FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination| Sybil Rowan |
Author has written 46 stories for Weiss Kreuz, Gundam Wing/AC, Gatchaman, Anime X-overs, Voltron, and Cyborg 009. I’ve been writing anime fan-fiction for almost twenty-two years now. I started off in highschool with a notebook and pencil when I was fifteen. My first love was Gatchaman, but my newest love is Trinity Blood. I love writing comedy. It's my strong suit; it comes from reading too many David Sedaris books. I also love to write dramas with an espionage twist. Ray Bradbury is my favorite author, but I don't think I'll ever write anything quite as cool and bone-chilling as he does. Lately I've been doing a lot of beta-reading for some outstanding people in all sorts of fandoms. Below I have a few listed. Go check them out and give them some love. They all are very talented. Also, below my beta-reading list is now a 'guidelines for writing GOOD fanfiction.' This was put together by WingedPanther73 and myself. A lot of it is common sense items. Check it out. If you have any more to add, questions, or comments send us a PM. Some of my absolute favorites over the years? Gatchaman, Voltron (Lion and Vehicle), Gundam (all series), Starblazers/ Captain Harlock universe, Cyborg 009, Full Metal Alchemist, Gunslinger Girl, Samurai Seven, Big O, Avatar: Last Air Bender, Weiss Kreuz, Trinity Blood. (This list could go on and on) I’m more of an old-school kind of a girl, but I’m branching out into some great manga like like MARS. Personal Info? I’m in my mid-thirties. I graduated college a year ago with both an English and a History degree. I’m married to a mathematician who has several cats! He's my most awesome beta-reader and his profile is WingedPanther73; I love him very much. He has several good, short stories, but his writing style is really different from mine. I do believe going back to college was a huge help in improving my writing style. (History professors happen to be pickier over grammar than English professors!) My blog is http://sybilrowan.livejournal.com/ People I beta for: Battleship Yamato Lady Lear- I've been enjoying seeing a fresh, original character that blends into the setting and plot without warping the original characters. Jessica Conroy is Peter Conroy's younger sister and a rouge medic; she is having to deal with seeing her old flame, Hardy, once again. Lady Lear has a wonderful take on Peter Conroy and the rest of the Tigershark pilots. Weiss Kreuz Laurose- This lady writes Schuldig and Aya centric stories. They have a lot of thought to them and are very deep. She uses the whole Weiss Kreuz universe and doesn't confine herself only to the anime. She really digs into how Rosenkreuz effected Schwarz's psyche. Fantastic writing because she really uses Schuldig's skill as a telepath to her advantage in the narrative. Vitani- She doesn't have the story I beta-ed for her up yet, 'Nimm Mein Leben.' It's an exploration of Ken and Nagi after the events in the radio drama 'The Holy Children.' If you've read my stuff, you know I really devoted three entire months to exploring Ken's character in gross detail. He's not as simple as people thing, but Lady Vitani does such an outstanding job at dissecting Ken's mind. Sybil Rowan and WingedPanther's tips for writing GOOD fanfiction. 1) Get a copy of Strunk and White's Elements of Style. This has all the latest tips for smooth writing. It also contains up-to-date grammar rules. 2) Sybil always reads everything out loud. It's amazing how much you catch that way. Awkward phrases, incorrect pronouns, and missing commas. 3) Get to know your characters. The whole point of fanfiction is to put the characters you know and love in unique plots and/or settings. If you don't feel comfortable with a character, Winged recommends that you take a scene from your fandom and write it from that character's point of view. It's amazing how much insight you can gain from simply forcing yourself to understand why a character did and said the things he/she did in the fandom. Sybil was able to give Trowa Barton (from Gundam Wing) amnesia without changing his personality. That's why we know this can and should be done. This will also help you avoid problems with #9 below. 4) Always remain in the point of view of the character you're working with. It's never OK to switch from one character's point of view to another's in the middle of a scene. You must either break the scene or make the character with privileged information reveal it either through dialogue or actions (if you're lucky, your character's a telepath, thank goodness for Schuldig and Ivan!). 5) Sybil is a firm believer that you can never have too few “that”s. That is her firm belief. If you say “that” all the time, you get the feeling that you're being repetitive. That gets boring for the reader. That's a really good way to slow down the pacing as well. Don't do that. Winged is a little more lenient, but he also wrote the preceding to make the point, got that? 6) Always eliminate as many state of being verbs and modals as possible. In other words, eliminate “was”, “were”, “should”, “could”, etc. Make the verb active and past tense (unless in dialogue). It's OK to use modals in dialogue, because that's how people speak. 7) Have a point. No one wants to read your stream-of-consciousness experiments. Have a plot. Have a goal. Even a two page story should at least convey something about the characters. You can do experimental stuff (Winged certainly does) and you don't have to plan it all out (Winged doesn't), but you should have a purpose for putting your fingers to the keyboard. 