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since: 01-02-08, id: 1461453, Profile Updated: 09-27-09
country: United States
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Author has written 18 stories for Across the Universe, Kenan & Kel, Outsiders, Harry Potter, and Degrassi.

Hi, everyone my name is Gracie-San (also known as iEmo) I'm 14, in the 9th grade, and from Louisiana. I'm also on http://www.fictionpress.com/~graciesan (just in case you get tired from the fics on here). I'm here to concrit stories and have people concrit my stories. I've been writing for a couple of years now, doing mostly poems, but I've decided that I should take up on writing stories, too, seeing how everybody has been telling me that my poems are so good, that I need to consider writing stories. And what better place to do it when I have people that don't even know me critique me, and help me make it better!

Now, when I concrit stories, I'm honest. And sometimes when I'm honest, I sound kinda mean, and I'm really sorry about that, but that's just the way I am. But remember, I'm honestly trying to help you. So if you take out all of the cuss words and smart-alecky stuff, you'll find words of wisdom in there. Now, if your story just sucks, and I really can't help you, then I'll just tell you so.

But don't be all whiny because people have been telling you your story is awesome. Honey, if it's awesome I would've told you so, and I would've praised you. I'm here to open up the barrier of truth for you, and tell you that all those people lied, and if I have to be mean about it, to get the point through, (because sometimes being nice doesn't) I will. No, I don't think of myself superior, but I have found so much stupid crap (that wasn't made to be stupid) in some of my favorite archives (we'll get to what those are later) that it's hard for me to find the good stuff.

If you choose to concrit me, you can. I don't care if you're rough or if you're sweet about it. I would just appreciate the help you give, and try to use it in other fics that I use. Now, if it's a flame or something like that, then I'll be pissed, and you've gotten on my mean side, and that isn't a good place to be. At all. And I will be writing a strongly worded message to you.


Some of my favorite archives on this site (the ones I've written in are bold):

Across The Universe
Degrassi
Harry Potter
Kenan & Kel
Outsiders

PotC
RENT
Repo! The Genetic Opera
Dr. Horrible's Sing Along Blog

On Harry Potter, I can stand any pairings except for ones with the teachers, Lucius, and the bad people of the Black family AKA everyone who isn't on Sirius's side. (I haven't read the books in a while so forgive me if I seem incompetent on the subject.)

My favorite stories are usually ones that can just stun me and make me stay up all night just to read that story. Same thing with the authors. If I go back just to read some more of their fics, than they are my fave. And I'm very selective of them, because if you are a favorite of mine, I want to be able to go back and be stunned each time I read one of your fics, such as Eriala did.

I suggest you go check them out if you want something interesting to read because that is some good writing. She inspires me, and the funny thing is, she's a teenager, too, just like myself, and I want to be able to write like her when I get about 17 or 18.


I've also written a lot of stories on this account and these are my favorite ones that I've written so far:

The Best Of You:
Steve goes back to his father's grave just a few years after his death to tell him all the things he should've said to him when he was alive, showing his anger, sadness, and possibly resentment. Oneshot. Songfic. The Best Of You by The Foo Fighters.

TwoBit's Drunken Confession:
Two-Bit stumbles in a bar one night, drunk as can be and spots somebody that looks kind of like Pony, but it isn't him at all. Yet, Two-Bit is too off his game to notice him, and spill about his secret crush. Oneshot.

Coming Of Age:
After Soda encounters an awkward situation with Pony in the bathroom, he realizes that Pony is getting older and starting to become a man, and that him and Darry are going to have to give "The Talk". In the meanwhile, Pony, who ran off, wonders what's so wrong about sex. Oneshot.

Behind Closed Doors:
Ginny and her brothers always seemed they were good and wholesome, with the occasional jokes here and there from the twins. Nevertheless, you never know what happens behind closed doors, especially Ginny Weasley's. Behind hers, it could've been abuse, torture, horror, and maybe even a little hell thrown in. Oneshot.

Dirty Feeling:
Jude had sex with Max, only to feel as if he were "dirty" afterwards. So he's decided to "clean" himself by having sex with Lucy, only to confront Max about it afterwards, who questions how dirty he felt and whether he actually loves him or not. Max/Jude. Oneshot.

Like Whoa:
Ellie and Marco went to a bar, only for Marco to ditch her when he went to go "buy them drinks", so Ellie is now looking all over for her best friend, until she finds him with another person. She's dying to find out who, only when she finds out who the mystery person is, she regrets even trying to figure out in the first place. Oneshot


These stories are all my silly songfics:

Guy Love:
Pony goes to the hospital to visit Johnny after he had gotten burned in the church. Pony decides to tell Johnny that he'll always be his best friend in a song called "Guy Love" with Two-Bit interrupting. Parody of the song "Guy Love" from the episode "My Musical" from Scrubs.

The Rant Song:
Steve rants about his feelings towards Pony, with a little help from Dallas, while Soda tries to wonder where he had left his candy and his keys. Parody of the song "The Rant Song" from the episode "My Musical" from Scrubs.

If You Were Gay:
After Two-Bit thinks he's been hit on by a gay guy, he tells of his experience to no one other than Ponyboy. The catch is, Pony doesn't really want to talk about the subject of homosexuality, but Two-Bit assures him that even if he was gay, he'd still be his friend. Parody of the song "If You Were Gay" from Avenue Q.

I Love My Lips:
Pony and Two-Bit reluctantly go to the school counselor after the death of Johnny and Dally because it is required of them to do so. While there, Two-Bit tells the counselor one of his deepest fears. Parody of the song "I Love My Lips" from Veggie Tales.


