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since: 09-22-08, id: 1699619, Profile Updated: 06-17-09
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Author has written 7 stories for Twilight.

Likes: I love reading, writing, shopping, sleeping, and eating. Oh and exercising, so I'm not overweight or anthing. My favorite foods are strawberries, watermelon, and sushi. I enjoyed classics before Twilight even came out, so I didn't steal the idea from Bella. I really like Jane Austin though I'm not much of a fan of Shakespeare.

Twilight couples:

1- Edward x Bella: They deserve to be together. Edward waited 100 years for her and she makes him happy and vise versa. They click really well and need each other to survive. Which brings me to my next point. They have a very unhealthy relationship. He only fell in love with her because he couldn't read her mind. If he could, then there would be no Twilight. Also, they were suicidal. Not healthy. You shouldn't go off yourself because your boyfriend left you. Also, you shouldn't off yourself because you left your girlfriend and thought she was dead. You broke up with her, not the other way around. They took the words 'you are my life' to the next level. But they're still my favorite couple!

2- Jacob x Bella: MAJOR NO NO! You will never read story with this pairing. Jacob forces himself onto Bella and uses trickery and force to try and make her love him. And he's more of a best friend than a lover. Also, he's younger than her. I'm old fashioned. Sue me. (Well, not literally). They don't belong together. Best friend/ brother. NOT lover. And as a werewolf, he's arrogant, concieted, cocky, a jerk, full of himself, stupid, rude, mean, hateful, angry. The list goes on and on.

3- Jacob x Renesmee: Renesmee shouldn't exist. I'm greatly opposed to her existance. Jacob deserves to be with Leah, the only person who never got her happy ending. Leah really isn't that bad of a person. How would you feel if you had to spend many a day near the man who shredded your heart into a million pieces? And the worst is that you can't hate him because he had no control over it. And of course, Renesmee is only a child. That's so wrong! And if they were to get together, he'd be like 25 and her only 16. Ew much? She should be with the other half vampire.

Problems with New Moon:

I didn't like New Moon. Every problem was fixed way too easily. Also, why would Edward go kill himself after he heard about Bella's 'death?' He knew she was going to die sometime and he planned on staying away. Why not kill himself right off the bat? He couldn't be with her, see her, or love her properly. Why still bother existing? Killing himself right away would have saved a lot of pain on his part. And he left her. Did he really expect her to be happy without him? No. And then there was Jacob. Need I say more? Yes? Okay. He's cocky, egotistical, stupid, annoying, obnoxious, etc. Well, as a werewolf after Bella. Besides that though, he's not that bad of a person. Well, werewolf. Also, a Twilight Book isn't a Twilight Book without Edward on every page. Well, almost every page. Human Jacob is pretty cool though. A nice guy and friend, a perfect shoulder to cry on. Well, if you can reach. And the Volturi wouldn't just give up like that and completely trust Bella not to suddenly disappear. But I will admit I loved the end. And how unsure Bella was to marry Edward. That was at least realistic. Oh, and of course, Edward came back!

Twilight Movie:

Pretty decent. But I was prepared to be disappointed and went in with low expectations. Together, the whole movie kind of sucked. But apart, it was great. Like, I loved certain scenes, such as the kitchen scene and the sunglasses scene. So I guess it was just the connection and filling between scenes that bothered me. And they never said 'I love you.' That was what the book was based off of. Love. Not infatuation. And Bella. Really, Kristen Stewart? No wonder he left her. Okay okay, that was harsh. It's just that they made it way too easy for Edward to leave Bella. Nothing heart wrenching. Simple break up with a little smudging around the edges.

Problems with Breaking Dawn:

Renesmee. Bella should not have become a mom. It just doesn't fit. She's barely and adult herself and it seems too unrealistic. It makes them seem too perfect and lucky. Also, it's just plain awkward. And stupid. And awkward. And dumb. And annoying. And stupid. Running in circles. I don't like Bella as a mom. Also, everything was solved too easily. Especially when the Volturi came. Nothing happened. I wanted action. Something exciting. Not 'Alice has proof, we're all saved!' and then some celebrating and a happy ending. Way to easily solved. And what about Leah's happily ever after? Non existant much? And Jacob imprinting on Bella's baby. Just awkward. One moment he wants to sleep with her, next her baby. Yeah, very awkward. Surprises are good, but that one just sucked. It didn't fit into the story well. So it wasn't a great book. I was disappointed. Sorry Stephanie.

Mike Newtwon, Tanya Denali and Jacob Black:

Everyone paints these poor folks as the bad guys. Mike Newton just doesn't understand the concept of no. But that's all. He doesn't scheme or anything. He just has a crush on Bella and is ever persistant and annoying. He's really not a bad guy. Though it is fun to make him a creeper sometimes. And Tanya just had her heart broken. She really liked Edward but he just didn't return the feelings. So she gave up and let him go. But she still can't help being attracted to him. You can't control love. And then Jacob Black. I kind of hate him. But not really. He's just trying to keep the girl that he thinks he's in love with human. He believes that she'll 'die' when she's turned. And he has limited time. So he says screw chivarly. And you would do the same for the person you love. Paint yourself as a jerk to keep them human. Do anything for them, no matter the cost. Although trying to persuade her that she loved him was a little too much for me.

