I love anime and anime related Fanfics. I love the TV shows FireFly, Angel, and Buffy The Vampire Slayer the most out of any TV shows. I mostly enjoy romantic pure love with a hint of humor type fanfics, and ABSOLUTELY FUCKING HATE RAPE AND RAPE FANFICS!! RAPE IN ANY STORY TO A MAIN CHARACTER IN THE STORY OR SHOWN EVEN TO A NAMELESS CHARACTER RUINS ANY AND ALL FICS IT'S IN!! The only time in a fanfic there can be rape and I wont stop reading is if it doesn't happen to a main character and the people that are raped aren't shown it's just eluded to. My favorite anime are The Prince of Tennis, S-CRY-ed, Rurouni Kenshin, Yu Yu Hakusho, Samurai Champloo, Samurai 7, Cowboy Bebop, Bleach, etc..., then lastly Naruto I love it in fanfiction but the manga and show blow because Kishi sucks Uchiha cock by giving him everything. I also love Manga, and the best Manga site I've found yet is MANGA it's the best I've found and has most of them.
My favorite pairings in anime are in no particular order with my top five listed as such:
Naruto
1. Naruto/Anko
2. Naruto/Kurenai
3. Naruto/Hinata
4. Naruto/Tayuya
5. Naruto/Fem.Haku
Naruto/Temari
Naruto/Ino
Naruto/TenTen
Naruto/Yugito
Naruto/Kin
Naruto/Princess Yukie
Naruto/Shion
Naruto/Sakura
Naruto/Shizune
Naruto/Tsunade
Naruto/Older Hanabi
Naruto/FemKyuubi
Naruto/Yuugao
Anko/Kurenai
Lee/Sakura
Ino/Choji
TenTen/Lee
Bleach
Ichigo/Rukia
Ichigo/ Inoue
Chad/Inoue
Ishida/Tatsuki
Yourichi/Tatsuki
Yourichi/Ichigo
Yu Yu Hakusho
Yusuke/Keiko
Kuwabara/Ukina
Hiei/Boton
I'm a fairly shitty writer, mainly my problem is my grammar. I write mainly to kill the evil beast known as...BOREDOM!! Though I truly enjoy when people review and help me get better, even flames are welcomed. Though dumb flames that flame for the fun of it, or flamers who take it way to serious, after all it's under humor for a reason. That reason being mainly my writing lol. Also even though I like Naruto I hate the show and manga which is weird. It's because Kishimoto or whatever the creators name is spelled is so retarded it hurts. I mean come on how can a kid who learned kage bushin no jutsu in two hours not gain any significant strength in two and a half years of training with the strongest Sannin? He's weaker than Sakura if he doesn't use Kyuubi's chakra!! I mean come on Sasgay is Sannin level in shippuuden and is so fast he could easily kill Naruto if he wanted to!! Also everyone is so damn stupid it hurts my brain to read or watch, Tsunade thinks Naruto can handle himself?? He's a complete and utter weakling without Kyuubi's chakra and he can't use enough of it to do shit against Akatsuki!! He made a more powerful and even more useless version of rasengan since he lacks the speed to hit with it 90 of the time, also he lacks the speed in forming it needed to attack efficiently also he still can't do a one handed rasengan also he didn't learn the secret to kage bunshin no jutsu which would have helped him significantly, oh and he learned to seal stuff in scrolls big fucking deal! It's like Jiraiya doesn't care that he's pathetic I mean with Naruto's healing he could heal muscle and tendon tears super fast thus becoming faster and stronger very quick hell in the two and a half years I bet Naruto could become so fast he'd make Gai with no weights and 7 gates open look slow.
MAN THE SHOW IS SO FUCKING STUPID AND YET I CAN'T STOP READING THE MANGA AND PERIODICALLY WATCHING THE GAY SHOW!! WHY DOES KISHIMOTO HAVE TO BE A GAY SASGAY FAN BOY!! I MEAN HE'S OBVIOUSLY SO GAY FOR SASGAY IT'S RIDICULOUSLY I MEAN WHY ELSE MAKE THE MAIN CHARACTERS RIVAL SO STRONG IT APPEARS THAT THE MAIN CHARACTER IS AS PATHETIC AS A ROOKIE CHUUNIN? COME ON NO WAY SASGAY CAN GET TO SANNIN LEVEL IN THOSE YEARS AND NARUTO CAN'T!! God damn Sasgay fan boy creator.