8) Eliminate extraneous words. “Less is more.” This means that you don't have to go into extreme detail about the luxurient, honey-blonde, wavy, shoulder-length hair with red highlights and neatly trimmed bangs on your original character. She's blond. You can mention the highlights later. Nobody really cares. Your goal is to tell a story, not to take a photograph. 9) This brings us to the infamous Mary Sue phenomenon. If you don't know, a “Mary Sue” story is a story with an original character that overshadows the canon characters. You can read Winged's Mary Sue and Gary Stu stories for some parodies on this. Basically, there is nothing wrong with an original character, but that character cannot warp the other characters in order to be the star. For example, if you're writing a Star Wars fan fic, you cannot CANNOT CANNOT have an original character that makes Yoda look like a wimp. Sybil's working with a Battleship Yamato fanfic author who has done a wonderful job creating an original character and blending her into the existing canon. It can be done. You know you're on the wrong track if the most stoic male in canon starts gushing and sending roses and writing love letters. Think Han Solo as a hopeless romantic as something to avoid. See also #3 above. 10) Always have another set of eyes look over your stuff before posting it. You don't want to embarrass yourself. Granted, we find flaws in our stories after posting them, but we keep the errors to a minimum. 11) Your spell checker is your FRIEND! Use it. If you have a grammar checker, use that too. This doesn't replace having another person read your story, but will make things easier on that person. If your proof-reader opens the file and sees a bunch of red squiggly lines, it doesn't make him/her feel respected. That is not how you want to treat someone who's doing you a favor. 12) Eliminate speech tags. These are things like “he said”, “she exclaimed”, “he bemoaned”. Usually, they simply aren't necessary. You should always be able to tell who's speaking by the words being used. If need be, have the appropriate character DO something to keep the reader oriented. A useful experiment is to write a scene as pure dialog, and do it in a way that makes it clear who's speaking at all times. See also #3 above. 13) One of the keys to keeping the story moving is to use short sentences. “Bob hit Joe. Joe collapsed with a sore jaw.” is much better than “Bob struck out at Joe's chin. Flailing wildly, he managed to connect with a loud, crisp smack that sent Joe stumbling backwards, arms windmilling wildly, collapsing despite his best efforts to remain upright.” Unless your scene needs a little drama or comedy, avoid the second. Short, punchy sentences communicate action and speed. Long sentences slow down the action. 14) Find your own voice. If you think one of us has a great writing style, thanks! However, you'll notice that our writing styles are very different. Winged tends to write longer sentences and more analytic stories. Sybil focuses heavily on characters, with shorter sentences and longer, more detailed stories. Winged focuses on scenes, Sybil focuses on action. Your voice will be different from both of ours. Always write from your heart/gut, first. Then worry about editing. A good book to help get you inspired is Zen and the Art of Writing, by Ray Bradbury. 15) Read a lot. Not just modern novel, but older literature as well. Shakespeare, for example, can give you a lot of inspiration. Knowing the old Greek legends can provide you with lots of ideas. Reading Like A Writer, by Francine Prose, gives a lot of examples of how to pull ideas from other writers and use them to improve your own. This is a particularly important tip for people writing Cartoon/Anime fanfics. You are NOT directing an episode! You are working with a very different medium from the original story. Don't use chibi gimmicks, for example. It works visually, it fails literarily. 16) One other thing: comedy. Don't fool yourself, it is HARD to write. Winged generally avoids this. Sybil enjoys it. The key is word choice. Look at the two examples in #13 above. Notice the great difference in the choice of words, details, etc. Any David Sedaris essay will show you how word choice can make the difference between a slightly dull story and a side-splittingly funny story. You may have to use a few extra words, but it's usually a matter of opening your thesaurus and picking a substitute with a slightly more specific connotation. 17) Use specific language. Don't say things like “The nondescript person walked down the nondescript corridor to an ordinary, somewhat triangular door.” Don't use contradictory or confusing descriptions either. “The masculine girl strolled down the exciting, unadorned passageway towards the oblong, circular door.” It leaves your reader wondering what to believe. Have a consistent message, say it, and move on. 18) Please, learn a few, basic comma rules. You can find them with a simple google search, but once again, make sure you've picked up Elements of Style (only about 10.00). They're all in there, and they matter. | |||||||||
