| Konoha's White Fang |
Author has written 8 stories for Naruto, and Bleach. "Kakashi and Sakura would never live forever (but) the story of their love for each other was even more legendary than the Legendary Sannin themselves." --From "Fragments" by bones-angel, prompt number 38 "Forever-- The story writing progress for each chapter is measured by percentage at the bottom. (Idea: AgateLinks) Deviant Art account: YouTube account: http://www.youtube.com/user/KuchikiProductions FictionPress account: http://www.fictionpress.com/~konohaswhitefang Ok...first, I'm going to be super busy this year, because -hey- who would've imagined that the eleventh year was going to be this difficult?! Really, I've never experienced anything like it in my life. So, I'm really sorry for those who are waiting for an update. Just wish me good luck, because I have a bad feeling about this year. Well... I'm 16 years old and I absolutely love writing and reading stories in Fan-Fiction. I'm actually quite glad to have found this site as I find a lot of pleasure in writing Fics, but my father always tells me to write something original instead of wasting my time, yet I can't seem to be able to do that. What I love most is criticizing what other people write because I know that it's the only way for them to get better, therefore try not to be mad at me if I were to say something cruel about your story, as it's for your own good. And I must note that I tend to write more than one story at a time but not give them the same attention. As I may be more attentive to one of them, but I can assure you that I will never abandon a story. Anyway, I'm always open for more stories, I mean if you have any story and you believe that it's good then feel free to send it to me or send me the link. Finally, I hope to see great achievements in this site so don't let me down. And always remember, writing comes from the heart and not from the mind so please enjoy doing this and let your feelings flow and not your mind work (In terms of writing stories only not in real life). Thanks a lot to my dear and best friend Taylor Swift who so kindly wrote two poems for me "Friends in May, Strangers in September" and "White Gown" Favorite Characters: Hatake Kakashi (Naruto), Alucard (Hellsing), Kurosaki Ichigo/Hichigo (Bleach), Grimmjow Jeagerjaques (Bleach), Kain Akatsuki (Vampire Knight) Mitsui Hisashi (SLAM DUNK) I have so many more but I guess I have to limit my favorite characters to those. You see, for each anime I watch, I find a new favorite character so even I'm finding it hard to keep count of my favorite characters. Favorite Couples: Kakashi Х Sakura ( Naruto ) Ichigo Х Rukia ( Bleach ) Urahara Х Yoruichi ( Bleach ) Kain X Ruka (Vampire Knight) I don't tolerate Yuri, Yaoi, slash, shounen-ai, shoujo-ai or Mary Sues. Manga/Anime: Naruto, Naruto Shippuuden, Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children, Rorouni Kenshin, Black Cat, Dragon Ball Z, Dragon Ball GT, Dragon Ball Kai, Hunter X Hunter, Bleach, Death Note, Fruits Basket, Ouran High School Host Club, Vampire Knight, Vampire Knight Guilty, Yamato Nadeshiko Shichi Henge, Fushigi No Umi No Nadia, Hellsing, SLAM DUNK. Music: My taste varies, sometimes I love loud and noisy music and other times I prefer it to be slow and gentle. But my favorite artists and bands are: Red, Skillet, Linkin Park, Simple Plan, Evanessence, Hoobastank, Lifehouse, Our Lady Peace, Secondhand Serenade, Staind, Three Days Grace and 30 Seconds To Mars. I'm Lebanese and I speak Arabic, English and a little Japanese. My favorite colors are crimson red, pitch black and pure white, and I adore wolves. Yes, my favorite animal is the wolf. Also, I ADORE Basketball, especially after watching SLAM DUNK again. Basketball totally rocks! HOW TO GET GOOD REVIEWS: (Tips from Kakashidiot) 1. Make sure you have a mood. 2. Flowing dialogue that's interesting. 3. Show don't tell. 4. Interesting ideas. 5. Good scenic/character descriptions that don't bog you down. 6. Well thought out plot (not always necessary) 7. SPELL CHECK! Or better yet, get a beta reader! 8. Warn people of stuff. Ie. Character death, YAOI, Yuri, SHOUTA, Non-con, swearing, violence. People need to know what they're getting into. Seriously. STEPS TO GOOD DIALOGUE! (Tips from Kakashidiot) A) Keep the sentences short. B) Don't always end each sentence with the person's name (Iruka said, Kakashi groaned) etc. C) Don't always write 'he said, she said', you can write other verbs like 'groaned' 'whined' 'complained' 'roared'. D) Listen to actual conversations in your house or at school listen to the patterns, yeah, you'll look weird, but it's good reference. E) People don't talk with good grammar. Put in enough good grammar so that people understand you, but that's it. So it's okay to have incomplete sentences. F) Instead of bogging your fictions down with heavy pieces of character/scenic description, incorporate it into dialogue and thought and squeeze it between the action. G) On the other hand, don't let your dialogue take over, make sure people know where they are and what the characters were doing. H) Read other people's fan-fiction who have good dialogue and note how they