| HiddenMusic |
Author has written 16 stories for White Collar, Warriors, Disney, Harvest Moon, Twilight, Sight, Wicked, and Wicked. Hello, I'm HiddenMusic. Though, you can call me Hidden, Music, Musi, Hums, Musical, or just HM. Introduction~ Welcome to my profile for those of you who bothered to click on my name. I've recently cleaned out my profile of most of the copy and paste things keeping only what I find suiting to my personality and such~ :D Of course, being on FF I love to write. It's a passion for me as much as music is. Of course I do love music if you couldn't tell already by my penname. I do play the guitar and a bit of piano which I hope to learn more of and possibly learn violen. I'll be blunt, I hate the Twilight Saga. I liked it at first, but after Breaking Dawn, I saw all sorts of plot holes and such throughout the saga. The characters I find dull with only the werewolves having any kind of character depth and possibly Rosalie. The spelling and grammer is awful as well...And I feel it hasn't much of a sustaining plot other than Bella's 'unwavering passion for Edward'. She seems to love him only because he's perfect, not for his character. Her character in general is rather dull and in BD, she becomes more of a Sue and the whole point of the series seems to change. I'm willing to talk the series with anybody, love or hate it. :) With the Warrior's series, I have to admit that I believe the series is going way down hill. The charcters are losing it, Firestar is no longer Firestar, Sandstorm is no longer Sandstorm, Dustpelt is no longer Dustpelt, and one of my favorite characters, Greystripe, is no longer Greystripe. They have all lost their character and the new characters are just annoying. I officially hate StarClan now as well. They force Jaypaw to be a medicine cat's apprentice because it was his destiny. He didn't have a choice. They said Brambleclaw should be deputy even though in Darkest Hour they told Firestar at the time that the choice of deputy was his, not theirs. StarClan is also no granting these powers to cats which is annoying as well. I don't know about you but I agree with Blackstar - forget the dead cats. The names are also becoming a problem, they no longer represent the cats like they should and the Erins are beginning to break their rules. Hawkfrost, Squirrelflight, Whitewing, Berrynose, Birchfall, Lionblaze etc. What kind of names are these? What happened to names like Lionheart, Whitestorm, Blackfoot, Runningwind, Runningnose, Tigerclaw, Leopardpelt or Crookedstar? Where the names actually describe the cats? The series has lost it's magic and glory, it seemed so magical and lively, so full of characters. I was entranced by the book when I read it and I remember looking forward to reaidng just one chapter of Into the Wild at night during Christmas time while the lights from outside flickered off the celing. I loved it. Now, it seems the series has lost it's magical touch that had originally drawn me in. Story Update: Let me warn you all that updates on stories will start to slow. Things are getting busy in life thus I have less time to write. Completed Stories~ Seeking Dawn: The sequel to Dawn of the Rising Moon. (Warriors) Dawn of the Rising Moon:The cats belong to other people, I just took them and created a story. It's about WhisperClan and HiddenClan as they face the threat of having their lovely forest taken from them. (Warriors) In Progress~ No Longer: On hold until further notice.(Harvest Moon) Melting Hope: Hope to start next chapter soon, been distracted I must admit. No fear! I plan on updating still, just can't promise when. I've been so lazy lately...(The Sight) One-shots~ A Pirates Tale: The story of Walt Disney told by Blackbeard from the Pirates of the Caribbean attraction. (Disney) A Pirates Rumor: First sequel of A Pirates Tale. About how a certain myth about Walt Disney got to the public... (Disney) A Pirates Haunting:Based off rumors on the Huanted Mansion told by Blackbeard. Remember, they are only rumors. (Disney) A Pirates Mansion: This is what happens when the cast of the Pirates of the Caribbean get so curious as to why the Haunted Mansion gets so many visitors... (Disney) A Pirates Tribute: A tribute in honor of 9/11 (Disney) Breaking Dawn of Another Sun:Just a short little one-shot on what I think would have been a better ending to the Saga. I was disappointed with BD, so I figured I'd write a small alternate ending. (Twilight) Purpose, Meaning, Life:Just a one-shot on the thoughts of a BloodClan warrior and what it's like to have served under Scourge. (Warriors) Dead, But