My gripes about Fan fiction: I despise Yaoi, nothing against gay people I just don't want to read about it. What the fuck is wrong with you sick fucks who like Yaoi? Honestly I didn't know so many sick fucks/Gay people are on this site, again nothing against gay people I'm just fed up from seeing so many Yaoi fics. Someone had the audacity to to send me some huge rant on how I should and could turn Naruto God Of Wind into a NaruSasu-centric fic. For fucks Sake can't people see I despise Sasgay with a fiery passion, and Yaoi only slightly less? I will never ever ever knowingly read nor write Yaoi (I have been tricked into reading a few times due to Naruto being bisexual or turning gay during the story), honest to god I'd rather be shot dead. Now Yuri...hell yeah my Avatar says it all. Nothings more beautiful than two or more beautiful women making love or just hot sex lol.
I despise the use of English jutsu as it just means the author is to lazy to look up or translate jutsu to Japanese you could try Leafninja for Cannon jutsu, or try Original Jutsu to translate English to Japanese. I also hate multiple speakers in the same paragraph, JUST HIT ENTER TWICE BEFORE ANOTHER PERSON TALKS! I also dislike but can look past it when people don't identify who's speaking so you have to guess who's saying what.
I also hate when people try to force humor then bitch when you say it sucks because it was forced and as such sucked. I also hate whiny bitches who throw god damn hissy fits when you express your opinion even if slightly harsh or overtly harsh.
I also dislike when Naruto is overpowered. This is because I find it incredibly hard to do it, so when it's done the stories always bad. For instance a bloodline sure but don't go overboard or multiple ones. Also one shouldn't give him to much to quick like he's the talentless or weak dobe then the day of graduation gets some uber jutsu and gets super strong in a couple months, if your going to give him a bunch of stuff spread it out over years. Thats it for now I may add more later.
Anko is my favorite Naruto Character and I hate when she's portrayed as a whore/slut and heres my reasoning why it's idiotic to portray her as such.
I hate fics where people make Anko out to be a whore she's not and heres my reasoning for it. I don't think she'd have any old lovers. She is an emotionally fragile person and has serious trust issues and hates to be vulnerable which is why I believe she's so flirtatious she likes to be in control and lead poor fools on thinking they have a chance with her only to smash those hopes to bits. With the betrayal of Orochimaru she would hate being emotionally vulnerable and sex even if she picked some random guy up would make her somewhat emotionally vulnerable and require her to trust her lover which wont happen and she would never accept that, then you have the fact that she knows she's gorgeous so she'd have extremely high standards which no guy I can think of could match, except Naruto since he knows a similar pain what with the villages scorn. That leads to yet another reason her sleeping around is HIGHLY unlikely, she knows most people think lowly about her and most men would try to get into her panties because she's hot and sexy only to dump her once they got the 'prize' she's smart, sly, and devious and would be able to tell their intentions, which is why I don't think she'd be with any guys. Those are my reasons based on logic why Anko should and would be a virgin.
It makes me sad that Caught in The Act has received so little reviews only 39 I had hoped for a better response so I'd know whether to attempt a sequel, but with so little response I don't really see a point...and I was hopeful to squeeze a threesome with Tsunade into the mix...sigh but I suppose it was naught to be oh well. If it breaks a hundred reviews someday I will write a sequel.
