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since: 06-24-07, id: 1308333, Profile edited: 04-11-08
Author has written 24 stories for Navy NCIS.

whats up people names Alison and NYC RULES

first off my writing is fun and its a little off I know but everyone is so busy so if you want to and have a moment feel free to edit me but trust theres far worse, its fiction so most will be weird but once in a while I do try so give me a break please and enjoy my stories

I am (or should be) Timothy McGee's #1 fan

you may know me as Ali but am mcabbyforever as well

I love House, NCIS, and Spongebob he is cute so read my stories (I may not be the best but I like them none the less)

NFA is a great site to learn how to write a great story that's sure to reel in reviews we've got a new place to start fresh so join there: http://nfacommunity.proboards62.com/index.cgi

this was funny so I had to paste it in

Check this out...
I cdnuolt blveiee taht I cluod aulaclty
uesdnatnrd waht I was rdanieg. The phaonmneal
pweor of the hmuan mnid. Aoccdrnig to a
rscheearch at Cmabrigde Uinervtisy, it deosn't
mttaer in waht oredr the ltteers in a wrod are, the
olny iprmoatnt tihng is taht the frist and lsat ltteer
be in the rghit pclae. The rset can be a taotl
mses and you can sitll raed it wouthit a porbelm.
Tihs is bcuseae the huamn mnid deos not raed
ervey lteter by istlef, but the wrod as a wlohe.
Amzanig huh? Yaeh and I awlyas thought slpeling
was ipmorantt! tahts so cool!
If you could read that put it in your profile

I like poetry

Do not treat me just as what your eyes are seeing

I may be unique but am I not still a human being?

soar through the skies and space above

till you can find an alien and give him some love

for no man, being or animal is perfect shape, form or size

but what we share is heaven and the fact everyone dies

so go live in your perfect stuckup world made up of no emotion and lie

I'll just sit here in the meadow and look at the clouds in my beautiful imperfect blue sky

