Full Name: Alan Major
Location: Largo, FL
Age: 16
Birthday: Nov. 4, 1991
Interests: Wrting stories, video games
Hobbies: Wrting stories
Personal quote: "Great Balls of Fire!!"
Abilties of writing: Plot, flow of characters. I like to check out the pairing of characters. Some that I think are cute. Others that I think are kind of stupid and disgusting.
I'm kind of picky when it comes to stories. Especially when it involves pairings. So if I send a bad review, that doesn't mean I'm flaming you! I just think the pairings authors make are nasty!
I also happen to have my own website at www.fanart-central.net/profile-coldsteel1104.php
I'm also available on http/ian-narver.deviantart.com/
I am now on YouTube! Here's my site: http://www.youtube.com/user/SSBfan0838
Now that I see it, Chris Thorndyke is starting to sound like a gary stu. I haven't played the game, but why have him tell Shadow about Maria? It seems like he's hogging the spotlight more than Sonic! Why even bother calling the show Sonic X? They outta change the show to Chris X! It's just plain ridiculous! The story below is my only story with him starring in it!
Upcoming stories: Check out these stories that I think some of you will like.
Little Chris: Adventures in VG: Chris Thorndyke was just a regular 12 year old that dreams and has nightmares. But his dreams are about to come true when Professor Ian Narver and Amy Rose come to his house and tell him that he has been invited to VG to meet the King and his daughter Princess Helen. As he arrives, he meets the mischevious Maxwell Q. Klinger, a strange looking door, and the bumbling group called Hawk's Pride.
ian narver's Toy Story 2: Sequel to my first story. Sonic has been toy-napped by a greedy man name Eugene Krabs. Only Mario, SpongeBob, Patrick, Capt. Falcon, Silver the Hedgehog, and Falco Lombardi. But can they rescue Sonic in time before Alan gets home and before he gets shipped to Tokyo along with Sonia the Hedgehog, Manic the Hedgehog, and Dr. Eggman?
Mario of Mushroom Kingdom: Similar to Buzz Lightyear of Star Command. Mario is on a mission to stop Bowser from taking over the world. But Bowser is up to something that might stop Mario. But can Mario get help from Princess Daisy, the janitor Luigi, and the monkey, Diddy Kong?
Shadow the Hedgehog and the Sorcerer's Stone: Shadow the Hedgehog was the hedgehog who lived and survived from Black Doom's wrath. But when his parents are killed by Black Doom, Shadow is sent to the people on Earth and live with his mean uncle and aunt, and his cousin, Thomas. But things start to get weird as Shadow witnesses a vanishing glass, receiving a mountain of letters from no one, and meeting a muscular man name Captain Falcon. Falcon informs Shadow that he has been accepted to Nintendo School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. As he enters the school, he meet Sonic the Hedgehog, the brainiac Amy Rose, The bully Jet the Hawk, and the headmaster, Ian Narver.
A Narver Movie: Similar to A Goofy Movie. Summertime is here in Florida and Alan the Hedgehog couldn't wait to spend with his girlfriend, Kali the Hedgehog and watch the Jonas Brothers (with guess star Hannah Montana) live on concert. But his clumsy dad, Ian Narver has other plans on spending time with him on fishing.
Strangers in Korea: When Kildar summons a strange portal after battling with Hawk's Pride they are sucked in and land in the Korean War. After hitch-hiking a ride on an ambulance, they stop at the MASH 4077 and meet the officers of the camp. Set right after Margaret is engage to Donald.
Kung Fu Falcon: My next parody to the movie, Kung Fu Panda. More info later.
Favorite Quotes
"Don't under estimate your power to a pain in the buns!" Col. Potter, MASH
"What say ya, ferret face?" BJ Hunnicut, MASH
"Well this stinks," Plankton, SpongeBob
"Slight miscalculations!" James Bond, The World is Not Enough
"Evening chillun! How ya'll?" Capt. Trapper John McIntyre, MASH
"GOOD NIGHT FRANK!" Capt. Hawkeye Pierce, MASH
"Good night my queen." Chance Furlong, SWAT Kats
"THE DISEASE!" Col. Potter, MASH
Favorite Characters
Sonic the Hedgehog: I like his attitude in which he has good lines and is very funny.
Shadow the Hedgehog: He may be dark and not very nice, but he's very cool!
Silver the Hedgehog: He's just plain cool! If only I could play him as a playable character on Nintendo and not PS or XBOX.
Hawkeye Pierce: I just think he's very funny!
Amy Rose: So what if she's a girl? She's got good lines in Sonic X whenever it comes to Eggman or Sonic. I also think she's hotter than Rouge. Did I say that out loud?
Martin Mystery: Dumb? Whatever! He's hilarious! I like it when he annoys Diana and playing jokes on her and screwing up MOM's work. Makes me laugh!
Knuckles the Echidna: I just like his attitude in the series of Sonic X.
Maj. Frank Burns: He may be an idiot and all but he's funny and has great lines. He's even funnier than Maj. Winchester.
SpongeBob SquarePants: He just plain funny and a bit slow.
Patrick Star: He may be stupid but he's hilarious!
Squidward Tentacles: He reminds me so much of my dad. Except he's not negative and boring.
Chance Furlong/ T-Bone: This guy's got great lines in the SWAT Kats.
Darry Fenton: I just think dannyfangirl's OC is just funny! Wicked gnarly dude!
Favorite OCs (in order)
Hawkins the Fighter
Kali the Hedgehog
Bruce the Hedgehog
Princess Liane of Gameranna
Leonard the Swift
Chloe Scarlett
Favorite couples
LinkxZelda: These two are a much better than other bonds. I don't care what some of you think. These two are fine the way they are. Good ahead, fuck me.
MarioxPeach: These two are fine the way they are.
LuigixDaisy: Same as before on Mario.
SonicxAmy: These two are meant for each other. I got to admit it.
SonicxSairisa: I think Sonic is better off with Sairisa-chan's OC than with Blaze
FalconxSamus: I agree with some of you. These are good for each other.
MikeyxMitsuki: If only Mikey would stop fooling with Lily and see the girl that has a crush on him
KnucklesxTikal: I don't mind the KnucklesxRouge pairing but Tikal is the same species of Knuckles. Why not have these two be together?