FUCK ALL YOU SASGAY FAN BOYS AND GIRLS OUT THERE!! HE'S AN IRREDEEMABLE PRICK WHO SHOULD BE KILLED AND BASHED CONSTANTLY!! HE HAS ZERO GOOD QUALITIES AND YET SOME HOW THERE ARE SO MANY OF YOU IDIOTIC FUCKS OUT THERE THAN LOVE HIM WHEN HE LITERALLY HAS NO GOOD QUALITIES HE'S MEAN AND RUDE TO PEOPLE, HE'S ARROGANT, WILL DO ANYTHING FOR POWER, HE'S TRIED TO KILL HIS 'BEST FRIEND' TWICE, AND HE'S A TRAITOR. IDIOTS MAY TRY TO SAY HE SHOWS MERCY TO THOSE HE DOESN'T KNOW OR WHO ARE INNOCENT WELL I CALL BULLSHIT ON THAT. THEY OFTEN CITE THAT HE DIDN'T KILL THOSE OTO NINS HE SPARRED WITH, AND DIDN'T KILL ALL THOSE PRISONERS AT THAT BASE AND THEY SAY IT'S AN ACT OF MERCY. HAHAHAHA THOSE ARE EASILY EXPLAINED AND WITH HIS PREVIOUS HISTORY OF ARROGANCE AND OBSESSION IT'S OBVIOUS TO ME HE DIDN'T KILL THOSE NINS BECAUSE IT'S MORE DIFFICULT TO FIGHT AND KEEP THEM ALIVE THAN TO KILL THEM, BECAUSE IT LIMITS HIS JUTSU AND ATTACKS WHILE THEY CAN USE LETHAL FORCE, THEN AT THE BASE EASY HE WANTS THEM TO WILLINGLY FOLLOW HIM RATHER THAN GRUDGINGLY FOLLOW HIM SO HE SPARED THEM ACTED NICE AND BAM HE HAS FOLLOWERS WHO BELIEVE IN HIM AND HIS CAUSE AND THERES NOTHING MORE DANGEROUS THAN A GROUP WHO BELIEVE THEY ARE IN THE RIGHT AND WILL DO ANYTHING FOR WHAT THEY BELIEVE IN. SO I BELIEVE HE HAD ULTERIOR MOTIVES FOR EVERYTHING HE'S DONE, AND PEOPLE BITCH ABOUT HE CAN BE REDEEMED HAHAHA ONLY WAY HE'D BE REDEEMED IN MY EYES IS IF HE COMMITTED RITUAL SUICIDE. HE'S DONE TO MANY THINGS PUNISHABLE BY DEATH TO BE REDEEMED.
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Ok so I have several ideas for stories and not enough time to do them. I will do some of them but others I'd be willing to let others take the idea with only three requests. First use Japanese jutsu since I hate English jutsu with a fucking fiery passion, second no Yaoi, third while you don't necessarily need to bash him do not portray Sasgay in a good light and if he gains strength Naruto gains more.
1. Bastardized Sharingan: From the union of a female Uchiha and a male Uzumaki before even Konoha was formed a new Doujutsu was made. This Doujutsu combined the Uzumaki bloodline of chakra 'gifts' such as high elemental affinities to perfect chakra control, even large reserves and the Uchiha's Sharingan. This takes the original eye color of the wielder and adds a crimson Uzumaki Swirl in each eye. It has yet to be named, and has Five stages along with a passive ability which is perfect chakra control meaning the wielder has perfect chakra control whether the doujutsu is activated or not. First it grants the user immunity to genjutsu, secondly it allows the user to see chakra as well as copy any genjutsu, thirdly gains the ability to cast genjutsu without hand seals, fourthly slows everything seen through it down to about as slow as the second tomoe of the Sharingan does, finally it allows the user to make any three genjutsu they know to be unbreakable whether they were to begin with or not and to do so when it activates the user must use several hand seals and cast the genjutsu they want unbreakable on someone and then that one becomes unbreakable and then repeat, though any genjutsu copied that is unbreakable to begin with remains unbreakable. Naruto will be living with Kurenai as his older sister of sorts and will be paired with Kurama Yakumo and become a Chuunin at thirteen while others don't graduate till 15, his third teammate dies during the exam. It will be strong Naruto but not uber. I plan to write this at some point.
