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Author has written 26 stories for Zatch Bell, Harry Potter, Inuyasha, Vampire Knight, Yu Yu Hakusho, Twilight, Pirates of the Caribbean, Naruto, and Shaman King.

//Basic Knowledge//

Name: Kaylen Phary
Nickname: Kay-chan
Age: 24
DOB: 17th of March
Books: Harry Potter, Twilight, Manga (in general), Amityville Horror, Another Note: The Los Angeles BB Murder Cases; The Unwelcome Child, The Young Mind, The Tin Man, Eragon, Dragon Rider,
TV Shows: NCIS, CSI, CSI Miami, CSI New York, Danny Phantom, Anime (in general), Full House, Cold Case,
Color: Magenta (or) Violet
Degree: I currently do not have one, but at the moment I am trying to get a degree in law and criminal justice.
Interests: Writing, Music, Literature, College, Law and Government, Reading, Fashion Design,
Hobbies: Writing, Fashion Designing, Painting, Dancing,
Kids: Currently none, but I would like to have one, one day.
Education: College (currently in)
Music: Lifehouse, Vertical Horizon, Bon Jovi, We Three Kings, Sum 41, 3 Doors Down,

//Contact Information//

Email: Falling.Snow@live.com
AIM: FairiesOrAngels
MSN: Falling.Snow@live.com
Yahoo: Forest.Fairies@ymail.com
GMail: FlaringFireworks@gmail.com
Web Address: Cloudless Summer Beta Reading
FictionPress: Kay-chan @ Fiction Press
FanFiction.net: Kay-chan @ FanFiction.net
FictionCentral: Kay-chan @ FictionCentral

//Advanced Knowledge//

I'm not the best writer on the block I'll tell you that. I have read quite a few books though. I love reading and thus love to review stories. Sadly though, in my search for good stories, I have come across many...(let's just be honest here) horrible stories. Some worse then others. Now, no one likes to read a bad story, so I review. I try to be nice about it but be honest still. I think that's important. Of course, when I review I leave constructive criticism and compliments. Often people have good story ideas but their writing (or lack of) ruins the story. I try to help people get better by offering advice. Many people claim now that "constructive criticism" or "advice" is a form of flaming someone. It is not. It's just a way to offer suggestions to help one get better at writing.

//Define//

Flaming - the act of posting deliberately hostile messages on the Internet. A hostile and insulting interaction between Internet users.
For more information on "flaming" please go here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flaming_(Internet)

Constructive Criticism - or constructive analysis, is a compassionate attitude towards the person qualified for criticism. Having higher experience, gifts, respect, knowledge in specific field and being able to verbally convince at the same time, this person is intending to uplift the other person materially, morally, emotionally or spiritually.
For more information on "constructive criticism" please go here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Constructive_criticism#Constructive_criticism

One-Shot - is a short or one chapter story. They are usually stories with a small or simply plot and very from 10 to 20 pages give or take a bit.

//FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions)//

Why do you flame writers?
I do not flame them. I give them constructive criticism. It's that simple.

I've heard that you've started beta-reading people openly. Is this true?
Yes, it's true. I will beta-read just about anyone who asks now. So it's just just subject to people who make "special requests".

I really like your stories; can you help me with mine?
Sure, if I have time. I'm a beta-reader so go and read my beta-reading profile.

Will you beta-read my story?
Depends, go read my beta-reading profile please.

What kind of fictions do you usually write?
Almost all of my fictions are one-shots.

//Works in Progress//

Since I've recently come across some rare free time, I've decided to work on a few new stories. I'm currently working on a few one shots to put up. Just a few though some of which are a bit old mind you.

.Beauty Pop.

Remember, We Never Said Goodbye
It's been so long and Narumi still misses her just as much as he did the day she left. He longs - though he won't admitted it out loud - to see her again. Now maybe after all this time, he can.

.Elemental Galade.

Protector
Leena and Johnny, an Edel Raid and a human. So similar yet so different. It made no difference to them though. They just wanted to be left alone to live life as they pleased.

