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Name: Hizumi

Age: 18

E-mail: AkitoSaisuke@yahoo.com

AIM: BartDude06

Gender: :Looks down:...Male

Hobbies: Badminton, tennis, video games, cooking, Watching/reading anime/manga respectively, Hanging with friends and enjoying the high quality fanfiction on this site.

Favorite Bands/Singers: Hamasaki Ayumi, Utada Hikaru, UVERworld, FLOW, Asian Kung-fu Generation, and Hinoi Team (If you have any to recommend please don't hesitate in sending me names please).

Likes: Everything in my hobbies

Dislikes: Perverts, Racists, Loud Noise, Yaoi/Yuri (i have nothing against it, it's just not my preference) and finally flamers. Even if it's only a story i'm reading and i'm sending a positive review or a constructive criticism, when i see flamers i get mad. That does nothing to help the writer and it brings down their motivation to keep writing. Flamers beware: If i meet you, you'll have three seconds to run.

Dream: Become leader of the Kiri no Shinobigatana Nananin Shu (I just put that so i could remember it for my story lol).

Favorite Anime: Gintama, Naruto/Naruto Shippuuden, Bleach, Death Note, Ghost Hunt, Mahou Sensei Negima, Hayate no Gotoku, Katekyo Hitman reborn, Onegai Sensei/Twins and Love Hina.

Motto: "Tact is the art of making a point without making an enemy."

Favorite Pairings:

Naruto:

Naruto X Hinata - As long as it's not within the span of one chapter. A good NaruHina needs to be spanned about at least eight chapters because no matter how strong she sees Naruto become, that won't instantly changer her into a powered up Hinata.

Naruto X TenTen - TenTen is a strong kunoichi, exceptionally skilled and one of two girls who weren't attracted to Uchiha Sasuke, the first being the above mentioned girl. No matter what people choose to believe, IMO Neji will be too uptight to accept advances from her, (plus in social affairs, i think he's as clueless as Naruto).

Naruto X Haku - If you can write a good way to keep her alive that isn't him suggesting they come back to Konoha, at least not right away, then this can work. Oh and to agree with several authors, Haku i believe should be a girl. A guy who looks like this...should have been hitting on Zabuza. I'm also tired of people making Naruto EXTREMELY strong then having Haku see him from the trees and think 'He's cute.' Uh...no.

Naruto X Temari - This i think will work almost every time because of how Naruto helped Gaara become more friendly and saved him from Akatsuki (albeit, after he died...) she might see how kind and caring he is and his ability to make friends with almost anyone.

Naruto X Extra Character - By this, i mean like, Princess Yuki from the first Naruto movie or that princess from the flower country in a filler episode, before shippuuden. I've seen this done maybe once or twice and it is a challenge since we see so little of them, but it can be done and if you do it right, you'll have my greatest respect.

Shikamaru X Ino - This would be the funniest pairing. Ino yelling would bring about a stream of fifty "Mendokuse" (Troublesome) every hour. Plus i think Shika needs someone loud to get him out of his lazy demeanor.

Lee X Sakura - Lee deserves her, in a good way. Lee is so determined, and works so hard yet is mocked for poor choice in clothing and...lack of trimming. But the guy with the deepest resolve to protect close ones and to die protecting the one you love should get the girl...and that's Lee in a nutshell. This romance can start taking effect after he fights the Oto nin to protect her.

Konohamaru X Hanabi - This is a wonderful pairing, yet i've only seen it once. It's like a younger Lee/Naruto mix trying to persuade a female Neji/Sasuke mix into giving him a chance. Plus if Naruto was there to throw in a few colorful innuendos, what's to stop this from becoming laugh ammo?

Pokemon:

Abilityshipping (Ash X Anabel) - This is such a great pairing but is sadly very rare to see. To my knowledge only Anabel has actually admitted to liking Ash making her a perfect choice for him.

Mirageshipping (Ash X Sabrina) - He gave her back her emotions in a way so logically (to me at least) she would fall for him for doing so much for her. Plus she's really cute and i can see them bringing out the best in each other.