2. Bokutou no Naruto: Naruto receives a Bokken and basic Kenjutsu scroll with a promise of more scrolls as he masters them, from Sarutobi on his sixth birthday after the Sandaime saw the awe in his eyes when he saw Gekkou Hayate in his office with his sword. At age 7 Naruto has mastered the scroll and an intermediate one given to him by Sarutobi he's attacked outside of Ichiraku's ramen by a team of new gennin wanting to beat up the orphan he beats one quickly because they underestimate him and his beaten back by the remaining two and one with a Tanto cut his bokken in half and the beat him up badly. Ayame and her father report it to Sarutobi and he decides to get Naruto a newer and better Bokken with a steel center and weight seal for weight training with it and an advanced kenjutsu scroll while these scrolls have no style in them they have basic attacks and defenses along with guidelines to create your own style. At 12 Sarutobi has Hayate check his level in a spar both with Bokken secretly to see if Naruto is ready for a katana though is also the truth he wants to see Naruto's progress. Naruto beats Hayate though it's clear Hayate was holding back...though so was Naruto. When asked about his style Naruto answers "Bokken Uzumaki no Ryuu" (Uzumaki wooden sword style). Then the Hokage tells Naruto both Hayate and Sarutobi think he's ready for a Katana and Naruto declines but wouldn't mind a new deluxe Bokken with better wood, stronger steel center, better weight seal, and a seal to help focus chakra into it to help harden it better. Sarutobi brings up that he'll be a ninja and need to kill so tests Naruto's feeling because of a hunch finds it's wind and calls in a favor with his son. Graduation age 15, strong but not Uber Naruto paired with Tenten. I will eventually write this as well.
3. A New Era of Shinobi: The hand of the Shinigami was cut off and divided amongst 13 future Shinobi of Konoha from toddlers to babies still in the womb the Konoha twelve and Yakumo Kurama, whilst it sealed the Kyuubi into Naruto. As such the Yondaime survived because the hand that was to rip his soul from him was severed, Minato then figures out what happens and confronts all those effected and gives his theory and thus they would all be trained from an early start to master the supernatural blades as well as ninja skills. The Uchiha clan is still alive because they don't even consider a coupe because well the Yondaime is still alive and they know it'd fail horribly, Sasgay is still a power obsessed prick because he thinks with a zanpaktou and his Uchiha blood he should be the best and surpass his brother and yet he's shown he's far inferior to Itachi and later Naruto. Naruto has Byakuya's zanpaktou, Naruto activated his Shikai subconsciously when he was two during an assassination attempt while his father was at a council meeting and two Root members sent by Danzo are cut to ribbons by Senbonzakura Minato then kills Danzo., Sasgay has Kira's (the one that doubles the weight of anything it strikes and is cumulative), and Hinata who Naruto would be paired with would have Rangiku's zanpaktou and would be the first to activate its Shikai besides Naruto, when she's kidnapped by Kumo and she also subconsciously awakens Haineko and it kills her kidnapper resulting in no consequences because Kumo would try to get Hiashi and Hizashi would give himself BUT Minato is there so they don't try anything because of their fear for him. Naruto graduates at 6 chuunin at 8 Jounin at 10, Anbu at 12 and remains Anbu till 15 and could have moved past Vice Captain but liked his captain to much aka Kakashi, but Minato takes him out to form Konoha's Touken no Juusan aka Konoha's 13 Swords with Naruto as the leader. Graduation age 15 Naruto low Kage level with Shikai and high Kage level with Bankai, no Shunpo or Kido the only Bleach aspect is the Zanpaktou everything else is Narutoverse. Uber Naruto but not quite Jiraiya's level until 17 where he'd master Hiraishin. Plan on writing third or later but not until after the other two and I finish God of Wind so a very long time, though would be willing to allow someone else to write it if they followed this as a basic outline.