DannyxSam: Not counting Chrissy-san's OC, these two actually make a cute couple. At first I thought it wasn't, but now I think it's alright.
DannyxCarrie: Danny and Chrissy-San's OC is like the pairing above (Except for the last part of the sentence!)
TailsxCream: These two aren't bad themselves.
TailsxErin: Erinbubble92 is one of my favorite authors and I think she and Tails are cute together.
TailaxTailsxErin: My first love triangle! Taila is an OC for a friend of mine on fanart. I could love this moment where Taila loves Tails but he doesn't know that and loves Erinbubble92
VectorxVanilla: Vector falling in love with Cream's mother makes me laugh!
JakexCallie: These two are meant for each other in the SWAT Kats.
ChancexFelina: Same thing above.
AlvinxSally: At least these two are better off together than SonicxSally.
AlvinxBrittany: I got admit it, these are cute together.
SokkaxSuki: These two are good for each other.
SokkaxTy Lee: This is cute!
AangxToph: Aang is better off with Toph than Katara.
Couples I made
SilverxSonia: My first pairing! I think Silver and Sonia Hedgehog make a cute couple!
BrucexAmy: My OC for Sonic. All of my feelings for Amy go into this character of mine.
SnakexZero Suit Samus: For some strange reason, I find these two cute together in Brawl. Don't ask me why!
DevonxDiana: Diana Lombard is way better being with someone else than her brother
HawkinsxLiane: I actually think Hawkins is better off with Princess Liane than Chloe.
ianxChloe: At least ian is more better off with Chloe than Aleena.
AlanxKali: Go ahead call me crazy. I'm in love with an OC of mine.
Couples I dislike
Anything that involves gay and/or lesbian pairings! YUCK!
AnyonexZelda: I thought it was just RoyxZelda but now I'm seeing people pairing Zelda up with other characters. Someone shoot me! No one, I REPEAT, man or woman, is not good with Zelda.
LinkxMarth: Just some gay pairing I don't want to know!
What Chrissy-san is saying about this pairing is right. Whoever made up this pairing is just stupid and an idiot!
MartinxDiana: These two are step-brother and sister. What makes you people think these two are good?
MikeyxLily: Mikey can try for all he wants but Lily will never fall for him. Besides if she keeps her attitude up, she'll be wondering why she's 30 years old and not married.
BanjoxKazooie: These two are PARTNERS! HELLO! Not lovers! Why make these two fall in love? Having these two make out and have babies would be disaster!
FrankxMargaret: As Frank used to say, "You make me want to throw up!" These two have such nasty lines that I could just throw up! "I may vomit," as Snape would say. I am so glad they are not a couple anymore.
ChancexCallie: It's funny the way Chance wants to be with Callie but they just aren't meant for each other.
JakexFelina: This is just creepy.
AangxKatara: Sorry people, Katara is 16 and Aang is 12. I don't like that.
Pairing I REALLY hate!
DannyxJune: Now I'm starting really HATE This pairing. JusSonic is really going overboard this pairing. I'm glad most of people are starting hate this pairing. I outta murder the maker of this pairing. JUST KIDDING! But I want to!
Strange Pairings: Couples I think are a bit strange but support
ShadowxAmy: This pairing is strange to me. But whatever you readers make of this, I don't care.
LinkxMidna: This pairing is awkward. After seeing Link and Midna falling in love at the end of TP, I thought it was strange.
ChrisxRouge: I saw this pairing on fanart-central.net; it's strange and yet funny.
RazorxChristina: Chrissy-San and Razor being together? Sounds interesting.
VladxLauren: After reading Chrissy-San's story, I found this pairing very strange. (Funny too!)
Pairings I don't care
SonicxElise: I really don't care about this pairing from Sonic the Next Gen.
SonicxBlaze: Same thing above
MASH Pairings: I honestly don't care what you writers do with these people. As long as it isn't FrankxMargaret!!
DannyxJenny: I'm not crazy about these two as long as it isn't DannyxJune!
ShadowxAmy: I may find this pairing strange but I don't care about it.
Buddy Pairings: Not gay pairings!
Sonic/Shadow: These two may be rivals, but I think they're best friends
Martin/Mikey: These two are stupid. They should be friends.
Link/Fire Emblem: All three of them are fighters.
Hawkins/Link: My OC for SSB is a fighter, and Link is a fighter.
Peach/Zelda: Both princesses.
Mario/Sonic: Two mascots of two game systems that are rivals
Bruce/Shadow: They're should be friends and rivals
Hawkeye (HP)/Shadow: They have a few things in common
Banjo/Kazooie: These guys are fine the way they are. Why make them lovers?
Hawkins/Hawkeye (MASH): I think these two would be best buddies
The Fighters of the SSB: Hawkins, Link, Marth, Roy (and later Ike and Meta Knight) make a group of the SSB called Fighters Unite!
The Girls of the SSB: Princess Peach, Princess Zelda, Samus, and Amy Rose (she, Sonic, and Shadow join the SSB in my style of SSB: Ultimate)
Video Game Systems: I've been playing on Nintendo ever since I played on the SNES. After getting the N64, I wanted a Gamecube. Now I'm trying to get the Wii. So far no luck! I don't want to own any other game system. Nintendo has been with me all my life!
Nintendo 64
Nintendo Gamecube
Nintendo Wii (Soon)
Favorite Games
N64:
Super SMASH Bros
Mario Party
Banjo-Kazooie
Banjo-Tooie
Mickey's Speedway USA
The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time
The Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask
Diddy Kong Racing
Super Mario 64
Gamecube:
SSB: Melee
Nicktoons Unite!
Lego Star Wars
Lego Star Wars II: The Original Trilogy
Shadow the Hedgehog
The Incredibles
The Incredibles: Rise of the Underminer
The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess
Super Mario Sunshine
Bionicle Heroes
From Russia with Love
Sonic Heroes
Sonic Adventure 2 Battle
Wii: (Don't own one yet but I'm just putting these games in because I think they seem interesting)
SSB: Brawl
Sonic and the Secret Rings
Mario and Sonic at the Olympic Games
Super Mario Galaxy
LEGO Star Wars: The Complete Saga
LEGO Indiana Jones
Favorite TV shows
CSI
Star Trek: TNG, TOS
MASH
Home Improvement
SpongeBob SquarePants
Martin Mystery
Sonic X
Kappa Mikey
SWAT Kats: The Radical Squadron
Family Matters
Tyler Perry's House of Payne
Shows I don't watch very much
Full House
Hannah Montana
Sabrina the Teenage Witch
Yu-Gi-Oh!