Gintama:

Gin X Kyubei - It's difficult to explain why I like this pairing. I suppose if anyone could get Kyubei to start falling for them it would be Gin. He not only has silver hair but a silver tongue. He can weave his words to inspire others, lift spirits or make people see things in a new light.

Gin X Kagura - Everytime Gin and Kagura interact she seems to have deep feelings for him and is rather protective of him. I've seen some really good stories with this and it's ALWAYS really cute. Like a schoolgirl love.

Gin X Otae - Everytime she's in trouble Gin is there to help out. Besides her brother, he's the most dependable guy she knows. He will always help her out when she needs it and she had better start realizing it.

Least Favorite Pairings:

Naruto X Tsunade - Tsunade is 53 years old. Naruto, after the time skip, is 16. Not. Going. To. Happen. Tsunade is more a mother to Naruto than anything else. If you do a travel back in time fic for this to happen, it can't instantaneously happen. This should be very difficult and would probably, or should probably, remove Kyuubi from Naruto or otherwise severly damage him. Something like this has to have a down side, just like jutsu.

Naruto X Sakura - Now, don't get me wrong. This can be written in a way to my liking. The way most people write it however, is Naruto gets mistreated and abused by Sakura, he comes back stronger and she suddenly realizes what she missed. No... She should should START out as a fan girl for Sasuke, but realize what she lacks compared to Naruto and Sasuke after the wave expedition and start working towards being a good kunoichi rather than working to get a date. Start them as friends and enter the fluff in after Sasuke leaves the village or if you keep him in the village, after he finds someone else, tells her off or she realized he's a stuck up prick.

Now i'm sorry for this, but i have certain things that need to be said.

1) The Yondaime Hokage's name is Namikaze Minato and his wife was Uzumaki Kushina. I understand that Kazama Arashi was commonly used before the real name was released so that's ok. BUT, if you know his name is Namikaze Minato, yet you write a new story using Arashi, i will not read further than that. You have a right to use what you feel like, but you're wrong.

2) Jutsu names should NOT be in English. There are hundreds of English to Japanese romaji translators online. If the English you enter to be translated doesn't work, you probably didn't put it one word at a time. My translator is http/www.dicts.info/2/english-japanese_romaji.php. Enter words one at a time here and you'll have a fully translated jutsu name in seconds.

3) Sannin is not a rank of a jutsu or a shinobi. You can have E, D, C, B, A, S (A.K.A Kage level) ranked jutsu. Sannin means three people. Also, Ero-sennin (which literally translated means "Erotic Hermit") is Jiraiya's nickname, not Ero-sannin ("Erotic three people")

4) The nine biju are actually from Japanese mythology so you shouldn't insert your own animals into the positions. The nine biju are as follows:

1) Ichibi no Tanuki - Shukaku is a bijuu in the form of Raccoon Dog (Tanuki of the Japanese mythology). Before, he was a priest that lived in the Desert of Nara. Because of the dark power released by Yamata no Orochi, and under the heavy assault of wind and sand, he transformed into a raccoon dog (His actual form). He has a playful and extravagant personality, resembling the Tanuki nature. Has a pretty active sexual life. Shukaku lives in the souls of people killed by the wind and sand (This actually resembles the case of Gaara’s mother). The violet (blue in the anime) tattoos represent his title of God of Wind.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 5 times; 1 Win, 3 Losses, 1 Flee
Wins: Sokou
Losses: Raijuu, Nekomata, Isonade
Escapes: Yamata no Orochi
Fate: Shukaku is defeated by a Nara Monk called Oraga Nakashimu with a type of magic art. Then, the monk proceeds to use the "Tool of Power: Antler Teakettle" to seal it into the seal in the Wind Shrine.
Ability: Sandstorms, has the control of Wind and Sand manipulation.
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 8th
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 9th
Symbolic Element: Wind (God of Wind)
Origin / Discovered in: Nara Desert
Japanese Myth Appearance: A species of Tanuki, Yellow body