If you liked it feel free to copy to your profile _




1. were having miscommunication I see » reviews
tags from season five dog tags and beyond so light spoilers. Ziva's head is in the clouds and Tony's not helping so she goes to find someone who can. McAbby, Tiva, McGiva, Tabby enjoy
Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,620 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 5-9-08 - Published: 4-28-08
2. Probie » reviews
tag to 'What if' challenge and episode Probie so tags to it. Beginning takes place before they find out their dead man's a cop only thing different: Tony did not go to Tim and Tim's been a bad boy doing naughty things to himself, fixed last chapter
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,282 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 4-28-08 - Published: 4-22-08
3. attack of a monster » reviews
The team is given job of caring for Katie, a sweet three year old who fears monsters who try and eat her and apparently her father's killer is out to destroy her as well but not before abusing her, will she be saved and given a better life?
Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,203 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 4-14-08 - Published: 3-31-08
4. heroes » reviews
figure out which team member I wrote about, If I get at least four reviews I'll do another one :D
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 901 - Reviews: 54 - Updated: 2-27-08 - Published: 2-4-08
5. A mission not yet done » reviews
Hey again I changed the first chapter up a bit hope it makes better sense, thanks to Abbyforever for amazing betain skills it sounds better she gave good advice, anyway if anyone knows how to write case scenes please help me if you have ideas pm me please
Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 9 - Words: 5,886 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 2-16-08 - Published: 10-25-07
6. a dificult decision reviews
when two women are courted in for a bombing and are now at deaths door only one can save them, surgery would replace their organs but only Tony matches, now its between Jeanne or Ziva, if anyone feels like betaing me and any of my stories please PM me
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,163 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-9-08 - Published: 2-9-08
7. chatroom hinkyness reviews
weird fic, the team is bored and so sets up a chatroom and Jen and Jethro see the four talk of them what will happen? written for Sacha in NFA hangman prize, tag for season five ex-file
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 710 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 2-9-08 - Published: 2-9-08
8. my sweet valentine crush » reviews
its a valentines day disaster! Tim and Abs are just so far apart, Tony and Ziva are trying to get it on without Gibbs finding out and now there's flying peas! McAbby, Tiva. rewrote chapter 4 I didn't like it at all now complete, anyone for sequel?
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,007 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 2-7-08 - Published: 1-17-08
9. Love will find a way » reviews
Love is in the air and Tim has found his way to show it, McAbby Happy Valentines day even if I am a week early
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 2-5-08 - Published: 2-4-08
10. A promise to a friend reviews
NFA challenge 'McGee's missing day' if you seen hometown hero you'll know McGee crashed his car at 16, Wendy his high school sweetheart was with him and it messed up her pregnancy, now with bad news Tim is left with the mentally challenged teenager
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,117 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 2-4-08 - Published: 2-4-08
11. family days » reviews
Tony is seventeen and is Gibbs junior partner and son, the two are out when they meet the youngest member whose 11 in an alley in the snow with his sister, Shannon and Kelly are also alive, will be spanking in chapters. Gibbs/Tony/Tim father son fic
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 7 - Words: 8,307 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 2-1-08 - Published: 1-26-08
12. Punished for protecting a loved one reviews
added scene to Twisted sister, Jenny wants McGee to be punished but Gibbs won't suspend him to train another rookie so theres only one thing left, WARNING: CP, spanking, slash, Tibbs, McAbby and kinkiness inside, one shot
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,610 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 1-30-08 - Published: 1-30-08
13. You broke her heart Tony reviews
After Jeanne leaves Tony gets attached to Ziva and is soon haunted for it, when the ghost comes to her old workplace and threatens to kill Ziva will Tony break the chain between them? Tate and Tiva story, I fixed the proposal line to someday now
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,026 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 1-26-08 - Published: 1-26-08
14. Tony's christmas angels » reviews
Written for third season, its Christmas time and Tony thinks of his old partner and real love. Can there ever be Tiva love or is Tate too strong? Will the team pull Tony out of his slump before it kills him? will Christmas be joyous? Read and review pleas
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,776 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 1-4-08 - Published: 12-12-07
15. the energetic child reviews
NFA challenge school, I chose Abby and I hope it works my hands hurt now please review
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,728 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-27-07 - Published: 11-27-07
16. wheres bert? reviews
All right my imagination ran off on this one but its too funny, I tried the challenge on NFA playboy goth and geek and this is what happened, just read and review please
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,355 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-12-07 - Published: 11-12-07
17. NCIS babies » reviews
I cant believe I accidentally deleted this one instead of another one a few days ago the only sucky part was I had 49 reviews wah hopefully the people who liked the cast as babies will review again, working on sequel now if anyone has a suggestion :
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 7,317 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 10-25-07 - Published: 10-25-07
18. Family stick together reviews
song fic, Tony's thoughts on season five with the theme song from friends, funny ending, may post another chapter havent decided if it can stand alone yet so complete only for now tell me what you think
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 801 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 10-6-07 - Published: 10-6-07
19. A hero named Tim reviews
This is for the NFA challenge I need a hero named McGee I tried to stick with its rules and write it well but if anyone can help me beta please let me know and if its good enough for the contest too anyways enjoy I hope
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,574 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 8-17-07 - Published: 8-17-07
20. the couples court » reviews
are the rumors we write about our favorite couples real or one big lie? All right I'll try to be more clear, you guys are the jury in my fantasy courtroom, defend for your couple, I added McKate because I think they would have made a funny couple
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 11 - Words: 3,589 - Reviews: 49 - Updated: 8-16-07 - Published: 6-27-07
21. true belonging reviews
written for after model behavior as a hannukahchristmas story about Ziva and the team McAbby and Tiva pairings one shot
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,161 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 8-7-07 - Published: 8-7-07
22. the teams revenge on Thom E Gemcity » reviews
Mcgee enters a poem contest and the team finds out so they write poems of their own whoose will win and will the team finally get revenge on McGee? and when they find out his true reason for the money what will they say? um this is really sad ending
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Tragedy - Chapters: 5 - Words: 3,396 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 7-31-07 - Published: 7-28-07
23. Kates little Angel » reviews
A young girl arrives to NCIS with a letter. the team now has to help create memories of her mother while also protecting her from her fathers family
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 8 - Words: 5,849 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 7-20-07 - Published: 7-12-07
24. mcGiva but whats happened to Ziva? » reviews
Ziva gets drunk at McGees house trying to help with his story but there may be something seriously wrong with her, McGee also has a child he forgot to tell Ziva about so when her pregnancy fails will their friendship fall too? crossover with House
Complete - Navy NCIS - Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 12 - Words: 6,883 - Reviews: 24 - Updated: 7-5-07 - Published: 6-28-07
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