Danny Phantom
Fairly OddParents
Music: I'm more of a classic rock listener.
Van Halen
Eagles
Boston
Guns & Roses
Def Leppard
Aerosmith
Bon Jovi
These are music groups I hate.
AC/DC
Queen
I'm sorry that some of you like these music groups I just don't have a taste in them.
My First OC
ian narver
Age: 30
Hair: Black
Eyes: Yellow
Weapon: The Sword of Fire
VA: Jason Anthony Griffiths
Attitude: Sarcastic, smart, lazy, stubborn
Love Interest: Chloe Scarlett
ian narver is just your average male friend living on Earth. He is very quiet but mostly shy around girls and can't get the courage to talk to them and acts like an idiot when he wants to talk to them and ends up not. Another reason is that he tends to be sarcastic and is too stubborn.
But ian is somehow transported from his hometown and into the world of VG. There he meets HP, Sonic the Hedgehog, and more. He is given the power of wielding the Sword of Fire which makes him produce fireballs and more. But having him hold the sword makes him an easy target for enemies to capture and have him join their group. But ian refused and blasts them away. Right now, he is helping Hawk's Pride and will always lend them a hand. Like Knuckles in Sonic X, he prefers to work alone.
(Since I know most of you people hate Jason Griffiths, I made up this comment I saw on tv.com where someone said he does a better voice for Ian and Manic in HP)
The Sword of Fire
Powers
-Fire Rocket
-Fireball(s)
Unlike Hawkins, who needs Jewel Seeds to power up his Emerald Sword to Sword-Rocket, Ian has to wait to power his Sword
Weakness
-Like Hawkins' stupidity, Ian's sarcasm annoys HP
-Ian acts sarcastic most of the time
-Ian doesn't even know he's sarcastic
Alan the Hedgehog (me)
Age: 16
Color: Brown
Eye color: Brown
VA: Zac Effron
Love Interest: Kali the Hedgehog
Info: Alan the Hedgehog was born somewhere on Earth as a human. But after a getting a Gamecube for his 10th birthday, it transported him onto VG. There he was transformed into a hedgehog and wore a belt with the Gamecube insignia on it. He was taken to the Nintendo City Orphanage and was cared for 6 years.
A few months later, he was adopted by Ian Narver and was forced to attend Nintendo City High School. There he met Silver, Sonia, Manic, and Kali. He started to fall in love with Kali right when he met her. But Manic got angry at him and said they are together. But after Alan started hanging out with Kali, Manic got angry and threaten to beat him up. Alan refused to fight as Silver came in and stopped Manic. Not only did Manic almost hurt Alan but he pushed Kali to the ground and almost hurt her.
After a few weeks, Manic and Alan started becoming friends and Manic got the hang of Alan being with Kali.
Powers (Gamecube Belt)
-Changes Alan into either form of animal
-Gives Alan the weapon, the beam sword
-Makes Alan the Gamecube shield
Weakness
-The belt does not give him super powers
-Alan tends to act sarcastic like Ian
-Alan can get really angry over stupid stuff
My OC Characters
Hawk's Pride
http://ian-narver.deviantart.com/art/Hawk-s-Pride-82050073
The Logo
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-671804.html
Members of Hawk's Pride:
Hawkins the Fighter
Chloe Scarlett
Manic the Hedgehog
Sonia the Hedgehog
Silver the Hedgehog
Kali the Hedgehog
Leonard the Swift
Silvia the Quick
LEGO Fighter
Princess Liane
Ally: Ian Narver
Neutral: Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
Enemy: Kildar Hakann
Francisco the Wrath
Games I created in my imagination starring HP (only for the Nintendo Wii)
Enter Kali the Hedgehog
Hawkins and the Emerald Sword
Siblings of a Rich Family
Coming soon: Hawk's Pride: The Video Game RELOADED!
The Dark Side of HP
Hawkins the Fighter/ Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
Age: 25
Hair: Brown, later darker
Eyes: Blue, later brown
Works for: The SSB, Leader of Hawk's Pride
Weapons:
Hawkins: The Silver Sword later on the Jewel Blade (Looks like a sword with a jewel at the end of the handle)
Hawkeye: The Dark Blade
VA: Darren Dunstan
Video Games: Sean Schemmel
Hawkeye: David Humphrey (original VG voice for Shadow)
Attitude: Funny, sarcastic sometimes, a bit slow
Hawkeye: Mysterious, smarter
Love Interest: Princess Liane
Hawkeye: Silvia the Quick
Bio: Hawkins was born on the continent of Nintendo and raised by rich parents along with his two siblings, Jamie and Neal. When he was 12 years old, he was taken to a Fighters School where he was trained to be a fighter. Because of his lack of smartness and being a klutz, the training took for almost 8 years. He had to learn how to master the sword, not drop it, and not get too distracted or his head will be off his neck.
When he was 19 years old, his master gave him a magical sword called the Silver Sword. But Hawkins was not out of the woods yet. He had to master its special abilities and learn its special move, the Sword-Rocket. In order to obtain that power, Hawkins must find a Jewel Seed and activate S-R. When he first attempted S-R, Hawkins hit a wall. But after weeks of trying to attempt S-R, Hawkins was able to get control of the power.
Later on, he joined the SSB and became friends with the fighters who were in the group. But a few years later in SSBU, Hawkins suffered severe burns in a factory explosion which caused him to lose his right hand, and changed the color of his hair and eyes. His sword was also blown off and flew into DS Mountain. Hawkins hop onto the Green Mile on rode to the mountains to get it back. After encountering the DS monster, he took out the Jewel Seed and started throwing them at the monster to distract it or at least blind it to get the sword. But what he didn’t notice was that the Jewel Seed has the ability to call the Silver Sword back to its owner. Hawkins got the sword and ran back to Nintendo City.
