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since: 07-09-07, id: 1320999, Profile Updated: 07-18-09
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Author has written 13 stories for Mega Man, Naruto, Prince of Tennis, Black Cat, and Detective Conan/Case Closed.

Moving onto original fiction. Sorry. I won't be posting any new multi-chaptered stories. I will, however, post my fanfiction ideas which I know I will never start. Check below.

Click to go to my writing blog, where I post original works. I may post some fanfiction as well.

Notes on stories:

Please be patient with me. I try to get new chapters out as fast as I can, but it's not always easy to. I do have a life outside of fanfiction. :)
Note: Moving onto original fiction.

Things as They Are: ... I've got no excuse. Fighting scenes are the bane of my existence.

Rules of the Shinobi: On hiatus.

Turn Back the Shards of Time: Got the next chapter planned out, but only about 15 is actually written.

Ideas up for grabs:
Date: 2009 Feb 28.

-- FMA: Massively AU. Once upon another universe, genius crafters Edward and Alphonse Elric, two very normal boys, stumble upon alchemy... and things turn out to be a tad more troublesome for certain people. Pre-series.

-- FMA: Roy and his subordinates find out that shockingly, Ed can actually be good at paperwork when he wants to be. Oneshot, no pairings.

-- BLACK CAT: After a concussion, Train's memory for the past two years disappears. Suddenly, he's the Black Cat again. That isn't too good for Sven, Eve, and the men chasing him.

Tips for Writers and Readers

1. Don't put "This summary sucks, just read it" or anything along those lines in your summary. If your summary sucks, why would someone want to read your story? Just try your best at a summary, and if the plot is interesting then people will read it.

2. Try to limit the use of Japanese words. Use some, such as honorifics (endings such as -chan, -kun, and -sama) and Japanese words that have no English synonym (such as jutsu, rankings, and weapons).

3. Spell check your work, if you can. For me, if there are only a few misspellings, I can read it, but if there are too many misspellings I will not continue reading the story.

4. Remember to double-space often. Don't have too many blocks of words; it's hard to read. Also, don't have more than one person speaking in a paragraph. It sometimes confuses people.

5. Try not to flame in reviews, unless you really hate the story and the authors gives permission to flame. If you don't like a story, that's fine - but if you say just that, then how can they improve, so that next time, there'll be something better? Write constructive reviews instead. Tell them how they can improve!

6. Try not to use symbols and abbreviations in your writing, unless it's in the author's note. Some readers may not know what those symbols or abbreviations mean, so it makes it harder to read.

7. If you're not exactly sure how to write a certain section of your story (examples: romance, fighting, dialogue), you might want to read other fanfictions or stories that have those types of writing in it to see how that author did it.

8. Above all else, don't forget that writing on FanFiction.Net is fun! Please don't feel pressured by reviewers to update, because it's better to have a late but good-quality chapter than have a quick but bad-quality chapter.

9. Regarding crossovers: when you write crossovers, you may have a problem on which category to put it in. My rule of thumb is that I would put it in the category in which most characters appear or events are mentioned. For example, if one story about one character going into another world was written, I'd put it in the category of the "other world" was in. That way, people who read it would be able to know about the canon events that happen. The only exception I'd put to this is when one of the categories is so big that it would just be strategizing to put it in that one, regardless of the situation. For example, the Naruto category is so large that even if your story wasn't in the Naruto world, people would still read and review.

Mm, I think that's it. Anyway, have a nice day!

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1. Turn Back the Shards of Time » reviews
AU/time traveling. Everyone knows who Sven Vollfield is. He's the world's best sweeper, of course. But, who is this kid who's following him? And, the Black Cat? Who is that? After all, there's only one great sweeper, right? No pairings. Mangaverse.
Black Cat - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 14,984 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 12-20-08 - Published: 10-9-08
2. Phantasmagoria reviews
As soon as he enters the scene, Heiji knows something isn't right. The light is off at the dilapidated shack and it's silent. Too silent, he thinks in alarm. Chapter 185 from the manga: Hattori Heiji's dream. Extremely angsty. Character death.
Detective Conan/Case Closed - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,609 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-8-08 - Heiji H. - Complete
3. Things as They Are » reviews
Sasuke wakes up in a different universe. It resembles his old world, except that he has switched places with Naruto. However, soon he finds that this new world is nothing like his old one... AU, timetravel, gen. In the process of revision.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 20 - Words: 68,627 - Reviews: 461 - Updated: 11-15-08 - Published: 11-15-07 - Sasuke U. & Naruto U.
4. For the Love of Tennis reviews
Tennis isn't dead for Fuji. It's just been collecting dust under his bed. Oneshot, future fic, no pairings.
Prince of Tennis - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,380 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-3-08 - Fuji S. - Complete
5. Rules of the Shinobi » reviews
When the Shinobi Rules were written, some were meant to be kept while others were meant to be broken. Each rule has a oneshot, telling the story of those who kept or didn't keep it. Some humorous, some angsty. Some AU, some future. Nonyaoi.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,151 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-30-08 - Published: 1-10-08
6. Mission Decoration reviews
Entry for Serenity Silence's oneshot contest. Hyuuga Neji does not fear many things, except for the Dranked missions Gai has them do every Christmas Eve. Oneshot, NejiTen Christmas fic.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,473 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-21-07 - Neji H. & Tenten - Complete
7. Tears of Regret reviews
Sasuke is already taken over by Orochimaru. Sasuke's and Itachi's thoughts. [oneshot] [very angsty]
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,371 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-6-07 - Sasuke U. & Itachi U. - Complete
8. Count the Days reviews
Ten days. She would return in ten days. Kakashi counts the days until Rin would come back. [KakaRin] [postGaiden, preNaruto story] [Oneshot] [R&R]
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,034 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-6-07 - Kakashi H. & Rin - Complete
9. Rule Number 25 reviews
Shinobi must always keep their emotions hidden and never show tears. Indeed, this is the hardest rule to keep. [Oneshot] [R&R]
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,535 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-1-07 - Complete
10. Neji's Birthday reviews
Neji and Tenten have agreed that, if Tenten catches Neji before the day is up, he will tell her his birthday. oneshot
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,067 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 10-12-07 - Neji H. & Tenten - Complete
11. Arigatou, Aniki reviews
Premassacre. Eight year old Sasuke has hurt his ankle badly and Itachi is carrying him home. [Brotherly fic] [Oneshot]
Naruto - Rated: K - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,209 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-29-07 - Sasuke U. & Itachi U. - Complete
12. April Fools Day » reviews
What happens if Axl and his friend decide to prank everyone on April Fool's Day? Total chaos, that's what! Everyone is going crazy. Axl has a list of targets and Zero's his first one! [R&R, please!]
Mega Man - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,062 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 7-12-07 - Published: 7-11-07
13. It's Still Morning reviews
The media has brutally attacked the Maverick Hunters with their finger pointed at Zero and X. Zero is worried and thinks about the whole matter when X comes up to help clear things out. No romance whatsoever, just friendship. [oneshot] [1st fic] [R&R]
Mega Man - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,018 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-11-07 - Complete
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