Never Gone:This is a Wicked AU for the ending. Elphaba actually does die in the end. There may be some things confusing and some typos because I was up late writing this. I'll be sure to go back over it and edit it when the chance is given. (Wicked) Burning Water: This is just like the one above but bookverse. Not terribly great, just a drabble really. (Wicked) Love of a Witch: This is the better one of my three Wicked oneshots. It revolves around the relationship between Liir and Elphaba and shows what goes on when Liir becomes ill. (Wicked) Future Stories~ -I plan to make a Pokemon fanfic after Melting Hope is completed or close to completion. I am thinking about accepting an OC or two to appear in the story, however, it'll consist of mainly my own characters. -I plan on doing a Lion King fic. When this will appear I don't know. It may or may not come before my Pokemon fic~ The pokemon fic still has some tweaking to do. I would also like to continue my A Pirates Tale series, though I would appreciate more readers to review. If you love the Pirate's attraction at Disneyland/World, please check out my stories on it and review. I'll accept ideas and recommendations for future sequels, please read them and review if you are interested! TWILIGHT Personal Overview~ Some of these things I've stated earlier, I just would like to go a good overview of the series and my thoughts~ A look into my thoughts as I read the Saga through the first time: Twilight: At first, I thought it was good. I actually liked Bella a little because she was more normal in this book it seemed. I didn't care for Edward and wasn't to thrilled with the whole sparkly vampires and how they didn't have fangs. Though I did like some of the side characters and for a first book, I thought it was rather good. Not as good as Harry Potter's first book, but good. I did wish I could have seen a little more action though like I was promised before readnig. New Moon: This book really irritated me in the beginning. Bella went super depressed and over dramatic about him leaving and acted like her life was nothing without him. It wasn't like he was dead! And it was as though Charlie, Renee, Jacob or any of her friends just weren't good enough to live on. I really liked Jacob in this book though and the werewolves. I was actually interested in the stories and I was disappointed how Bella ditched Jacob, the one whom brought her back from her pathetic self pity to save the one who ruined her. Eclipse: Eclipse was a disappointment. So Victoria wants revenge over the death of James so she has constructed this newborn army. Lovely, I thought I may actually get a good battle. Jasper has some shine in this book by telling them more about newborns and such due to his past. This book had a lot of Jacob/Edward rivalry which I found a complete waste. I did want Jacob since he was a better built character than Edward, but I knew Bella was going to pick Edward in the end so it wasn't suspenseful or dramatic. When the time came to actually fight, we didn't even get to see it. All we saw was Edward ever so easily kill Victoria -boring- and Seth only pretend to be injured so Bella could be cute and heroic and try to save him by killing herself. After that boring 'battle' Edward and Bella become officially engaged. Yay...didn't see that one coming... Breaking Dawn: I was immediately irritated right off the back by Bella's constant whining about all these splendid things she has. Dear Bella, I'm terribly sorry you have to marry the love of your life, must be awful to marry someone who gives you a wonderful new car and loves you very much. Then the wedding happens which Charlie and Renee agree on -what the heck?- and it goes on, Jacob comes but nearly blows up and ruins everything -too bad he didn't-. The honeymoon...what...the...crap. Bella only cares for the sex -which is the reason she got married in fact- while Edward has all these fun activities to do. But no, it's all about sex for Bella. I was annoyed and I found myself hating her more than Edward. Oh, and then she starts feeling sick...dear me, is she slowly turning into a vampire maybe? Uh-oh, her period is late...please no...She is...Why, oh, why is she pregnant?! That isn't even supposed to be possible! Yes, Meyer said that she never specifically stated male vamps can't have children, but she seriously mislead us badly and it shows that she just threw this together and made and excuse. I had a gut feeling this was not going to turn out well, and my guts were right. I was at first skeptical about reading from Jacob's point of view, but I ended up enjoying it the most. He actually had character depth and development and I was loving the idea of Jacob/Leah since they were both in the same boat. But no, as soon as were back to Bella's point of view, he imprints on that Renesme -awful name...did I even spell it right?