Okay, there's really nothing left except telling random facts, and I'm always up for that.

Candy: Twix
Color: Blue
Song: (Do You Wanna Date My) Avatar (feat. Felicia Day) by The Guild
Bands: Panic! At The Disco, Flobots, MCR, Weezer, Coldplay, Flight of the Conchords, the Beatles, and Fall Out Boy
Race: Black/African-American ((whichever one works for you))
Dance Move: Running Man in slow-motion followed up by the Robot
Random Quote: "While girls are reading about the unrealistic men in Twilight, boys are watching porn."
Favorite Commercial: The STD commercials that are featured on the radio. Those are hilarious.


Latest News:

As of right now More Than Enemies is going to be on a hiatus. I've gotta be able to plan the story because I write as I go and it pretty much ends up getting crazy. I will be giving you guys oneshots instead. I'm really sorry. I will try my hardest to get back to the story as soon as I can and it'll probably be different because I'm rewriting it so it will be up in a couple of months.


That is basically what I have for you on my profile. Now, go read my fanfics! Pwease? :)

Gracie-San! .

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1. Woodstock '69 reviews
The most influential rock conert in perhaps history is happening in New York and Ponyboy will somehow find a way to get him and then gup there to see all 32 acts perform.
Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,060 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-6-09
2. Replacement reviews
When you want someone you can't have, you've gotta find someone who can replace them.
Across the Universe - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 455 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-1-09 - Complete
3. Color Blind reviews
Color Blind - Noun. Inability to distinguish one or several chromatic colors.
Outsiders - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,243 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-28-09 - Ponyboy C. - Complete
4. Coming Of Age reviews
After an incident in the bathroom between Pony and Soda, Soda and Darry realize they need to give Ponyboy "The Talk".
Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,736 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9-1-08 - Ponyboy C. - Complete
5. I Love My Lips reviews
A parody of the song I Love My Lips from Veggie Tales. Pony and Two-Bit have to go to the counselor's office after Johnny and Dallas's death, and Two-Bit tells the counselor one of his biggest fears.
Outsiders - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,421 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-13-08 - Ponyboy C. & Two Bit M. - Complete
6. If You Were Gay reviews
A parody of the song If You Were Gay from Avenue Q. Two-Bit comes in and tells Pony that it is okay for him to be gay, upsetting Pony in the process.
Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,004 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8-12-08 - Ponyboy C. & Two Bit M. - Complete
7. The Rant Song reviews
A parody of "The Rant Song" from the episode "My Musical" from Scrubs. Steve rants about how he feels to Pony, with Dallas helping him a bit. Oneshot.
Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 892 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 8-2-08 - Steve R. & Ponyboy C. - Complete
8. Reconciliations In The Park reviews
Jay is waiting at the park for Manny, when Paige shows up, only to find out that Jay is changed and is apologizing for all the mean stuff he did. Will she believe him or will she just dismiss him? Oneshot. Inspired by and is for ILoveDegrassiFics.
Degrassi - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 979 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-22-08 - Jay H. & Paige M. - Complete
9. Like Whoa reviews
Marco ditches Ellie at the bar for a guy, and Ellie is just dying to find out who. Only when she does, it just makes things a little bit awkward. Oneshot.
Degrassi - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,356 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-15-08 - Ellie N. & Marco D. - Complete
10. Dirty Feeling reviews
Jude had just gotten through making love to Lucy, right after he had gotten through making love to Max. Max questions him if whether or not Jude felt "dirty" after having sex with him. Oneshot. Max/Jude fic. M for some descriptive details.
Across the Universe - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,245 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-15-08 - Complete
11. Behind Closed Doors reviews
My brothers are all polite, sweet, and kindhearted. But you never know what happens behind closed doors, especially mine. Behind my door was abuse, horror, maybe even a little bit of hell. Oneshot.
Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,451 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-9-08 - Ginny W. & Percy W. - Complete
12. Guy Love reviews
A parody of the song "Guy Love" from the episode "My Musical" from Scrubs. Pony visits Johnny in the hospital after what happened in the church, and they sing of their "Guy Love" with Two-Bit interrupting. Oneshot.
Outsiders - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 858 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 5-26-08 - Ponyboy C. & Johnny C. - Complete
13. Hey Jude, Come Together While My Guitar Gently Wee reviews
Hey Jude, Come Together While My Guitar Gently Weeps Because I Am The Walrus. A poem fusing all the lyrics from the songs used in the movie.
Across the Universe - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-28-08 - Complete
14. The Best Of You reviews
Steve goes to his father's grave and talks to him like he wishes he did when he was younger. Oneshot. Songfic to The Best of You by Foo Fighters.
Outsiders - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,352 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-11-08 - Steve R. - Complete
15. TwoBit's Drunken Confession reviews
Two-Bit stumbles in a bar one night, drunk as can be and spots somebody that looks kind of like Pony, but it isn't him at all. Yet, Two-Bit is too off his game to notice him, and spill about his secret crush. Oneshot.
Outsiders - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,140 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-7-08 - Complete
16. Empty Glass reviews
Lucy looks at an empty glass on the table and it reminds her of her life. Oneshot.
Across the Universe - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 414 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-6-08 - Complete
17. An Hour In The Park reviews
An hour in the park with Kenan & Kel consists of a dream sequence, hide and seek, and talking about a Zuchinni in some stilletos. All this happens with Kenan and Kel.
Kenan & Kel - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 711 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3-30-08 - Complete
18. Julia reviews
Jude and Lucy spend a day at the beach with their daughter Julia. Songfic. Oneshot.
Across the Universe - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 699 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-29-08 - Complete
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