One year later, Hawk’s Pride formed. The group contained Hawkins, Chloe Scarlett, Manic the Hedgehog, Sonia the Hedgehog, Silver the Hedgehog, and Kali the Hedgehog. A few months later, while fighting their arch-nemesis, Kildar Hakann, the Silver Sword got hit by a golden bullet that came out of one of Kildar’s ridiculous machines and it exploded which caused it to send Hawkins into “The World Beyond”. Hawkins explored the place and found some old man and he told him it is time for him to use a new weapon called, The Jewel Blade. It was powerful than the Silver Sword but acts like it. It also has the ability to hold the Jewel Seed without Hawkins finding one. The Jewel Blade even changed his robotic hand for it to hold the sword better. Hawkins can even S-R faster with it.
Soon Hawkins finds the Silver Bow in which he could equip it with the Jewel Blade and fire Energy Arrows. In my story of LoZ: Enter Hawkins, Hawkins finds the Silver Bow in Hyrule.
Info: In this series I made up, Hawkins' past comes back and helps his group, Hawk's Pride (I took the name from MASH) that contains Hawkins, Chloe Scarlett, the hedgehogs: Sonia, Manic, and Silver, Kali the Hedgehog, later Leonard the Swift, Silvia the Quick, and Princess Liane
In one episode, Hawkins encounters his dark ego. Dark Hawk (Hawkeye) is the exact opposite of Hawkins. He is smart, faster, and yet neutral. He acts like Shadow the Hedgehog but more mysterious. After hearing that Hawkins calls himself Hawkins the Fighter, he claims himself as Hawkeye the Dark Fighter.
Hawkeye the Dark Fighter was made by Kildar when he extracted DNA from Hawkins. He wanted to make someone that was a clone of Hawkins and had the same moves as him. It was a success and Hawkeye was made to have the citizens of Nintendo City get angry at Hawkins and the NCPD arrest him while Hawkeye would kill Hawk's Pride and Kildar would take over the city. But two people knew Hawkeye wasn't Hawkins. Ian Narver and Kali the Hedgehog. They were getting suspicious at why Hawkins was acting weird. Later on, Hawkins busts out of jail and confronts Hawkeye. After a duel, Hawk's Pride asked questions to see who was the real Hawkins. Hawkeye answered all of them and that made HP scared. But Chloe came to the rescue by having the two twist their right hand clock-wise. Hawkins, after losing his right hand, said no problem while Hawkeye said that it's disgusting. It was revealed that Hawkins was the real one. But Kildar found out and said he was going to destroy Hawkeye for failing. But Hawkeye became confuse saying that he and Kildar would rule the world even if he failed. Kildar chuckled and said he never makes a promise. Hawkeye got angry and began attacking Kildar. When he developed enough energy, he delivered the final blow and send Kildar sky high. But after containing all of that energy, Hawkeye disappeared.
Hawkeye later comes back but has problems. He keeps getting his energy drained when he powers it up. Whenever he's got enough energy, it ends up draining his life and makes him fall unconscious. He still hasn't figure out why it is happening.
In one episode of AfterSSB, Hawk's Pride in America, Hawkins loses the Silver Sword after fighting Kildar Hakann. It exploded and send Hawkins into another dimension. A person awaited him and told him that it was time for him to the legendary blade called the Emerald Sword. It holds a jewel beyond anyone's power. Hawkins joked about saying that they must of made the sword from a Chaos Emerald (due to the name Emerald Sword!) But the sword was his and it made Sword Rocket must faster than the Silver Sword.
Powers
-Sword-Rocket as fast as a NASCAR
-Jewel Seeds
-Silver Bow
Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
-Dark-Rocket
-Jewel Power
-Dark Energy Bow
Weakness
-Hawkins has a tendency to act stupid
-Sword-Rocket uses up a lot of Jewel Seeds
-If his sword is gone, Hawkins is weak
-His stupidity annoys HP, mostly Ian
-Hawkeye loses all of his energy when his sword is powered up and drains for some strange reason
Hawkins returns from Melee, here's his attacks:
Standard Special Move: Sword Rocket
Side Special Move: Silver Bow
Up Special Move: Sword Ground Pound
Down Special Move: Jewel Seed
Final SMASH: USS Wii SSB 1802-1a
Taunts
Up taunt: Twirls his sword in the air and thrusts it forward saying, "The fight has only begun!"
Side: Twirls his sword and thrusts it back as he says, "I'm waiting!"
Down: Stretches his left arm out, looks around and shrugs
On screen appearance: The Wii flies in and Hawkins jumps down from it.
Colors
-Usual colors
-Red clothes
-Green clothes
-His Past style
-Warrior/ Pirate clothes
-Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
(Unlike Dark Link who sounds the same as Link, Hawkeye sounds the same as he does to me. Being voiced by David Humphrey instead of Sean Schemmel)
Victory Song: Shorten version of Tunnel Scene
Stages (I made these up for SSBB): (Bold songs means to unlock)
Mascot Ships (The Wii and the SEGA make a good stage): Watch out when one leaves the stage.
Song: SSBM theme song remix
Nintendo City: Hop onto the Wii and explore the wonderful continent of Nintendo.
Song: Tunnel Scene, Nobody's Perfect, Girl's Night Out (GNO), NES Medley
Olmec's Temple: (unlock Chloe and LEGO Fighter) Go ahead, call me crazy. I just think Olmec's Temple in Legends of the Hidden Temple makes a acceptable stage.
Black Comet: (after unlocking Shadow) Fight on board the Black Comet but watch out for Black Doom and Diablon!
Songs: I am, Chosen One, All Hail Shadow (remix), Final Haunt, Cryptic Castle, Black Doom, Crisis City (Sonic Next Gen)
Megalo Station: (Play 50 Brawls as Sonic or Shadow) Brawl on a platform and experience the thrills of Sonic Riders: Zero Gravity!
Song: Un-Gravitify, Through Traffic, Sonic Riders
LEGO World: (Play 25 Brawls with LEGO Fighter) Fight through the worlds of LEGO.
You first start off at the LEGO Castle. After 30 seconds, you are transported into the LEGO Star Wars universe. Soon, you are in Bionicle Heroes: Thok's Mountain. Then, LEGO Mars Mission, and finally, LEGO City.