2) Nibi no Nekomata - Nekomata is a bijuu in the form of cat, and possesses the power of death. This Bijuu lives in a place called “Forest of Death” (Not a mistranslation.) in Hokkaido, to the north. His appearance is a black cat monster (depicted with huge, black angel wings). He’s the Death God’s pet. Nekomata feeds on dead people’s spirits, and can summon these to fight for him. He uses a third eye at the top of its head to consume the spirits.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Trying to dominate his enemies, Nekomata forms an alliance with Houkou, and attacks Kyuubi. They have a disastrous defeat, and Nekomata is rescued by the Death God, escaping death by a hair’s breadth. Battled 3 times; 2 Wins, 1 Loss.
Wins: Kaku, Isonade
Losses: Kyuubi
Fate: Nekomata ends up killed by Kyuubi later, and in that instant his spirit is summoned by the Death God. The body was kept in a shrine in the Forest of Death, sealed by the Death God himself.
Ability: Death; may control deceased person's spirits
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 4th
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 8th
Symbolic Element: Darkness (God of Darkness)
Origin / Discovered in: Hokkaido’s “Forest of Devils” (Different of Forest of Death)
Japanese Myth Appearance: A species of two tails black cat, with slightly more pointed ears and bigger canines.

3) Sanbi no Isonade - Isonade is a shark shaped Bijuu with a sharp horn on the forehead. It lives in the deep waters on the West of Japan, fighting pirates. Every few months, Isonade will swim to the surface of the sea from the deep waters, to breath some fresh air. However, when he does this, storms erupt, oceans rage, and all ships will be swallowed by him as food. Isonade has a subordinate fish called Samehada (Same name as Kisame's Sword. Depicted differently, but with same pronunciation). Samehada attaches itself to Isonade’s stomach, and absorbs its food to create huge amounts of chakra, proceeding to send it back to its body. Samehada’s power can enable Isonade to get 5 times the quantity of chakra it could originally get. Therefore, when Isonade battles, he will have unlimited chakra to receive from Samehada.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 4 times; 2 Wins, 1 Loss, 1 Flee
Wins: Kaku, Shukaku
Losses: Nekomata
Escapes: Yamata no Orochi
Fate: A fisherman and brave warrior from Yokohama, called Takuma Muramasa, sacrifices himself in behalf of two villages in a courageous act, getting near Isonade and sealing his personal servant Samehada in the “Tool of Power: Pot of the Shark-named fish” from seal in the Water Shrine. Isonade then becomes unable to draw the massive chakra, and ends up getting exausted and sucked by the Tool’s seal in the Water Shrine as well.
Ability: Generic water powers, can control the currents of water.
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 6th
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 7th
Symbolic Element: Water (God of Water)
Origin / Discovered in: Four Nanju Country Islands - Yawagawa Sea Area (COUGHNanju is Kisame's Akatsuki RankCOUGH)
Personal notes: Well, if this bijuu doesn’t scream KISAME to you, then this note is indeed useful. The Samehada connection is frightening (absorbs chakra), but there can be more about it, explaining WHY Kisame’s chakra reserve is SO big (as being the biggest in Akatsuki).
Japanese Myth Appearance: A big shark/fish with 3 tails and 3 fins. Has a dark blue body color, is attracted by blood (like all sharks); has a personal servant, a small fish named Samehada, that is responsible to help Isonade absorb and digest Chakra in 5 times his original capacity.

