Onileo
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since: 08-19-08, id: 1671643, Profile Updated: 09-11-12
country: USA
Author has written 17 stories for Naruto, Fullmetal Alchemist, Star Wars, and Inuyasha.

Name: Onileo

Age: ... I don't even want to say it anymore...

Occupation: Stay at home mom

Addictions: Naruto, Bleach, Fullmetal Alchemist, Inuyasha, Blood , Predator/Aliens, World of Warcraft

Yeah, that about sums it up. Pretty boring, eh?

UPDATE: 9/11/12- Tales From A Linen Closet had been edited and dual posted, so you'll have to go to AFF to find Immortal Pleasure and Material Bonds now. Teardrops has also been deleted here and reposted there. I'm slowly working my way through. I was wanting to do a thorough edit before I moved anything, but there seems to be an impossible amount of material...

6/9/12- This is going to be a long update, but at the moment there is quite a lot going on.

First up, you may have heard that fanfiction is starting to enforce their no MA content policy. While I’m mentally giving them a Hidan-caliber rant, those of us who write lemons for our stories knew we were taking advantage of the fact that non-compliance was overlooked up until this point. I don’t want to lose my account for it, so it’s with regret that I have to make the following changes:

Teardrops, Material Bonds and Immortal Pleasure will be moved to adultfanfiction(dot)net and will be deleted from fanfiction. Waterlily and Midnight Sonata may be affected as well, but until they delete it or tell me they need to be changed, they will remain as is.

Hummingbird, Desert Lions, Submerged and all upcoming stories slated for a lemon will be dual posted. Fanfiction will get the compliant abridged version and adultfanfiction will have the chapters posted in their entirety, violence, lemons and all. I may have to edit some of the previous chapters of Submerged; if so I will add an author’s note for the altered chapters.

And last but far from least, Shades of Crimson. This story has become the crown jewel of my fanfiction work, consistently garnering more hits and reviews than all the others (probably combined). I am so grateful to every one of you who has read it, loved it, re-read it, and demanded more. It will be easy enough to edit out the lemons, but I’m not sure where they will draw the line for explicit violence. If losing the sex is not enough, I’ll just have to move it as well. Doing a thorough edit will leave the storyline in shambles, and the quality of what’s left won’t be worth spit. Hidan doesn’t apologize for who he is, and neither will I. If this should happen and you are unable to migrate with us, I have four words for you: Highlight, Copy, Paste and Save. I have no problem with it as long as it doesn’t reappear under someone else’s name.

With the exception of Tales From A Linen Closet being two chapters shorter, all other stories should remain unaffected. All this shuffling will take some time, but I'm going to start tomorrow.

Now, on to more savory news. I’m also working on two more stories, a Kisho x Hinata that was requested and a Transformers (movies based) story about Starscream and an OC named Jenny (my muse was horribly distracted by the T.V. the other day). The first will also be dual posted chapter by chapter, but the second will be released all at once, and since it is about friendship and not romantic love, it won’t be affected by the previously announced changes. Both will be around five chapters long. Unfortunately, this new laundry list of work means that Desert Lions is still sitting on the back burner, waiting for some attention and a burst of inspiration.

Happy reading and bless you all,

Oni

If anyone is interested in Internalpanthara's Sesshomaru/Rin fic, here is the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6910862/1/Strength_of_Orchids

I'm going to put a playlist here for each chapter of Submerged, so that when it is finished, I'll hopefully have a list of songs that reflect the mood of the story. It might not get updated as fast, and will be adjusted as I find more suitable songs for the chapters. :)

Prologue- Blurry- Puddle of Mudd

Ch. 1- Never Enough- Five Finger Death Punch

Ch. 2- Lightning Crashes- Live

Ch. 3- I Don't Care- Apocaplyptica

Ch. 4- Walk Away From the Sun- by Seether

Ch. 5- Dog Days are Over- Florence and the Machine

Ch. 6- (pending)

Ch. 7- (pending)

Ch. 8-(pending)

Ch. 9-(pending)

Ch. 10-Temptation by Godsmack(I'm really behind on these)

Ch. 11- (pendidng)

Ch. 12- Get Out Alive by Three Days Grace

Ch. 13- (pending)

Ch. 14- (pending)

Ch. 15- (pending)...Now I'm really, really behind on these. *sigh*

Ch. 16- Lullaby by Nickelback

Ch. 17- Invincible by Crossfade

Ch. 18- (pending)

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"Come, Dreamers, pull your colors from their dormant wells and illuminate your starlight worlds. Drown faded reality in the priceless brilliance of sight sound and feeling." Onileo

"Writing a decent lemon is an art form all it's own. Every word, like a kiss, must be chosen carefully to give the right effect. Every sentence, like a caress, must be in the right place to draw out the utmost feeling. It can neither be too fast or slow, too short or long. And you have to have a passion for what you are writing in order for it to come out the right way. Now, go light a proverbial cigarette and ask yourself, do you feel like you've just been screwed, or made love to? This is the difference between success and failure." Onileo

Original Character Bios:

Name: Kisho (no last name)

Village: Iwagakure

Age: 21

Height: 6'

Physical description: Kisho has shaggy crimson hair, tipped in black. It reaches the top of his shoulders and it often falls into his eyes. His eyes are a deep gold and glow while he is casting a jutsu. He has a medium build a deep tan. His voice is low, with a slight rumble to it.

