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since: 08-19-08, id: 1672089, Profile Updated: 12-12-09
country: France
Author has written 14 stories for Justice League, Chronicles of Narnia, Legion of Super Heroes, and Legion of Super Heroes.

Ephesians 5:8-11
8For you were once darkness, but now you are light in the Lord. Walk as children of light 9(for the fruit of the Spirit is in all goodness, righteousness, and truth), 10Finding out what is acceptable to the Lord. 11And have no fellowship with the unfruitful works of darkness, but rather expose them.

I'm a seventeen year-old Christian girl from Texas (though currently in France for a bit) who is totally sold out for Christ. I write for Him and to portray His glory. I'm a home schooled Senior and love to read and write among many other things. I have a younger brother, two older sisters, a rockin' brother-in-law (aka. The Knower of All Things), and two amazingly beautiful nieces. I also have two very loving parents.

I have a blog called Living Water and it would be super cool if you checked it out: http://www.livingwaterke.com

Current Favorite Song?: Supernatural by Flyleaf

Favorite Authors: C.S. Lewis, Ted Dekker, Bryan Davis, and Francine Rivers.

Just got a Photobucket account where I've put up some very rough sketches of my Justice League characters. I'll warn you now, they arent' very good- but hopefully I'll get better as I continue. :D I just wanted to give y'all some visuals! http://s912.photobucket.com/albums/ac328/Kirsten_Erin/?newest=1


Stories in Progress:

Second Time Around: Chapter 32- King Caspian X of Narnia

Bat For Dad and Birds For Brothers: Chapter 27- Demands for Explanations

Winning the Golden Hearted: Chapter 2- Narrow Escape

Coming Soon:

Eyes of Purple will be revised, giving the story more length and depth. The characters especially need more depth and the plot holes need to be filled in.


For the Love of a Traitor:

Inspiration for Susan's coronation dress: http://www.dornbluth.co.uk/?page=shop/flypage&product_id=199

Inspiration for Lucy's coronation dress: http://www.dornbluth.co.uk/?page=shop/flypage&product_id=108

Inspiration for Aaryn's coronation dress: http://www.dornbluth.co.uk/?page=shop/flypage&product_id=110

Keep in mind, these are not the exact dresses, only the inspiration. I obviously made changes in their design and color. ie. Susan's dress doesn't have a hood in the story and Lucy's has a white-silver color underneath rather than plain white.


Reading and Writing quotes:

The man who never reads will never be read; he who never quotes will never be quoted. He who will not use the thoughts of other men's brains proves he has no brains. -Charles Spurgeon

A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. -C.S. Lewis

You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice we're doing it. -Neil Gaiman

Writing is a socially accepted form of schizophrenia. -E.L. Doctorow

Christianity quotes:

Christianity, if false, is of no importance, and if true, of infite importance. The only thing it cannot be is moderately important. -C.S. Lewis

When believers refuse to hide their light, the enemy will try to snuff them out. But God's light cannot be overcome by darkness. -Tom White

A sixteen year-old girl in Asia laid down her life rather than neglect God's Word. Are you willing to lay down your magazine? -Alex & Brett Harris

Do not fear the results of holding up your light. Fear what will happen to your nation if you do not. Neither be content to shine your light only in a room full of lights. Your light has been created for darkness. -Tom White

Abortion quotes:

We must not be surprised when we hear of murders, killings, of wars, or of hatred...If a mother can kill her own child, what is left but for us to start killing each other. -Mother Teresa

A nation that kills its own children is a nation without hope. -Pope John Paul II

God is the only one who knows how many children we should have, and we should be ready to accept them. One can't decide for oneself who comes into this world and who doesn't. That decision doesn't belong to us. -Mel Gibson

It is a poverty that a child must die, so that you may live as you wish... -Mother Teresa

I have noticed that everyone who is for abortion is already born. -Ronald Reagan

Abortion hurts women.


Favorite Quotes by Yours Truly:

"Fewer people enjoy the tale as thoroughly when they receive the revelation that it's written with the intent to stir them to action. Some receive it with dignity and a courage to surpass all others, and some receive it by lashing out, then hiding in their cowardly holes- once again, showing their true colors." -First penned here.

"Each of us were meant to take part in a great battle. Each of us currently do, however most hardly recognize its prescence.
It's sad how, in the end, we help the enemy because of our own ignorance.
The Lord has called us to a great battle that He will ultimately win.
Like Aslan and Superman, He sacrificed Himself for your love.
Like Aslan and Batman, He'll give everything for 'the mission'.
Like Aslan and Shayera, He knows what it's like to be persecuted because His loyalties 'didn't line up' with what others thought it should.
Like Aslan and Flash, He loves far deeper than we'll ever understand.
Like Aslan and J'onn, He knows what it's like to lose everything.
Like Aslan and Wonder Woman, He's storng enough to help you through any challenge." - From my story, "Super Aspirations"

"The Lord has given each of us a soapbox. Each varies in size, some grow, some diminish. Some span the entire earth, while some span merely inches. What matters is not the size of one's soapbox. What matters is what you do with it. -First penned here.


