| Pitaloka |
Author has written 31 stories for Saint Seiya, Tales of Destiny, Breath of Fire, and Final Fantasy VII. Hi everybody... Here's my profile: My penname: Pitaloka Real name: Sorry I can't tell you... Gender: Female Place of Birth: Indonesia Date of Birth: June 13 About myself: I am Indonesian. I love nature but I hate pollution, chaos (in any forms) and noisy. I don’t like to argue and tend to be quite. I will say something if I think that’s necessary. I’ll argue others if they start arguing me. I’ll bash others politely and softly (or maybe bash harshly and sharply depending on how worse the situation is) if they start bashing me. However, I am not a very serious person but I am the sensitive one. I will appreciate others if I consider that they are proper to be appreciated. I love jokes and humor as long as they are not the rude and offensive ones. I love anime and RPG games. My favorite animes: Inuyasha, Naruto, Saint Seiya, Jura Tripper, and Tokyo Mew-Mew. My Favorite RPG: Breath of Fire IV, Suikoden I and II, Final Fantasy VII, and Final Fantasy IX. My Favorite PC game: Luxor, Bejeweled and Chainz. Favorite songs: Britney Spears: Baby One More Times, You Drive Me Crazy, I Was Born To Make You Happy, From The Bottom of My Broken Heart, Oops! I Did It Again!, Don’t Knock On My Door, What You see is What You Get!, Bombastic Love, Outrageous, I Run Away, Overprotected (Original and Remix), Let Me Be, Lonely, What is Like To Be Me, Toxic, and My Prerogative. Christina Aquilera: Genie in The Bottle, I Turn To You, When You Put Your Hand On Me, and Hurt. Evanescene: Bring Me To Live, Going Under, Haunted, Imaginary, Hello, Whisper, and Breath No More. Other favorite songs: Unfaithful (Rihanna), Umbrella (Rihanna), Teriyaki Boys, Viva Forever (Spice Girls), Tatto (Jordin Spark), Jalan Cinta (Sherina), Ayat-Ayat Cinta (Rosa), and Antara Ada dan Tiada (Utopia) Note: The last three songs I write in italics are Indonesian songs. About me and Camus (my favorite character) in Saint Seiya anime Saint Seiya anime was first aired in 1994 in one of Indonesian’s television channel. At that time I was a little girl and my favorite characters in Saint Seiya were Pegasus Seiya Cygnus Hyoga and I didn't like Camus at all! I used to hate him because I thought he's annoying! He froze and locked Hyoga in freezing coffin. Besides, I used to think that he was cruel, rude and merciless. I used to be happy when I watched Hyoga came to the House of Aquarius and challenged him. I laughed at Camus after I saw him falling on the floor ridiculously after Hyoga attacked him. But now...I no longer hate him. I think he is not just a very dedicated character. He's kind, care, and very protective (to those who are close to him) although Athena cannot save him from his terrible death and from the curse of the gods. He is probably cold in appearance and very distant but he's actually a very sincere male character. He defends his belief until he met his tragic death. He talks very less but his deems is always proper! His cocky manner may be somewhat annoying but that's not wrong because he is a teacher who teaches three students. You may think that I am a fanl of Camus but you don't need to consider me as the fanatic one and a REAL fan of Saint Seiya. If I am a fanatic fan of Camus, why do I sometimes make his character in my fanfic out of character? Collaboration Fanfic: Black Past, Future Light Description: This fanfic is arranged by Sayana and me. Currently, we are busy arranging the next chapter. So, please wait because We'll back soon! My Fanfic Revision Planning: I will revise three fanfics. They are “When The Coldest Saint Falls in Love”, “Defying The Unfortunate Fate of The Golds” and “Camus’s Short Devotion”. I want to revise “When The Coldest Saint Falls in Love” and “Defying The Unfortunate Fate of The Golds” because I think the fanfic are too OC-centric and of course I did many grammatical mistakes but the most disturbing thing for me is that I make Camus out of his character (if you realize that) in those fic. The content of those fanfic may change. Besides, I will put more emphasis on Camus’s role in those fanfic. I want to revise “Camus’s Short Devotion” because this fanfic is too short and does not seem like a fanfic but like a role-playing story although I intend to make the fanfic based on Camus’s point of views. Next Fanfic Chapters which will be uploaded: Defying The Unfortunate Fate of The Golds will be revised and uploaded on November 16. “Breath of Fire IV-RX” (Chapter II)- will be uploaded on December 4. Chapter V: Aiolia's New Profession from Oh No! What Have you Done Gold Saints? Fanfic will be uploaded on December 23. Chapter VI: Shaka? NO!! from Oh No! What Have you Done Gold Saints? Fanfic will be uploaded on December 23. Note for "Oh No! What Have you Done Gold Saints?" Fanfic: I'll be late uploading the chapters for I am busy and I need extra times to get the ideas. Perhaps, I have had the titles and have written the drafts. However, I have to check grammar and another linguistic component. So, please be patient! Announcement: I won't write new fanfics for a while because I want to complete my multi-chapter fanfics or edit one or two existing fanfic. However, I'll post one or two fanfics on February 7 for Camus of Aquarius and three fanfics at the end of May 2010 and they relate to Saga. If you want to ask me about my fanfic while you are not a member of Fanfiction.Net, you can send me an e-mail to the e-mail address below: goldvalkyrie@yahoo.com | |||||||