4) Yonbi no Sokou - Sokou is a bijuu that looks like a reptile. It was a creature that lived near Mount Fuji. Because of the toxic gas and the volcaninc ash, he was transformed into a half-rooster, half-snake monster. The Rooster and Snake are husband and wife in Sokou’s body. Everything around it withers away or dies, because of its poison. According to the Legend, whenever he hibernates in Mount Fuji, the snoring he causes will make the volcano erupt.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 4 times; 3 Losses, 1 Flee
Losses: Shukaku, Kaku, Houkou
Escapes: Raijuu
Fate: Sokou was sealed by a master of demonic arts, called Yamazaki Ishiro, with the “Tool of power: Netted Moon Cage” to the seal in the Mount Fuji’s base. Sokou becomes unable to send out his poisonous gas from the mountain for all eternity.
Ability: Controls poison, poisonous gas, venoms, and so on.
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 9th
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 6th
Symbolic Element: Poison
Origin / Discovered in: Close to Tokyo, Mount Fuji.
Japanese Myth Appearance: A four-tailed Rooster / Snake mixture. The lower part of the body is a Snake, while the upper part is a Rooster. Crawls instead of walking. Most of the body parts have an orange tone.

5) Gobi no Houkou - Houkou is a bijuu which looks like a five-tailed dog. Each tail of this creature represents one elemental power: Wind, Water, Earth, Lightning and Fire. They can cause catastrophic damage when used. Houkou will willingly destroy the nature to obtain the power he desires from these elements. He was once badly injured when he and Nekomata challenged Kyuubi. Strangely enough, he is the god of Illusion. Houkou lives in a giant, ancient tree.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 4 times; 3 Wins, 1 Loss
Wins: Sokou, Nekomata, Raijuu
Losses: Kyuubi
Fate: After receiving a severe wound, Houkou runs away to one of Japan's islands, and hides in a place near Kyushu’s Volcano - a giant tree, to heal his wound. But the tree's concrete position is not known by anyone.
Ability:
Attacking using mixture of elements; Houkou is skilled in each kind of element ability, and can also create instantaneously each kind of natural disaster.
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 3rd
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 5th
Symbolic Element: Illusion (Being the god of Illusions)
Origin / Discovered in: Near one of Kyushu’s volcanoes (Akase Lava Volcano, probably)
Japanese Myth Appearance: A species of dog, with 5 long tails. Has a white coloured body. Each of the tails possess one of the five elemental powers, that used simultaneously can cause a big earthquake.

6) Rokubi no Raijuu - Raijuu, a bijuu in the form of weasel, has four legs and very sharp claws. Its cry sounds like thunder. It was originally the god of Thunder, but because of Yamata no Orochi’s power, it was transformed into a beast. Raijuu can release a huge amount of eletricity for battle assistance.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 5 times; 2 Wins, 3 Losses
Wins: Shukaku, Sokou
Losses: Houkou, Yamata no Orochi, Kyuubi
Fate: A ninja called Sarutobi (That’s right, but Kishimoto probably took the name to make the series’ Sandaime), in the legend, effectively eliminated Raijuu by using the technique “Kinjutsu: Raikiri”. (Now the confusion starts. This is supposed to be Kakashi’s move, but the way of writing may be different from the actual jutsu, and Kishimoto probably changed this legend to fit the story anyway). What actually happens is that the technique counters the lightning released by Raijuu by cutting it, making the beast receive its own attack, and become severely wounded. (Thus the name lightning edge.) He then is sealed by Sarutobi with the “Tool of Power: Hidden Thunder Prison” into the seal in the Thunder Shrine.
Ability: Fire caused by lightning, Lightning Thunder, Lightning bolts, Lightning elemental magic arts; Raijuu may also fly about as a ball of lightning / fire.
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 5th
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 4th
Symbolic Element: Lightning (God of Lightning)
Origin / Discovered in: Underground the Thunder Shrine in a town in Kyoto
Japanese Myth Appearance: A species of weasel with golden yellow fur. The whole body’s fur grows upright. Its six tails take a lightning shape, just like the ancient God of Thunder.