Collosians 3:23
Work willingly at whatever you do, as though you were working for the Lord rather than for people.

Current Book I'm Reading:
The Hunchback of Notre-Dame by Victor Hugo

Super Power of Choice?: I'd love to be able to fly!

Justice League top 3 faves:
1. Flash
2. Batman
3. Shayera

Fave Member of the Batclan: Tim Drake!!

Pairings I like: HG/GL, BM/WW, GA/BC, NW/BG, SM/LL, F/LP, Vix/Vig, and H/Q. I love Flash/OC, but prefer canon with the rest.
Pairings I dislike: F/HG, F/V, GL/V, HG/BM, WW/SM. I most definitely don't like any homosexual stuff

Flash (talking about Shayera): "She loves me. She's like the big sister I never had. Only, you know, short."

Fave Narnia Characters?:
1. Edmund
2. Lucy
3. Jill

Pairings I like: Jill/Eustace, Ramandu's Daughter/Caspian, Cor/Aravis. Some Suspian. OC pairings for Pevensies.
Pairings I dislike: Lucy/Caspian, Lucy/Tumnus, some Suspian, and all homosexual or incestuous stuff.

"Ooh!" said Susan, "I'd thought he was a man. Is he- quite safe? I shall feel rather nervous about meeting a lion."
"That you will, dearie, and no mistake," said Mrs. Beaver, "if there's anyone who can appear before Aslan without their knees knocking, they're either braver than most or else just silly."
"Then he isn't safe?" said Lucy.
"Safe?" said Mr. Beaver. "Don't you hear what Mrs. Beaver tells you? Who said anything about safe? 'Course he isn't safe. But he's good. He's the King, I tell you."
-pgs. 75-76 in The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe by C.S. Lewis.

Fave Batman Beyond Characters?:
1. Bruce (duh!)
2. Terry
3. Max

Pairings I like: Terry/Max and Melanie/Max
Pairings I dislike: Terry/Dana

Terry (speaking to Bruce):"Guess you're the expert on troubled kids. You collect them, right?"

Fave Teen Titans Characters?:
1. Speedy
2. Robin
3. Cyborg

Pairings I like: BB/Rae, Rob/Star, Speedy/Bee, Speedy/Cheshire, and some Cy/Rae (though I prefer more sibling-like ones with them).
Pairings I dislike: Rob/Rae, RedX/Rae, RedX/Star, and any homosexual stuff.

Starfire: "The last time I ate cotton it was white and it did not taste very good."
Robin: "This is different."

Fave Legion of Superheroes Characters?:
1. Lightning Lad
2. Chameleon Boy
3. Shrinking Violet

Pairings I like: LL/SG, PG/TW, and B5/SV
Pairings I dislike: DG/LL and any homosexual stuff.

Brainy: A little help over here!
Shrinking Violet: Did you say a little help?
Brainy: Ooh. She gets small and makes puns.


My Stories:

Founding Faith Series:
A Story of Faith: This story is about a 18 year old Christian girl named Faith Holzer who's kicked out of her home by a jerk of a stepmother, Melinda. Green Arrow was a good friend of she and her late father. When he takes her to the Watchtower, the League finds out about her powers and invites her to join. But when she's singled out by an unknown villian, she and Flash are thrown together in the midst of it all. Can her faith stand up to the evil pursuing her? Flash/OC. Complete

Bat for Dad and Birds for Brothers: Sapphire Evans is kidnapped by the Joker when he mistakes her for Batgirl. After saving her from both he and the Joker, the Batclan takes her in and it's not long before she becomes it's newest member- Dark Falcon. Now there's a plot to take down the Justice League and she's on the hit list.
Meanwhile, Wally's still trying to find out how to stand firm in his faith. Luckily, he's got some help. In Progress
This story serves as a sort of prequel to Light Shines through the Darkness. Faith is introduced in Chapter 18.

Light Shines Through the Darkness: Has been deleted. Don't worry it's still coming, but it was just wasting space since I haven't really started it yet. Look for it when Bat for Dad and Birds for Brothers is complete, though!