4. Hagane no Kami: Ok story goes like this Naruto at a young age like 4 finds a kunai and falls in love with it and plays with it finding he has incredible aim hitting bulls eyes with relative ease. An old Black smith sees this talks to him and holds nothing against him for being the Jinchuuriki for the Kyuubi and invites him in his shop which doesn't look like much but is where the better shiniobi come for their weapons, weights, etc. Naruto takes an immediate interest and the old man Juubun Hagane (perfect Steel) who's 87 decides to take him on as an apprentice which Naruto eagerly accepts. So a few years pass by and Naruto quickly masters all things surrounding creating and treating weapons and is well on his way to mastering the usage of all the weapons they sell which is the largest variety in Konoha. While doing this he learns a lot about sealing because it's necessary because some seals are used on weapons and he soon surpasses the old man. While this has been happening he's also been training his body to the max and finds he has affinities for Wind and Water much like Juubun so he's taught all the Fuuton and Suiton Juubun knew when he was a Jounin for Konoha and gave him a scroll on the other jutsu he knew. He has his Five main weapons in tattoos on his left arm a Chakram, Nodachi, Zanbatou, two knives like Riddick uses in the Chronicalls of Riddick during the escape from Creamatoria, and a Crossbow. He also has seals on all his weapons and some he sells as well as seals in his kunai and shuriken pouches so their near endless. At age 7 the Uchiha massacre happens Sarutobi pushes the grad age up to 15, but Naruto doesn't care he has no plans on being a ninja even though he's training in the ninja arts. At 10 Hagane dies leaving his shop and all his worldly possessions to Naruto which Naruto is when Naruto seals the Nodachi in his arm as it was Hagane's prized weapon. Naruto keeps going and by 15 he's ripped though lean muscles and stands at close to 6'2. He also has mid Jounin level battle experience from traveling around by himself after for trade and what not, though I'm not sure on his level completely he'll have numerous high ranking jutsu his taijutsu and kenjutsu next to none well Kenjutsu Gai would likely be the only one superior to him in Taijutsu, so I'm thinking Elite Jounin so Anbu Captain level overall but lack the experience to take on others of around that level and win...unless he does a blitzkrieg and overwhelms them quickly...though he'll still have Genjutsu as a weakness only way to escape is pain. Sarutobi knows how strong he is and asks for him to join the ranks but he refuses and says he'd be happy to loan his services out to the Hokage's of Konoha if he so choses meaning after Sarutobi dies he can choose whether to hire his services out to the new Hokage. So basically he's a mercenary. Follows cannon though Naruto will be hired to do some missions. It won't be Naruto/Tenten as many might be thinking, I'm thinking Naruto/Yuugao...or Naruto/Shizune I haven't decided yet. Will happen third or fourth.
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Challenge: Ok so I've seen a bunch of these and thought I'd throw one out there.
I'd like to see a Naruto/Mass Effect Crossover. In which Naruto's mother is the daughter of Specter Shepard (Male or Female of varying Names though is a Vanguard.) and Liara T'Soni, so Kushina will be a half Human half Asari. She along with her Father and or Mother(s) and crew crash land on an unknown system remarkably similar to Earth in atmosphere and species as well. Lacking the necessary parts they can't fix the SSV Normandy so they stay. The crew consists of a ghost crew after a climactic battle with a small fleet of Geth, Joker, Ashley or Kaidan Alenko, Garrus, Wrex, Shepard, Liara, toddler Kushina, Dr. Chakwas (Tali isn't there as she left for her home after succeeding in her pilgrimage). Joker dies on impact due to his condition, but not until ensuring the crews safety with a miraculous crash landing. They land near Whirlpool join the community until it's destruction in which they all head to Konoha for safety with a few remaining survivors (Kushina is a teenager and very strong Vanguard like her mother. Wrex, Garrus, and Liara all wear armor to keep from be noticed as aliens. Shepard died along with Ashley/Kaidan due to staying behind to buy them all time with Wrex along with them. Together they take out the majority of the invading Iwa nins till Shepard dies taking a Doton attack for Wrex, and Ashely/Kaidan freaks and goes into battle switching weapons each time one overheats dying after a heroic stand off against a platoon of Iwa's Elite Anbu taking most with her/him and crippling the rest. Wrex flees when Shepard gives him some last orders, which are to make sure her family lives well and help train any grandchildren (He/she saw Kushina falling for the Blonde Konoha Jounin stationed near Whirlpool for a while). So he goes off with the remaining crew to Konoha. Shepard then sets off some of her/his highest grade explosives killing everyone in a (?) mile radius. Kushina marries Minato, and dies during child birth. Sarutobi gives custody over to his grandmother Liara who raises him and trains him with his Biotic abilities (which are natural due to having Asari Blood in him), while Wrex and Gaarus train him with weapons which he becomes especially proficient in all four and hand to hand. Dr. Chakwas trains him in basic first aid and is the head of the Hospital.