- The whole birth scene was disgusting! Coughing up gallons of blood -which Bella also DRANK while she was still human...is that any form of cannibalism?- and Edward is ripping into her stomach...Can I just say one thing? EW! The rest of the book was now about this thing I could care less for who is as much of a Sue as her parents and then Alice's tells everyone they were going to die and ditches them and soon the whole world and even the Volturi revolve around this baby. And we don't even get a good battle for it 'cause Bella's super awesome shield protects everyone mentally. By the way...Remember all those vampires whom had all thsoe special abilities? I guess they weren't so rare after all...All in all, Queen Bella gets a happy ending without having to fight for anything and gets everything she wants despite the fact that throughout the whole series, she had to decide between her family and life or Edward. Yay, she gets both...even Jacob. As you could tell, my liking for Bella went down dramatically starting with the start of New Moon. My liking for Edward actually went up a little, probably because he started to look so much better next to Bella. Also, I begin to notice more problems like how Bella is automatically liked by everyone in Twilight, how Edward is really a stalker, how there really isn't much of a deep love between the two main characters, it's more Edward's so perfect. I could go on and on...seriously, but my hand is getting tired of typing so I'm going to cut it here~ Anyway, Favorite Books: Wicked Years- Always loved the Wicked Witch of the West and I admire Maguire for giving her a story of her own. It involves love, politics, betrayal and all sorts of good stuff like that~ Be warned that it does have what FF would call M-rated content in it. Otherwise, it's a wonderful novel! Harry Potter- Meant to add this a while ago, I put it in place of Twilight because really, Harry Potter is a much better constructed and creative book. Some things annoy me about it, but it's a great book that shows more effort and hard work than Twilight. Cracker!- A war story with a war dog in it. I found it enjoyable. I was close to buying it after checking it out. War Horse- I really liked this book for similar reasons I liked Cracker. A good war story in the eyes of the steed. Enjoyable very! Star in the Storm- A lovable story about a girl and her dog. Again, I was very close to buying this book to after reading it. Thunder From the Sea- From the same author as Star in the Storm. Similar concept, different story. Not as good as Star in the Storm, but enjoyable. Warriors- I ONLY like the first series, but I despise the rest of it. I love the concept of Warrios, but it does have issues with characters. Favorite Wicked Characters (Possible spoilers!) Elphaba (Wicked Witch of the West)- Again, always loved the Wicked Witch of the West and I love the complex character she truely is. It makes me curious as to what really goes on in her mind. I love her in both the musical and the book. Fiyero- I just adore how he is so devoted and loyal to Elphaba and show us that it is possible for someone to actually love the Wicked Witch of the West. Liir- Liir seems so unsure of his place in the world. I love his interesting, complicated relationship with Elphaba and Elphaba's secret motherly feelings for him. Nanny- She makes me laugh! I literally laughed as I read the book with her as an elderly lady. XD Chistery- Come on, he's a flying monkey who can talk. Automatically he's awesome. But also the way Elphaba had this patience with him and Chistery's devotion to Elphaba and Nanny I just found adorable! Glinda- Love her so much better than in the original Wizard of Oz. She look so innocent but she too has flaws. I adored her in the musical and the book though in the book her role is much smaller. Nor- I just find her interesting. Like her much better than her brothers and to me it seems Elphaba does have concern and care for Nor. :) Favorite Wicked Pairings Elphaba/Fiyero- Yeah, this time I do love the canon pairing! :D Liir/Dorothy- I've no idea why I like this...I like it better than Liir/Candle anyway~ Liir/Trism- Hate/love relationships tend to draw me in... Least Favorite Wicked Pairings Fiyero/Glinda- From the musical of course. They just...they