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Author has written 1 story for Naruto. Name: Hizumi Age: 18 E-mail: AkitoSaisuke@yahoo.com AIM: BartDude06 Gender: :Looks down:...Male Hobbies: Badminton, tennis, video games, cooking, Watching/reading anime/manga respectively, Hanging with friends and enjoying the high quality fanfiction on this site. Favorite Bands/Singers: Hamasaki Ayumi, Utada Hikaru, UVERworld, FLOW, Asian Kung-fu Generation, and Hinoi Team (If you have any to recommend please don't hesitate in sending me names please). Likes: Everything in my hobbies Dislikes: Perverts, Racists, Loud Noise, Yaoi/Yuri (i have nothing against it, it's just not my preference) and finally flamers. Even if it's only a story i'm reading and i'm sending a positive review or a constructive criticism, when i see flamers i get mad. That does nothing to help the writer and it brings down their motivation to keep writing. Flamers beware: If i meet you, you'll have three seconds to run. Dream: Become leader of the Kiri no Shinobigatana Nananin Shu (I just put that so i could remember it for my story lol). Favorite Anime: Gintama, Naruto/Naruto Shippuuden, Bleach, Death Note, Ghost Hunt, Mahou Sensei Negima, Hayate no Gotoku, Katekyo Hitman reborn, Onegai Sensei/Twins and Love Hina. Motto: "Tact is the art of making a point without making an enemy." Favorite Pairings: Naruto: Naruto X Hinata - As long as it's not within the span of one chapter. A good NaruHina needs to be spanned about at least eight chapters because no matter how strong she sees Naruto become, that won't instantly changer her into a powered up Hinata. Naruto X TenTen - TenTen is a strong kunoichi, exceptionally skilled and one of two girls who weren't attracted to Uchiha Sasuke, the first being the above mentioned girl. No matter what people choose to believe, IMO Neji will be too uptight to accept advances from her, (plus in social affairs, i think he's as clueless as Naruto). Naruto X Haku - If you can write a good way to keep her alive that isn't him suggesting they come back to Konoha, at least not right away, then this can work. Oh and to agree with several authors, Haku i believe should be a girl. A guy who looks like this...should have been hitting on Zabuza. I'm also tired of people making Naruto EXTREMELY strong then having Haku see him from the trees and think 'He's cute.' Uh...no. Naruto X Temari - This i think will work almost every time because of how Naruto helped Gaara become more friendly and saved him from Akatsuki (albeit, after he died...) she might see how kind and caring he is and his ability to make friends with almost anyone. Naruto X Extra Character - By this, i mean like, Princess Yuki from the first Naruto movie or that princess from the flower country in a filler episode, before shippuuden. I've seen this done maybe once or twice and it is a challenge since we see so little of them, but it can be done and if you do it right, you'll have my greatest respect. Shikamaru X Ino - This would be the funniest pairing. Ino yelling would bring about a stream of fifty "Mendokuse" (Troublesome) every hour. Plus i think Shika needs someone loud to get him out of his lazy demeanor. Lee X Sakura - Lee deserves her, in a good way. Lee is so determined, and works so hard yet is mocked for poor choice in clothing and...lack of trimming. But the guy with the deepest resolve to protect close ones and to die protecting the one you love should get the girl...and that's Lee in a nutshell. This romance can start taking effect after he fights the Oto nin to protect her. Konohamaru X Hanabi - This is a wonderful pairing, yet i've only seen it once. It's like a younger Lee/Naruto mix trying to persuade a female Neji/Sasuke mix into giving him a chance. Plus if Naruto was there to throw in a few colorful innuendos, what's to stop this from becoming laugh ammo? Pokemon: Abilityshipping (Ash X Anabel) - This is such a great pairing but is sadly very rare to see. To my knowledge only Anabel has actually admitted to liking Ash making her a perfect choice for him. Mirageshipping (Ash X Sabrina) - He gave her back her emotions in a way so logically (to me at least) she would fall for him for doing so much for her. Plus she's really cute and i can