1. Loss reviewsJoe has a hard time with Kubikuro’s death, but Chang gets him to accept it.Cyborg 009 - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,043 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-9-09 - Complete2. The Perfect Kiss reviews002x004, 009x003, Albert and Jet start dating. Joe tries to figure out why Jet, his best friend, kept it a secret from him.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,632 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-2-09 - Complete3. Sooner Than You Think reviewsCompanion piece to 'Wish I Was Older.' Albert and Jet are learning how to communicate with each other right after the 0011 fight. A car accident promotes some bad memories for Albert.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,085 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-10-09 - Complete4. The Birds reviewsShort piece on Doctor J’s musings over the Tallgeese. He also gets an idea for a future Gundam and the pilot by watching birds.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 876 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-25-09 - Doctor J & Howard - Complete5. The Game reviewsCo-authored with WingedPanther73. Short piece on Master O’s thoughts on impatient Meilan as he tries to teach her the game Go.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 729 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-21-09 - Master O & Meilan C. - Complete6. The Angel reviewsShort piece on why Instructor H designed Sandrock like an angel.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 993 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-20-09 - Instructor H & Professor G - Complete7. The Substitute reviewsShort piece on how Doctor S feels about handing over Heavyarms to a talented, nameless boy and how he feels to be rid of the Barton Foundation.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 928 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7-19-09 - Doctor S & Trowa B./No-Name - Complete8. The Design reviewsShort piece on how Professor G came up with Deathscythe’s design.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 652 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-19-09 - Professor G & Doctor J - Complete9. First and Last and Always » reviews*COMPLETE* 004x002, Jet is a delinquent from a wealthy family. His favorite teacher dies and is replaced by a mysterious man. He tries to find out more about Heinrich while grieving. He ends up in danger from a 'vampire hunter' named Van Bogart.Cyborg 009 - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 12 - Words: 45,527 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 6-28-09 - Published: 5-17-09 - Complete10. Wish I Was Older reviewsJet has a nightmare about the rival gang member he killed and has two conversations, with 001 and then with 004, that changes his mind about trust. This is a maturing moment for Jet.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - Friendship/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,087 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-23-09 - Complete11. GB and the Trouble with Jet reviewsGB bets Chang he can lure Jet into doing housework. He makes the mistake of adopting Albert’s appearance. Bad idea! This is a kind of a fun friendship story involving 007, 002, 006, and 004 with 002 004 relationship.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - General/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,133 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-31-09 - Complete12. Procession reviews004 002, Albert has a hard day and wants to move out of New York. Jet wants to stay and an argument ensues. Albert gets to the bottom of why Jet doesn’t want to move back to Berlin.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,760 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-11-09 - Complete13. HyperBallad reviews004/Hilde, 002/004, Jet is hurt in battle and waiting for Gilmore to fix him. He’s surprised when Albert stays by his side.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,936 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5-11-09 - Complete14. Winter's Regret reviewsSequel to ‘Autumn Leaves.’ Ken is now free from his target’s wife, but he’s in deep trouble with Kritiker. While he’s trying to earn back Kritiker’s trust, he has a run in with Kitagawa's son.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,959 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-4-09 - Ken H.15. The Flesh Element004 002, What if Robot -004 is resurrected and ‘improved.’ There’s a glitch which makes him obsessed with Jet and on a rampage to confront and kill Albert.Cyborg 009 - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,253 - Published: 5-2-09 - Complete16. The MastermindCo-authored with WingedPanther73. Ivan's memories of when Jet, Frances, and Albert were each brought to the Black Ghost organization and his thoughts and actions to protect them.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,432 - Published: 4-19-09 - Complete17. Autumn Leaves reviewsSequel to ‘Summer Rain.’ Ken tries to get out of the dangerous situation he’s in with the vengeful wife of one of his former targets. She doesn’t want to let her new, free assassin go so easily.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,037 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4-4-09 - Ken H. - Complete18. Summer Rain reviewsSequel to ‘Spring Fever.’ Ken’s rash decision has terrible repercussions. His act of kindness to a target's wife puts him and Weiss in danger. He's left confused as to how to get out of the situation he's created. This will have a following part.