Assisted Trophies (My version)
Amy Rose: she's an assisted trophy replacing Shadow. Watch out when she attacks with her hammer!
S.S Sega SSB 86750: Same thing as the Wii acts but a little weaker by 15 percent of damage
Metarex Snake Slith: From my story of LoZ: Enter Hawkins, Slith enters the Brawl. Watch out when he electrifies the stage and whcks you like a fly.
Hedgehogs of Hawk's Pride: Sonia, Manic, and Kali have entered the brawl! Manic bangs on his drums which causes the opponents to get stuck on the ground while Kali kicks them, and Sonia finishes them off with her keyboard.
Trophies
Hawk's Pride:
Hawkins the Fighter
Chloe Scarlett
Ian Narver
Manic the Hedgehog
Sonia the Hedgehog
Kali the Hedgehog
LEGO Fighter
Kildar Hakann
Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
Leonard the Swift
Silvia the Quick
Hawk's Pride
Princess Liane of Gameranna
USS Wii SSB 1802-1a (S.S Wii SSB 1802-1a in the VG)
Nintendo City
Sonic the Hedgehog:
USS Sega SSB 86750 (S.S Sega SSB 86750 in the VG)
Bruce the Hedgehog
Sophia the Hedgehog
I know Shadow is an assisted trophy in Brawl but in my version, he is a playable character. These are his atttacks.
Standard Special Move: Chaos Blast
Side Special Move: Chaos Spear
Up Special Move: Chaos Control
Down Special Move: Spin Charge
Final SMASH: Super Shadow
Taunts
Up: Messes with his spikes
Side: Hovers in the air and says, "Get out of my sight!"
Down: Makes a fist and shouts, "Chaos Control!"
On-screen appearance: Appears out of no where holding a Chaos Emerald
Victory Song: Mission Cleared song from Shadow the Hedgehog
In order to get Shadow here are the tips
-Play Classic Mode as Sonic or Mario (any level)
-Play 325 Brawls
-Get Shadow to join the Subspace Emissary
Of course like Wolf and other characters, Shadow is like them. Go through a door and Shadow appears and challenges you to a match.
Note: In my version, Shadow is hard to get. Even when you have the Smash Ball, he's quick! Mostly play Mario on the Classic Mode, so his blast focuses on one side. But if Shadow misses your attack and lands behind you, you're finish!
Check out this new character I made for Brawl!
LEGO Fighter
-Unlock this guy by playing Olimar on Classic Mode
-Play 225 Brawls
-Get LEGO Fighter join the Subspace Emissary
Standard Special Move: LEGO Bricks
Side Special Move: LEGO Star Wars Blaster
Up Special Move: LEGO Stairs
Down Special Move: Explode
Final Smash: LEGO Vehicles
Taunts
Up: Thrusts its sword in the air as the blade shines
Side: Tries to find its gun in the right and pulls it out from left side. (LEGO Star Wars II: Original Trilogy)
Down: Surfs on its shield and falls off of it, landing on its butt (Like the Storm Troopers in the game)
On-screen appearance: Appears in a pile but builds up into a LEGO Figure
Victory Song: Shortened version of the Bionicle Heroes Hero Mode
Colors
-Usual (red shirt, tan pants, Indian face) to my style
-LEGO Rebel Trooper (blue)
-LEGO Princess Leia (Endor)
-LEGO Luke Skywalker (Jedi)
-LEGO Medieval Knight
-LEGO Han Solo
Jamie the Ninja
Age: 24
Hair Color: Black; wears it in a ponytail
Eye Color: Purple
VA: Amy Palant
Weapon: Ninja Sword
Hawkins’ sister, middle child
Attitude: Brave, determined, a bit snobby
Love Interest: Leonard the Swift?
Info: Jamie the Ninja appears in a red skirt. She has black sleeves, black pants, yellow armbands and on her legs. She also has gray kneecaps. She carries a Ninja Sword that has a brown handle which is unique for most swords which tend to have about the same color. Jamie is also short which tends to make people mistaken her as the youngest of Hawkins’ family. That’s why Jamie tends to act snobby about that.
Jamie was born a year after Hawkins was born. She, along with Hawkins and Neal, were born in a rich family. But unlike the Thorndyke family in Sonic X, their parents don’t have jobs in which they can’t be around to be with their children. While Hawkins was given the title as a fighter, Jamie was given the title as a ninja.
There is no proof that Jamie likes Leonard but there were couples of hints where they develop feelings for each other.
Powers
-Turns invisible
-Can climb walls
-Can sneak up to enemies w/o being caught
Weakness
-W/o her sword, she can't perform her powers
-Acts snobby
Neal the Spy
Age: 23
Hair Color: (can’t tell, he’s wearing a mask)
Eye Color: Brown
VA: Rob Paulsen
Video Games: Ryan Drummond
Weapon: Duke’s gun
Hawkins’ younger brother, youngest child
Attitude: Brave, determined, a bit dumb like Hawkins
Love Interest?
Info: Neal appears in green clothes and a green mask. Green shirt, light green pants and inner shirt. He also wears body armor and black gloves. Neal also happens to be the youngest of Hawkins’ siblings. Neal does tend to act like Hawkins sometimes. Saying dumb things or stupid questions people find annoying, funny to the audience.
Neal was given the title as a spy while Hawkins was a fighter and Jamie a ninja. He born a year after Jamie was born.
Neal was given a special type of gun called, “Duke’s gun.” No one knows where the name Duke comes from but Neal was given this. Unlike other guns, this gun fires special bullets and never runs out of ammo. Except Neal has to remember to recharge the batteries on it or he’s done for. But his gun also carries a grappling hook so he can swing from place to place. He also has to learn not to run into buildings. And being active, Neal runs the fastest without Hawkins Sword-Rocketing.
If you people are wondering what I mean by these three given titles as a fighter, a ninja, and a spy, a strange man came by to the family one rainy night and told their parents what they will be given as.
