| Hektols |
Author has written 1 story for Naruto. Name: Hektols. True name: Classified. Age: Older than I look. Sex: Male. Planet: Earth. Continent: Europe. Country: Spain. Favorite anime/manga: Naruto, DragonBall, Full Metal Alchemist, Ranma, Gankutsuou: Count of Monte Cristo... Things I like in stories -Stories that are well written. -NaruHina stories. -Stories that don't retell canon. Things I don't like in stories: -Stories where the Hokage is an incompetent fool unable to protect Naruto from ungrateful villagers. -When Naruto's life is threatened by villagers and the Hokage keeps hiding his true heritage: we know that Naruto's true identity as the Yondaime's son is hidden for keep him safe from the Yondaime's enemies, if his life is going to be threatened at least it should be done by outside enemies. -Fics where Naruto after years of protecting the village he is still hated by most of them while Gaara is loved by his own village despite all kills he did in his younger days, this is not coherent. -NaruSaku stories: Naruto is not Sakura's rebound boy. He shouldn't end with a girl who attacks him for anything. -OCs who take important roles in the stories, specially Mary Sue's and Gary Stu's, as soon as I smell one of them I use to abandon the fic, the main exception is the fic 'War of the Eyes' and its prequel. Here's an OC I created, he won't appear in my stories because what I said before: The Black Flash Name: Kabuto Namikaze Age: 39, but appears to be in his twenties. Birthday: June 2nd Past: Minato Namikaze's older brother, he refers to Minato as "Foolish Little Brother", Itachi stole him the phrase. He tried to stop Minato when he was drawing the seal in Naruto because he knew that Naruto wouldn't be acepted. Minato had no choice but trick him and seal him in the Forbiden Scroll when he was off guard. He got free when Naruto stole said scroll. After discovering that Konoha dishonored his "Foolish Little Brother's" wish he vowed to turn Naruto into the most fearsome Hokage with lessons like these: "Do others what they do to you", "Step on my head and I will crush yours", "If your fellow slaps you, then show him the other cheek... If he tries to slap you again, then break his hands and his face." Personality: Likeable with beautiful ladies. Extremely violent and vengeful to all those who don't see Naruto as a hero, he will beat the crap out of them and then say that they broke the Sandaime's Law to avoid punishment. He could also use the Sandaime's Law for blackmail shop keepers for a 70 discount or he will tell the authorities that they broke the Law, he would say things like this: " At who will believe the Hokage, the uncle of the boy who keeps everybody safe or an ungtrateful bastard who disprespects the Yondaime's last wish?" He is also very arrogant and considers himself more skilled than most people (that is true most times) Rank: None, he thinks that rank only helps the enemy to determine how powerful you are. In his hierarchy the Hokage is on top as long as he lets him there, then comes him and then the rest of people. Weapons: Three pronged kunais that he combines with wind chakra to get two powerful swords. Kekkai Genkai: The same seen in New Chance. He heals any wound in a few hour, he doesn't get scars and can grow back missing parts of the body in days. Jinchuuriki: none. Animal partners: none, he usually eats them. Crushes: Any beautiful woman unless she is married or has a boyfriend. Nickname: The Black Flash. Likes: Women, Jiraiya's novels, women, alcohol, gambling, women, killing people, women... Dislikes: Anybody who dislikes Naruto, Yakushi Kabuto because he is a traitor and has the same as him, traitors, Itachi for copying his phrase, councilors... Looks: He looks like a bearded and wilder version of the Yondaime, he dresses completely in black. Ninjutsu: Extremely high, he has a black colored Rasengan, a black version of the Hiraishin among other techniques of the Yondaime. He also has a variation of the Edo Tensei that lets him be possesed by a death person to have access to his techniques, memories and abilities, including Kekkai Genkai. He uses it to massacre the council summoning his "Foolish Little Brother". He also can use that technique to let Naruto be with his parents for short amounts of time. He'll use that technique to let those who were nice with Naruto see their deceased loved ones, those who were bad only will see his middle finger. Taijutsu: Very high, he will use all dirty tricks he manages, if it is not forbidden, then he can do it. He won't hesitate to give a kick in the balls. "There are lots of people who died because a blow in the head, but I don't know of anybody who died because a kick in the balls" would say. Genjutsu: He knows how to identify and dispel them, more Genjutsu is only for those who are not strong enough. Sealing: It was the specialty of his "Foolish Little Brother", not his. 02/10/2009 I have some comments about the latest Naruto Shipuuden Episodes: Pros: -Great atmosphere. -Fillers are much better than in the last season and we see the secondary characters receiving more screen time. -The omakes, a good way to keep the sense of humor that characterized the series (we even see Naruto complaining about his Cons: -Shikamaru doesn't smoke after Asuma's death, dropping part of the dramatic burden. Come on, they can portray a teenager -We don't see Konohamaru doing the gay version of the Sexy no Jutsu and showing that Sakura is also a pervert. Instead of | |||||||
1. New chance » reviewsA 10 year old Naruto meets a man who will change his life and the Ninja Nations, but will it be for good? The Yondaime has returned and he is not happy. NaruHina later.Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 74 - Words: 253,522 - Reviews: 2132 - Updated: 11-13-09 - Published: 1-30-08 - Minato N. & Naruto U.