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since: 08-24-08, id: 1676817, Profile Updated: 11-29-09
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Author has written 9 stories for Star Fox.

Hey its been a while since I updated my profile thing...I haven't touched it in like forever ya I know...well there really isn't much to say. This is an online identity that I created and gave birth to...I raised it and nurtured it...and gave it a meaning on this site. Here is the steps/time line on which my online identity has progressed:

Naming-=-=Embryo-=-=Toddler-=-=Immature child-=-=Child--Preteen-=-

Yes I am halfway or three-fourths through my preteen stages on my online profile...I have still much to learn from the "adults" of this site. I may or may not act arrogant at times and that is only because of my adolescent side acting up, as all preteens and teens do. And it can only get worse as I progress into my teen stage and grow more and more arrogant as I learn more things on the secret trade of writing.

Anything remotely interesting about me:

I am Asian...yes can't you tell from my picture?

I like spicy food, Mexican food...any food that doesn't look, smell, or taste utterly revolting.

I absolutely hate emos...I hate them...if they feel so lifeless and what-not then why don't they just go hang themselves from the nearest tree hmmm? Have they ever thought about that? No...they just trudge on through life and affect everyone with their dreadful mood. I may be stereotyping to a certain extent but I am still right about their dreadful attitude...I have never seen an happy emo...and if you say that you are then you have obviously labeled yourself to be something that you are truly not. End of arguement.

I also dislike, key word: Dislike, people who wear tight-tight-tight jeans and/or pants. It makes no sense to me...I have never understood how or why a tight-tight-tight jean and/or pants could be comfortable in the slightest...it has baffled me ever since I saw the first person wear tight-tight-tight jeans and/or pants. I really do not get how it can be comfortable...can you even feel your balls? Please...if you have a good reason then please elaborate for me and enlighten this poorly educated Asian. (Oh! An Asian that isn't smart. OMG! that totally goes against the laws of common sense, the world is now going to explode!)

I also hate anybody who immediately assumes certain stereotypes...and I assure you that I don't stereotype...I only joke around...but continuing onto the fact of stereotypes...I hate those who think that all black people can't be trusted...all white people are snobs...all rich people are also snobs (may be true to a high percentage)...all Asians MUST be smart and/or LOVE to study 24/7. That whole Asian is smart thing really ticks me off...not that I am not smart...but I do hate the fact that everyone just labels me as an Education freak. Read my poem: "Education" which I so conveniently put up on this site...it will tell you my two-cents on education and my thoughts on it.

I am controversial in my thoughts...stories...and sometimes my actions.

Krys is my name...Controversy is my game.

You respect me...and I will respect you.

Flames are accepted but not condoned unless you can back anything you say. I always back anything I say or know certain facts about anything I say...NOTHING I say is purely from my thoughts and/or beliefs. EVERYTHING I say has bits and parts of my own thoughts and/or beliefs in it with loads of back-up support and facts.

I hate people who give out shitty reviews...like "OMG YOUR STORY IS SO GREAT!! I WILL START TO RITE MOAH!!

Now my spelling should be atrocious when I wrote that but I am just incapable of ruining my own sentence so my example is only 60 percent good for referencing.

I also hate one-liner reviews...you can put this into the shitty review pile.

I also hate my review that doesn't make sense...you can also throw this into the shitty review pile.

I hate it when an author thinks he writes well enough to brag because of shitty reviews when in fact he sucks cow-shit at writing and won't accept professional help because he/she is too damn conceited...also put this into the shitty reviews section because the shitty reviews influenced the stupid, arrogant, and conceited writer into thinking that he/she is good int he first place.

I take philosophy class and am currently enjoying it...I was posed with the question of is there a God? My answer, quite simple yet very true: If there wasn't a God then how did everything come into place? I really can't believe in spontaneous generation either...we did NOT just poof! come out of little tiny molecules...and it is absurd to even begin to believe that over the however amount of billions of years the tiny microscopic organisms developed into us very complex humans. Nope...I'm not buying it. But I'm not exactly buying the bible either...but there is a God...and I'll leave it at that. So basically you COULD label me as a Christian but I don't even care.

In real life I am less sophisticated than on the Internet...if you meet me in real life you will either" Like me immediately or hate my guts. There is NO getting used to me or anything...And for the most part...almost everyone has immediately liked me thus far.

That is it...for now.

I will add onto this as time progresses and as I find more things to procrastinate your life with.


Name: I go by my alias: Krys or KrzyKrn, mostly Krys...but if I respect you enough then I may just give you my real name.