.Harry Potter.

One More Dance
It was just a dance. We spent hours there dancing in each others arms. Her beautiful eyes watching mine. I was glad now that I had asked her to come with me.

.Shugo Chara.

Dreams
He's my brother but I love him anyways. It's not right and we both know it but I can't control my feelings.

My Feelings are Confused
I can't have them both, I know that better then anyone. I just can't choose between the two. I don't even know why I like them so much!

.Naruto.

Silence
I try not to argue with him but sometimes he can be an idiot. Somehow, sometime during all of your fights and arguments my feels of hate became something more then that. How could I let something so ridiculous happen?

.Chibi Vampire/Karin.

Crazy
When had my once normal life gotten so crazy? Falling in love with a vampire, meeting vampire families, going on wild crazy adventures and such. Here I had thought I was just a normal teenage boy. Guess I wasn't all that normal after all.

.Twilight.

Never Forget
There is no doubt in me of my love for her. She means everything to me. She's helped me and I've helped her. I just hope that if something ever happens that we'll never forget each other.

.Black Cat.

Memories
I still remember when we met. I knew that there was no evil in her heart even then. No matter what anyone else said, I knew better. It's hard to believe though that she's still the same girl from before even after all we've been through.

It was Her
It didn't make sense. Creed was invincible and yet he lost to them. She was right when she promised me they would win.

I Trust
She was there to help me. She always was. She was the change in me that I needed all along. I was thankful to have met her, to have known her. She was the best thing that could have happened to me. She saved me from all the things I didn't understand.

.Inu-Yasha.

The Past Should Stay in the Past
I loved her I swear I did, but she's not alive. She's not real. I wish I could have let her go but while I could see her, while I could touch her, hear her, I couldn't bring myself to say good bye.

Trust in Me
Together now, I promise not to leave. I hope it's not too late, all you have to do is believe in me. I'll make it all up to you and make it all okay. At least I'll try too if you try to trust in me.

.Yu Yu Hakusho.

Our Together
All the time we spent together and all the memories that we shared. All of these things, all of the memories, I will forget nothing. No matter how things may have turned out, I will never forget, I don't want to.

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1. Charmed Hope reviews
A small charm at the end of the necklace said 'in hope' and I realized why she had given it to me.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 864 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9-3-09 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete

2. One of Those Days
I wanted to apologize and pretend that the argument never happened. I couldn't though; every time I tried all I did was make things worse. It was just one of those horrible, miserable days.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 986 - Published: 9-3-09 - Draco M. & OC - Complete

3. Melody Playing reviews
I looked to the lit up night sky, the clouds were moving in. The weather man had been correct, it would soon be snowing. The sky tonight reminded me of her and the first time we met. The sky now looked exactly like it did then.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,018 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-2-09 - Draco M. & OC - Complete

4. Try Goodbye reviews
My feelings for him, I used to hate him, despise him, but now that's all different. I love him. I hated him before, but never took the time to really get to know him and now…it's just…
Shaman King - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 928 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-30-09 - Hao A. - Complete

5. Break her Down reviews
I knew from the moment the scent hit my nose that I should leave her for the next few days. I stayed though, stubbornly, foolishly I believed that I wouldn't lose control...
Inuyasha - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,443 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-29-09 - Sesshomaru - Complete

6. Mother My Mother reviews
She held me close, I was glad we had a chance to be together once more. Though I wouldn't say it, I was in fact, thankful.
Inuyasha - Rated: K - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 966 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-29-09 - Inuyasha & Izayoi - Complete

7. No Goodbye reviews
I wanted so desperately to hold her in my arms again and tell her everything would be already, that we could figure something out. I knew better though, we both did. There was nothing we could do to make our feelings right with the rest of the world.
Shaman King - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-29-09 - Hao A. - Complete

8. Like Bliss
I could only feel his glare, no trickle of blood from the blade I expected, no feeling of cold steel against my neck.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,014 - Published: 8-25-09 - Itachi U. - Complete

