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Unionist Revolution:

Unionist Revolution is the Story that got the most votes from my RSP reviewers. And on that subject, I will keep RSP up, and when I find inspiration, I will return to it.

Now, Unionist Revolution is a tale of what would have happened if there was not three, but four Water Tribes. I have always found it annoying that the Water Tribes live in a frigid wasteland, and a swamp. I mean, it would make sense that they would want to live on a place that was near water, but not saturated with it or frozen over for most of the year. So, I came up with the Idea of the Steamers, the Fourth Water Tribe. Unlike the previous three, they are not sexist, or primitive. They have all the technological advancements that the Fire Nation has devolved. Also, they are a good deal more, sensual. They reflect the Firebenders they live next to.

I will go into detail in the first of the prologues, but everything changes when Kanna comes to the Steamers instead of the Southern Water Tribe. She meets her husband and joins the fight against the Three Nations. Katara is born into this environment, and befriends Zuko early on. She then accompanies him when he is exiled.

Aside from that, only a few other things are different. I won’t give much away, but I will say that I think if Azula wasn’t raised by Ozai, she would be a whole lot different.

Now, this will be similar to STB in terms of names. It is purely Avatar, but some names will reflect my interest in other shows. Also, though they won’t play a big role in this story, the main villains, all OC, are being borrowed from an Author named Maderfole. He is the absolute best Fanfiction writer. And he has been very gracious in letting me use some of his OCs. Thank you very much Maderfole, I will try and live up to the standards you set in Chaotic Cosmos. Also, they will not have any of the abilities or the backgrounds that were given in Chaotic Cosmos.

I will be uploading the Prologue with this, and when I get a moment, I will upload the timeline and OC guide to this chapter.

And the same rules for Reviews apply here. 25th Review = A reward oneshot.

Pairings: Zutara, Tokka, Azulaang, Kalee, Irosa, Jetin, and others.

Time Line

BSC – Before Sozin’s Comet

ASC – After Sozin’s Comet

10,000 BSC – Ka Chein declares himself Emperor, and begins a fifteen hundred year reign of terror.

8,515 BSC – A small group of men and women gather, and begin to challenge Ka Chein.

8, 500 BSC – Ka Chein is defeated. The Elemental Lords carve up the world and form their kingdoms.

8,499 BSC – The Avatar is created.

8, 467 BSC – The Golden Age of Humanity. Peace reigns and the Elemental Lords rule the entire world.

7,030 – The Golden Age of Humanity ends, and the Great Death begins. All across the world, a mysterious virus strikes the people, killing some, leaving others intact, and sterilizing others.

7, 004 BSC – Period of corrupt Avatars. The Avatars are the free they will ever be during this time.

6,073 BSC – The Period of corrupt Avatars ends with the death of Avatar Philip. New programs are put into place that forces the men and women cursed with the Avatar Spirit to do their duty.

6,000 BSC – The Great Death ends. After a thousand years, the population of Crudrijk has crashed. Now, with barely 3 million people, 2.5 million are concentrated in Fire, Water, Earth, and Air Empires.

5,999 BSC - With their countries ruined, the remaining nations band together, and declare war on the Fire, Water, Earth, and Air Empires. This war became known as the Revenge.

5,997 BSC – The Revenge ends. Jean Dylan betrays his comrades and sends all but a hundred of them to be slaughtered.

5,994 BSC – Jean Dylan is killed by the Avatar, one of the last members of the Revenge.

5,638 BSC – The First Schism in the Water Tribe. Tired of the excessive rules of the North Pole, a group of Waterbenders move South, establishing the Southern Water Tribe.

5,487 BSC – After half a millennium of war and strife, the empires of the Elemental Lords vanish, only to be replaced by the Four Nations. The Avatar is rededicated to keep the “Balance” between these four. All attempts to change the Balance are met with harsh punishment. Change becomes the enemy. But, the Paxa Delta is initiated, igniting years of uninterrupted peace and prosperity.

3, 789 – The Second Great Schism of the Water Tribe. Waterbenders from both the North and South, tired of the cold, move to the Foggy Swamp.

3, 040 BSC – A small village in the Earth Kingdom is destroyed. No one knows who, or what, committed the act. This event ignited another round of wars that became known as the Purity Wars.