Clothing: Kisho favors tan cargo pants and a black tee shirt or tank top. He wears mesh underneath his shirt. He also wears the standard shinobi sandals, in black. He wears a weapons pouch on his left leg and his forehead protector on his forehead. (redundant, I know, lol)

Personality: Kisho is a little introverted. He sulks easily and angers quickly. He is friendly, until given a reason not to be. He also keeps a grudge a long time. He is fiercely loyal to Iwagakure. Kisho can be quite stubborn when it comes to being forced into something. But once 'persuaded' he usually goes along without much fuss. He also has a habit of glaring at people.

Jutsu: Being from Earth Country, Kisho uses Earth Elemental jutsu. His favored jutsu is the Stone Lion Summon. He uses his chakra to draw stones from the earth and molds them into shape. The lions are useful for both attack and transportation. The same jutsu can be used to form animals of any shape. Kisho can also create a cloud of dust to fight in the air or flush out enemies. His forbidden jutsu, the Grand Roc Summon uses the same principle as the Stone Lion Summon, except the interior is hollowed out to make it light enough to fly and the talons are condensed with minerals to make them fierce weapons. Kisho also has the ability to drain chakra from other ninja. But since he posesses this ability, his own chakra reserve is small.

Family: Kisho was orphaned in Iwa when he was very little. Nothing is known of his family. (hence the lack of a last name) This lack of close relations makes him reluctant to have more than casual friends.

Name: Yume

Village: Yugakure

Age: 20

Height: 5'3"

Physical Description: Yume is small framed with pale skin, waist-length white hair and flat, pupil-less black eyes. She doesn't usually speak unless she's casting a genjutsu.

Clothing: She wears a simple civilian kimono.

Personality: Yume is very aloof and introverted. She doesn't connect well with people because she thinks they are afraid of her eyes. She often sits outside and stares ahead at nothing. It seems as though she isn't paying attention at all, but the whole time, she is very aware of her surroundings. She seems immune to the cold, and unbothered by most anything.

Jutsu: Yume's primary jutsu in a genjutsu that she uses to communicate with other people. It is completely black there, with no visible landmarks. She doesn't have a physical body within it, but the snow that is constantly falling there changes to represent her feelings. The voice she uses is more of a whisper, and blows around in the darkness like a wind. Her bloodline limit, passed down from her mother, allows her to command anyone to do her bidding just by speaking to them. But after she witnessed the death of her parents because of it, she realized it would be a very destructive weapon, and refuses to use it unless absolutely necessary.

Family: Yume was orphaned after her parents commited suicide, and she ran away from her village so she wouldn't be used as a weapon, until she wound up adopted by the head elder of Yugakure.

Holidays for Angels of the Moment

Labor Day

Fourth of July

Memorial Day

Halloween

Christmas

New Year's Eve

Valentine's Day

Since my Naruto stories seem to cluster into little groups, I thought I'd sort them for you so you know which ones are linked.

1. Hummingbird

Waterlily

Deconstruction

Immortal Innocence

Teardrops

2. Tales From A Linen Closet

Immortal Pleasure

A Measure of Discretion

Material Bonds

Midnight Sonata

I'm getting so many story ideas now, I'm gonna have to make a list!! So here's what I've got in the works:

Another KisaHina fic (Submerged)

Temari/Kisho fic (Desert Lions)

Sequel to Shades of Crimson (Death's Right Hand)

ItaSaku one shot (Skin Deep- It's finished, but locked on my other hard drive. Agh!)

Possibly a second ItaSaku (On the Edge of Dreams)

A one shot for the Predator fandom (Cold-Blooded Instinct)

Backstory for Greed from FMA ( A history of Avarice)

The End of the Tale (Final story for Tales From a Linen Closet)

Pairings I love:

Kisame/Hinata (Naruto)

Kakuzu/Ino (Naruto)

Gaara/Hinata (Naruto)

Deidara/Sakura (Naruto)

Chouji/Ino (Naruto)

Zetsu/Ino (Naruto)

Shikamaru/Temari (Naruto)

Ichigo/Orihime (Bleach)

Renji/Rukia (Bleach)

Ulquiorra/Orihime (Bleach)

Grimmjow/Orihime (Bleach)

Kenpachi/Retsu (Bleach)

Toshiro/Momo (Bleach)

Edward/Winry (FMA)

Scar/Lust (FMA)

Sesshomaru/Rin (Inuyasha)

