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since: 12-20-07, id: 1449229, Profile Updated: 08-19-12
country: USA
Author has written 10 stories for Elfen Lied, Godzilla, and Bleach.

WANT A REVIEW?


I often don't get around to reviewing much even when I enjoy a story. At most I may give one or two reviews or at the least favorite a story. I however love getting reviews and the more the merrier, so its' almost hypocritical of me to ask of some and not give any in return. So in short I'm offering reviewing services right here for anyone who wants their story reviewed. Here are the clarifications of what I will do when reviewing your story.

1.) I will always try to put in an equal amount if not greater praise for your story to criticism. But I will critique if it I must and do my best to add in any specifics that I can. I won't come and just say "Great story, keep it up." This can include anything, spelling, characters, plot, length, etc.

2.) Depending on the length of your story, I may review it in sections. Meaning my stance on it may change from one review to another. This will be mostly for story above 10 chapters in length. This also means I won't review each chapter but review in an overall sense.

3.) If for some reason i can't find enough positive points of your story to equalize or overcome the negatives I will not directly write a review. Instead I will PM you my response back and let you deal with the issues there. Nobody wants a negative review that people can see and I'm not cruel enough to do so. But I am more than willing to express my own views. If you think I'm wrong, I'll be glad to listen and I might change my mind.

If you want a review, PM me the story you want me to look into and I will get to it ASAP. If there are specific points of the story you want to mention or I should be aware of, mention them in the PM. Give me at least one week to review as well.

Happy Writing.


1. Pinpoint Conviction » reviews
After the brutal struggles against Kakuzawa, humans and Diclonius have finally started to see eye to eye. In it, a young girl named Elrya Alya will continue on her journey. Sequel to "Pinpoint Lifeline"
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Suspense - Chapters: 25 - Words: 177,696 - Reviews: 23 - Updated: 4-20-13 - Published: 5-17-12
2. Pinpoint Zero » reviews
In the wake of the war, new ideals would be given. New and old faces would fight together and against one another and ultimately, choices would be made to decide fates. This is the history of 15 years ago. Prequel to "Pinpoint Lifeline".
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 30 - Words: 155,179 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 8-19-12 - Published: 10-9-11 - Complete
3. Pinpoint Lifeline » reviews
Elrya is your average horned girl stuck in a facility and living in what may as well be Hell. She's your average Sipilet, hardly distinguishable from all the others. Yet she may be the only person who can stop the madness that plagues her species.
Elfen Lied - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Angst - Chapters: 81 - Words: 285,206 - Reviews: 86 - Updated: 10-7-11 - Published: 4-8-11 - Complete
4. Aspects Of Death: La Historia De La Espada » reviews
Each Espada represents a certain aspect of death. Rage, Greed, Insanity, Intoxication, Destruction, Despair, Emptiness, Sacrifice, Time and Loneliness. Their history revealed, their lives before becoming hollows. The world of the Espada.
Bleach - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Angst - Chapters: 4 - Words: 18,348 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-4-11 - Published: 2-14-11
5. Walkways to Redemption » reviews
Lucy's life was never easy but she always tried to make it better. Living peacefully with the love of her life, friends and enemies come towards her...to help and to hurt. Will the Queen of the Diclonius make it through another series of turmoil?
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 26 - Words: 116,076 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 2-12-11 - Published: 9-9-10 - Lucy / Nyu - Complete
6. Differences » reviews
4 years after the events of Elfen Lied Manga wise but with notable differences a new Diclonius escapes from a facility. Celia is the second Queen Diclonius. Spiteful, hateful, she seeks to rid the world of humans and give birth to pure Diclonius.
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Angst - Chapters: 33 - Words: 71,845 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 1-31-11 - Published: 3-10-10 - Complete
7. Similarity » reviews
You've seen Differences...now it's time for the similiarities. A look into the side of Differences you haven't seen before.
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Angst/Suspense - Chapters: 31 - Words: 102,125 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 12-18-10 - Published: 6-20-10 - Complete
8. Differences: Illuminated » reviews
The final part of the Differences Series. Sequel to Cherished. Since Celia's death Diclonius and humans are beginning to war on each other again. It is up to Celia's own daughter, Ashrina, to fix this problem. But things are easier said than done.
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Angst - Chapters: 24 - Words: 58,996 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 6-12-10 - Published: 5-2-10 - Complete
9. The Smoldering Inferno reviews
One shot re-imagining of the battle between Meltdown Godzilla and Final Form Destoroyah.
Godzilla - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,385 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-23-10 - Godzilla & Destroyah - Complete
10. Differences: Cherished » reviews
There was once a time when Celia hated everyone, that everyone was against her. Now for perhaps the first time she is truly happy. She finds hope and even love. But sometimes...things are not as easy as they look. Sequel to "Differences"
Elfen Lied - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 34 - Words: 60,211 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-2-10 - Published: 3-31-10 - Complete