The Kane Twin Series:
Eyes of Purple: Davina Kane and her twin brother, Isaiah are thrown into Narnia moments after being orphaned by a house fire they narrowly escaped. The two meet the Kings and Queens of Narnia and a bond is quickly formed between them all. Davina's purple eyes do not go unnoticed and she is soon identified as 'The Prophesied One'. But what is this strange prophecy? And can the Four and her twin keep her safe from the force that wants to destroy her? Peter/OC. Complete
P.S. I am looking forward to rewriting this one in the near future. Maybe once I finish Second Time Around. I'd really like to include more character developement and relational developement in it, not to mention a bit more plot thickening and description. Since this was one of my first stories, it could really use the improvement!

Second Time Around: A sequel to "Eyes of Purple". Davina and the Pevensies are sucked back in to Narnia a year later in England, but some 13,000 years later in Narnia. Will they be able to handle the new adventures in store for them? And how will the Kings and Queens of Old react to Narnia being a "more savage place than you remember"? No Suspian. Peter/OC and Susan/OC. In Progress

Heart of Gold Series:
For the Love of a Traitor:
Aaryn Gold is over at the Pevensie house the day of the bombings on London. A best friend to Edmund, she is sent with the Pevensie children to Professor Kirke's with them. She and Peter hate each other because she constantly challenges his authority over them and isn't afraid to defy him. Even so, she doesn't agree with Edmund's dealing with the White Witch. She knows Edmund's heart- who he really is. So when Narnia takes the five children on an adventure of a lifetime, what is her purpose? Edmund/OC. Complete

Winning the Golden Hearted: The council's pressing for the Narnian royalty to marry and produce heirs has already put Narnia, along with Archenland, in enough trouble. Yet it only continues to create more damage. Then Forian returns to claim his prize and things get complicated, for as he says- "Power is far more intoxicating than a pretty face." Can Edmund fight to save her? How far will the Pevensies be able to go to bring Aaryn home? It appears that Susan's not the only one with suitor troubles. Edmund/OC. In Progress

JLU Oneshots:
You Belong With Me:
Songfic set to the song of the same title by Taylor Swift. Shayera, Wally, and John head out for their monthly 'hang-out time'. Meanwhile, Shayera can't help but think about the fact that Mari and John aren't right for each other. He belongs with Shayera. Obviously HG/GL. Complete

Boys Don't Cry: Songfic set to "Boys Don't Cry" by Plumb. Bruce wasn't the only one who wore a mask all the time. Wally had worn this mask for as long as he could remember- happiness. Fake happiness that made everyone think that he'd had the best life ever. They couldn't be farther from the truth. F/LP. Complete

Breathe: Songfic set to "Breathe" by Taylor Swift. John takes a look at his broken relationship with Shayera. He knows he can't breathe without her, but will he do anything about it? GL/HG. Complete

Chronicles of Narnia Oneshots

Lucy: Songfic set to "Lucy" by Skillet. "Hey Lucy I remember your name. I left a dozen roses by your grave today..." Susan remembers the way they were and the way she changed. Why didn't she stop it before it was too late? She feels like a traitor. Memories flood her mind as she visits her baby sister's grave. "I would give up all the world to see that little piece of heaven looking back at me." Susan-centric. Complete

Supernatural: Songfic set to "Supernatural" by Flyleaf. "It was no secret that she was dying. That was the reason that she wasn't at the hospital anymore. There was nothing more that they could do for her there, no more treatment for her. The doctors had told the Pevensies just to make her last days more comfortable. It shouldn't be long now." Lucy's dying, yet she and Edmund cling to their faith in Aslan, even if the world tells them that there's no use in praying. Lucy and Edmund-centric. Non-slash. Complete

My Shameless Bouts of FF Preaching:

Super Aspirations: Why do we each long to be a part of a great adventure? Why is it that we long to fight with the Justice League or draw our swords alongside the Pevensies? A brief explanation by yours truly. Inspired by Elanor Joy's Twilight story- To Be Loved. Narnia/JL Crossover. Complete

Legion of Superheroes Oneshots

The Pain of Regret: "But as he left, I found myself turning away with them. I followed his lead as we retreated from the battle- from the damage we'd done. I closed my eyes and tried to block out the reality of what I was doing. I was leaving my little brother to die." Mekt's point of view during the episode 'Chained Lightning'. Mekt didn't want to be an only child. He didn't want Garth or Ayla to die, he just wanted his family back together again. "For as much as I hated my brother, I loved him so much more." Complete