Age: I am a high-school student...excuse me...I mean a veteran high school student.

Height: Exactly 6 feet.

Gender: Must I have to say this?

Location: Earth. Oh...you want me to be more specific? The United States of America.

Music:

Everything as long as its not shit or crap...such as heavy metal with constant screaming that I can't understand unless I look up the lyrics on Google OR country which gets so boring with all the SAME accents and "ideas"...doesn't mean I don't listen to them...just means that I don't listen to them AS MUCH...as in rarely. But I still listen to them...once every blue moon...

This is my rating for rankings among writers...Yes this is MY ranking system for you authors:

I see that there are 5 classes of writers:
5th being the lowest and 1st being the highest.

Fifth Class writers are writers who don't even really want to write...they just plain suck. In fact they suck so much that they should never attempt to try and type again. They make other writers feel shameful that there are such people like them.

Fourth Class writers are writers who have somewhat of an idea that they came up with from another persons story...on rare unusual occasions do they come up with the idea on their own. They try and take that idea and in cooperate into their story but can't seem to come up with anything original. Their ideas are very abstract and non-flowing with the story-line.

Third Class Inferior writers are writers who are between being a Fourth Class and Third Class.

Third Class writers are writers who have some idea of their story. They take that original idea and put it into words to express their plot and all. The problem being is that they don't really know how to convey it into words that well and instead of typing a good story with a good plot they end up messing up the plot with their confusion.

Third Class Superior writers are writers who are between being a Third Class and Second Class.

Second Class writers are writers who have somewhat of a solid start with their story and have a good idea of what they are going to type about. They know how they are going to convey their emotions into their story and they know how to interact with the story to make it readable for others. Still they have minor problems with transition, and tend to rush paragraphs sometimes.

First Class writers have a good solid knowledge of their story and have been thinking about their story for a long amount of time. Adding and taking away elements that could hinder the story's plot or make it look better while they plan it out on paper. They have an excellent ability to transition smoothly from paragraph to paragraph, matter of fact so good of an transition that you didn't notice it until half-way into the paragraph b/c of the intense nature of the plot. They aren't necessarily the author's whose story have like 300 reviews. Reviews don't count for anything in a writers uncanny ability to write. So not all stories that have over 100 reviews are First Class.

NEW!!

God Writer are people worthy of being recognized for their works for money. They know how to seriously convey their feelings and they spend a hell of a time typing their story to fit all of their ideas, thoughts and feelings into it. And they do not disappoint. God writers are very very very very few. I have only named TWO people as God Writer so far...and I tend to keep it that way until someone else surprises me with their wonderful and extravagant writing.

The two people worthy of being recognized as a God writer: FoxMC (Inactive); SnakeOfTheRose (Active)

I see myself as a Second Class Writer.

Personal quotes:

"If you want people to like your story then don't write for them, write for yourself."

"A story that people like comes from the mind, but a story that people remember comes from the heart."

"Anyone can read a great story, but only by knowing the author yourself can you truly appreciate the story."

"A story is like a plant. You don't just give it water, soil and sun and let it sit there and then expect it to just bloom. You have to stick by it to the end while nurturing it and whatever you do to make a plant grow."

"Anyone can write; its up to you to make the story come to life."

"Sorry yet again if I hurt your feelings but hey, its the mistakes that we learn from...not the accomplishments."

"Good reviews are great, but critical reviews are better."

"Stories don't become great through skill...stories become great through good criticism and a lot of revisions, and I mean A LOT."

"You say that your story is great because all your reviews are good? I'm sorry but your story HAS to suck if no one said anything bad yet...I mean look at all the mistakes that no one bothered to point out."

"You want a good story? Then get your ass over here and listen to what I have to say."

"Always good to have those few "eye of the storms" in a tornado of a story."

"I totaled my car but I only gave it a new paint job."

"You are becoming just like that small-fry writer...who is no longer a small-fry."

Other famous quotes that I have come to enjoy and respect:

"We may have all come on different ships, but we're in the same boat now." - Martin Luther King Jr.