Miroku/Sango (Inuyasha)

Haji/Saya (Blood )

Solomon/Saya (Blood)

Sten/Leliana (Dragon Age)

Feel free to message me anytime! :)

MySpace: http://www.myspace.com/433704850


1. Shades of Crimson » reviews
A dark tale of romance between Konoha's flower and the Akatsuki's immortal. Rated for Hidan, graphic violence and lemon.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 26 - Words: 138,011 - Reviews: 460 - Updated: 1-18-13 - Published: 7-20-09 - Hidan & Sakura H. - Complete
2. Death's Right Hand reviews
A sudden illness is striking the newborn infants of dojutsu clans, and Sakura is tasked with finding the cause. The strange thing is, Jashin is mysteriously silent on the subject... Hidan x Sakura-Sequel to Shades of Crimson
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,298 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 1-18-13 - Hidan & Sakura H.
3. Submerged » reviews
Every time he came into her life, she felt herself slip further into his world. When she's pulled in too deep to stand, he is the only one who can keep her afloat. Rated for language, violence and future lemon.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 113,600 - Reviews: 244 - Updated: 1-18-13 - Published: 2-27-11 - Kisame H. & Hinata H.
4. Angels of the Moment » reviews
HidaSaku, KakuIno, ItaTen, KisaHina. A collection of one shots dedicated to various holidays. Starts with April Fool's Day. Rated for Hidan and adult themes.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 7 - Words: 26,107 - Reviews: 67 - Updated: 6-19-12 - Published: 4-1-10 - Akatsuki
5. Tales From A Linen Closet » reviews
The Akatsuki are on an undercover mission when they run into the Konoha kunoichi at a hot springs resort. Chaos ensues when they inevitably run into each other. Lemons edited out. :
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 20,016 - Reviews: 64 - Updated: 4-24-12 - Published: 5-22-09 - Akatsuki & Sakura H. - Complete
6. Regret's Firstborn reviews
On most days, she drank to forget. But on the days she allowed herself to remember, she was reminded of the reasons she drank.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,481 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4-8-12 - Tsunade S. - Complete
7. Desert Lions » reviews
Like the harsh creatures that thrive in the desert, Temari prides herself on her strength. But when it fails, she must rely on another or be claimed by the land she loves. Temari x OC
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,784 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 3-2-12 - Published: 5-28-11 - Temari
8. Cliche reviews
...when good plot devices go bad... Rated for mild language and non-explicit adult themes.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,633 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-11-11 - Ino Y. - Complete
9. What Matters Most reviews
As Sesshomaru returns to his camp, the question that everyone keeps asking arises once again... Why does he allow Rin to stay? The answer is much simpler than it seems. SesshyRin one-shot.
Inuyasha - Rated: T - English - Romance/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,688 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 10-30-10 - Sesshomaru & Rin - Complete
10. Busted reviews
After a fight with a hunter-nin, Kisame wakes up on the wrong side of the ocean, and in the one place no wanted man wants to be, jail. Rated for mild language.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,817 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 9-4-10 - Kisame H. - Complete
11. Waging War reviews
Han Solo finds himself in a hairy situation after losing the Millenium Falcon in a game of poker. Set Pre-Episode IV. Rated for safety.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,271 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-3-09 - Han S. & Chewbacca - Complete
12. She Felt Better Today reviews
Sig recalls Izumi's last day. Set between the anime and the movie. Rated for character death.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,963 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-3-09 - Izumi C. - Complete
13. Hide and Seek reviews
Hinata has just joined the Akatsuki, and she has her first training session with Zetsu. Things don't go as well as she expects, and she finds herself in an awkward situation. Zetsu X Hinata.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,449 - Reviews: 25 - Published: 7-13-09 - Zetsu & Hinata H. - Complete
14. Hummingbird » reviews
On separate missions to Iwagakure, Kisame and Hinata bump into each other in an unlikely accident. What is a good Akatsuki to do with a lonely little leaf ninja? Kidnap her, of course! Rated M for language, violence and lemons. Please Review!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 25 - Words: 80,488 - Reviews: 362 - Updated: 7-9-09 - Published: 3-2-09 - Kisame H. & Hinata H. - Complete
15. Immortal Innocence reviews
On a hot summer day, Hidan makes an unusual friend. Rated for language of course,lol and mild violence. Please review!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,260 - Reviews: 27 - Published: 5-2-09 - Hidan - Complete
16. Deconstruction reviews
After the Akatsuki base is thrown into chaos, Deidara, Kisame and Kisho OC has a contest to see who has the best jutsu, with Hinata as the judge. Slight KisaHina. Rated for moderate language.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,447 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 4-23-09 - Kisame H. & Hinata H. - Complete
17. Waterlily reviews
A KisaHina one shot. Things heat up when the clouds break in the Land of Rain! Lime warning! Please Review!
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,725 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 3-29-09 - Kisame H. & Hinata H. - Complete
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