Author has written 11 stories for Haruhi Suzumiya series, Full Metal Panic, Mai HiME, and Harry Potter.
It's been quite a bit since I've updated that; so I've decided to see what I can do here.
Hello world, to start off, I'll begin by saying that my favourite book series overall are Harry Potter and The Hunger Games, however the canon in HP wasn't anything I'd prefer. Hence, most of my HP stories if not all are Harry/Hermione stories. I'm currently a sophomore somewhere in the True North, and I am enrolled in a public high school, in the gifted program.
In the Harry Potter series, my favourite character is Hermione Granger, and once again, most of my stories revolve around her relation with Harry.
JKR is a mastermind and creating suspenseful settings, and her detail in most events are thorough and clear. However, through a few years of thought, I've come up of multiple "errors" in the book/movies, in terms of the actual execution of events, such as rescuing Harry from his relatives in book seven. Why had Moody, a veteran Auror, not used Disillusionment Charms, Glamour, and other ones? Sure, Voldemort and his followers might as well have attempted to kill everyone anyway, but surely, it would have helped.
Another thing, is Hedwig's death. I have no clue why JKR decided to remove her from the series, as it didn't have a lasting effect on Harry. Why hadn't it been, that Harry had let her fly off by herself, instead of encasing her what would be her prison cell to the death? Surely, she would have been safer if she flew off by herself.
There are quite a few other things I've noticed, and in some of my stories, I've attempted to fix it as much as possible.
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