"Nothing makes one feel so strong as a call for help." - Pope Paul VI

"Every moment is a golden one for him who has the vision to recognize it as such." - Henry Miller

"Why not seize the pleasure at once, how often is happiness destroyed by preparation, foolish preparations." - Jane Austen

"Heaven is by favor; if it was by merit your dog would go in and you would stay out." - Mark Twain

"Have compassion for all beings, rich and poor alike; each has their suffering. Some suffer too much, others too little." - Buddha

"Life is either a daring adventure or it is nothing." - Helen Keller

"Sharing is sometimes more demanding than giving." - Catherine Bateson

"Clean your finger before you point at my spots." - Benjamin Franklin

"The Saints are the Sinners who keep on trying." - Robert Louis Stevenson

"It isn't the mountains ahead to climb that wear you out; it's the pebble in your shoe." - Muhammad Ali

"Cherish forever what makes you unique, 'cuz you're really a yawn if it goes." - Bette Midler

"One of the best ways to persuade others is with your ears -- by listening to them." - Dean Rusk

"The grass isn't always greener on the other side." - Ricky Gervais

"Family is not an important thing, it's everything." - Michael J. Fox

"Do not bite at the bait of pleasure, till you know there is no hook beneath it." - Thomas Jefferson

"Good taste is better than bad taste, but bad taste is better than no taste." - Arnold Bennett

"I would rather have a big burden and a strong back, than a weak back and a caddy to carry life's luggage." - Elbert Hubbard

"When you're thirsty and it seems that you could drink the entire ocean -- that's faith; when you start to drink and only finish a glass or two -- that's science." - Anton Chekhov

"If you want your dreams to come true, the first thing you need to do is wake up." - J.M. Power

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music that he hears, however measured or far away." - Henry David Thoreau

"The hardest job kids have today is learning good manners without seeing any." - Fred Astaire

"Don't look back. Something may be gaining on you." - Satchel Paige

“I've been making a list of the things they don't teach you at school. They don't teach you how to love somebody. They don't teach you how to be famous. They don't teach you how to be rich or how to be poor. They don't teach you how to walk away from someone you don't love any longer. They don't teach you how to know what's going on in someone else's mind. They don't teach you what to say to someone who's dying. They don't teach you anything worth knowing.” - Neil Gaiman

“Love comes when manipulation stops; when you think more about the other person than about his or her reactions to you. When you dare to reveal yourself fully. When you dare to be vulnerable.” - Neil Gaiman

“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was a choice, but falling in love with you I had no control over." - Neil Gaiman

“Sometimes you put walls up not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down.” - Anonymous

“To the world you may be just one person, but to one person you may be the world.” - Brandi Snyder

“True friends stab you in the front.” - Oscar Wilde

“A true friend is someone who thinks that you are a good egg even though he knows that you are slightly cracked” - Bernard Meltzer

"Learn from the best, they did." - Mark Chillcoat

My favorite quote/topic from the S.A.T.:

"The greatest disservice we do to our children is making them believe that the purpose of education is to get them into college or get them a job. Perhaps we dare not proclaim the real purpose of education because we fear that we are falling miserably short of serving that purpose--to create happy and competent human beings." -


The Honor List:

Plazmataz: His story was the first that I read when I first came to this site. His story is interesting, Krystal has two "sides" it seems. His story inspired me to include the whole Khaos inside of Khris thing.

GamerJay: Second story I've read. Incredible combination of Warhammer:40000 and Starfox. I love this guy, seriously. He was also the FIRST to review my story, I thank him for criticizing my story's flaws and telling me how to improve it.

lanceXstorm5: What an awesome guy, he didn't really inspire me to write about a humanxKrystal pairing but his story is pretty dam good compared to mine. My little six flags chapter was an inspiration from lanceXstorm's chapter about Krystal going to the festival. Applaud this guy for making such a great humanxKrystal story.

ShadowFox0324: I love this guy, or girl. I can't tell his/her gender like he/she can't tell mine. Lol. We are good online buddies I guess? Well, his/her ying or yang story is pretty interesting. He/She is a great supporter for my story's cause and since he/she has stuck by me all these years (Lol) I am personally in his/her debt. Not to mention he/she is probably on youtube regualrly, posting comments on SyxxFox's snowmobile riding or something.

Quentix Starwing: His story is interesting also, includes a Cerinian other than Krystal. Inspired me to make M.O.H. in my story and make it so Krystal remembers her past.

DarthVenom2: His smooth transition between his chapters and paragraphs never cease to amaze me. His story is more like an online book considering its length, but who cares, the longer the better. He inspired me write better, yes surprisingly he inspired me not anyone else.

StarFoxOwns: Well your not really on the "Honor List" but still I'll put you here anyways. He inspired me to continue my story further instead of ending it/giving up.

