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Tomi Lang
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since: 04-12-08, id: 1549443, Profile Updated: 11-28-09
country: Israel
Author has written 5 stories for Tsubasa Chronicle, X/1999, and Tokyo Babylon.

Hello~! Tomi is here! Tomi Lang is the name, but it's not my real name of course. Tomi likes writing fanfics and original stories, and is young and hyper. She likes as well anime, manga, fantasy and adventure, sweets (especially chocolate) and the spring.
I'm not an English speaker, I still study the language in school. Unfortunately, I don't study translation, which I need hardly in order to write my fics better, so everything you see here is a result of lots of hours near my dictionary.

You will find me writing especially fantasy, adventure and romance. I like writing about darkness and I'm a great fan of plot twists. I'm better writing dialouges, but I concentrate on improving my descriptions. I hope you'll like my stories~

And please understand, people, that reviews are food for stories. If a story doeasn't get any reviews the writer will not have any motivation to continue writing. So even if you didn't like my stories, I'd like to know that you actually went and read what I wrote. I like it when people love my stories, and love it even more if people suggest me ways of improving my writing. Thank you~!

You can also find my original stories and poems here: http://www.fictionpress.com/~tomilang


Plans for the Near Future

Eshya and Jinnie - Tsubasa RC
Corrected version of "Youre name, please?". In the dangerous and unclear world of Motikana, Syaoran is mistaken to be a hero, or maybe a criminal? Now he must defeat a powerful magician-king and save not only a young couple from death, but the whole world from a distortion in time.

Optimistic Alternative - Tsubasa RC
Our travelers arrive in the next world just in time for the new year's celebrations. The King prepares a great ceremony, which everyone is excited about. What is it? The King doesn't say anything. In the meanwhile, Fay, Sakura, Mokona, Kurogane and Syaoran meet the - with no doubt - most special people they have ever met during their journey. But those people act weird for some reason. Why is that? And what is really going on? It seems like our friends are going to find it out... on the hard way.

The Ultimate Fanfiction Writer - Tsubasa RC
Based on the drama CD. In order to have the feather of this world, the travelers must write a play and act it for the king. When Fay takes on himself the duty of writing the play he finds out that creating a plot is not such an easy thing to do. Follow Fay on his way of becoming a writer while he discoveres the world of writing and fanfiction - See him trying writing a play based on him and his friends, making up the crackiest pairings, dealing with plot bunnies and writer's block, finding many different genres and much more! Each chapter is a whole new idea out of our favorite magician's very creative mind!

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And Also in my Plans

Auditions, Auditions - CLAMP crackfic
The CLAMP characters' attempt to get into a new musical. If the examiners are three hyper fangirls, will they be able to pass the auditions?

Bad Habits - CLAMP AU
Eight teens who lost their chance to have normal life try to build a better future for themselves. But they are not what they were before, and so not the world. So, which one is wrong - their existance, or maybe the world?

Drian Chorincles - Tsubasa RC AU
Similar story, different situation. They all have something to save, except for one. What is his role in this story?

Fairytales Twister - CLAMP crackfic
What if the princess is the bad guy, and she decides to kidnap a knight? What if the dragon is the only one who can save the day? And was if... Subaru is a frog?

Same Truth, Different Eyes - Crossover of Tsubasa RC and Twilight
Two girls and a pair of twins are together on the same journey. Which realities are waiting for them?

UgaBato - Kobato Oneshot
Imagine the stone age - cavemen, dinosauruses, ginat meat-eating plants... and one little prehistorical girl who only wanted to fill her coconut with people's broken hearts!? This is a little story of a prehistorical version of Kobato, as far as my imagination can go.

Two, Many of Us / Too Many of Us - Crossover of X/1999 and Gundam 00
"The price for your wish is... the Earth". What happenes when two boys, who carry the world's future on their shoulders, must pay this price?