Powers
-Runs the fastest when Hawkins doesn't SR
-His gun can shoot grappling hooks from one building to the other
-"Duke's gun" fires unlimited ammo and special bullets
Weakness
-Acts like Hawkins sometimes
-Sometimes forget to charge up "Duke's gun" and cannot attack
Chloe Scarlett
Age: 23
Hair: Red
Eyes: Purple
VA: Lisa Ortiz
Member of Hawks' Pride
Ian Narver's girlfriend
Knows how to do karate
Attitude: Acts like Amy Rose most of the time except she doesn't hug the stuffing out of Hawkins or gets all teary eyed when something happens to him
Weapon: Ninja Sword
Love Interest: Ian Narver
Info: Hawkins met Chloe after the SSB broke up. He needed to form a group to fight against evil if Nintendo City was attacked. Chloe came up to him and wanted to join him. After showing him karate moves, she was in.
Chloe has the Amy Rose attitude, as Hawkins would say. But like I said before, she doesn't totally act like Amy. She justs acts all bossy and gets angry really easy when something good is going on and ends up terrible. She takes out her Ninja Sword. One thing Chloe is not good at is cooking. Compare to Amy being a good cook, Chloe sucks!! One time, she wanted to make Peach's recipe of Vegatable soup and this is what Hawkins said after tasting it.
"Chloe, I think you made Peach's soup 150 percent worse."
There was no relationship between Chloe and Hawkins. They were only friends. So when Chloe found out about Hawkins and Liane being together, she didn't mind. Her boyfriend now is Ian Narver.
Power
(none)
Weakness
-A bad cook
-Gets angry very easily
Chloe Scarlett is a newcomer to the SSB in the latest video game. Here are her attacks and how to unlock her.
-Play Hawkins in Classic Mode
-Play 350 Brawls as Hawkins
-Get Chloe to join the Subspace Emissary
(I honestly think Jigglypuff was a bad choice for the makers of the SSB to choose. So Chloe replaces Jigglypuff)
Standard Special Move: Ninja Sword
Side Special Move: Spinning Blade
Up Special Move: Chain
Down Special Move: Blade Pound
Final SMASH: USS Wii SSB 1802-1a
Taunts
Up: Takes her sword out and throws it up in the air, kicks it, and catches it saying, "Think you're better than I am?"
Side: Takes her sword but shouts, "Don't mess with me!"
Down: Looks around and rolls her eyes
On screen appearance: Same thing like Hawkins
Silvia the Quick
Age: 26
Hair: Red (and I mean red!)
Eyes: Red
VA: Veronica Taylor
Attitude: Likes to flirt with boys, daring
Weapon: The Silver Staff
Love Interest: Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
Silvia, along with Leonard came from the future to stop Hawkins. But Silvia wanted to come with Leonard because she was bored and had nothing to do. She and Leonard appear in Hawk's Pride: The Movie. This experience is similar to Sonic the Next Gen when Silver and Blaze came from the future.
Silvia has always love flirting with boys. The main boy she has set her eyes on is Hawkeye the Dark Fighter. Because of his muscles and his attitude, she loved him ever since. Hawkeye finds it annoying and when he threatens to kill her, he couldn't because deep down inside him, he loves her.
As her title as "The Quick", it means she's quick to know what is going on. Not quick on her feet. That's why she hangs out with Leonard to give him helpful tips.
Kali the Hedgehog (Her name is pronounce like Callie's name in the SWAT Kats)
Age: 15
Color: Gold color
Eye Color: Teal
VA: Lacey Chabert
Love Interest: Me
Info: Kali met Manic when they were at the Nintendo City Fun Center (Like Treasure Island Fun Center here in Florida). They bumped into each other and Kali fell in love with him. Manic didn't notice she started to like him until she came over to him and thanked him. She couldn't keep her eyes off him and then Manic said what the heck! It was love at first sight. Until a few months later, Kali and Manic broke up and since I came in and was adopted by Ian, Kali and I started to love each other.
(I know it's strange to love your own OC, but some people do)
Hawk's Pride became suspicous why he was so happy-go-looking coming into the HP Depot (the same building as the SSB Depot). When they met Kali, Sonia became suspicous about her and thinks she's working for Kildar Hakann (their enemy). But she realize Kali wasn't after being kidnapped by a gang in Nintendo City. After Manic rescued her, with the help of Hawkins, Silver, and Sonia, Hawkins had appointed her a member of Hawk's Pride.
Outside, she's a hot looking hedgehog but under her shirt, are scars are abuse. She even has a scar above her right eye. That's why she has bangs over her right eye to hide it. Ever since she was little, her parents would abuse her everyday for no reason. She got slapped everyday, whipped by her dad 10 times for doing a bad thing, and get her hair pulled by her mother. Worsed of all, her father would rape her and well, you-know-what.
Her sister from college took care of her by sneaking her out of the house and giving her food and water. Even taking her to the hospital to get her wounds stitched up. But one night, Kali's parents caught her sister taking her away and they chased after her. Kali's sister took her far away from her home and into Nintendo City. She forced Kali to hide in a orphanage and stay there until she can leave. Kali ran from her and as she was a few feet from her sister, she witness her getting shot by her parents. Kali cried all night and to the Nintendo City Orphanage. Her scar over her eye was caused by her dad when he nearly misses her with a bullet. The bullet shot out of the gun and streaks across above her eye.
Since that very day, Kali has kept her scars away from everyone except for Hawk's Pride that found out about it.
Powers
-Tears of Healing/ Acid
Weakness
-Cries easily
-Gives up easily
I basically got her name from this girl I see at school and used to think is cute before I realize she has a boyfriend. NOT SAYING HER NAME!
Leonard the Swift
Age: 28?
Hair: Grey and Black
Eyes: Grey
VA: Tom Kenny/ Andrew Rannells
Attitude: Strange, naive, mysterious, stubborn
Leonard the Swift was from the future. He went into the past to kill Hawkins for some reason. But he couldn't appear in what he looks like so he decided to disguise himself as Hawkins' past look. No one in Hawk's Pride cared about it until Hawkins started to get suspicious because if he appears in his past look, he has to act like him. Leonard got angry and left. Never to be seen again until Hawk's Pride: The Movie.
Powers
-Gloves of Jango
Weakness
-Acts naive
-Jumps into action
Princess Liane of Gameranna
Age: 17
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Eyes: Teal
VA: Hayden Panettiere
Attitude: Brave, determine,
Love Interest: Hawkins the Fighter
Princess Liane is just a princess ruling a planet. She carries a strange power that can destroy a continent. Kildar Hakann heard of this power and decided to kidnap her for that power. When he launched an assault on Gameranna, he wanted to take her with him. But Hawkins the Fighter Sword Rocketed into action to save her. Since she met him, she fell in love with him.