7) Shichibi no Kaku - Kaku is a bijuu in the form of badger. Its Kanji is also read as Mujina, which is the name the Japanese subspecies of badger (Meles Meles Anaguma) receives in some parts of Japan. It has seven tails, and is the smallest bijuu out of the nine; though it is the most cunning and stealthy. Kaku hunts its prey underground most of the time. It kills by crumbling/destroying the piece of land that is under its target, making it fall right into his open mouth. Above land, whenever he is around he can transform into any type of creature, but he is unable to do it if he doesn’t have clay.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 4 times; 1 Win, 3 Flees
Wins: Sokou
Escapes: Nekomata, Isonade, Yamata no Orochi
Fate: Kaku’s storehouse of clay in a hole is found, and is burned by warriors. Kaku is unable to transform, and is defeated by the brave warrior Ikkyo Soujin, who proceeds to seal it with the “Tool of Power: Remnant Earth Altar” into the seal in the Earth Shrine.
Ability: Transformation (Henge), Clay, Earth elemental magic arts
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 7th
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 3rd
Symbolic Element: Earth (God of Earth)
Origin / Discovered in: Underground Sacrificial Altar in the Nagoya outskirts
Japanese Myth Appearance: Kaku is the smallest Bijuu. It has a blue color, and is good at using clay camouflage. Kaku is very difficult to bump into.

8) Hachibi no Hachimata - Yamata no Orochi is a Snake bijuu. It has crimsom red eyes, eight heads and eight tails (also depicted to having trees and vines growing around them) and has the power of the Demon world, a symbol of evil. Each head of Yamata no Orochi represents a symbol: Soul, Ghost, Evil, Devil, Monstrous, Kill, The Afterworld and Death.
Its powers were originally weak, the members of the Kusanagi clan, when attacking it, acted carelessly, using the legendary sword Kusanagi no Tsurugi (Oro’s sword). Because of that, as a consequence, Yamata no Orochi takes the sword from them, absorbing the power contained inside, and becoming an incredibly powerful creature, and finally storing it in its body.
With the new power, Yamata no Orochi releases an insane amount of dark energy, awakening the other Bijuu and becoming arrogant. Yamata no Orochi proceeds to defeat many of the Bijuu, but when it battles with Kyuubi, it is defeated. The cause of this is simple: Kyuubi has an unlimited amount of power, making even a hole in the Kusanagi sword. As this happens, it shows how tremendously powerful Kyuubi is, deserving of the “King of Bijuu” title. Not even Sarutobi and Enma (I’m not sure how those two are into the legend) could scratch the Kusanagi no Tsurugi. (That makes connections to the Oro x Sandaime battle)
Legend also depicted it as having a power able to rival Kyuubi’s in quality, but the fact is, Yamata no Orochi’s does have a limit.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 5 times; 4 Wins, 1 Losses
Wins: Shukaku, Isonade, Kaku, Raijuu
Losses: Kyuubi
Fate: Yamata no Orochi awaits a genius of the Yagami (NOT the Yagami from Death Note, but Yagami as in Eight Gods: Yagami clan, which is the arch enemy of the Kusanagi clan. The purpose is to awake Yamata no Orochi, in order to fight Kyuubi again. Since Yamata no Orochi’s power inherits in the Yagami Clan, If the heir appears as the first genius in 1000 years that is able to awake Yamata no Orochi’s ability, it will be completely restored. Once the process is done, the genius with such crucial task will be destroyed due to the true body of Yamata no Orochi resurfacing, which has an all-new power. It won’t be found before the decisive battle with Kyuubi, and will be able to kill no matter of thing, destroy any type of place, and attain infinite vision (as Kyuubi has). The core of Yamata no Orochi’s power is in a kind of forbidden sealing jutsu. As soon as the Yagami clan heir comprehends enough of it, a bigger, much stronger power will surface in the grasp of Yamata no Orochi.
Ability: The legendary sword: Kusanagi no Tsurugi; summoning of evil spirits (Edo tensei...)
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 2nd
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 2nd
Symbolic Element: Devil
Origin / Discovered in: An old battlefield in Osaka
Japanese Myth Appearance: A super Snake of Eight heads and Eight tails, attached to a single body. Has a deep brown color. It definitely is the biggest bijuu - the lenghth of it is over eight mountains. Originally, it was weaker than Houkou and Nekomata; however, that was 1000 years before a brave warrior tried defeating it with the Kusanagi no Tsurugi. In the process, the sword’s power is absorbed instead by Yamata no Orochi, thus greatly expanding his power. He is able to use freely the sword in his belly.