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In Progress

Animal house - Tsubasa RC, Tokyo Babylon, xxxHOLiC, X/1999
(AU)

Journey Across the Coast - Tsubasa RC
(AU - ON HIATUS)

The Witch of Tokyo - Tsubasa RC
(half-AU)

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Completed

The Okonomiyaki Incidence - X/1999
(oneshot)

Your name, please? - Tsubasa RC

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For my published stories, look at the bottom of the page.


For people that hate stereotypes: If you think people should just shut up and stop, put this on your profile. (BOLD the ones you are.)
I'm SKINNY, so I MUST be anorexic.
I'm EMO, so I MUST cut my wrists.
I'm a NEGRO so I MUST carry a gun.
I'm BLONDE, so I MUST be a ditz
I'm JAMAICAN so I MUST smoke weed.
I'm HAITIAN so I MUST eat cat.
I'm ASIAN, so I MUST be sexy.
I'm JEWISH, so I MUST be greedy.
I'm GAY, so I MUST have AIDS.
I'm a LESBIAN, so I MUST have a sex-tape.
I'm ARAB, so I MUST be a terrorist.
I SPEAK MY MIND, so I MUST be a bitch.
I'm a GAY RIGHTS SUPPORTER, so I WILL go to hell.
I'm a CHRISTAN, so I MUST think gay people should go to hell.
I'm RELIGIOUS, so I MUST shove my beliefs down your throat.
I'm ATHEIST so I MUST hate the world.
I don't have a RELIGION, so I MUST be evil and have no morals.
I'm REPUBLICAN, so I MUST not care about poor people.
I'm DEMOCRAT, so I MUST not believe in being responsible.
I am LIBERAL, so I MUST be gay.
I'm SOUTHERN, so I MUST be white trash.
I TAKE (or used to take) ANTI-DEPRESSANTS, so I MUST be crazy.
I'm a GUY, so I MUST only want to get into your pants.
I'm IRISH, so I MUST have a bad drinking problem.
I'm INDIAN, so I MUST own a convenient store.
I'm NATIVE AMERICAN, so I MUST dance around a fire screaming like a savage.
I'm a CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be a whore...
I'm a DANCER, So I MUST be stupid, stuck up, and a whore
I wear SKIRTS a lot, so I MUST be a slut.
I'm a PUNK, so I MUST do drugs.
I'm RICH, so I MUST be a conceited snob.
I WEAR BLACK, so I MUST be a goth or emo.
I'm a WHITE GIRL, so I MUST be a nagging, steal-your-money kind of girlfriend.
I'm CUBAN, so I MUST spend my spare time rolling cigars.
I'm NOT A VIRGIN, so I MUST be easy.
I FELL IN LOVE WITH A MARRIED MAN, so I MUST be a home-wrecking whore.
I'm a TEENAGE MOM, so I MUST be irresponsible and needy
I'm HAWAIIAN so I MUST be lazy
I'm PERUVIAN, so I MUST like llamas
I'm a STONER so I MUST be going in the wrong direction
I'm a VIRGIN so I MUST be prude.
I'm STRAIGHT EDGE so I MUST be violent.
I'm a FEMALE GAMER, so I MUST be ugly.. or crazy.
I'm BLACK so I MUST love fried chicken and kool-aid.
I'm a GIRL who actually EATS LUNCH, so I MUST be fat.
I'm SINGLE so I MUST be ugly.
I'm a SKATER so I MUST do weed and steal stuff
I'm a PUNK so I must only wear black and date only other punks
I'm ASIAN so I must be a NERD that does HOMEWORK 24/7
I'm CHRISTIAN so I MUST hate homosexuals.
I'm MIXED so I must be screwed up.
I'm MUSLIM so I MUST be a terrorist.
I'm in BAND, so I MUST be a dork.
I'm BLACK so I MUST believe JESUS WUZ A BROTHA
I'm MORMON so I MUST be perfect
I'm WHITE and have black friends so I MUST think I'm black
I'm GOTH so I MUST worship the devil
I'm HISPANIC, so I MUST be dirty.
I'm NOT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE, so I MUST be a loser.
I'm OVERWEIGHT, so I MUST have a problem with self control.
I'm PREPPY, so I MUST shun those who don't wear Abercrombie & Hollister.
I'm on a DANCE team, so I must be stupid, stuck up, and a whore.
I'm YOUNG, so I MUST be naive.
I'm MEXICAN, so I MUST have hopped the border.
I GOT A CAR FOR MY BIRTHDAY, so I MUST be a spoiled brat.
I'm BLACK, so I MUST love watermelon
I'm BI, so I MUST think every person I see is hot.
I'm an ASIAN GUY, so I MUST have a small penis.
I'm a GUY CHEERLEADER, so I MUST be gay.
I'm a PREP, so I MUST be rich.
I don't like the SUN so I MUST be an albino.