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: T - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,997 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3-13-09 - Ken H. - Complete19. It Was Your Hair reviews004 002. Albert tells Jet what attracted him; the problem is that it was the same thing that attracted him to Hilde. This is a turning point for their relationship.Cyborg 009 - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,729 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3-3-09 - Complete20. As It Is, When It WasThe Explorer finds a new planet for Balto’s survivors to colonize, but this tips off some hidden resentment Chip has over Pidge’s choice in becoming a citizen of Arus. Cross with Lion and Vehicle Voltrons. Just a family story about Chip and Pidge, just soVoltron - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,745 - Published: 3-1-09 - Complete21. Project Dunkel » reviewsMasafumi gets tired of Schwarz interfering with his plans so he creates a genetic replacement Schwarz. His creation gets out of hand and starts causing a lot of problems for everyone.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: M - English - Drama/General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,839 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-14-09 - Complete22. Triple Cross »Cyborg 009/ Gatchaman F/ Weiss Kreuz This is a story about Ivan, Jinpei, and Omi meeting and becoming friends. They don't tell their respective teammates, which leads to trouble when their enemies meet and try to capture all of them.Anime X-overs - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 44,976 - Published: 1-28-09 - Complete23. Spring Fever reviewsKen goes on an assassination mission; his target’s wife walks in during the assassination. He makes a rash decision and then worries about it.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,073 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1-20-09 - Ken H. - Complete24. Rota Fortunae reviewsCrawford’s thoughts on working for Takatori and biding his time with Eszett. It’s while he escorts Takatori to a Human Chess match.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,665 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-20-09 - B. Crawford & Reiji T. - Complete25. Obligation reviewsKen's accustom to Aya's abrupt personality while Aya realizes he has got a new obligation when he joined Weiss.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,431 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-20-09 - Ken H. & Aya/Ran F. - Complete26. Disappointments » reviewsThe Weiss teammates all receive letters that remind them of painful times in their lives.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 6,120 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-20-09 - Complete27. Aya's New Fan ClubAya makes a startling discovery on his first day working at the flower shop.Weiss Kreuz - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Published: 1-20-09 - Aya/Ran F.28. In a Lonely Place reviewsJoe goes back to Purgatory after he has freed his parents, however, they realize that Joe is doomed to stay in Purgatory. Joe lets out his anger and bitterness towards them before they are parted once again. Takes place right after Joe dies in the first sGatchaman - Rated: T - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,341 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-13-09 - Complete29. Love Will Tear Us Apart reviewsJoe gets complications from a bought of pneumonia and has a chance to talk with his parents in Purgatory. He takes on the task of vengeance to help them towards Heaven, but he's hasn't totally forgiven them. Takes place early on in the first Gatchaman serGatchaman - Rated: T - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,485 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-10-09 - Complete30. Komakino reviewsLady Une discovers an order from Treize Khushrenada she never fulfilled and it leads her to a solution to a mounting problem. A lot of manufactured history for Lady Une. Takes place four years after Endless Waltz. This is a “What if...” vignette off ofGundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,246 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-2-09 - L. Une & Trowa B./No-Name - Complete31. Masquerade » reviewsTrowa goes on a mission to find out that Romefeller is not the only organization that has its eyes on world domination. This has Condor Joe in it so be forewarned it has a supernatural, ghost story element to it. Mainly, a strait forward spy story.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Supernatural - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,480 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-2-09 - Trowa B./No-Name - Complete32. Glory Box » reviewsMilliardo and Dorothy argue a court case in front of Relena involving Middie Une. She is caught spying on Romefeller, but no one can figure out who she’s working for. Middie Une’s life hangs in the balance while Trowa and Lady Une recover from their batGundam Wing/AC - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 5 - Words: 29,007 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-23-08 - Zechs M. & Midii U. - Complete33. Sour Times » reviewsTrowa gets a head injury and starts to believe he is Lady Une’s real adjutant. He doesn’t remember his past or anything to do with the Gundams. The others try to rescue him, but he’s hellbent on killing them for OZ’s sake.