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Author has written 42 stories for NCIS: Los Angeles, West Wing, NCIS, House, M.D., CSI: Miami, Mentalist, CSI: New York, CSI, JAG, and Army Wives. So, uh, I'm Amber. I'm 16 years old . I'm a senior! (holy crap, how the hell did that happen?). My friends say I'm insane. They're probably right, proof being that big part of my hair is purple--and no, my natural haircolor isn't purple!--and that I'm obnoxiously loud. I have a Facebook, MySpace, Hi5, LiveJournal, but I'm still figuring out how the last one works, but any-w. My home away from home is Curacao, which is the island right next to mine. For those who are wondering, Aruba is in the Dutch Caribbean, close to Venezuela, so when you're looking at a map, look for the coast of Venezuela and you should find it. Hmm, what else? I hate these things, what am I supposed to say about myself? I have a lot of friends, I'm a volunteer in Red Cross. I'm in Kiwanis Key Club Colegio Arubano. I love to write. I equally as much love to read. Favorite book? Don't got one. Although my loves are My Sister's Keeper, Plain Truth (both Jodi Picoult), Anything Jackie Collins & Simone van der Vlugt. Aruba is a Dutch colony, so I speak Dutch. And English. And a bit'o Spanish. And our native dialect Papiamento. Funnily enough, in Papiamento, the word papiamento, means to talk. I've lived a few places in my life. I love to travel, especially Europe. I'm probably gonna study in the States, though. Enough about me. Just skip my whole profile and check out my stories...
Jenny/Gibbs - Tony/Ziva - Abby/McGee (NCIS) Harm/Mac - Bud/Harriet (JAG) Josh/Donna - Ainsley/Sam - Will/Kate - Abby/Jed - Charlie/Zoey (The West Wing) Eric/Calleigh - Ryan/Valera or Natalia - Horatio/Yelina or Natalia (CSI: Miami) House/Cuddy - Cameron/Chase - Wilson/Amber (House, M.D.) NOTICE After a review and a few PM's back and forth between me and Pandora of Ithilien, we set up a list of Jibbs rules. We came up with the idea of writing a story to every rule. So, after a few more conversations, we opened up the FanFiction account Pan's Critic -- http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1996168/Pans_Critic If all goes well there should be 30 stories, and you'll learn the Jibbs rules as we go. Hope you guys at least check it out! (27/03/2009) I have bad news and I have good news. The bad news is, Code of Honor has gone on a Margarita Safari. I sincerely do apologize. It simply said 'Semper Fi' and left. I am not kidding. So, it means, that CoH will be on Hiatus. I'm not happy with what I was gonna post, and I need to set the plot and goals straight. And t'will take me time, since it's the first time in my life that I'm doing it. I just think it's become very unorganized, and I still want to maintain the quality. The good news is, I'm starting a new series. Well, more like one-shot series. Well, no, cause the next one is pretty long. The first one is Mexican Heels, and I will continue. The working title for the next one (that's already over 10 000 words) is Mexican Man. Assume what you will. It's only half-way done. (30/10/2009) I turned 16 yesterday. And they broke into my house and stole almost anything with a battery. Yesterday. On my birthday. So the updates will be slower (slower? Yes, slower, I know I've barely been updating, but school has been hell). Like I said, school is hell and I really need to graduate this year, seeing as the school I'm attending turned 50. There will be a big thing with graduation and stuff, so I really have to graduate. I'm sorry :( That website I mentioned in Kitchen Antics, is called Write-or-Die. Seriously, everybody should at least try it once. It works really well when on a deadline! http://lab.drwicked.com/writeordie.html Also, Kitchen Antics is written in response to the January 1Hour2Write Challenge. The link to their Community on LiveJournal: I am always up for co-authoring so just PM me or something. - Amber (a.k.a. MyOwnWorstCritic) P.S.: Add me on MSN ambersybesma@hotmail.com, or AIM: 'ChickRubiano', I'd love to talk about anything! | |||||||||||
1. Meditation, Dancing and Whistling, Oh My! reviewsShe uncapped it and promptly held it upside down over her head, drenching herself completely in water. NaKed/NateKensi, 10 drabbles challengeNCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,627 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-15-09 - Kensi B. & Nate G. - Complete2. Da Capo al Fine reviewsWith her forehead against his chin, she closed her eyes and trusted him to lead, giving way to the sensations in her body at being close to him. SMacked, MacStella, very AUCSI: New York - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,670 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-7-09 - Mac T. & Stella B. - Complete3. The Power of Observation reviewsYou need to take care of yourself, young lady. A flesh wound is still an injury. I think you should go home, Hetty said. NaKed, NateKensi, minimal spoiler for today's episode.NCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,626 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-20-09 - Kensi B. & Nate G. - Complete4. Drabble My Life » reviews26 drabbles, one for each letter of the alphabet. HarmMac, no spoilers for now.JAG - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 9 - Words: 3,702 - Reviews: 76 - Updated: 10-17-09 - Published: 8-22-09 - MacKenzie, S. & Rabb, H.5. The Romeo to my Juliette reviewsThe ding of the coffee machine caused him to stand up straight and her to reluctantly pull her eyes away from his nice backside. NateKensi, NaKed. No spoilersNCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,424 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 10-14-09 - Nate G. & Kensi B. - Complete6. Colorful Markings reviewsI know things, just like I know that you’ve been wearing your hair down because of a hickey you got while making out in the bathroom, Hetty said. Kensi/Nate, no spoilersNCIS: Los Angeles - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,473 