just don't mix together. Glinda/Elphaba- I don't know what people see in best friend pairings. I personally dislike them Liir/Candle- I kind of liked it at first, but as time went on I grew less fond of it. Favorite Harry Potter Characters(Where to being? XD There MAY be spoilers) Harry Potter- I just find him in general interesting. Unlike other main characters coughcoughbellacoughcough he isn't a Sue, er, Stue in his case and we grow up with him as we read each book and watch him develope as a person. You kind of start to grow attatched to the kid... Fred and George Weasley- Gotta love the troublesome duo! I love the twins, I just do. Severus Snape- He's sinister, he's a bully, he loves the mother of the main character, he's a double, triple, whatever agent, love him! He acts so cruel to Harry and takes the blame for so many things yet he remains faithful to Dumbledore and protects Harry no matter what despite his detest for him due to his father. He does it all out of love for Lily...I find it adorable! :) Dobey- DOBEY! He's just so adorable and so loyal to Harry and I find it cute. He truely shows us how to appreciate everything we have, even socks! Draco Malfoy- So conflicted...I just love him, just you have to love him. Such a young age he faces being a Death Eater at such a young age...I just admire him! Lucious Malfoy- I don't know why I like him...I just...do...Hey, he's Draco's father, he must be great! Professer McGonagall- She's so strict and stern yet she always cares for Harry's well being almost like a grandmother in a way. I dunno, I just like her. Hagrid- BFG here. Dang, if I were a Hogwarts student, I would always visit Hagrid! I love his love for all sorts of creatures like when he had Norbert or Buckbeak. Buckbeak- GO HIPPOGRIFFS! flashes peace sign Luna Lovegood- I love her optimisticness and ways of thinking. She's just the kind of person who'd fit in nicely with me and my own friends. :) Nymphadora Tonks- I really loved her in Order of the Phoenix, though she went a little blach after that, but I still love her. Sirius Black- He's an awesome Animagus, he's so protective of Harry, he's just just awesome all around! I do wish he lived longer, he was a great character who was devoted to protecting Harry. Remus Lupin- Why couldn't he have been MY teacher?! Albus Dumbledore- I love him, especially in the books. Even the great Hogwarts Headmaster has his random moments of humor! Hedwig-...I like owls. XD I was so sad when poor Hedwig died... Charlie and Bill- They are just those characters you randomdly love. :D ~Copy and Paste Section~ -"A Smile is a curved line that sets things straight." This is a story about God. Read if you believe in him, and read even if you don't. A teenage girl about 17 named Diane had gone to visit some friends one evening and time passed quickly as each shared their various experiences of the past year. She ended up staying longer than planned, and had to walk home alone. She wasn't afraid because it was a small town and she lived only a few blocks away. As she walked along under the tall elm trees, Diane asked God to keep her safe from harm and danger. When she reached the alley, which was a short cut to her house, she decided to take it. However, halfway down the alley she noticed a man standing at the end as though he were waiting for her. She became uneasy and began to pray, asking for God's protection. Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness and security wrapped round her, she felt as though someone was walking with her. When she reached the end of the alley, she walked right past the man and arrived home safely. The following day, she read in the newspaper that a young girl had been raped in the same alley just twenty minutes after she had been there. Feeling overwhelmed by this tragedy and the fact that it could have been her, she began to weep. Thanking the Lord for her safety and to help this young woman, she decided to go to the police station. She felt she could recognize the man, so she told them her story. The police asked her if she would be willing to look at a lineup to see if she could identify him. She agreed and immediately pointed out the man she had seen in the alley the night before. When the man was told he had been identified, he immediately broke down and confessed. The officer thanked Diane for her bravery and asked if there was anything they could do for her. She asked if they would ask the man one question. Diane was curious as to why he had not attacked her. When the policeman asked him, he answered, "Because she wasn't alone. She had