see them bringing out the best in each other. Gintama: Gin X Kyubei - It's difficult to explain why I like this pairing. I suppose if anyone could get Kyubei to start falling for them it would be Gin. He not only has silver hair but a silver tongue. He can weave his words to inspire others, lift spirits or make people see things in a new light. Gin X Kagura - Everytime Gin and Kagura interact she seems to have deep feelings for him and is rather protective of him. I've seen some really good stories with this and it's ALWAYS really cute. Like a schoolgirl love. Gin X Otae - Everytime she's in trouble Gin is there to help out. Besides her brother, he's the most dependable guy she knows. He will always help her out when she needs it and she had better start realizing it. Least Favorite Pairings: Naruto X Tsunade - Tsunade is 53 years old. Naruto, after the time skip, is 16. Not. Going. To. Happen. Tsunade is more a mother to Naruto than anything else. If you do a travel back in time fic for this to happen, it can't instantaneously happen. This should be very difficult and would probably, or should probably, remove Kyuubi from Naruto or otherwise severly damage him. Something like this has to have a down side, just like jutsu. Naruto X Sakura - Now, don't get me wrong. This can be written in a way to my liking. The way most people write it however, is Naruto gets mistreated and abused by Sakura, he comes back stronger and she suddenly realizes what she missed. No... She should should START out as a fan girl for Sasuke, but realize what she lacks compared to Naruto and Sasuke after the wave expedition and start working towards being a good kunoichi rather than working to get a date. Start them as friends and enter the fluff in after Sasuke leaves the village or if you keep him in the village, after he finds someone else, tells her off or she realized he's a stuck up prick. Now i'm sorry for this, but i have certain things that need to be said. 1) The Yondaime Hokage's name is Namikaze Minato and his wife was Uzumaki Kushina. I understand that Kazama Arashi was commonly used before the real name was released so that's ok. BUT, if you know his name is Namikaze Minato, yet you write a new story using Arashi, i will not read further than that. You have a right to use what you feel like, but you're wrong. 2) Jutsu names should NOT be in English. There are hundreds of English to Japanese romaji translators online. If the English you enter to be translated doesn't work, you probably didn't put it one word at a time. My translator is http/www.dicts.info/2/english-japanese_romaji.php. Enter words one at a time here and you'll have a fully translated jutsu name in seconds. 3) Sannin is not a rank of a jutsu or a shinobi. You can have E, D, C, B, A, S (A.K.A Kage level) ranked jutsu. Sannin means three people. Also, Ero-sennin (which literally translated means "Erotic Hermit") is Jiraiya's nickname, not Ero-sannin ("Erotic three people") 4) The nine biju are actually from Japanese mythology so you shouldn't insert your own animals into the positions. The nine biju are as follows: 1) Ichibi no Tanuki - Shukaku is a bijuu in the form of Raccoon Dog (Tanuki of the Japanese mythology). Before, he was a priest that lived in the Desert of Nara. Because of the dark power released by Yamata no Orochi, and under the heavy assault of wind and sand, he transformed into a raccoon dog (His actual form). He has a playful and extravagant personality, resembling the Tanuki nature. Has a pretty active sexual life. Shukaku lives in the souls of people killed by the wind and sand (This actually resembles the case of Gaara’s mother). The violet (blue in the anime) tattoos represent his title of God of Wind. 2) Nibi no Nekomata - Nekomata is a bijuu in the form of cat, and possesses the power of death. This Bijuu lives in a place called “Forest of Death” (Not a mistranslation.) in Hokkaido, to the north. His appearance is a black cat monster (depicted with huge, black angel wings). He’s the Death God’s pet. Nekomata feeds on dead people’s spirits, and can summon these to fight for him. He uses a third eye at the top of its head to consume the spirits. 