Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
kallou
Feed . Send Message. Subscribe . Favorite
email: Email
since: 08-07-08, id: 1659887, Profile Updated: 11-04-09
country: United States
Author has written 2 stories for Naruto.

hn i just join awhile back and i havent had time to do this but here it gos.

female

5'10

born 06/19/91

love anime/manga

naruto the best so far

like alot of thing

dislikes you just kidding

always tired


OK now i got bored one day and made my very own OC so this is what she looks like plus a link to see her.

last name then first:Yajuu no Ookami (-beast, monster, wild animal- the wolf) meanings just pick one

gender:female

level: Jōnin

blood line/clan :tatazumai (appearance, shape, figure, bearing) means

family:strict they are well menders and have high standers if you cant keep up then your out of the pack

she left coz she didnt want to be tame.

can summon any beast or animal and transformation in to them

eyes:silver her eyes seemed to swim with colours in the light and shorta glow in the dark

hair:gleamed white with black at the tips that framed her face nice and cropped short,

height:5 9"

personality:not very smart when it comes to emotions also being blunt, calm and collected but can be a handful when hyper doesnt like being told what to do and is willing to be leader at any chance, rather be up at night then during the day note: doesnt like to be useless but will sleep at any giving time,

looks: first impression that she was a guy kinda flat chested and she had a nice figure and pale skin. Pair of animal incisors for teeth

clothing:She wore a plain cotton black zip-up shirt with no sleeves and a hood and pants that were roll up to match that reached her knees. Her kunai pocket was also on her right leg and she wore the black open-toed ninja shoes and black fingerless ninja gloves. She also wore a bull-dog choker on as well and chains hung from her clothing.

She had bandaging elbow to wrist and netting covering her to her elbow and legs and you could just see the collar of a fishnet shirt underneath the zip-up hooded-shirt.

one of her skills would have to be a good con artist even though she not that smart she clever n cunning.

Village:Getsugakure (月隠れの里, Getsugakure; literally "Village Hidden under the Moon") is a hidden village in the Land of the Moon. though they dont like her around so they gave her permison to wounder.

master form 1 to 10:

taijutsu-7

ninjutsu-9

Genjutsu-5

speed-7

smarts-6

weakness-sweets,animals,bright lights, loud noises, Strong smells also not very smart when it comes to emotions also being bulnt

i also like to pair her up with kiba alot

http://kallou123.deviantart.com/gallery/

http://kallou123.deviantart.com/art/Yajuu-no-ookami-137154238


Lastly...20 ways to maintain a healthy level of insanity:

1:At lunch time, sit in you car with sunglasses on and point a hair dry at passing cars; see if they slow down

2:Page yourself over the intercom. Do not disguise your voice.

3:Every time some one asks you to do something, ask them if they want fries with that

4:Put your garbage can on your desk and label it "IN"

5:Put Decaf in the coffee maker(home or work), When everyone gets over their caffeine addiction switch to espresso

6:In your memo book, on all your checks put "FOR SMUGGLING DIAMONDS"

7:Finish all your sentences with" In Accordance To The Prophecy"

8:Don't use any punctuation

9:As often as possible, skip instead of walking

10:Order diet water whenever you go out with a serious face

11:Specify that your drive thru order is "TO GO"

12:Sing along at the opera

13:Go to a poetry recital and ask why the poems don't rhyme

14:Put mosquito netting around your work area(or room) and play tropical sounds all day

15: 5 days in advance, tell your friend that you can't go to their party cause you don't 'feel like it'

16: Have friends or coworkers address you by your wrestling name "Rock Bottom"

17:When the cash comes out of the ATM yell " I WON, I WON"

18:When exiting the Zoo start running toward the parking lot yelling " Run for your lives they're loose"

19:Tell your children, or younger sibling that "Due to the economy, we are going to have to let one of you go"

20: And the final way to keep a healthy level of insanity is... Copy this and put it on your profile

Luves to all!!


gaara and sakura my fav


I'm sorry
that I bought you roses
to tell you that I like you

I'm sorry
That I was raised with respect
not to sleep with you when you were drunk

I'm sorry
That my body's not ripped enough
to "satisfy" your wants

I'm sorry
that I open your car door,
and pull out your chair like I was raised

I'm sorry
That I'm not cute enough
to be "your guy"

I'm sorry
That I am actually nice;
not a jerk

I'm sorry
I don't have a huge bank account
to buy you expensive things

I'm sorry
I like to spend quality nights at home
cuddling with you, instead of at a club

I'm sorry
I would rather make love to you then just screw you
like some random guy.

I'm sorry
That I am always the one you need to talk to,
but never good enough to date

I'm sorry
That I always held your hair back when you threw up, and didn't get mad at you for puking in my car,
but when we went out you went home with another guy

I'm sorry
That I am there to pick you up at 4am when your new man hit you and dropped you off in the middle of nowhere,
but not good enough to listen to me when I need a friend

I'm sorry
If I start not being there because it hurts being used as a door mat, only to be thrown to the side when the new jerk comes around

I'm sorry
If I don't answer my phone anymore when you call, to listen to you cry for hours, instead of getting a couple hours of sleep before work

I'm sorry
that you can't realize.. I've been the one all along.