2,973 BSC – With the Purity Wars in full swing, the rules restraining the Avatar breaks down. But unlike the previous period of corrupt Avatars, who merely wanted to live their lives, these Avatar become infected, spreading illegal vices to all corners of the world.

1,039 BSC – The Purity Wars end with the shocking news of the death of Amy, a Firebender who spend thirty years in captivity, being raped and tortured since she was ten. A peace conference is summoned and the Nations vow to never cross breed. The new Avatar spends the rest of her life rooting out the institutions the previous Avatars put into place.

994 BSC – Tired of the cold and wetness of the previous Tribes, and irritated at the mood swings of Earth Kingdom Policies, a sect of Waterbenders from all three tribes head to the Fire Nation, taking a land grant from the Fire Lord, settling on the Isle of Kuba, a nine miles south of the Fire Nation Providence, Lorida. This is the Third Schism.

993 BSC – In response to the violent attitude the Northern Water Tribe has taken in regards to them, the new Water Tribe, the Steamers, pledge their allegiance to the Fire Lord. The Fire Nation changes its name, to the Union of Free and Independent Elements, or simply Union. This influx of people brings a great deal of tolerance to the Firebenders.

984 BSC – While most of the world focuses on Union, the Southern Water Tribe invades the Pangeoa Ocean, targeting a renewed Thunderoid Nation, as well as other elements whose genetics had managed to survive throughout the millennium.

974 BSC – At the behest of the weak Thunderoids, Union involves itself in the war. Steamer forces rally against the Southern Water Tribe.

837 BSC - The War ends. The Fighting has been vicious, and the populations of the Thunderoids are severely reduced. The SWT retreats, and the Thunderoids close off the Pangeoa Ocean. Some Thunderoids join the Union.

837 BSC – An era of relative peace. The Union grows in power and strength.

312 BSC - Avatar Kuruk dies, Avatar Kyoshi is born.

274 BSC – Chin the Great launches his campaign to conquer the Earth Kingdom.

270 BSC – Avatar Kyoshi kills Chin the Great, at the urging of a spirit. The death of Chin the Great weakens the Earth Kingdom, allowing for the War to start two hundred and seventy years later.

82 BSC – Avatar Kyoshi dies. Avatar Roku is born. Future Fire Lord Sozin is born.

66 BSC – Avatar Roku is informed of his curse. He then leaves to master the elements.

60 BSC – Prince Sozin becomes the Fire Lord.

54 BSC – Avatar Roku returns to the Union. He and Sozin begin to drift apart. Roku marries Ta Min.

50 BSC – Guru Pathik is born.

14 BSC – Avatar Roku is left for dead by Fire Lord Sozin. Avatar Aang is born.

0 BSC – Avatar Aang is confirmed as the Avatar two years earlier then normal. When told he must take up his duties, he flees. Then, foolishly, he gets caught in a storm, and freezes himself (idiot).

0 ASC – Fire Lord Sozin leads Union forces and massacres the Air Nomads, searching for Avatar Aang. Ten thousand Air Nomads flee, going underground. Prince Azulon is born. Attila Long is born.

1 ASC – Tralor Poder is born.

10 ASC – Kanna is born in the Northern Water Tribe.

20 ASC – Fire Lord Sozin dies. Azulon becomes the Fire Lord. Attila Long is promoted to Admiral, and given a License. He forms the Huns, and begins in earnest targeting Water Tribe Vessels.

26 ASC – Kanna flees the Northern Water Tribe, running away from Pakku. As she flees, Attila picks her up. She joins the Huns.

35 ASC – Iroh is born.

40 ASC – Jeong Jeong is born.

40.6 ASC – The Southern Water Tribe infiltrates Draco, the capital of the Union, and poisons the city’s water supply. Simultaneously, they attack the Royal Palace, crippling Azulon and killing Hun Gyatso, seeking the death of Prince Iroh. Kanna and Attila formalize their relationship in marriage.

40.7 ASC – The Union begins its slaving raids on the Southern Water Tribe under the name, Heaven’s Fire. Attila is promoted to Grand Admiral, taking command of the Steamers, becoming the second in command of Union. Hama is taken prisoner.