I have a lot of FRIENDS, so I MUST love to drink and party.
I wear tight PANTS and I'm a guy, so I MUST be emo.
I couldn't hurt a FLY, So I MUST be a pussy.
I support GAY RIGHTS, so I MUST fit in with everyone.
I hang out with teenage drinkers and smokers, so I MUST smoke and drink too.
I have ARTISTIC TALENT, so I MUST think little of those who don't.
I don't like to be in a BIG GROUP, so I MUST be anti-social.
I have a DIFFERENT sense of HUMOR, so I MUST be crazy.
I tell people OFF, so I MUST be an over controlling bitch.
My hair gets GREASY a lot, so I MUST have no hygiene skills.
I'm DEFENSIVE, so I MUST be over controlling and a bitch.
I'm a NUDIST, so I MUST want everyone to see my boobs.
I read COMICS, so I MUST be a loser.
I hang out with a FORMER PROSTITUTE. So I MUST be a whore myself.
I'm TEXAN so I MUST ride a horse
I’m a GOTH, so I MUST be a Satanist
I’m a CROSSDRESSER, so I must be homosexual.
I draw ANIME so I MUST be a freak.
I am a FANGIRL so I MUST be a crazy, obsessed stalker.
I WATCH PORN so I MUST be perverted.
I'm an ONLY CHILD so I MUST be spoiled.
I'm INTELLIGENT so I MUST be weak.
I am AMERICAN so I MUST be obese, loud-mouthed and arrogant.
I'm WELSH so I MUST love sheep
I’m a YOUNG WRITER, so I MUST be emo.
I’m CANADIAN, so I MUST talk with a funny accent.
I'm a GUY, so I MUST ditch my pregnant girlfriend.
I'm CANADIAN, so I MUST love hockey and beavers.
I'm DISABLED, so I MUST be on Welfare.
I'm a FEMINIST, so I MUST have a problem with sexuality and I want to castrate every man on the earth.
I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE.
I WEAR A BIG SUNHAT when I go outside, so I MUST be stupid.
I like BLOOD, so I must be a VAMPIRE.
I'm an ALBINO, so I MUST be an evil person with mental abilities and is A MURDERER!
I'm ENGLISH, so I MUST speak with either a cockney or a posh accent, love tea and cricket, and have bad teeth.
I’m WHITE, so I MUST be responsible for everything going wrong on the planet: past, present, and future.
I don't like YAOI or YURI, so I must be a HOMOPHOBE
I’m not the most POPULAR person in school, so I MUST be a loser.
I care about the ENVIRONMENT, so I MUST be a tree hugging hippy.
I have a FAN CHARACTER, so I MUST be an annoying Mary-sue.
I CHAT, I MUST be having cyber sex.
I'm PAGAN so I MUST sacrifice babies and drink the blood of virgins
I'm PAGAN so I MUST worship Satan
I'm CONSERVATIVE, so I MUST be against Abortion
I'm SWEDISH so I MUST be a tall blond blue-eyed lesbian.
I'm a LESBIAN so I MUST want to get with every single girl that I see.
I like CARTOONS, so I MUST be IRRESPONSIBLE.
I like READING, so I MUST be a LONER.
I have my OWN spiritual ideology; therefore I MUST be WRONG or MISGUIDED.
I am WICCAN, so I MUST be a SATANIST.
I DISAGREE with my government, so I MUST be a TERRORIST.
I am a WITCH, so I MUST be an OLD HAG and fly on a broomstick.
I love YAOI, so I MUST be GAY.
I'm a PERSON, so I MUST be LABELLED.
I DON'T CURSE, so I MUST be an outcast.
I like GAMES, ANIME and COMICS, so I MUST be childish.
I'm SWEDISH, therefore I MUST be WHITE.
I SPOT GRAMMATICAL ERRORS, so I MUST be a pedantic bastard.
I'm GOTHIC, so I MUST be mean.
I’m STRONG so I MUST be stupid.
I'm Australian so I MUST hunt crocodiles and talk to kangaroo’s
I go to RENFAIRES, so I MUST talk weird, be a loser, and not be up with the times
I’m GAY so I’m after EVERY straight guy around.
I don’t want a BOYFRIEND so I MUST be Lesbian.
I'm NOT CHRISTIAN so I MUST just need converting.
I love marching band, so I MUST be a friendless freak.
I DRINK and SMOKE, so I MUST have no life.
I am friends with a CUTTER, so I MUST be a CUTTER too.
I cry easily, so I MUST be a wimp.
I can't help pointing out mistakes so I MUST be an over-controlling perfectionist.
I'm a PERFECTIONIST so I MUST check everything ten times, them burst into tears at one mistake
I DON'T LIKE to talk about my personal life so I MUST be having problems.