When Hawkins took Liane to a field, she started talking about leaving her city and see the wild outdoors. She thanked Hawkins for bringing her there. Later on through their adventure, they are ambushed by Francisco the Wrath who framed Hawkins for his actions, as told by Leonard. He shot an arrow that pierced into Hawkins' heart and he died in Liane's arms. Hawk's Pride along with Hawkeye and Leonard saw the whole thing and tried to find some way how to bring back Hawkins. Leonard suggested they use seven Smash Balls and bring him back to life as Ultimate Hawkins. They succeeded and Hawkins was back in the saddle.
I know this sounds similar to Sonic the Hedgehog Next Gen but I wanted to make a parody out of it. It is also strange for me to make a girl who is 17 and Hawkins who is 25. But that's how I made them.
Powers
(none)
Weakness
-afraid of people getting her autographs after being revealed as the Princess of Gameranna
To me, it has been heard that in the next SSB game, Liane is going to be in it. IN MY VERSION!!
For those of you wondering I changed her name to Liane, don't even bother asking!! I named this girl after the hottest girl I met in middle school and high school. I then found out that she became homosexual!! I can't stand starring at her now! It gives me nightmares!!
VG (Video Game)
The Flags of VG
http://ian-narver.deviantart.com/art/The-Flags-of-VG-82726736
VG is a planet 3.0 million light years away from Earth. It was once owned by Nintendo in 1981 and later with Sega that owned two continents the same as Nintendo in 1991. But Nintendo was going bankrupt because it coudn't hold two continents. But in 1994, Playstation came to its rescue and bought its second continent. When Sega decided to discontinue their game systems in 1998, they wanted to stay on VG. But because of a strict rule saying every continent must a game system mascot in order to stay on VG. So the crew of the Sega separated and live within the citzens of Nintendo, Playstation, and now XBOX which arrived in 2002.
Earth and VG work together by trading. When Earth needs game systems of Nintendo, Playstation, or XBOX, the continents send out their game systems for the citizens of Earth. But VG needed vehicles for transport. If Earth gets the game systems, the car companies are ordered to ship their vehicles into space and to VG.
The VG Director, owner of VG, has strict rules. He and President Bush negotiated a few things. If famous actors and singers want to visit VG, they must ask the VG Director and Bush for permission.
Sonic the Hedgehog
Bruce the Hedgehog
Age: 15 (Supposed to be)
Color: Dark Green with Orange streaks
Eye color: Same as the GUN Commander
VA: Sean Schemmel
Love Interest: Amy Rose
Bruce looks like Shadow but is green and orange. He wears shoes that looks like Sonic's shoes from Sonic Adventure 2: Battle, but are the color purple with blue-lining. He is much nicer than Shadow but has the same attitude like him. He hasn't lost his memory like Shadow did but can't remember how he was created. After hearing what Sonic did to Amy (breaking up with her), Bruce has not forgiven Sonic for what he did. The only friends he has are Sonic's friends. He is another rival of Shadow. The strange thing he can't figure out is his weird nightmares he keeps having every night.
Info: Bruce once worked for GUN. He was made around the same time Shadow was. He was also created by Gerald Robotnik like Shadow but for GUN unit. But before the GUN Commander was in command, Bruce was kept in his container for 50 years until his awakening. His job was to kill Shadow for the GUN Commander. As he came on board the USS Sega, attempting to kill Shadow, he accidentally befriended Sonic and his pals. He also fell in love as he laid his eyes on Amy Rose. Ever since he's been with the Sonic crew, the job GUN ordered him to do was forgotten
In Sonic the Hedgehog (2006 video game) He's a playable character like Sonic, Shadow, and Silver. He has no idea where he belongs. Ever since he left GUN, he wants to know where he truly belongs. He discovers that Silver is attacking Sonic (you know why) and he is wondering if he should help Sonic or Silver. But leaves to find more info. Later throughout his adventure, Amy grabs him, mistakens him as Sonic, and slaps him. When Amy realizes why he is in their world, Bruce begins explaining why and what he is doing. during one of his jobs, Mephiles orders Bruce to destory the palace and kill Silver. But when Bruce meets Silver and is about kill him, Silver throws him aside and warns him never mess with him or he'll kill him just he wanted to do on Sonic. After learning his lesson, he decided to use Chaos Control with a Chaos Emerald on his robotic arm and get revenge on Mephiles. Just when Shadow was about to leave in the future, Bruce jumped into action and tried to kill Mephiles. But he failed when he, Shadow, and Omega were winning. At the end of his adventure, Bruce fails on his quest on decides to give up. But he sees Amy crying because Sonic had told her to get away from him and that their relationship is over. Bruce walks over and comforts her. Their relationship then begins and the adventure is over. But Bruce gets very angry as he changes his arm to the crossbow as he growls, "Sonic, don't think this is over!"
Powers
-Infra-red vision
-Can hover for 5 minutes
-Spin Dash as fast as Sonic and Shadow
Robotic arm changes into:
-Crossbow
-Gun
-Flamethrower
-Bazooka
-NEW: Beam Sword
Weakness
-Can't run as fast as Sonic or Shadow
-Cannot induce Chaos Control without hooking a Chaos Emerald into his robotic arm
-Cannot do the powers Shadow can do
Sophia the Hedgehog
Age: 8
Color: Fuschia
Eye Color: Same as Bruce
VA: Amy Birnbaum
Love Interest:
Sophia has her mother's attitude and is always over protective with her parents. Whenever Bruce or Amy try to stop her, Sophia stops them and tells them she can take care of herself. Sometimes when she hears Sonic say she acts like Amy, she takes Amy's hammer and throws it at him.
Info: Sophia was brought from the future by Silver. Her father was gone and her mother was gravely injured when war broke out against GUN and the Black Arms. Sophia was taken to Silver to be cared and parented. Silver took Sophia turn in as her mother died. When Silver went back in time to see how she was doing, Sophia begged him to take her. So Silver took her to her soon-to-be parents, Bruce Hedgehog and Amy Rose. They took care of her from then on. But Sophia can be a real brat to them which annoys her young parents and always want what she wants.