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1. Bat for Dad and Birds for Brothers » reviews
Sapphire was captured by the Joker in a failed attempt to kidnap Batgirl. When the Batclan saves her from both he and her abusive father, it's not long before she becomes Dark Falcon. Now there's a plot to take down the JL and she's on the hit list.
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 28 - Words: 67,976 - Reviews: 98 - Updated: 12-16-09 - Published: 11-11-08 - Batman
2. Second Time Around » reviews
2nd in The Kane Twins Series. When Davina and the Pevensies return to Narnia, it's a far different place than they remember and promises a new load of adventures. But will it prove too much for the Kings and Queens of Old? PC movieverse. Peter/OC&Susan/OC
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 32 - Words: 70,226 - Reviews: 271 - Updated: 12-11-09 - Published: 11-30-08 - Peter Pevensie & Susan Pevensie
3. The Pain of Regret reviews
I followed his lead as we retreated from the battle- from the damage we'd done. I closed my eyes and tried to block out the reality of what I was doing. I was leaving my little brother to die." Mekt's POV during the episode 'Chained Lightning'.
Crossover - Legion of Super Heroes & Legion of Super Heroes - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,861 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-2-09 - Complete
4. Winning the Golden Hearted » reviews
2nd in Heart of Gold series. When Forian returns to claim his prize, can Edmund fight to save her? Will the Pevensies be able to get Aaryn back before all hope is lost? Susan's not the only one with suitor troubles, after all. Set during&after HHB. Ed/OC.
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,721 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 11-30-09 - Published: 11-10-09 - Edmund Pevensie & unknown
5. Monk reviews
Oneshot from Shayera's point of view. Wally drags Shayera to watch and episode of Monk with he, John, and Ollie. What happens when they realize the theme song describes a certain conspiracy theorist all too well?
Justice League - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,393 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-10-09 - Hawkgirl/Shayera & Question - Complete
6. For the Love of a Traitor » reviews
Aaryn Gold's best friend is Edmund Pevensie. When the bombings on London hit, she is with the Pevensies and is sent to Professor Kirke's with them. She sticks by Edmund's side, lending him strength to get through one of the hardest times of his life.Ed/OC
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 18 - Words: 37,064 - Reviews: 79 - Updated: 10-30-09 - Published: 11-16-08 - Edmund Pevensie - Complete
7. Supernatural reviews
Songfic set to 'Supernatural' by Flyleaf. Lucy is dying and Edmund's doing his best to care for her, even if it wears him thin. The two of them keep faith in Aslan through it all, knowing He has everything in control. Sibling fluff. Non-slas
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,432 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-30-09 - Lucy Pevensie & Edmund Pevensie - Complete
8. Lucy reviews
A Songfic set to the song "Lucy" by Skillet. "Hey Lucy, I remember your name. I left a dozen roses on your grave today..." Susan remembers the way they used to be and she remembers how she changed. Why didn't she see until it was too late?
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,475 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 9-25-09 - Susan Pevensie & Lucy Pevensie - Complete
9. Super Aspirations reviews
Why do we each long to be a part of a great adventure? Why is it that we long to fight with the Justice League or draw our swords alongside the Pevensies? A brief explanation by yours truly. Inspired by Elanor Joy's Twilight story- To Be Loved.
Crossover - Chronicles of Narnia & Justice League - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,292 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 8-2-09 - Complete
10. Breathe reviews
Songfic set to "Breathe" by Taylor Swift. This time, it's John's turn to take a look at his broken relationship with Shayera.
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,488 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2-2-09 - Green Lantern & Hawkgirl/Shayera - Complete
11. Boys Don't Cry reviews
Songfic to "Boys Don't Cry" by Plum. Bruce wasn't the only one who wore a mask all the time. Wally had worn this mask for as long as he could remember- happiness. Fake happiness that made everyone think that he'd had the best life ever. F/LP
Justice League - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,779 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1-21-09 - Wally West/Flash - Complete
12. You Belong With Me reviews
Songfic to "You Belong With Me" by Taylor Swift. Hanging out with Wally and John, Shayera thinks about her relationship with John and how he knows he belongs with her, not Mari.
Justice League - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,390 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-1-09 - Hawkgirl/Shayera - Complete
13. Eyes of Purple » reviews
Twins Davina and Isaiah Kane enter Narnia moments after being orphaned by a house fire. When the strange land presents many dangers and Davina's destiny becomes clear, can the four monarchs and her twin keep her safe? Golden Age. Peter/OC.
Chronicles of Narnia - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 21 - Words: 29,784 - Reviews: 102 - Updated: 11-29-08 - Published: 10-21-08 - Peter Pevensie - Complete
14. A Story of Faith » reviews
A Christian girl with an ugly past joins the Justice League. And Flash meets a girl who changes the way he thinks- about everything. Will her faith carry them through even the roughest trials? Please R&R. Eventually Flash/OC. T for possible violence
Justice League - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Spiritual - Chapters: 27 - Words: 29,670 - Reviews: 73 - Updated: 11-15-08 - Published: 9-4-08 - Complete
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