You should know that I write mostly TsubasaRC fanfics. Not because it's the only manga I read - and it's not the only manga I read - but because this is the plot I'm best at working with. I prefer crack pairings, but I don't mind writing also the canon ones - KuroFay is an exception! I'm not a KuroFay lover and I don't write any of it, so if you look for KuroFay you should look somewhere else - which is actually in most of the TRC fanfics.
Also, I'm very sorry but I have lots of writer's blocks so I write very-very slowly. I also write fics in my language before writing then in English in order to make them better, so please don't be upset if I don't update for a long time - I do my best to make my stories good and interesting.

Thanks for paying attention and reading my profile. I hope you'll like my writing!

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1. Animal House » reviews
AU. Where can you find an angry black rabbit, a fangirl cat, a too innocent hamster and a very cute shy animal caretaker? In the animal house of Horitsuba academy! When a new hamster arrives, everything becomes even funnier! Take a look, you may enjoy
Crossover - Tsubasa Chronicle & Tokyo Babylon - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,263 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 9-17-09 - Published: 5-16-09 - Syaoran
2. The Okonomiyaki Incidence reviews
Oneshot. "So I’m sitting in a full loud okonomiyaki restaurant, and I’m looking at Fuuma, and he’s looking at me back, and his smile is so smiley and smilishly that I have no idea what is passing through is mind." Kamui's POV. Rated T to be safe.
X/1999 - Rated: T - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,237 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-15-09 - Kamui S. & Fuuma M. - Complete
3. The Witch of Tokyo reviews
One very boring day, the amazing thing happened and Sakura and Mokona were drawn into the book "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz". There, they find out that the book is not so different from what they used to know - even the people are the same. Half-AU
Tsubasa Chronicle - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,904 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-16-09 - Sakura & Mokona
4. Journey Across the Coast » reviews
AU. Syaoran grew in an orphanage, remembering nothing about his family execpt for a letter. Going on a journey with some friends, he hopes to find the truth. Kamui and Subaru as main characters as well. Maybe various pairings. ON HIATUS.
Tsubasa Chronicle - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,518 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-13-08 - Published: 10-15-08 - Syaoran
5. Your Name, Please? » reviews
Syaoran arrives in a new world, complitley alone. This is a dangerous country in a forest, where even your name can destroy your whole life. While his stay in this country, Syaoran learns, trough one boy and his dreams, the story of... another Syaoran.
Tsubasa Chronicle - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 7 - Words: 6,277 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 9-29-08 - Published: 4-18-08 - Syaoran - Complete
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