format their stuff. Formatting is another important factor for getting reviews. especially when it comes to dialogue. nobody wants to read a dialogue piece all bunched together in 1 BIG paragraph! Kakashi's Blood Line Limit: I'm planning on re-writing the few first chapters because I'm not exactly pleased with how they came out to be. Besides, I think that I messed up a lot, the grammar needs to be checked again and the same for the spelling and the punctuation. So please don't judge me by this story. News: Planning a special surprise for my favorite readers. The stories' progress Breathe Your Life Into Me - Chapter 11 & 12 100...100 Done. I Need You Tonight - Chapter 6 & 7 100...100 Done. You've been on the computer for hours on no end, reading numerous fanfictions, copy this onto your profile, and add your name to this list: danyan, Zutara Lover, Black'n'red'Butterfly, Enrica(real name)(I always change my penname)(tehehehe) PurpleBunniesWillRuleTheWorld, Roxxi-and-Ali, IsabellaMarieSwan123, Paper Hearts and Paper Cuts, mahalo4ursupport, Kuro Uchiha, Sacra Nox,kagome yuna's daughter, Justified Assasin, Haruka-Hime, Shinsei Tonbo, hellbutterfly421, Lost Angel III, Konoha's White Fang... ~JOIN THE ICHIRUKI PARADE~ SPREAD LOVE THE ICHIRUKI WAY. If you believe that Ichigo and Rukia are meant for each other, paste this in your profile. If you believe that Black Sun is meant for White Moon, paste this in your profile. If you believe that Rukia belongs to Ichigo and Ichigo belongs to Rukia, paste this in your profile. If you believe that they are perfect for each other, paste this in your profile. If you believe that they love each other, paste this in your profile. If you do not believe in IchiHime, paste this in your profile. If you hate IchiHime, paste this in your profile. If you believe that IchiRuki shall prevail, paste this in your profile. IF YOU LOVE ICHIRUKI, PASTE THIS IN YOUR PROFILE! ~ICHIRUKI IS LOVE. BITTER OR SWEET, IT SCREAMS: LOVE!~ -Posted by: Lost Angel III- This is how I want Ichigo to look like in his complete hollow form. (not mine) The best of luck in writing and I really hope for you guys to love my stories. If anyone has any suggestions, just PM me and I'll take everything you say into consideration. Have a great time surfing through this site. | |||||
1. I Need You Tonight » reviewsSequel to Kakashi's Blood Line Limit. "NO!" With each falling tear, a piece of her heart fell as the bitter truth pierced holes into her aching heart. Life was unfair, literally. KakaSaku.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 7 - Words: 35,810 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 10-20-09 - Published: 3-18-09 - Kakashi H. & Sakura H.2. Breathe Your Life Into Me » reviewsIchiRuki, for it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. "Thank you, Rukia."Bleach - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 64,439 - Reviews: 72 - Updated: 10-20-09 - Published: 6-21-08 - Ichigo K. & Rukia K.3. Gone reviewsCrying was my only resort but I couldn’t do it, I wouldn’t do it. I promised him to stay strong and that’s what I was going to do. For him, for only him. KakaSaku.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 921 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-13-09 - Kakashi H. & Sakura H. - Complete4. Kakashi's blood line limit » reviewsThe Hatake bloodline was classified as a forbidden jutsu that's why Kakashi never knew about it. What will happen when he finds out about it and what will he have to endure because of it?Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 23 - Words: 58,288 - Reviews: 151 - Updated: 8-6-09 - Published: 11-26-07 - Kakashi H. - Complete5. Crawling in the Dark reviewsWhen all you see is darkness and your mind blames it all on one person, will you be able to let anyone into your hard shell of a heart? KakaSaku - AU. On Hiatus for the time being.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,299 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-23-09 - Kakashi H. & Sakura H.6. Limits reviewsOne-shot. When you think that all is gone and that you're alone in this world where no one cares about you. You'll be surprised to know that someone is there for you when darkness envelops you. KenMashi.Bleach - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,784 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-1-09 - Kensei M. & Mashiro - Complete7. My Happy Ending reviewsAU- One-shot! IchiRuki. Love is like a shooting star. You never know when it will come and you are not prepared to make a wish upon a star…Bleach - Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,316 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-11-09 - Ichigo K. & Rukia K. - Complete8. I'll Be Waiting reviewsAU IchiRuki, Love me without fear. Trust me without questioning. Need me without demanding. Want me without restrictions. Accept me without change. Desire me without inhibitions.Bleach - Rated: T - English - General/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,861 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-29-08 - Published: 7-20-08 - Ichigo K. & Rukia K. - Complete
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