two tall men walking on either side of her." Amazingly, whether you believe or not, you're never alone. Did you know that 98 of teenagers will not stand up for God, and 93 of the people that read this won’t repost it? PS: God is always there in your heart and loves you no matter what, A good friend will bail you out of jail, a true friend will be sitting next to you saying "Damn that was fun." FRIENDS/BEST FRIENDS FRIENDS: Will comfort you when he rejects you. BEST FRIENDS: Will go up and ask him, "It's because you're gay, isn't it?" FRIENDS: Will be there for you when he breaks up with you. BEST FRIENDS: Will call him up and whisper, "Seven days..." FRIENDS: Helps you up when you fall. BEST FRIENDS: Keeps on walking saying, "Walk much, dumb ass?" FRIENDS: Helps you find your prince. BEST FRIENDS: Kidnaps him and brings him to you. FRIENDS: Will ask you if you're okay when you're crying. BEST FRIENDS: Will laugh at you and say, "Ha Ha, Loser!" FRIENDS: Will offer you a soda. BEST FRIENDS: Will dump theirs on you. FRIENDS: Will sit at the side of the pool with you at that time of the month. BEST FRIENDS: Will throw you a tampon and push you in. FRIENDS: Gives you their umbrella in the rain. BEST FRIENDS: Takes yours and says, "Run - beep - run!" FRIENDS: Will help you move. BEST FRIENDS: Will help you move the bodies. FRIENDS: Will bail you out of jail. BEST FRIENDS: Would be in the room next to you saying, "That was awesome! Let's do it again!" FRIENDS: Never ask for anything to eat or drink. BEST FRIENDS: Helps themselves and are the reason why you have no food. FRIENDS: Call your parents by Mr. and Mrs. and Grandpa, by Grandpa. BEST FRIENDS: Call your parents DAD and MOM and Grandpa, GRAMPS! FRIENDS: Would bail you out of jail. BEST FRIENDS: Would be sitting next to you sayin "DAMN!" we messed up! FRIENDS: Have never seen you cry. BEST FRIENDS: Wont tell everyone else you cried...just laugh about it with you in private when your not down anymore. FRIENDS: Asks you to write down your number. BEST FRIENDS: Has you on speed dial. FRIENDS: Borrows your stuff for a few days then gives it back. BEST FRIENDS: Loses your stuff and tells you, "My bad...here's a tissue." FRIENDS: Only know a few things about you. BEST FRIENDS: Could write a very embarrassing biography on your life story... FRIENDS: Will leave you behind if that is what the crowd is doing. BEST FRIENDS: Will kick the whole crowds ass that left you FRIENDS: Would knock on your front door. BEST FRIENDS: Walk right in and say "I'M HOME." FRIENDS: You have to tell them not to tell anyone. BEST FRIENDS: Already know not to tell. FRIENDS: Are only through high school/college. (aka: drinking buddies) BEST FRIENDS: Are for life. FRIENDS: Will be there to take your drink away from you when they think you've had enough. BEST FRIENDS: Will look at you stumbling all over the place & say "Girl drink the rest of that ! You know we don't waste! FRIENDS: Would read ignore this. BEST FRIENDS: Will repost this shit! (') This, over here, is my amazing candle. I am lighting it to commerate the deaths of those 32 lives that were lost at Virginia Tech. (') my candle for all of those lost from 9/11 | |||||||
1. Scarlet Stain » reviewsAgent Peter Burke and Ex-Conman Neal Caffrey face a new challenge: A theif with a taste for precious valuables that may prove to be as cunning as Neal himself. But inner tensions might get in the way, and might put lives to risk.White Collar - Rated: T - English - Crime/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,636 - Reviews: 11 - Updated: 11-24-09 - Published: 11-20-09 - Neal C. & Peter B.2. Melting Hope » reviews-AU packs- The world is changing. Creatures are turning on one another. One artic pack falls victim to this. Only the one who holds the power of the sight can bring the hope that had begun to fade.Sight - Rated: T - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 8 - Words: 6,969 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 11-18-09 - Published: 3-2-093. The Gift of Family reviewsNeal hasn't got a family, not as an ex-con with a runaway girlfriend. Though with the Burkes, he may be proved wrong when Thanksgiving comes around.White Collar - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,923 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 11-14-09 - Complete4. Love of a Witch reviewsLiir falls ill, what does Elphaba, our Wicked Witch of the West do about this? Elphaba and Liir bonding. OneshotWicked - Rated: K+ - English - Family/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,309 