - Reviews: 29 - Published: 4-20-12 - Peter Pevensie & Oreius - Complete10. The Precious of Gaia » reviewsMerlin cannot move when made of stone, but the faint light and witching eyes make it seem like he almost might... AU. Heroic!Arthur. No slash.Merlin - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,447 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 4-9-12 - Published: 12-20-11 - Arthur & Merlin - Complete11. Save For Three » reviews"One memory, one glimmer of each of them for her life in the Shadowlands." A companion fic containing the origins of the three items Susan takes with her to America. P.E-verse.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Family - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,778 - Reviews: 39 - Updated: 2-12-12 - Published: 12-30-11 - Susan Pevensie - Complete12. Kettering reviews"Most importantly of all: Lucy knew to never wish on Mars." Post P.E. Dark fic. A Friends of Narnia Mission.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,620 - Reviews: 31 - Published: 2-4-12 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie - Complete13. Juvenalia reviewsEustace's version of events in Narnia isn't sitting too well with his cousins... Involves rigorous excercise, one-person reenactments, and first-draft revisions. Rated for sword-thrashings, from Ed to Eustace with love. P.E-verse.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,168 - Reviews: 36 - Published: 1-22-12 - Eustace Scrubb - Complete14. The Walsburg Pub reviewsChesser Walsburg's newest employee turned out to be everything he needed. Just not in the way Chesser had intended. Rated for one English swear and a one-sided bar fight. PE-verse.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,184 - Reviews: 47 - Published: 4-5-11 - Peter Pevensie & Edmund Pevensie - Complete15. PE » reviewsIt's the first term at Hartbee's School for Young Men, and the prestigious institution is about to experience the full enigma of the eccentric Pevensie brothers. A nonslash brotherfic rated for intense action and frightening nightmares. COMPLETEChronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 30 - Words: 121,328 - Reviews: 1353 - Updated: 12-2-10 - Published: 1-25-09 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie - Complete16. Set in Stone reviewsDuring a trip to the country of Calormen, Peter learns about one of their oldest customs. It seems that Edmund must save his skin once more... Nonslash oneshot. Set in the seventh and eighth years of the Pevensie reign. Light humor and family banter.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,594 - Reviews: 39 - Published: 9-28-09 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie - Complete17. Hover Over This reviewsEd was sick of finding me taking care of him when he woke. But honestly... he'd just have to get used to it. One-shot nonslash Brother-fic set in Golden Age.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,419 - Reviews: 44 - Published: 6-16-09 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie - Complete18. Mawkish Melee reviewsLying on the field, legs drawn up into his chest, and teeth biting through the fabric of his sleeve, Edmund was torn between two fierce struggles: Crying or screaming. Oneshot, nonslash, brotherfic. K plus for mild gore. P.E-verse.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,265 - Reviews: 48 - Published: 1-20-09 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie - Complete19. A Convivial Christmas reviewsIt's the first Winter in the Pevenise reign, and as the first snow rolls in with it, Susan is sure that it will crop up an unpleasant reaction from their youngest brother...A oneshot, nonslash, sibling fic.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,418 - Reviews: 46 - Published: 12-29-08 - Edmund Pevensie & Peter Pevensie - Complete20. I'll be Frank reviewsQuite frankly, Peter doesn't understand it, and Edmund is only too happy to clue him in. A one-shot, nonslash, brotherfic set after Prince Caspian.Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,971 - Reviews: 97 - Published: 12-28-08 - Peter Pevensie & Edmund Pevensie - Complete