The Real Bad Guys:

James and Laurent. I understand that James is too weak to resist human blood, but he should know when to give up. Since human blood is his natural staple, I don't begrudge him about it. Just chasing after Bella like the deranged stalker he was made him evil. He was determined to kill her for pleasure and enjoyment, not for survival. Laurent went against those who trusted him, breaking loyalty. He took whatever side was most convienient for him. I'd rather die for what I was fighting for than switch to the other side because they're winning, losing all morals. Victoria was just in love with James and mistakenly thought that he loved her too. She wanted revenge for her mate's death. I would have done the same.

Aro, Marcus, and Cauis. They also feed on their natural staple, though are a bit too lazy to hunt for themselves. They are also too powerhungry. I agree that someone needs to be in control and reign in the vampire race, but the power has gone to their heads. They have no respect for life and don't think twice about taking one. Irina for example. She didn't need to die. She didn't deserve to die. Everyone makes mistakes. Although, hers ended up being a little more drastic and based on anger rather than a true misunderstading.

New Moon Movie:

Truthfully, I'm not sure if I even want to see it. I mean, I'm all for Bella and Edward and Edward practically doesn't exist in the movie. I don't even remember when it's going to come out. And Jacob is so NOT hot with his long, crackly, dry, disgusting hair. And what's a Twilight movie without Edward/Robert Pattinson? I didn't really the book anyway. Although I know that the end's going to kick ass. At least, it better. It's going to be the only good part of the movie. Again, it's going to suck without the Cullen clan. They're in it for what? an eight of the book? It was definitely one of the worst books I've ever read. Very slow. Very very slow. So the movie's going to be like, 20 minutes for me. Well, the decent parts of it. The beginning, when Edward and the clan are there. Then skip about an hour and a half, and go straight towards the end! Volturi, they go back, they make out, Edward asks Bella to marry him, they go the Cullen's house, they vote, Edward gets mad, they go back home, Bella talks to Charlie, Bella gets yelled at for the motorcycle, and everyone lives happily ever after! Not really... I just wish Jake would leave the story. I mean really, forcing himself on Bella then falling in love with Renesmee? I don't even like her! Or Jake! I wish they would just leave. Go off to Norway or somewhere. I don't even care that's she only about 5. She needs to leave. So does Jake. As I said before, they bother me. Truthfully, I think that Jake might have 'imprinted' on Renesmee just to spend more time with Bella. He can't marry her, so why not become her step-son? Ew.

I am a very opinionated person. Sorry if any of this offends you.

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1. Drabbles reviews
He drew the eyes. The eyes that held so many secrets and shed so many tears. A dash of brown there. Her blue eyes with the specks of brown and green. He drew the pain, the hurt, the sadness. He drew his eyes. OOC
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Angst/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,074 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-10-09 - Edward & Bella - Complete
2. Dying for Love » reviews
Bella has 6 months to live. She decides to break out of her shell and meets Edward, someone who lives for eternity. When he tries to discover her secret, he falls in love during the process. Why won't she become a vampire for him? ExB vampires included!
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 58 - Words: 119,417 - Reviews: 1772 - Updated: 3-8-09 - Published: 11-21-08 - Bella & Edward - Complete
3. Is it Too Late to Say I Love You? reviews
After having her heart broken, Bella is more than ready to escape Forks, leaving her friends and family behind without saying goodbye. Will Edward, her best friend, be able to stop her? Do they both get more than they bargained for? ExB
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,508 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 2-4-09 - Published: 2-3-09 - Bella & Edward - Complete
4. Race to the Top » reviews
Bella's rich, preppy and the Queen Bee of her school. Her father is senator and ignores her and his wife; she feels alone. Can Edward help her move on? Can they overcome the obstacles to be together or will the social classes get in the way? OOC AH BxE
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 16,425 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 2-3-09 - Published: 1-16-09 - Bella & Edward - Complete
5. The World Hates Us » reviews
bella swan returns to forks after leaving because edward cheated on her. when she finally forgives him, the world is determined to keep them apart. will they be able to work against the world to stay together? is it worth it? AH BXE
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 26 - Words: 36,076 - Reviews: 174 - Updated: 11-21-08 - Published: 10-30-08 - Complete
6. Just My Luck reviews
After Eclipse, Bella and Edward's lives seem perfect. But Tanya wants Edward and will do anything to get him. Only person standing in her way is Bella. And the rest of the Cullen family. EXB
Twilight - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,748 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-12-08 - Edward & Bella - Complete
7. I Wish I could Remember » reviews
So these are poems about The Notebook and Twilight. First story
Twilight - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 569 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 11-1-08 - Published: 10-30-08 - Complete
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