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-12-09 - Liir & Elphaba T. - Complete5. A Pirates Tribute reviews-A Pirates Tale Series- A tribute to those who lost their lives in 9/11 and those who risked their lives. Rated T just in case.Disney - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,934 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9-11-09 - Complete6. Burning WaterBookverse: Elphaba's thoughts as she feels herself burning to death by the water hurled at her by that little Kansas girl. Rated T jus' in caseWicked - Rated: T - English - Angst/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,147 - Published: 8-23-09 - Elphaba T. - Complete7. Dead, But Never Gone reviewsAU Elphaba really was harmed by water...and moments after leaving Glinda to hide is where she met her demise...Musical with some book elements in it. Rated T just in case. Oneshot.Wicked - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,457 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7-30-09 - Complete8. Seeking Dawn » reviewsSequel to Dawn Of The Rising Moon -Dusk- . With Bone now having complete control over there sheltered home, Shadowlight, Sunshaft, Dovetalon, Rosethorn and Eagleheart must lead a small band of cats beyond Clan Terriories to seek help and lost peaceWarriors - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 14 - Words: 17,539 - Reviews: 25 - Updated: 7-8-09 - Published: 11-30-08 - Complete9. No Longer » reviewsStory is finally up! Jamie comes to the village Nemobu in search for a new life. No longer being the city girl she was. Rated T just in case. Go ahead, read and review please! I'm also not sure about the genreHarvest Moon - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 12,574 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 6-30-09 - Published: 12-13-0810. Purpose, Meaning, Life reviewsWhat is life like for a BloodClan cat? What is the meaning of life? What happens when it vanishes? Based of my OC BloodClan cat. Read and review please! Rated T just in case. OneshotWarriors - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,073 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6-24-09 - Complete11. A Pirates Mansion reviews-A Pirates Tale Series- Closed again, Blackbeard and crew decide to venture to the Haunted Mansion to discover what draws people there. Along the way, Blackbeard tells the crew a few behind-the scenes of this popular attraction. Rated T just in case.Disney - Rated: T - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,019 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-15-09 - Complete12. Breaking Dawn of Another Sun reviews-AU- -Oneshot- Breaking Dawn never happened. Bella realizes who it is she truely loves. Takes place after Eclipse. This is my first Twilight fic, so please read and review! Rated T just to be safe but I think it's lower.Twilight - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,463 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-17-09 - Bella & Jacob - Complete13. A Pirates Haunting reviews-A Pirates Tale Series- It's Halloween night at the Disneyland park and Blackbeard gathers his crew to tell legends of ghost stories that revolve around one of the park's most popular attractions, The Haunted Mansion! Rated T just in case.Disney - Rated: T - English - Horror/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,070 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1-2-09 - Complete14. A Pirates Rumor reviewsA sequel to A Pirates Tale. Based on a rumor about the Pirates attraction and Walt Disney. Black beard decides to tell a little 'alternate ending' to his tale about the life of Walt Disney. Rated T just in case.Disney - Rated: T - English - General/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,607 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12-8-08 - Complete15. A Pirates Tale reviewsThe park is closed and Blackbeard tells the crew of Pirates of the Caribbean a tale of the life of Walt Disney. Better than it sounds. Rated T just in case. But it may be lower. Please read and review!Disney - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,807 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-7-08 - Complete16. Dawn Of The Rising Moon » reviewsWhisperClan and HiddenClan have lived in their grand forest for generations, however rouges lurk in the moutains above ready to take away all they have. TITLE CHANGE! FORMERLLY TITLED DUSK!Warriors - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 24 - Words: 36,744 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 11-29-08 - Published: 10-28-08 - Complete