3) Sanbi no Isonade - Isonade is a shark shaped Bijuu with a sharp horn on the forehead. It lives in the deep waters on the West of Japan, fighting pirates. Every few months, Isonade will swim to the surface of the sea from the deep waters, to breath some fresh air. However, when he does this, storms erupt, oceans rage, and all ships will be swallowed by him as food. Isonade has a subordinate fish called Samehada (Same name as Kisame's Sword. Depicted differently, but with same pronunciation). Samehada attaches itself to Isonade’s stomach, and absorbs its food to create huge amounts of chakra, proceeding to send it back to its body. Samehada’s power can enable Isonade to get 5 times the quantity of chakra it could originally get. Therefore, when Isonade battles, he will have unlimited chakra to receive from Samehada. 4) Yonbi no Sokou - Sokou is a bijuu that looks like a reptile. It was a creature that lived near Mount Fuji. Because of the toxic gas and the volcaninc ash, he was transformed into a half-rooster, half-snake monster. The Rooster and Snake are husband and wife in Sokou’s body. Everything around it withers away or dies, because of its poison. According to the Legend, whenever he hibernates in Mount Fuji, the snoring he causes will make the volcano erupt. 5) Gobi no Houkou - Houkou is a bijuu which looks like a five-tailed dog. Each tail of this creature represents one elemental power: Wind, Water, Earth, Lightning and Fire. They can cause catastrophic damage when used. Houkou will willingly destroy the nature to obtain the power he desires from these elements. He was once badly injured when he and Nekomata challenged Kyuubi. Strangely enough, he is the god of Illusion. Houkou lives in a giant, ancient tree. 6) Rokubi no Raijuu - Raijuu, a bijuu in the form of weasel, has four legs and very sharp claws. Its cry sounds like thunder. It was originally the god of Thunder, but because of Yamata no Orochi’s power, it was transformed into a beast. Raijuu can release a huge amount of eletricity for battle assistance. 7) Shichibi no Kaku - Kaku is a bijuu in the form of badger. Its Kanji is also read as Mujina, which is the name the Japanese subspecies of badger (Meles Meles Anaguma) receives in some parts of Japan. It has seven tails, and is the smallest bijuu out of the nine; though it is the most cunning and stealthy. Kaku hunts its prey underground most of the time. It kills by crumbling/destroying the piece of land that is under its target, making it fall right into his open mouth. Above land, whenever he is around he can transform into any type of creature, but he is unable to do it if he doesn’t have clay. 8) Hachibi no Hachimata - Yamata no Orochi is a Snake bijuu. It has crimsom red eyes, eight heads and eight tails (also depicted to having trees and vines growing around them) and has the power of the Demon world, a symbol of evil. Each head of Yamata no Orochi represents a symbol: Soul, Ghost, Evil, Devil, Monstrous, Kill, The Afterworld and Death. 9) Kyuubi no Kitsune - This is a bijuu in the shape of a nine-tailed fox, and the strongest of them all. The reason he is so powerful is simple: Kyuubi has an unlimited amount of power, earning it the “King of Bijuu” title. The power is generated by Kyuubi’s Fire Seal, and as a result, after battling for 100 years with Yamata no Orochi, it becomes exhausted; but Kyuubi continues standing, able to fight. It is also pretty cunning and smart. The Story: There were respective shrines dedicated to these elemental Bijuu scattered through Japan’s territory, the Fire shrine being the strongest. Though, the shines keep releasing spiritual energy even while the Bijuu are sealed within sleeping, and this power from the 5 shrines goes to the Five-Tails: Houkou. Hope all of you end up using this info. Ja, matta. :A swirl of leaves surrounds his body, leaving nothing behind as the leaves dissipated after he was gone.: | |||||||||||
1. My Own Legend » reviewsThe Sandaime has bravely taken it upon himself to seal the Kyuubi instead of Minato. With parents to guide him, how far will Naruto go to prove that he is not just the son of the hokage, but a living legend. Naruto X Hinata. Semi-powerful Naruto. CH 3 UP!Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 29,894 - Reviews: 71 - Updated: 10-27-08 - Published: 3-24-08 - Naruto U. & Hinata H.