Requirements: Naruto must be badass. So very strong physically as well as fast, second only to Liara in Biotics till he's 16 at which point he surpasses her. His weapons skills surpass even his grandmother/grandfather (Shepard), and with the help of chakra he at 15 is able to go toe to toe with someone on even Orochimaru's level with all his abilities combined. He's not to uber as his Ninja skills beyond weaponry, and Kage Bunshins, henge, Kawarimi, along with supplementing his limbs with chakra are limited to just that three jutsu and adding chakra to his limbs. So he's only lacking ninja skills other than stealth and hand to hand along with experience, so until he's trained by Jiraiya and gains more experience he's only on par with Kakashi-ish if he goes all out supplementing his limbs with chakra as well as every punch having some biotic power behind it. Other than that the academy graduation isn't until 15, and there must be a romance and not a Yaoi one as Yaoi sucks. Also M-rated so theres a lemon somewhere. Oh and Sasgay must not be portrayed in a positive light, not that he has to be bashed, just portrayed as the dark uncaring emo bastard he is, and is jealous of Naruto's power (that can't be copied.) so they hate each other. And Naruto at the Valley of the End whether Sasgay's retrieved or not Naruto scars his pretty boy face severely. Also he doesn't beat Naruto, hell he doesn't compare to Naruto even in level two curse seal, so after being scarred something like Kabuto and Oto Anbu show up the Anbu sacrifice their lives while Kabuto escapes with Sasgay should happen so that Naruto doesn't lose as he couldn't he'd be to strong yet Sasgay will still escape so it's logical.
The pairing with Naruto...well whoever it is must fit haha but if you choose Anko see rant in my profile. Also Naruto would be a genius (with Liara raising him he'd be really smart.) also doesn't put up with peoples shit, he's a kick ass take names kind of guy when it comes to battle and shows no mercy so he's not afraid to kill. Also have him wear a modified Heavy Armor of some type from the game. Modified so it's not all skin tight or he wears it under some loose pants and a Vest or something, and keeps the helmet off till serious battle. Also has grenades, and Specter assault rifle, shotgun, pistol, sniper rifle, along with a combat knife (like Rambo).
I know it's very specific but broke down it just means Naruto's strong no match for an Elite Jounin till he's 15 or 16 unless he throws out all the stops and goes for the kill with his Biotics and stuff. Though if he relies on his ninja abilities he's no match for a low Jounin till he has had some ninja training beyond the basics of chakra control and body enhancements. He also has badass weapons and the best Armor due to the surplus they had on the ship. Also Sasgay isn't pampered or portrayed positively no bashing required just so he's not overly strong just cannon strength which pales in comparison to Naruto's Vanguard/Quarter Asari/ninja abilities. Naruto is paired with an attractive female, Has a badass family that eventually fight Akatsuki by his side, an eventual lemon (I'd even consider writing it for you to edit and conform to your own writing style), and doesn't hold back yet he doesn't feel the need to show off either. Also needs to use the history I stated before, other than that it's your choice how to go about writing it as for plot beyond he's a Vanguard Asari/Human who looks exactly human yet has a quarter the life span of an Asari so 250 years. Other than beyond the academy grad age being 15 it can follow cannon with some OC missions and stuff. Oh and don't ever have more than two speakers per paragraph and use Japanese jutsu. Also if anyone chooses to they can do other stuff I'd just like to see one sorta like this...hell I may even write one myself. Anyways should someone write this please let me know so I can read it haha.