I'm sorry
If you read this and know somebody like this
but don't care

But most of all

I'm sorry
For not being sorry anymore

I'm sorry
That you can't accept me for who I am

I'm sorry
I can never do anything right, and nothing that I do is good
enough to make it in your world.

I'm sorry
I caught your boyfriend with another girl and told you about it, I thought that was what friends were for...

I'm sorry
That I told you I loved you and actually meant it.

I'm sorry
That I talked to you for nine hours on Thanksgiving when your boyfriend was threatening you instead of spending time with my family.

I'm Sorry
That I cared

I'm sorry
that I listen to you at night talking about how you wish you could have done something different.

Ladies always complain and gripe to their friends that there is never any good guys out there, and they always end up with assholes who mistreat them. Well ladies, next time you're complaining, maybe look up to see who you're complaining to, maybe that special someone is right there hanging on your every word as usual, screaming in his head "Why won't you give me a chance?"
Because the person you are usually searching for is right by you.


okay everyone here is a tip of MARY Sue's and what they are coz the story will suck if you do this with anyone no one is perfect.!

A Mary Sue (sometimes just Sue), in literary criticism and particularly in fan-fiction, is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as wish-fulfillment fantasies for their authors or readers. Perhaps the single underlying feature of all characters described as "Mary Sues" is that they are too ostentatious for the audience's taste, or that the author seems to favor the character too highly. The author may seem to push how exceptional and wonderful the "Mary Sue" character is on his or her audience, sometimes leading the audience to dislike or even resent the character fairly quickly; such a character could be described as an "author's pet".

"Mary Sues" can be either male or female, but male characters are often dubbed "Gary Stu", "Marty Stu", or similar names. While the label "Mary Sue" itself originates from a parody of this type of character, most characters labeled "Mary Sues" by readers are not intended by authors as such.

While the term is generally limited to fan-created characters, and its most common usage today occurs within the fan fiction community or in reference to fan fiction, original characters in role-playing games or literary canon are also sometimes criticized as being "Mary Sues" or "canon Sues," if they dominate the spotlight or are too unrealistic or unlikely in other ways.For when the characters have hair styles that people normallydon't have (long hair is the most commonly used where the hair would come down to or past the mid back)or having money that makes them more Superior then others. when the characters can attract the same or opposite sex more then a person could. Having more in life then others so they would be the most wanted in the story. overly use of powers or ability.

Canon-Sue (in fan fiction)

The term "canon-Sue" (also written as canon!Sue) or "Possession Sue" is used to describe canon characters who are changed significantly from their original canon characterization and sometimes even divorced from their original context completely. Such characters are seen as having been heavily idealized to the point of being more of a stand-in for the author's wish fulfillment than being the original canon character.

Characters most frequently labeled "canon-Sues" often develop over-the-top traits associated with "Mary Sues" with little precedent or explanation, a process sometimes called "sueification." Some examples are the discoveries of tragic pasts and abilities superior to other canon characters, the elimination or romanticization of flaws, and being antagonized by characters disliked by the fan-author while befriended by canon characters liked by the author - regardless of how friendly or unfriendly they were before. If the "canon-Sue" deviates enough from the original, it may be referred to jocularly as an act of "canon rape" - a term often used when a significant (and disliked) change has been made to the canon world or characters, such as when a former hero is vilified without explanation, a character who is unpopular in the canon receives a make-over and becomes popular, or a usually-chaste canon character is easily seduced by a fan-created "Mary Sue" character. Even in alternate universe stories where the premise involves examining how the story might play out differently if characters behaved differently, many readers criticize such changes as being too extreme

Self-insertion

Self-insertionis used to describe clear (and usually seen as indisputable) cases where the author has directly inserted a version of him- or herself into the story in lieu of a wholly or even partly original character, generally going so far as to use the same name or pseudonym for character and author. Though some author surrogates are common in fiction - such as Philip Roth in his Nathan Zuckerman novels, Clive Cussler in his Dirk Pitt novels, or Lin Carter in his work - "self-inserts" in fan fiction are frequently seen as the most blatant of "Mary Sues", especially when heavily idealized. Some online fan fiction archives have an outright ban on any story which involves self-insertion. They are also sometimes frowned down upon in role-playing communities, despite that some argue that it is easier for inexperienced or casual role-players to learn.

Villain-Sue

"Villain-Sue" usually replaces, befriends or is romantically involved with a major canon villain.Other traits include defeating canon characters with ease, secretly having redeeming qualities, having a tragic past that somehow excuses and justifies all her heinous deeds, and letting the canon characters live when she could kill them — not out of bad qualities such as wanting to see them suffer, a desire to have all of them as prisoners at once, or wanting to gloat, but because she really isn't so evil as others might think. In fact, she may even secretly be a hero, or have hidden heroic tendencies. This can be seen as a variant of the "Angsty Sue" seen above.

thank you for read this. it can also help bring your story out more so it doesn't seem to fake also the info is form Wikipedia.org that i do not own any of the info you just read.


Sort: Category . Published . Updated . Title . Words . Chapters . Reviews . Status .

1. Listen » reviews
she just wanted to be love. to have friends.a family.someone to help her
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,774 - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 5-22-09 - Published: 5-17-09 - Sakura H. - Complete
2. who am i game » reviews
okay i got bord... and have finaly type something well this is a game of who am i and all most all the naruto charters are gonna be in this soon.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,954 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 3-15-09 - Published: 12-27-08
Return to Top