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since: 03-28-08, id: 1536783, Profile edited: 07-01-08
Author has written 5 stories for Maximum Ride.

Helloooooooooooo

I am LuckySox, Maximum Ride Fanatic, as well as twilight, Eragon, and many other novels of sorts.

My socks give my the inspiration i need to write. Well, no, but that it my explanation for my user name.

Music favs: Evanescence (or however its spelled), Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Fall out Boy, Gorillaz, Train, Pink, Kelly Clarkson, Blink 182, Reliant K, Maroon 5, Paramore

Movie favs: HOT FUZZ!!, Harry Potter movies, LOTRS, POTC, Sweeny todd, the Producers, Hairspray, The princess bride, A shot in the dark, Jurasic Park, the mummy, Transformers, Romeo and Juliet (1968 version)

Tv Shows: Little britain, Coupling, Freinds, Torchwood, Doctor Who, Robin hood, Heroes, CSI, Law and Order, Criminal Minds, avatar, Cold Case, SYTYCD, My family, Seinfeld

The List of Amazing Authors (in no particulur order):
- William Shakespeare
-Stephan King
-James Patterson
-Tamora Pierce
-Charles Dickens
-Scott Westerfiled
-Christopher Paulini
- Stephanie Meyer
-J.K. rowling
- J.R. Tolkein
-John Steinback
-Meg Cabot

Favorite Plays/Musical of all time (no particulur order):
-Legally Blonde
-A Midsummer Night's Dream
-Les Miserables
-The Lion King
-The Taming of the Shrew
-Jekyll and Hyde
-Hairspray
-The Phantom of the Opera
-Noises Off
-Sweeny Todd
- The Producers
- Rent

Song lyrics that describe me: from Bend and Snap from Legally Blonde the Musical

"I'm too rockin' to lock away
All the boys come and gawk away
Droppin' jaws from a block away
Watchin' how i walk away"

Quotes that I think are hilarious/stupid/deep:

"Everyone line up in alphabetical order by height."-will not be named

"Everyone pair up in groups of three, then line up in a circle."-same as above

"You know when you're in love when you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams."-Dr. Seuss

"Know what he had that you didn't? A GREAT BIG BUShY BEARD!"-hot fuzz

"Misther prethident is thoo awthome and rugged. Your prime Minither thuckth."-little britain

"Friendship is more lasting than love, adn more legal than stalking"-Coupling

"If homo sapiens were indeed homo sapiens, could that be why they are all extinct?"-Joey from Friends

"Last night, I lay in my bed, looking at the stars, and thought to myself, Where the heck is the ceiling?"-unknown

"Silence is Golden, but Duct Tape is Silver"-unknown

"No day but today"- Rent

THEME SONGS FOR VARIOUS CHARACTERS:

Max: Seventeen ain't so sweet by Red jumpsuit apparatus

"Well she never was the best at following the trends
stayed one step above the rest, even if it seemed
like the world was crashing on her, she didn't let it hold her down
didn't hold her down, oh no, no no"

"Dont worry you'll show them
There's a fire in your eyes, and i hope you let it burn
And there's a scream in your voice, and I hope you will be heard.
There's a fire in your eyes, and I hope you'll let it burn until you're heard."

Fang: Kryptonite by 3 doors down

"You call me strong, you call me weak
but still your secrets I can keep
You took for granted all the times I never let you down
You stumbled in and bumped your head, if it weren't for me then you'd be dead
I picked you up, and put you back on solid ground."

"If i go crazy then will you still call me Superman?
If im alive and well will you be there holdin my hand?
I'll keep you by my side with my super human might.
Kryptonite

Fax: I won't Say from Herculues (the disney movie)

"Who'd'ya think you're kiddin'
He's the Earth and heaven to you
Try to keep it hidden
Honey, we can see right through you
Girl, ya can't conceal it
We know how ya feel and
Who you're thinking of"

Angel: New Soul by Yael Naim

"I'm a new soul
I came to this strange world
Hoping I could learn a bit bout how to give and take
But since I came here, felt the joy and the fear
Finding myself making every possible mistake"

Nudge: No Daddy by Teairra Mari

"I had no daddy around when I was growing up (huh)
That's why I'm wild and I don't give a (huh)
Ya'll think cuz these jeans fit, I would give it up
Don't let my cute face fool ya
I had no daddy around when I was growing up (huh)
That's why I'm wild and I don't give a (huh)
Ya'll think cuz these jeans fit, I would give it up
Don't let my cute face fool ya"


Someone else did this in their profile, and I think it's a good idea. I'm going to list the flaws in my writing,as well as what annoys me about other fics. Here are five:

1. Chat room stuff is fun every once in a while. But no way is the entire flock getting in the same chat room at once. They only have one laptop. Even if they go to a library or something, they'll be within arm's distance of each other. Might as well talk with words for god's sake. except for fang, who doesn't talk. And the "Fang and Max talking about their feelings online w/o realizing who they're talking to" cliche is overused. With usernames like "Quiet&Hawt" and "FlyForeverFree" makes is so obvious who they are. I'd like to think Fang and Max could figure that out, seeing as they are not that stupid.