Challenge!! Please someone do this!!:
Naruto/KOTOR crossover (Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic). I would like to see a Naruto/Fem. Revan pairing. Naruto upon the Kyuubi being sealed inside him has the seal fail. Minato having thought it might activates the fail safe. He uses and altered seal on a Hiraishin kunai he has on a necklace around Naruto's neck, the seal draws upon the excess chakra of the Kyuubi in the area to warp Naruto and a scroll containing his history off Earth millions of light years away. This happens over the span of a year while Naruto is wrapped in a cacoon of Kyuubi's chakra and grows sustaining himself on Kyuubi's chakra thus strengthening his body. All this is part of the fail safe to burn off enough of Kyuubi's chakra for the Seal to hold. After a year Naruto reaches a planet where he crashes and the siphoning of Kyuubi's chakra is over now that the Kyuubi is no more, this planet is Dantooine. It doesn't have to start like this, I just thought this was a plausible way of it happening without Kyuubi being nice or a part really. Or anything like 'Naruto is the son of a jedi or something like that, it's Naruto goes to the Star Wars Universe Kotor to be precise due to constant Hiraishin for a Year and a cacoon of Kyuubi's chakra. Kyuubi dies in the process having put out slightly more chakra constantly than he regenerated. It can have your own...I just ask the Narutoverse no longer is a part of the story after he leaves, and that he leaves the night of his birth. Also no stupid the force is 'bacteria' crap.
The Jedi find him and care for him raise him to be a Jedi, he grows up with a female Padawan named Revan. They grow close with both pushing the boundries of the Jedi Order with their rebelious personalities. They grow powerful both equals in strength Revan more so in the Force while Naruto physically and with his Dual lightsabers a silver and one of your choice. Though both are of course masters of both the Lightsaber and the Force. They grow to love each other, yet keep it a secret. Naruto never takes an apprentice, Revan takes Malak of course. They go off to the Mandalorian Wars at around 17, when there over Naruto expects to leave the order and live with Revan yet she turned to the dark side. Overrun with guilt at not being able to save his love he goes into a self exile on Taris. Events go as cannon yet Naruto raises an apprentice there a young Cathar named Juhani. Revan returns to Taris with Carth and Bastila and Naruto see's this and jumps in the swoop bike race fight killing everyone saving both Bastila who didn't escape on time. They join up Bastila freaks that Naruto is gonna break Revan as she knows who he is, he pulls her aside and tells her he'll remind her slowly. Then it's up to you how you go about things just make sure Naruto stays with them they visit all the planets do the missions etc... Yet with the 23 year old Naruto and Revan, at this time Naruto is sorta like Jolee Bindo. He uses the force as he pleases and lives life how he wishes no light or dark side yet if push came to shove he'd be light side. Only other thing that needs change is on the Leviathon Naruto isn't there till he arrives later on a crappy ship he gets there just in time to see Revan and Carth rush for the Ebon Hawk Bastila was left behind. Why Naruto wasn't there is up to you. Since he can't because with him they'd never be captured as when they tried to board he'd wipe them all out Malak and all. Since he's on the level of Revan before her fall...so invincible haha. Only thing I ask is Juhani and Mission hook up lol, and theres a Lemon with Naruto and Revan. Or more hahaha, also try and get as many of the sub plots as you can. Like the ex soldier wanting Juhani and he was the one to kill her father, Bastila's mother, Missions Brother, Sasha your stow away, Carth's son, Jolee's friend on Mannan, Zaalbar's situation on his home world, Canderous and those Mandalorian mercs he has a past with. Find HK have him and Naruto get along sorta since Naruto is the darkest there haha yet still has limits etc... Also on the Star Forge he stands back and lets Revan kill Malak as she needs the closure, and just have most your choices be light side.
Though only the Big story line sub plot ones are necessary...killing the Gamorrean's on Tatooine for shits and giggles is cool and people who pick fights go ahead slaughter them, just don't go overboard with the cruelty. Anyways please someone take this challenge there hasn't been a single fic like this done I really really want to see it.
So basically only guidlines is how Naruto gets there that he grows up with Revan they fall 'neutral' go to war, then you have the entire Mandalorian War you can go in depth with or skip with only highlights or the end. Then it follows the game except Juhani is trained by Naruto on Taris so she's sorta neutral. And then you add them both in the Taris situation, and then to the 'team' through out the game. Eventually falling back in love and redeeming Revan. Only other requirements is Naruto for some reason doesn't make it to the Leviathon in time to stop Bastila from sacrificing herself for Revan and Carth. Then Naruto lets Revan kill Malak. So Please someone write this.
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