9) Kyuubi no Kitsune - This is a bijuu in the shape of a nine-tailed fox, and the strongest of them all. The reason he is so powerful is simple: Kyuubi has an unlimited amount of power, earning it the “King of Bijuu” title. The power is generated by Kyuubi’s Fire Seal, and as a result, after battling for 100 years with Yamata no Orochi, it becomes exhausted; but Kyuubi continues standing, able to fight. It is also pretty cunning and smart.
Situation in the Ancient War of the 9 Gods: Battled 4 times; All of them victories
Wins: Nekomata, Houkou, Raijuu, Yamata no Orochi
Fate: In unclear whereabouts, Kyuubi continues to kill all the people on his way to find the one who awakened him, and the one who managed to seal him before. (That being Yondaime, probably) Yamata no Orochi didn’t tell Kyuubi, though, that the one who awakened him was the Eight Tails himself.
Ability: Fire element attacks, Flaming claws
Bijuu Strength Ranking: 1st
Bijuu Chakra/Stamina Ranking: 1st
Symbolic Element: Fire (God of Fire)
Origin / Discovered in: Hidden Altar of Gods in Kobe
Japanese Myth Appearance: Kyuubi no Youko is the strongest Bijuu of the Japanese Myth. Its body has a red fur; Kyuubi represents the element of Fire. Its abilities are incredible. Because it has never been defeated by any youkai, its total strength is unable to estimate. His tails create cyclones by spinning quickly, and Kyuubi proceeds to rip its enemies with its huge claws. At the same time his fur may shoot fireballs similar to meteorites endlessly, instantly destroying villages. In the ancient Bijuu wars, a challenge results in Houkou being severely wounded, and Nekomata nearly dying, but ending up being rescued by his master, Shinigami (God of Death). Yamata no Orochi depended on the Kusanagi no Tsurugi to fight Kyuubi, but was defeated and the sword received a cracked hole, courtesy of our kitsune.
More info about Kyuubi: The Kyuubi is an intelligent demon that is capable of speech and has a scathing, sadistic personality. However he has also a sense of fairness and sarcastic honor, as he sometimes helps Naruto when he is in a difficult situation. This could be for purely selfish reasons, however, for it is speculated that if Naruto dies, then the Kyuubi will die with him. It seems likely that the Kyuubi has some concept of a loathing respect for Naruto and even more so for the Fourth Hokage.

The Story: There were respective shrines dedicated to these elemental Bijuu scattered through Japan’s territory, the Fire shrine being the strongest. Though, the shines keep releasing spiritual energy even while the Bijuu are sealed within sleeping, and this power from the 5 shrines goes to the Five-Tails: Houkou.
After Yamata no Orochi got the legendary sword Kusanagi no Tsurugi from the Kusanagi Clan, it defeated Nekomata and Houkou (Check Yamata no Orochi’s tale).
Yamata no Orochi then proceeded to release a tremendous amount of dark power to awaken the five elemental Bijuu, that were sealed in the 5 shrines, with the purpose of bringing chaos between worlds.
It ended up fighting the one deserving of the title “King of Bijuu”: Kyuubi no Youko. It has an unending amount of chakra, and because of that, Yamata no Orochi was defeated.

Hope all of you end up using this info. Ja, matta. :A swirl of leaves surrounds his body, leaving nothing behind as the leaves dissipated after he was gone.:

1. My Own Legend » reviews
The Sandaime has bravely taken it upon himself to seal the Kyuubi instead of Minato. With parents to guide him, how far will Naruto go to prove that he is not just the son of the hokage, but a living legend. Naruto X Hinata. Semi-powerful Naruto. CH 3 UP!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 29,894 - Reviews: 71 - Updated: 10-27-08 - Published: 3-24-08 - Naruto U. & Hinata H.
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