43 ASC – Kya Long is born.

44 ASC – Hakoda Eins is born.

45 ASC – Zhao is born.

48 ASC – The man who would later be known as Burdel Nolivus is born to Tralor Poder.

49 ASC – Hama escapes. Bloodbending is forged.

52 ASC – Masurao Smith is sent to Ba Sing Se, on an indefinite intelligence gathering mission.

56 ASC – Ozai Agni is born. Ursa is born.

57 ASC – Brenda Smith is born to Masurao Smith and Reen Smith.

61 ASC – Hakoda and Kya announce their relationship to Lord Attila. Attila has mixed reactions.

62 ASC - Sakota Shikakan is born.

64 ASC – Zhao receives some training under Jeong-Jeong.

66 ASC – The son of Tralor Poder is disowned, and takes the name of Burdel Nolivus.

69 ASC – Kenshou, the man more commonly known as Combustion Man, is born.

70 ASC – June is born. Lu Ten is born to Prince Iroh.

72 ASC – Mao Shilama is born

73 ASC – Hakoda and Kya marry.

75 ASC – Kuei is born. Mao Shilama is born.

79 ASC – Kuei’s father dies. Long Feng takes control of Ba Sing Se, using the Dai Li. A raped Brenda Smith flees Ba Sing Se with her parents.

80 ASC – Kalo is born to Burdel Nolivus, the future governor of Omashu and his wife. Hua Ley is born to Brenda Smith. While Burdel is not welcomed in Tralor’s household, Tralor does not hold a grudge against his grandson, and takes Kalo under his wing.

81 ASC – Ozai and Ursa marry.

82 ASC – Zulor is born to one of Ozai’s concubines.

83 ASC – Prince Zuko is born to Ozai and Ursa. Jet is born in the Earth Kingdom. Pakota Shikakan is born. Katara and Sokka Long are born to Kya and Hakoda Long. A week later, Sokka is kidnapped by Pakota’s father, Sakota Shikakan. Attila dies in the struggle. Hakoda becomes Lord of the Huns.

84 ASC – Princess Yue is born in the Northern Water Tribe. Suki and Samantha Buke are born on Kyoshi Island. Toph is born in Gaoling. Mai is born to the Poders. Ty Lee is born. Princess Azula is born.

89 ASC – Kya is killed by Sakota Shikakan. Sakota takes Attila’s war axes, which had been planned on being given to Katara. They are given to Pakota instead. Grand Admiral Howe is killed for treason, Bato succeeds him. The Truce of Kya is enacted. The Cold War begins. Ozai begins his search for the Avatar.

89 ASC Continued – Mao Shilama is burned alive when he insults his teacher one too many times. Admiral Jeong Jeong losses control and lets loose. In his horror, he exiles himself from the Union.

94 ASC – The Cold War ends when General Iroh begins his assault on Ba Sing Se.

95 ASC – Lu Ten is killed, causing General Iroh to cease his assault. Fire Lord Azulon is assassinated by Princess Ursa. Ursa flees the Capital with her daughter, Azula. Ozai takes command of the Fire Nation.

97 ASC – Prince Zuko is banished. Katara, a longtime friend of Zuko, accompanies him into Exile.

99 ASC – The Avatar awakens.

OC Guide of Unionist Revolution

Attila Long

Age at introduction: 26

DOB: 0 ASC

DOD: 83 ASC

Sex: Male

Nationality: Steamers/Union of Free and Independent Elements

Physical Description: Tall, slender with cascading black hair and blue eyes.

Bending Style: Waterbending.

Weapons: Duel War Axes

Allegiance: Huns, Azulon, the Union, Kanna, Kya

Rank: Lord of the Huns (20 ASC), Admiral (20 ASC), Chief Representative of the Steamers (32 ASC), Grand Admiral (40 ASC), Father (43 ASC), Grandfather (83)

Personal History: Attila Long is the leader of the Huns, and the right hand of Emperor Azulon. As the Lord of the Huns, Attila knows many secrets. Curiously, he does not view the Earth Kingdom and the Water Tribes as the true enemies of the Union. So far, the highest rank he has achieved is Grand Admiral.