9. Something Like a Dream reviews
I pirate I became, somewhere along the way. I'm not sure how or why or even when...
Pirates of the Caribbean - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 880 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-24-09 - Will T. & Elizabeth S. - Complete

10. Because I Love You reviews
I sit here and wait for his return. I'd like to believe its worth it, that my feelings for him are worth the wait, even if it means waiting forever and beyond.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,026 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-21-09 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete

11. Boy reviews
I used to know him, back before everything went wrong. I look back on it now though and I just can't see the same boy he used to be.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 905 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8-14-09 - Voldemort & OC - Complete

12. For Her Safety
I couldn't have both forever; it would all have to end very soon, for her safety and mine.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Published: 8-14-09 - Draco M. & OC - Complete

13. Dreams
We couldn't speak forever though. I would wake and have to leave her behind. She was only in my dreams.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 985 - Published: 8-14-09 - Draco M. & OC - Complete

14. In Death reviews
I killed the only person who dared to point out my flaws. He was the only one who cared enough to risk his life against me and prove that I was wrong. I killed him, all because I didn't want to admit that he was wrong. I killed him, for no reason.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 922 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-14-09 - Cedric D. & OC - Complete

15. Identities reviews
He taught her the difference between right and wrong. He made life worth something. To her, he was everything.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,266 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8-4-09 - Draco M. & OC

16. By my Side
She ran up, wrapping her arms around me. She looked up at me with her serious, piercing, but ever worried eyes. I hated to see her like this, more then anything else. I didn't want to see her like this again.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 878 - Published: 7-16-09 - Draco M. & OC - Complete

17. Not Even for Her reviews
I can't like her, I should hate her. If he found out of my feelings he could kill her, kill me. I don't want to die. I have to forget about my feelings and secretly hope that he can protect her along with everyone else.
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 887 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-16-09 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete

18. Future Battles
When did I go from normal to being the chosen one?
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 858 - Published: 7-13-09 - Harry P. - Complete

19. It was Her reviews
Thinking back to when we first met I wonder if maybe I should have left then. I had no idea of what would happen only a few years later, her sudden interest in me and my family, her sudden curiosity that kept me on my toes, my constant worry...
Twilight - Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 889 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-13-09 - Edward - Complete

20. Into Tomorrow
I would do as she asked and move forward into the tomorrow today. That is all she had wanted for me to do. This would be our end.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 874 - Published: 7-11-09 - Draco M. & OC - Complete

21. Thank You reviews
He was the love I hardly knew yet he still meant so much to me.
Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 869 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-24-09 - Sakyou & Shizuru K.

22. Praying for the Impossible reviews
I wanted so badly to be with someone I could never truly have. I want to be with him forever and ever but it's an impossible wish. We're not the same. We're too far away. It's like praying for rain while I stand in the desert.
Vampire Knight - Rated: K - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,729 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-21-09 - Yuuki & Kaname - Complete

23. Blanket Over my Heart reviews
She never realized her feelings for him until it was too late. Now he's taken and letting her go. If only they had known...
Inuyasha - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,114 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-12-09 - Kagome & Kouga

24. Forever reviews
I look back at all the different things she said, all her little actions, her innocent questions. Somehow I wanted this human girl to stay by my side. I wanted to protect her and keep her safe forever. I didn't want to imagine a world without her there.
Inuyasha - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 669 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-12-09 - Sesshomaru & Rin - Complete

25. To the Feelings reviews
I knew better then to have or even to accept these feelings for this muggle born girl. I hated her friends, I should hate her too...after all, she hated me...
Harry Potter - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,059 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5-12-09 - Draco M. & Hermione G. - Complete

26. Alone Again reviews
She didn't want to see him go. She knew though that if she opened her eyes; that when she opened her eyes he would be gone. After everything they'd been through, all the feelings they had shared, he would be going back to the world in which he came.
Zatch Bell - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 760 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4-25-09 - Wonrei & Li-en - Complete

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