1. When The Coldest Gold Saint Falls in Love Rev » reviewsCamus should have died. However, his life is safe. What will happen to him next? Will he continue fighting? This is an edited and rewritten fanfic with the same title.Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,683 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11-5-09 - Published: 10-30-09 - Camus - Complete2. Breath of Fire IV: RX reviewsFou-Lu won the final battle against Ryu and his party and absorbed Ryu. What is he going to do next? Does the world really face its destruction? A fanfic based on the bad ending of Breath of Fire IV and a Fou-Lu X Mami fanfic.Breath of Fire - Rated: M - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,261 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-2-093. Oh No! What Have You Done, Gold Saints? » reviewsIt was Zeus's policy to resurrect the gold saints. However,some of them have problems with their emotion while the other have a new weird habit. What kinds of madness happen in Sanctuary? Chapter III and IV are up! Please R&RSaint Seiya - Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 4 - Words: 3,931 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 10-31-09 - Published: 9-17-084. Camus's Short Devotion »Camus and the other fallen gold saints were revived by Abel and were asked to be Abel and Athena's guardians. This fic tells about a side story which probably happens during Abel chapter and is told by using Camus' point of view.Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,840 - Published: 9-7-09 - Camus - Complete5. The Last Resting Place for The Ice Master reviewsAfter the Battle of Sanctuary, Saori Kido wants to bury the fallen gold saints in a very proper way. However, Hyoga disagree to her. What is in Hyoga's thought and what is he planning?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,048 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-7-09 - Hyoga - Complete6. Black Past, Future Light » reviewsAlex is Shun and Ikki's childhood and was separated from them. After many years, she became a saint of Okami and now disguises herself as a boy for the fun of it. Mila and Maia end up her to watch over her siblings. Set after 'Never Ending Dreams'Saint Seiya - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 15,342 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 8-15-09 - Published: 8-11-097. Twisting FateSaori Kido and her beloved bronze saints came to Mount of Olympus to face Zeus. She was going to ask Zeus to free the imprisoned gold saints. Would Zeus listen to her and release the gold saints from their terrible punishment?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Angst/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,608 - Published: 7-28-09 - Complete8. Bertukar Nasib reviewsBronze saints datang ke Gunung Olympus untuk bertemu dengan Zeus demi membebaskan gold saints. Bersediakah Zeus mengabulkan permintaan meeka?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - Indonesian - Angst/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,455 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-25-09 - Complete9. Clean Your Temple Up, Deathmask! » reviewsDeathmask is the most cruel gold saint. However,he must face frustrating choices when Athena came to his temple and ordered him to clean up his temple. Will Deathmask obey her order? COMPLETE!Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,537 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 7-17-09 - Published: 3-20-09 - Deathmask - Complete10. Kesempatan Hidup Kedua Bagi Sephiroth reviewsSephiroth bangkit kembali dari kematiannya. Namun, misi yang berat sedang menantinya. Misi apakah yang harus ia hadapi? Apakah kali ini ia akan menjadi lawannya Cloud, menjadi temannya, atau menjadi orang yang 'abu-abu? Temukan jawabannya!Final Fantasy VII - Rated: T - Indonesian - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 716 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-8-09 - Sephiroth11. Hyoga's NightmareAfter visiting his great master's grave in Sanctuary, Hyoga got a nightmare. Who came into his dream? Find the answer in this fanfic!Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Published: 5-2-09 - Hyoga - Complete12. Mimpi Buruk Hyoga reviewsHyoga mengalami mimpi buruk setelah ia mengunjungi makam gurunya di Sanctuary. Siapakah yang muncul di dalam mimpinya? Temukan jawabannya di dalam fanfic ini!Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 651 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-29-09 - Complete13. Behind The Scene II: Edisi Spesial Camus dan Hyoga reviewsSesuai judulnya, fanfic ini cuma nyeritain kalo misalnya anime Saint Seiya ada proses syutingnya dan dibalik proses pengambilan gambar tersebut banyak terjadi kekacauan. O iya, fanfic ini hanya mengekspos Camus dan Hyoga aja loh...XDSaint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,719 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-29-09 - Camus & Hyoga - Complete14. Kena Deh! reviewsMilo merasa bosen dan ia pun pergi ke Siberia untuk ketemu dengan Camus. Sesampainya di sana, ia di sambut Hyoga yang sendirian di rumah dan disuruh nungguin Camus. Apakah Milo semakin bertambah bosan? Silakan temukan jawabannya di fanfic kocak ini!Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 923 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-27-09 - Complete15. Sori Aku Lagi Tes Suara reviewsDeathmask dan gold saint yang lain punya kesempatan nginep di Kido mansion selama satu minggu. Tapi....Belum juga satu minggu, Deathmask udah ngerasa bete n bosen. Akibatnya, dia malah buat sensasi. Mau tau, sensasi apa yang dia buat? Baca aja deh....Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,011 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-24-09 - Deathmask - Complete16. Alasanku Yang Lain reviewsCamus punya alasan lain mengunci anak didik kesayangannya di dalam peti es/ freeing coffin. Alasan yang bagaimanakah? Temukan jawabannya di dalam fanfic ini.Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 907 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-24-09 - Camus - Complete17. Where Is My Hair Brush? reviewsPandora woke up in the morning and found that her hair brush was not on her dressing table. Who is the culprit anyway?Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 605 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-6-09 - Pandora18. Athena's Bad Hair Day reviewsOne day, Athena came to Sanctuary. She told her gold saints that she would hold a very important meeting in the next day. However, she canceled the meeting. What's wrong with her?Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,149 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-23-09 - Complete19. A Little Girl in Training Zone of The Ice Saints reviewsAn-eight-years-old girl was sent to Siberia in order to be trained as a saint. Will she survive? or Will she die?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 693 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3-22-0920. Behind The Scene Abel Chapter reviewsGini nih kejadiannya kalo misalnya anime Saint Seiya mengalami proses syuting dan beberapa adegan syuting itu banyak yang salah. Fanfic ini nyeritain kalo misalnya ada adegan syuting Saint Seiya ada yang salah!Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,687 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-20-09 - Complete21. MacamMacam Fans Aquarius Camus reviewsPada suatu hari,Athena ngasih kesempatan kepada fans-fansnya para saint untuk ketemu dengan saint favorit mereka dan Camus pun mau ga mau menghadapi para fansnya yang mayoritas cewe. Mau tau gimana reaksi Camus ngeliat fans-fansnya yang unik bin aneh?Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,673 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-20-09 - Camus - Complete22. Never Ending Dreams » reviewsThis fic is a sequel of 'Meet and Greet with the Saints'. Mila asked Maia to go with her to Sanctuary. What will they get in Sanctuary? Are they going to get some interesting experience or madness?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 19,092 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-11-09 - Published: 9-16-08 - Camus - Complete23. Defying The Unfortunate Fate of The Golds »This fic is a sequel of 'When The Coldest Saint Falls in Love'. All gold saints died and were punished. However, they were saved. Who did save them and can they meet Athena and help her to save the world again?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - General/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,923 - Published: 2-7-09 - Camus24. Kumpulan OneShot Fic Saint Seiya » reviewsSesuai judulnya, fanfic ini hanya kumpulan dari one-shot fanfic. Kebanyakan dari one-shot fic ini sifatnya Parody. So, enjoy it, ok!Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Parody - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,118 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-6-09 - Complete25. Kumpulan Puisi untuk Aquarius Camus » reviewsTulisan yang dimuat ini adalah fanfic yang berbentuk puisi/poem-fic yang dibuat khusus untuk Aquarius Camus.Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Poetry - Chapters: 5 - Words: 853 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-27-08 - Camus - Complete26. The Mistresses of The First Emperor » reviewsThis is my first fic for Fou- Lu. Mami's life was saved. What happened to Fou-Lu and Mami? Please read and review...Breath of Fire - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,130 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-18-08 - Published: 7-19-08 - Complete27. The Live of The First Celestian Leader » reviewsHi everyone, this is my first fic for Tales Of Destiny II /Tales of Eternia . This fic is about Balir's live. I like all characters in Tales of Destiny II except Nereid and Hyades . This fic is for Meredy's parents.Tales of Destiny - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,281 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 9-10-08 - Published: 6-7-0828. Salah Teknik reviewsThis short fic is about Hyoga and Camus and it is only one shot.Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - Indonesian - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-3-08 - Hyoga & Camus - Complete29. Meet and Greet with The Saints » reviewsThis long fic is about two girls who are the fan of Camus and Hyoga. One day,they have an opportunity to meet their favorite hero. Can they meet them? Find the answer in this fic.Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 8 - Words: 5,296 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-7-08 - Published: 4-28-08 - Camus - Complete30. When The Coldest Gold Saint Falls in Love » reviewsThis fanfic focused on Aquarius Camus. In this fanfic, you'll find out that Camus's life was saved after he fought Hyoga in the House of Aquarius during the Battle of Sanctuary. Why his life can be saved?Saint Seiya - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 6,037 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 4-22-08 - Published: 4-21-08 - Camus & Hyoga - Complete31. The Anxiety of A Honourable Saint reviewsThis short fanfic describes Camus's feeling at the day before the Battle of Sanctuary this is my first fic for Aquarius Camus my fav. character in Saint Seiya . I hope you enjoy it. Positive suggestion and comments are welcome.Saint Seiya - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4-20-08 - Camus - Complete