Powers
-Runs as fast as Sonic
-Psychic Abilities
-Creates force fields for protections
-Uses Amy's hammer
Weakness
-Acts like a real brat
-Spoiled very easily
Others
Devon Reid
Age: 16
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
VA: Darren Dunstan
Love Interest: Diana Lombard
Works with Martin, Diana, and Java for the Center
He also happens to be MOM's son.
Not much to tell about his past. Just that MOM and his father Devenn Reid had a divorce when MOM found out Devenn was doing illegal experiments on humans. They made an agreement that Devon would stay with them for 5 years each. After coming to Torrington Academy, Devon fell in love just after meeting Diana when she was late for a test she had to take. He then met Martin after scaring the wits out of Diana. Then Java when they released him from the cell inside the Center.
But Devon only stayed with them for 3 years for Devenn had came back to take Devon by force. MOM refused and Devenn captured her as bait. The agents were sent to the future because Devenn had released the monsters they had captured before. But before Devon could do anything, Devenn ordered the Chaos Beast to attack him. Diana got in Devon's way and took the blame. Diana died in Devon's arms and Devon never forgave Devenn after that. After being sucked into a portal to some place else, Diana was revived and everyone was happy after that.
1st Lt. "Ace" Connor
Age: 24
Hair: Dirty blonde
Eyes: Blue
Likes: Hanging around with Hawkeye and Trapper (Later BJ), and his girlfriend
Dislikes: Frank and Hot Lips (Mostly Frank)
Fears: Sleeping pills (allergic reaction), losing his girlfriend
Job: Surgeon for the 4077th, student at Tokyo Med. School.
Love: His girlfriend, Megan back in Tokyo, pulling pranks on Frank, Oreo cookies
Actor: Harry Anderson
Info: Ace has always wanted to be a doctor, but not in a war. When he was sent to Tokyo Med, he was assigned to the 4077th and test his studies. Just after staying in the 4077th, he became friends with Hawkeye and Trapper. But after reviving Trapper's dying patient, Ace thought he would be glad to hear from his teachers. But that changed when the patient died and Ace never forgave himself. When Frank ruined his chance on feeling better, Ace blew his top off and let out all of his anger on Frank. Ace wrote a letter to Megan about his first adventure in the 4077th.
Ace got his nickname because his patients always end up good as new. The only part he doesn't ace in is tests.
Mace Holton
Actor:
Occupation: Jedi Master
Mace Holton is a Jedi that was found and trained by Master Yoda. After he was fully trained, he was able to leave and help the Rebels defeat the Imperials. Along the way, he met a woman name Lacey that he fell in love with. They got married but had to separate across the galaxy. Mace ended up on Cloud City and became a helper to Lando. Soon the crew of the Millenium Falcon came and Mace had to hide from Darth Vader until the time was right.
This is the cast of shows in my style
CSI: Las Vegas
Gil Grissom: Mario
Catherine Willows: Zero Suit Samus
Nick Stokes: Hawkins the Fighter
Sara Sidle: Amy Rose, Princess Peach
Warrick Brown: Captain Falcon
Greg Sanders: Sonic the Hedgehog
Dr. Robinson: Dr. Mario
Captain Jim Brass: GUN Commander
Detective Sofia Curtis: Princess Daisy
MASH
Captain Benjamin Franklin "Hawkeye" Pierce: Hawkins the Fighter
Captain John "Trapper" McIntyre: Fox McCloud
Captain BJ Hunnicutt: Link
Lt. Col. Henry Blake: Eugene H. Krabs
Col. Sherman T. Potter: Ian Narver
Major Margaret "Hot Lips" Houlihan: Chloe Scarlett
Major Frank Burns: Wolf O'Donnell
Major Charles E. Winchester III: Squidward Tentacles
Corporal Walter "Radar" O'Reilly:
Corporal Maxwell Q. Klinger: Captain Falcon
Lt. Father Mulcahy: Shepard Book
Korean War: VG War
Enemy: Playstation
United States: Nintendo
Allies: XBOX
Star Trek: TNG
Captain Jean-Luc Picard: Ian Narver
Commander William T. Riker: Link
Lt. Geordi La Forge: Hawkins the Fighter, Jake Clawson (Razor)
Lt. Worf: Chance Furlong (T-Bone)
Dr. Crusher: Chloe Scarlett
Counselor Deanna Troi: Princess Zelda
Lt. Cmdr. Data: Splice the Incredible Crash Dummy
Ensign Wesley Crusher: Fox McCloud
Lt. Tasha Yar:
USS Enterprise NCC 1701-D: USS Gamecube SSB 1802
USS Enterprise NCC 1701-E: USS Wii SSB 1802-1a
Star Trek: Voyager
Captain Katherine Janeway: Bruce the Hedgehog
Commander Chakotay: Amy Rose
Lt. Tuvok: Knuckles the Echidna
Lt. Tom Paris: Miles "Tails" Prower
B'Elanna Torres: Either Taila the Fox or Erinbubble92
The Doctor:
Neelix: Vector the Crocodile
Harry Kim: Espio the Chameleon
Kes: Cosmo the Seedrian
Seven of Nine: Shadow the Hedgehog
USS Voyager NCC 74656: USS SEGA SSB 86750
Sonic X
Sonic the Hedgehog: Hawkins the Fighter
Miles "Tails" Prower: Sonia the Hedgehog, Silver the Hedgehog
Amy Rose: Chloe Scarlett
Knuckles the Echidna: Ian Narver
Shadow the Hedgehog: Hawkeye the Dark Fighter
Cream the Rabbit: Kali the Hedgehog
Cheese the Chao: LEGO Fighter
Chris Thorndyke: Alan Major (me)
Rouge the Bat: Zero Suit Samus
Vector the Crocodile: Captain Falcon
Espio the Chameleon: Metal Gear Snake
Charmy Bee: Lucas
Dr. Eggman: Kildar Hakann
Bocoe and Decoe: Wario and Waluigi
Bokkun: Bowser Jr.
Cosmo the Seedrian: Princess Liane of Gameranna
Metarexes: The Pirakas
If you have any questions, send me an email. But if it involves my pairings, don't even think about it!
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