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 10-7-09 - Kensi B. & Nate G. - Complete7. Wicked Ways of Girlfriends Past reviewsNow the handcuffs he could get, but he couldn’t fathom why Jenny would have worn three different lingerie sets. JennyGibbs, set after season 4, because of a brief appearance by Hollis Mann. Take rating seriously...NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,991 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 9-20-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete8. No Matter What reviewsRight there, right then, he vowed to forever take care of her and their unborn child, no matter what. Frank/Denise, slightly AUArmy Wives - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 553 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-17-09 - Denise S. & Frank S. - Complete9. Mexican Man » reviewsGibbs get a surprise, Jenny is promoted and Jackson Gibbs returns. Second in the Mexican series. Post-Judgment Day, Jibbs. Taking rating seriously.NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,767 - Reviews: 67 - Updated: 8-16-09 - Published: 7-21-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs10. Fields of Fall reviewsMac and Harm meet in a different setting. No spoilers for now, Harm/Mac eventually, AU.JAG - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,866 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-10-09 - MacKenzie, S. & Rabb, H.11. Code of Honor » reviewsAlternate ending to 'Honor Code'. What if they arrived too late and Lt. Commander was dead? What would happen to Zach? And what role would he play in getting two people together? Jibbs, JennyJethroNCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 37,086 - Reviews: 236 - Updated: 7-20-09 - Published: 1-22-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs & J. Sheppard12. It's In A Kiss reviewsShe does this thing when we kiss. Harm/Mac, no spoilers.JAG - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 6-22-09 - MacKenzie, S. & Rabb, H. - Complete13. Presidents' Day » reviewsThe day turned from happy, to horrid, in a matter of seconds. Implied Eric/Calleigh, for now...CSI: Miami - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,074 - Reviews: 64 - Updated: 6-16-09 - Published: 4-30-09 - Eric D. & Calleigh D.14. European vs American reviewsShe saw amusement flicker in his blue eyes, angering her even further. Jibbs, AU.NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 933 - Reviews: 23 - Published: 6-15-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs & J. Sheppard15. Four Seasons of Love reviewsJenny felt herself being swung back, and she sensed it wasn’t something good, so she clung onto Gibbs, bringing them both down in the pile of leaves. Jibbs, very AU. No spoilers.NCIS - Rated: K - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,409 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 6-14-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete16. Red reviewsAll of a sudden, the ever-present twinkle in her eyes became more pronounced, as her lips curved into a full smile. She knew what he was thinking about. Continuation of my drabble 'I Know You Want Me', Jibbs. Take rating seriously...NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,553 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 6-12-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete17. Temptation, Cookie Dough and Vegetarians, Oh My! reviewsI’ve always loved her, I love her and will continue to love her ‘til the end of forever. Jibbs, no spoilers. 10 drabbles challenge.NCIS - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,035 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 6-11-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs & J. Sheppard - Complete18. Voodoo, Lipstick and Coffee, Oh My! reviewsShe heard soft whispering and opened her eyes, squinting against the morning sun. Jibbs, no spoilers. 10 drabbles challenge.NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,814 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 5-31-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete19. Just a Boy reviewsCatherine really hoped Lindsay knew what a good guy she had on her hands. No spoilers, no pairings.CSI - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,513 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-29-09 - Catherine W. - Complete20. All Remember The Dangerous Sonata Remix reviewsby Cage Red Hiatt Groban. If someone told him ten years ago he would be here, sitting on a beach, half-covered in sand, with two kids, he would have outright laughed and suggested a psychiatrist. Ten Jisbon drabbles, Lisbon/Jane. Part of a challenge.Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,367 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 5-22-09 - Teresa L. & Patrick J. - Complete21. Kitchen Antics reviewsAnd if she wanted to lay with him all day on the hardwood kitchen floor, they would. SMacked, no spoilers. Written in response to the January 1Hour2Write challenge.CSI: New York - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,395 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 5-6-09 - Mac T. & Stella B. - Complete22. How She Knew reviewsHow did Van Pelt know Rigsby was sick? Tags to the last episode. RVP, Wayne/GraceMentalist - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 393 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5-5-09 - Grace vP. & Wayne R. - Complete23. Two Marines and a Redhead: Take Two reviewsWhy did this always happen to her? Better yet—to them? This time, it was really her father’s own fault. Jibbs, AU fic. Take rating seriously...NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,484 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-25-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete24. Two Marines and a Redhead reviewsShe knew it was a bad idea. Very, very bad. But she couldn’t help herself. And she was sure that he would say the same. Jibbs, AU fic. Take rating seriously...NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,291 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 4-21-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete25. High School Reunion: Iowa Style reviewsGrace receives a letter, and it comes with many a memory. Grace/Wayne, RVP, Rigsby/Van Pelt with smudges of Jisbon, coming in later chapters. Backstory found in Kathiann's Blood Red Kiss. Read that first.Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,137 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-19-09 - Grace vP. & Wayne R.26. Therapeutic Baths reviewsHer delicate hands hold the sponge as it dips into the water and then skims over his torso, over his shoulder blades and around his neck. Grace/Wayne or Rigsby/Van Pelt.Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,680 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-14-09 - Wayne R. & Grace vP. - Complete27. Future Dreaming reviewsHer back was pressed firmly against his bare chest, and the arm around her waist kept her unyieldingly in place. Grace/Wayne, Van Pelt/Rigsby, no spoilers.Mentalist - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,381 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 4-4-09 - Grace vP. & Wayne R. - Complete28. Threatened reviewsJenny feels threatened, or so Gibbs says. Jibbs, no spoilers. Take rating seriously...NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,980 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-4-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete29. Mexican Heels reviewsGibbs is on a weekend vacation, and gets the chance to import something unique. Post-Judgement Day, Jibbs.NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,825 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 3-15-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs & J. Sheppard - Complete30. Code of Honor: Behind the Scenes reviewsIt's everything you aren't seeing in CoH. What happens in the bedroom, stays in the bedroom no more. Jibbs, take rating seriously...NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,384 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2-17-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs & J. Sheppard31. New Year's Announcements reviewsThe ring was made of white gold... The team goes to a mandatory New Year's Eve party. CalleighEric. Somewhere between Eric getting shot and Cooper getting fired.CSI: Miami - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,505 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 12-31-08 - Calleigh D. & Eric D. - Complete32. 5 Dollars reviewsShe takes the velvet box from him, while noticing that his fingers are trembling, having nothing to do with the cold. TonyZiva, Post Silent Night.NCIS - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,600 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 12-16-08 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete33. No go ev’a’gain reviewsHe pinned her against the open doorframe of the living room and kissed her. CalleighEric, Hiphuggy. Take rating seriously...CSI: Miami - Rated: M - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,810 - Reviews: 22 - Published: 12-6-08 - Calleigh D. & Eric D. - Complete34. Naked Fun reviewsShe let out a whimper in her sleep and his heart stopped; he had never heard her whimper before. TonyZiva, PostRoadKill. Take rating seriously.NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,888 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 12-5-08 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete35. Tired of Pretending reviewsShe's crying again and his heart breaks. Tony/Ziva, PostCloak. My take on what they meant in the elevator.NCIS - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 806 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 11-20-08 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete36. Family Musings reviewsMy name is Zoë Jennifer Talilah DiNozzo. And I'm going to tell you all about my family. Post-Judgement Day, Tony/Ziva, implied Jenny/Gibbs and Abby/McGeeNCIS - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,311 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11-20-08 - Complete37. Purposefully Annoying reviewsHouseOC, pre-Season4Finale, "Can I go prank one of the nurses? Ooh! Or uncle James’ new assistant? Pretty please?"House, M.D. - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,217 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-15-08 - G. House - Complete38. Of Love and Feelings » reviewsThe first thing she noticed was Tony lying slightly under her, his hand loosely on his chest after being moved from where it previously lay. TonyZiva, Post Last Man Standing and Agent Afloat.NCIS - Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,224 - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 10-31-08 - Published: 10-19-08 - Tony D. & Ziva D.39. Of Hurt and Romance reviewsThe first time, they met in a bar. The second time was a nightclub. Tony/Ziva. Ten Tiva drabblesNCIS - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,883 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-26-08 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete40. Of Boxes and Bubblewrap reviewsThe boy and girl were playing with the bubblewrap in the box. JoshDonna, PostSeries. drabble.West Wing - Rated: K - English - Family/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-30-08 - Josh L. & Donna M. - Complete41. Quarters, Dimes, Nickels & Pennies reviewsThe boy was enjoying torturing his mother by banging a wooden spoon on three different pans. WillKate, PostSeriesWest Wing - Rated: T - English - Romance/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,532 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-29-08 - Will B. - Complete42. Semblance of Normal reviewsBut when they were together, they reached a semblance of normal and that’s all either of them ever needed. WillKate, PostSeriesWest Wing - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,599 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-23-08 - Will B. - Complete
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