2. A problem of mine: not enough description. I try, but I also fail. Dialogue can dominate. Helpful for the plot, but it's nice to know where this is all taking place.

3. OC's can dominate as well. Working on that for my own fics now. I love my OC's. I think they're amazing. But I don't want the fic to center around them. Something I need to work on.

4. The function of the summary is to grab the attention of potential readers. To pique their interest. Writing "my summarys suck" does not pique my interest. Summarys are not that difficult.

5. Fang and Max have kids a lot in other fics. Fine. But this creates an OC, which causes most Fax children evolve into Mary Sues, meaning they are perfect kids with amazing superpowers and usually are the spitting image of either Fang or Max. I tried to go against this with my one-shot Flawed, which is about such an OC, minus the Mary Sue part.

6. Twilight.MR crossovers. Why does every make Fang so accident prone? He always ends up injured or something, and Edward or another Cullen happens to come across him. Then it's "Hey, my dad's a doctor, come on in!" Used tons, so I refuse to use it myself.

About my fics:

The Lost School: First Fic. I think it was pretty sucessful. Did a pretty good job. OC's not too dominating. Pretty happy with it. Made up my own new hybrids and villians, that weren't that generic. New powers that I have yet to see in someone else fic, but of course that can be tested. Overall, I am pretty pleased with this.

The Neck Breaker: I lost it with this fic. I need to finish it, but I lack inspiration. So, it's on break.

INsangel: I really like how this one is going. No OC's (yes!). It's an AU, and I have been doing a good job explaining the enviroment, which is vital in a AU, for obvious reasons. I also like how I don't own the plot or the characters, so there is no danger of writer's block. ON BREAK UNTIL A & V is FINISHED!

Flawed: First One-shot, but has potential for full-fledged fic. I think this story is very prone to writer's block if I do expand on it. I semi-borrowed the character from my other fics. I like the voice in it. It's a monologue pretty much, so there is no big scenes or action or whatever.

Angels and Vampires: A twilight/MR crossover. I totally stopped all other stories to start this. Breaking Dawn is coming out in August, and I just had to do a crossover. People like this one alot, and I know where it's going. I wanted to make a different Twi/MR crossover than the rest. Does this sound familiar? "Fang is injured and the cullens need to help!" Well, I didn't want it to be like that. I also think that the werewolves are barely in any of these crossovers. So I exclusivly put them in mine.


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1. Angels and Vampires » reviews
Twilight/MR crossover. The Flock break out of The School, and they meet a certain werewolf on the way out. What does the School want with werewolves? What lengths will the School go to capture the Pack? Working up to Fax.
Maximum Ride - Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 15,942 - Reviews: 108 - Updated: 7-24-08 - Published: 6-18-08
2. InsAngel: The Tale of Angel White » reviews
Angel is tired of being picked on. What her bullies don't know is that Angel is powerful. They'll get what they deserve. They'll wish they never messed with Angel White. Based on "carrie" by Stephan King. T for language and themes, character deat
Maximum Ride - Fiction Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Horror - Chapters: 13 - Words: 14,597 - Reviews: 32 - Updated: 6-9-08 - Published: 5-4-08
3. The Neck Breaker » reviews
On Break. Mucho Writer's Block.
Maximum Ride - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 14 - Words: 20,094 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 5-31-08 - Published: 4-22-08
4. Flawed reviews
My mom is the perfect woman. My dad is the perfect man. They are the perfect couple. Do they get the perfect son? No. They get not-so-perfect me. One Shot bout Max n Fang's kid. a bit angsty, not that much.
Complete - Maximum Ride - Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 979 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 5-19-08 - Published: 5-19-08
5. The Lost School » reviews
Max's days are numbered. To prevent the inevitable, Fang must lead the Flock into the seemingly abandoned School 4. But when the Flock get into School 4, it is anything but abandoned... Faxness included COMPLETE!
Complete - Maximum Ride - Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 21,433 - Reviews: 56 - Updated: 4-18-08 - Published: 3-30-08
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