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since: 09-05-07, id: 1369928, Profile Updated: 06-27-09
country: Netherlands
Author has written 4 stories for Avatar: Last Airbender, Kingdom Hearts, and Zetman.

First of: don't waste time on my avatar fanfics. I'm not proud at those. My KH fanfic on the other hand, is quiet good.

Second of: I'm searching for an avatar fanfic. I don't know who wrote it, and I forgot the name of the fanfic. It's a commedy with Sokka as the main character. The main story line is as follows: Sokka walks away from the rest of the group because they don't take them seriously, he plans to overtrow the fire nation by himself. He encounters Zuko and wishes to kidnap him as a hostage, but he changes his mind and joins forces with Zuko. Together they plan to end the war through diplomatcy rather then violence. So they found a country by themselves, they call it Greece. The travel to the fire nation as embasadors of Greece. During the trip Sokka drugs Zuko and confinces him he is a god, from her on Zuko listen to wathever Sokka says. They dine with the fire lord, who is drunk and making passes on Zuko who is disguised as Sokka's pregnant wife. And that's pretty much all I can remember, a part from a specific joke something like "Sokka was hungry, he was always hungry, but he liked to catorgerize different types of hunger. The first type was the typical 'my stomach feels like an empty cave', the second was 'man I wish I could throw up, so I can eat last nights dinner again' and the third an last 'hey why don't I just eat Momo'. " I would really love to read it again, so if anyone has a glue about where I could find this story, I would be most interested in it.

About me: Hi I'm Rutger Holtzer (I really don't understand why people won't give their real names) . I'm dutch but I decided to write in english. Why? Because english is a much cooler langue, you've got a bigger audience and I feel it's improving my english. I tend to make a lot of grammar, punctuation and spelling errors as the result of not writting in my mother langue (not like I don't have those when I'm writing in Dutch.). I really am doing my best to prevent that. So I hope you can forgive me if there are too many errors in my storries.

Stories I like: check the favorite list.

Writers I like: check the favorite list.

For Kingdom Hearts

To my deepest regret I never played any of the final fatasy games so I don´t know much about the characters from final fatasy. But I like.

RikuXKairi

SoraXKairi (mostly to piss Riku of:P)

RikuReplicaXNamine

CloudXTifany

LeonXYuffie

For Bleach.

As long as Sado / chad doesn't get in a ship I'm happy. Seriously chad making out with someone, can you picture it? But I do have to say that I absolutly adore the the Quinchy boy and the vice-captain of that freaky guy with white / black face and arms that grow back and ears that he uses as weapons. (Japanese names are way to hard to remember for people like me.)

Pairings I dislike.

All the yaio ones. I'm really not a homofoob, but it's just so out of character. (with posible exception of Riku and Sora, They've been through so much together that it could be done, when written properly. But still I don't really like it.)

Things I want to say: To everybody writting takes effort, guess we all know that. When a writer takes the effort to write a story, so we can read it. You should review the story, that's the least thing you could do in return of that effort. Even when a story sucks a writter deserves to know that. A review doesn't have to be long or good or nice just the words "I like it" or "I hate it" are engough of a review (unless you can come up with more.)

And don't use drugs or too much alcohol and don't smoke. (don't know where that came from, just felt like writting it down.) And always be kind , even when people do not deserve it (except in you're reviews). Well that's all.

This is something I coppied from another page. Normally I'm not really the type to do so. But with this I couldn't help it. In Holland Guns are illigal so this isn't really my concern. Still I felt like coppieng it.

Try Not To Cry

Mommy...Johnny brought a gun to school,

He told his friends that it was cool,

And when he pulled the trigger back,

It shot with a great, huge crack.

Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,

I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!

When I went to school that day,

I never said good-bye.

I'm sorry that I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry.

When Johnny shot the gun, he hit me and another,

And all because Johnny, got the gun from his brother.

Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I love him very much,

And please tell Zack; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.

And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now,

And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now

And tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best

Mommy, I'm not the first, I'm no better than the rest

Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't show up for class,

And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass

Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one, though. deserves this.

But mommy, it's not fair, I left without a kiss.

And Mommy tell the doctors; I know that they really did try

I think I even saw one doctor, trying not to cry.

Mommy, I'm slowly dying, with a bullet in my chest,

But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest

When I heard that great, big crack, I ran as fast as I could

please listen to me if you would,

I wanted to go to college, I wanted to try things that were new

I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo

I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,

I wanted to be an actress, I really wanted to live.

But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,

Mommy, tell my Zack, I'm sorry I to cancel the date.

I love you Mommy, I always have, I know you know its true

And Mommy all I need to say is, "Mommy, I love you"

In Memory of The Columbine & Virginia Tech
Students Who Were Lost

Please if you would,
Don't smash this on the ground.

If you pass this on,

Maybe people will cry,

Just keep this in your heart,

For the people who didn't get to say "Good-bye".

Now you have 2 choices,

1) Pass this on, and show people you care, repost as
"Try Not To Cry"
2) Don't send it, and you have just proven how
cold-hearted you really are...

P.S. I've you read my ''the pain of loses'' and thinks this really good then I can't take the credit cause it's mostly from fussytomato. And as I said in the A/N of the story it's heavily inspired by her ''reflections''. If you put those to next to each other you will notice that mine isn't so original.

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1. Zetmanongoing reviews
Picking up where the manga left off. I always work really hard on my fiction, so I would appreciate some R&R.
Zetman - Rated: T - English - General/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,036 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-8-09
2. Kingdom Hearts III » reviews
Just like the title says. I'm trying to make a storyline like the actual game with traveling through the univers and stuff. Main Ships SoraXKairi RikuXKairi.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 8 - Words: 15,926 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 6-8-09 - Published: 10-29-07
3. Avatar: the last airbeder Book 3 fire » reviews
The title says it. In the early stage there is Maiko but that may turn into Zutara I'm not sure about the rest. the grammar probably sucks. rated T to be sure. more summary inside. I dare to say I became an average writter who is still learningimproving.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 7 - Words: 31,817 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 10-28-07 - Published: 9-24-07 - Aang & Zuko
4. Axel reviews
All about Axel before he became a nobody, it's just drawlings for now. not a real story and it's not going to become one. I rated it T cause I like to write sad stories. Even a average writter like me can make a beautiful story about loses.
Kingdom Hearts - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 818 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 10-16-07 - Published: 10-15-07 - Axel
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