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 20,473 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-10-08 - Trowa B./No-Name & L. Une - Complete34. Dreams Never End » reviewsThis is a fun Duo and Trowa friendship fanfiction. Duo and Trowa start a hobby that everyone is curious about. It ends up deeply affecting them when the discover the lives of two Gundam pilots that lived a little over one hundred years before them. If yGundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 14,601 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-8-08 - Trowa B./No-Name & Duo M. - Complete35. Shared Target reviewsHeero and Trowa get conflicting orders and struggle to carry them out in spite of each other. This story starts from Heero’s point of view, then goes to Trowa’s and keeps changing back and forth between them.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: T - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,885 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-8-08 - Heero Y. & Trowa B./No-Name - Complete36. Balance reviewsTrowa and Cathrine confirm they are siblings. This leads Trowa to analyze if he needs a civilian life and a home when he's deep undercover spying on Lady Une.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,377 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-2-08 - Trowa B./No-Name & Catherine B. - Complete37. War Correspondence reviewsLady Une gets a letter from Treize that throws Trowa’s life in jeopardy.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,155 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-1-08 - Trowa B./No-Name & L. Une - Complete38. Dirty Smut »Enough said with the title! Wufei attempts to get revenge for them putting him into a dress, but it backfires Read my fan-fiction Gossip Mill if you want that background .Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,973 - Published: 11-30-08 - Complete39. The Gossip Mill reviewsThe gang gets food poisoning thanks to Wu-man, but Wufei decides to have fun spreading gossip while he’s filling in for the others. The others teach him what true justice is all about.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,149 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-30-08 - Wufei C. - Complete40. Sneaky Maxwell Vs The Goon Squad reviewsComedy. Duo teases Rasid and bets that he can get past the burley Arab to 'tag' Quatre. Yeah... right.... My very first Gundam Wing story but not my first Gundam story and still a personal favorite! I love writing Duo and Rasid stories for some strangeGundam Wing/AC - Rated: K - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,152 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-30-08 - Duo M. & Maganac Corps - Complete41. Let's Go! Nothing for Me reviewsRelena decides to keep Heero safe from what she sees as one true threat. She ends up committing fratricide.Gundam Wing/AC - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,554 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-30-08 - Relena P. & Zechs M. - Complete42. Crawford's Nasty Flu » reviewsCrawford ends up getting a nasty case of the flu at the same time Eszett comes for a vacation. Schuldig, Farfarello, and Nagi all learn to appreciate Crawford more after this experience. Kissing Eszett’s backside, schmoozing Schreient, and guarding TakatoWeiss Kreuz - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,188 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-23-08 - Schuldig & Nagi N. - Complete43. The Happy House » reviewsAya is recruited as a Weiss assassin, but he’s not exactly sure why his new teammates seem so strange. They all seem too nice and too perfect. Their cover is a delicatessen. Bizarre things happen after each mission that Aya can’t account for. A locked freWeiss Kreuz - Rated: M - English - Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 11,932 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-20-08 - Aya/Ran F. - Complete44. Aya and Bad Karma reviewsAya gives his fellow assassins food poisoning and has to endure the weekend before Valentine’s Day alone. Omi has a major history paper to write, Ken promised his soccer kids ice cream, and Youji wants to get rid of his new girlfriend. Can Aya help get alWeiss Kreuz - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,318 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-13-08 - Aya/Ran F. - Complete45. Crawford’s Car and the Tokyo City Vandals reviewsThis is another Weiss Kreuz comedy. Schwarz is so ripe for comedy! “Poor” Crawford goes to the shopping mall to pick up Nagi and Tot. He gets a premonition that he’ll see two of the Weiss guys arrested, but he can’t figure out what for. After he leaves hiWeiss Kreuz - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,431 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10-24-08 - B. Crawford - Complete46. Farfarello, the Dentist reviewsThe title alone should send shudders of terror and let you know this is a Weiss Kreuz comedy. I got the idea as a joke and then my husband encouraged this whole twisted mess. Farfarello has been taking day classes for many years studying to becWeiss Kreuz - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,114 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-21-08 - Farfarello - Complete
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