Tralor Poder

Age at introduction: 25

DOB: 1 ASC

DOD: ??

Sex: Male

Nationality: Union of Free and Independent Elements

Physical Description: Tall, and bald, with golden eyes.

Bending Style: Firebending.

Weapons: Bending, Hands, Feet

Allegiance: Huns, Attila, the Union, Kalo, Mai

Rank: A lord of the Huns (20 ASC), Head of Research and Development (26 ASC), Husband (40.6 ASC), Father (68 ASC), Non-Father (68 ASC), Grandfather (80, 84 ASC)

Personal History: Tralor Poder is the main technician of the Huns. He is familiar with Aether, and devolved the Aether Drive. This system will revolutionize transportation.

Mao Shilama

Age at introduction: 14

DOB: 75 ASC

DOD: ?? ASC

Sex: Male

Nationality: Union of Free and Independent Elements

Physical Description: Of medium height, eye color is subject to change. Black skin, darkened by an intense fire. No hair.

Bending Style: Fire

Weapons: A single sword

Allegiance: Zhao, Union

Rank: Lieutenant

Personal History: Mao was something a loud mouth in his youth. He had the ability to absolutely piss everyone he was around off. But due to outside interference, he was burned alive by his teacher, Jeong Jeong. He managed to survive, and was used as a guinea pig for Tralor Poder’s new equipment. Now, Mao seeks only one thing. Jeong Jeong’s death.

Masurao Smith

Age at introduction: 16

DOB: 10 ASC

DOD: ??

Sex: Male

Nationality: Union of Free and Independent Elements

Physical Description: Tall, with military cut brown hair, brown skin, and greenish/bluish eyes.

Bending Style: Earth/Metalbending

Weapons: Small Axes, bending, hands, feet

Allegiance: Huns, Attila, the Union, Reen, Brenda, Lyn

Rank: A Hun Soldier (26 ASC), Intelligence Operative (52 ASC), Grandfather (80 ASC), General (89 ASC), Diplomat to the Earth Kingdom/Northern Water Tribe (89 ASC)

Personal History: A recruit from the Union’s Earthbending population, Masurao would serve some time in the Huns before being transferred to Ba Sing Se to run a garbage company, using that as an information collecting. He has a wife, Reen, and two daughters, Brenda Smith, and Lyn Smith.

Minor Characters

Admiral Yamato (Fleet Admiral, Union)

Chief David Wong (Chieftain/Father of Kanna, Northern Water Tribe)

Grand Admiral Howe (Traitor, Union)

Hun Gyatso (Bodyguard, Union)

The Warring Factions

The Union of Free and Independent Elements, Huns

vs

The Northern Water Tribe, the Earth Kingdom, the Order of the White Lotus

Strategic Assests

Union

Exactor - Aether Mark 4 powered vessel used by Ozai during his quest for the Avatar

Khagan - (former) Flagship of the Huns, Attila's personal ship, later passed on to Kya as her personal cruiser

Tojo - The Flagship of Admiral Yamato

The Chimaera Training Center

Upcoming Stories

The Elemental Seed: A Gundam Seed/Avatar crossover. There is one more member of the Rau Le Creuset team, Zuko Agni. A Red Coat, Zuko faces off against Kira Yamato, Mu La Flaga, the Archangel, and Katara Aqous, officer of OMNI. Standard Seed Pairings, Zutara, Sulor, some Tokka, and a dab of Azulaang.

The Sprouting Seed: Gundam Seed/Avatar crossover. After the end of the Bloody Valentine war, both sides take stock, and attempt to heal. Same pairings as ES.

The Seed of Destiny: Gundam Seed Destiny/Avatar crossover. War spreads over the earth again. Arms are readied and the forces of OMNI and ZAFT clash again. Same pairings as ES, and SS.

Rise of the Clyne Faction - Birth: Gundam Seed. A new bodyguard of Cagalli Yula Attha changes the course of the entire war. Standard pairings.

Rise of the Clyne Faction - Into the Quiet Place: Peace is such a fragile thing. The world rest and awaits the next war. Standard pairings.

Rise of the Clyne Faction - Totality: War erupts again. The members of the Clyne Faction take up arms against the true enemy. Standard pairings.