Hello nice to meet you all

my page on da: http://redmoon46.deviantart.com

Hey guess what i finished typing the revised version of the 1st and 2nd chapter of Fate of the Dual Keyblader. I have and editor friend who is helping me revise it even more because i need it. For example there was this one sentence that made no sense but was funny. I'll share it with you.

okay here is a quick reference she sees someone on the ground far off. now on to the sentence.

"About half way there she picked up a stick, and started to poke the passed out him."

Super long stick. Ah that is a great sentence for laughs.

Anyways I'm still here and sorry for taking so long updating.

I have found out the outline I was using for Fate of the Dual Keyblader was trash since I changed enough things in the first chapter that there was no way of putting anything in.

my editor friend --> http://www.fanfiction.net/beta/1190893/ninadow

Favorite Quotes/ funny snippets:

We're Americans' please shoot the people chasing us. (Stargate Continuum)

“At least I’m getting some.” He snapped “I don’t have to resort to Mr. Hand to keep me company.” He paused, it was like Jiraiya thoughts combined with Sasuke’s bite and Sakura’s inner crazy had just come spewing out of his mouth. - Naruto (Calming Circles)

Stuff that could be useful

What Kisses Mean by kiki and darkalbino:

Forehead: You'll be mine forever, Hand: I adore you, Ear: I'm horny, Cheek: You mean so much to me

Shoulder: I want you, Neck: I want you now, Lips: I love you, Holding Hands: We can learn to love each other

Wink: Let's get it on, Holding Tightly: I love you too much to let go,

Looking in the Eyes: I'm so in love with you, Arm Around Waist: I'll show off my love for you

Spank on the Ass: That's mine...bitch XD, Laughing While Kissing: I am completely comfortable with you

something funny

LEARN CHINESE IN 5 MINUTES
Say the words out loud.
1) That's not right... ...Sum Ting Wong
2) Are you harboring a fugitive? ...Hu Yu Hai Ding
3) See me ASAP... ...Kum Hia Nao
4) Stupid Man... ... Dum Fuk
5) Small Horse... ...Tai Ni Po Ni
6) Did you go to the Beach?...Wai Yu So Tan
7) I bumped into a coffee table...Ai Bang Mai Fa Kin Ni
8) I think you need a face lift...Chin Tu Fat
9) It's very dark in here...Wao So Dim
10) I thought you were on a diet...Wai Yu Mun Ching
11) This is a tow away zone...,No Pah King
12) Our meeting is next week...Wai Yu Kum Nao
13) Staying out of sight...Le i Ying Lo
14) He's cleaning his automobile...Wa Shing Ka
15) Your body odor is offensive...Yu Stin Ki Pu
16) Great... ...Fa Kin Su Pah