Lucario22 (edited) Here is the totally awesome French dude...Lucario22. I really don't know what to say about this guy. He is French, funny and friendly. He likes to take long walks by the beach and have romantic dinners and...I'm just shitting you all. He's an pretty average guy with a "dark knight" personality (Is he batman's sidekick?). I first met him from a review to my "Better Days" story. He has stuck with me eversince and has been giving me good tips and uplifting reviews but I guess thats what friends are for. If you want a good friend who won't turn you upside down...then you probably want to meet him. Give this guy kudos for his first story...which someone beta-reads really well as far as I could tell.

chaos Leader: There isn't much to say in honor of c.L. All I can say is that when you first meet him you will be greeted by his "airy" and somewhat supercilious attitude...and he has every right to act in such a way. He has learned the "secrets of the trade" in writing and quite frankly, I think that he is wasting his time with us smaller ametuer writers. But his decisions are his alone and his to make. He has helped me with my story, "The Curse" tremendously. Without him being there to give that slight "push" in the right direction I seriously think that "The Curse" would've been scraped after the first 2-3 chapters because of the lack of anything interesting in it. If you need some good thorough criticism on the "good, bad, and ugly" then he is your man. Give it all up for chaos Leader because this young prodigy knows his shit. Trust me.

I guess I'd better update this story crap so you guys can prepare yourself for what is to come:

Story completion crap stuff ("Writing" means how much of it I've written and "Thinking" means how much of the plot that I have already thought of):

Krisis: Writing: 95 percent, Thinking: 98 percent (PUT ON HOLD)

Better Days: Writing: 100 percent, Thinking: 100 percent

Prequel (I'm not giving the name out yet): Writing: 0 percent, Thinking: 55 percent

Sequel (Of course I'm not giving this name out yet): Writing: 0 percent, Thinking: 64 percent

The Curse: Yours or Mine?: Writing: 44 percent, Thinking: 59 percent

Atrophic Assassins: Writing: 45 percent, Thinking: 78 percent


Other stories for the future NOT related to my "K" series:

T.w.o.K (Debating)

C.O.B.

K-1 (Also debating)

The Curse: Yours or Mine?

The Other Side



Stories based off movies:

Night at the Museum (Discontinued)

Gran Torino

District 9


I've always had this fascination with Krystal and with Kursed...Here are my definitions that I've given to them both:

Krystal: A flower that has yet to blossom its petals. Or a raw material that has yet to be processed.

Kursed: A beautiful rose...beautiful yet it has its deadly thorns that most people fail to notice.

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1. Atrophic Assassins » reviews
In the city of Defuncte there was always crime, always corruption...
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 5 - Words: 13,396 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 11-26-09 - Published: 10-14-09 - Krystal & Miyu
2. The Curse: Yours or Mine? » reviews
Henry has been slowly trudging through life...wishing for something better to come his way. One day he gets it...though the saying couldn't be more truer: Be careful what you wish for...You might just get it.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 37,703 - Reviews: 36 - Updated: 11-19-09 - Published: 7-17-09 - Krystal
3. Music fictions reviews
Something that I have been looking into 1 month from my joining of this site. Basically the telling of a story, or one chapter, by the forms of music.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,221 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-9-09
4. Krisis » reviews
Crisis: May occur on personal/societal level. It may be a traumatic or stressful change in a person's life, esp. one involving an abrupt change. Unstable situation of extreme danger or difficulty. Crucial stage or turning point in the course of something.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 37 - Words: 161,997 - Reviews: 200 - Updated: 6-9-09 - Published: 8-27-08 - Krystal
5. Education by KrzyKrn K » reviews
I know this has no correlation to StarFox but oh well whatever. This is my first poem ever....so please read and enjoy.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,587 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 3-15-09 - Published: 12-11-08 - Complete
6. Sequel Preview » reviews
This is going to be two chapters long and its going to have song fics that describe the POV or feelings of Khris and Krystal. Read and review and tell me what you think has happened and what you think will happen and how you feel about it.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,195 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-4-09
7. Better Days » reviews
The days following Krisis are definitely better...but it is also hectic. Come along and travel along the fun loving chaotic times with the ever-protective Khris, over-zealous and hectic Henry and last but not least, lovable/cuddle-able Krystal.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 14 - Words: 36,007 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 1-3-09 - Published: 12-6-08
8. Happy Thanksgiving reviews
My second one-shot story. This follows after my Halloween fic.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,343 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-27-08 - Complete
9. Happy Halloween » reviews
This is one of, probably, many short stories that are not really one-shots but close to it. Krystal experiences her first Halloween. The addicting nature of candy. The dentist. REVIEW! HAPPY HALLOWEEN! Remember another one is coming out Christmas.
Star Fox - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,100 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 10-31-08 - Published: 10-30-08 - Krystal - Complete
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