Loopy777 | FanFiction

Bah weep graaaaagnah weep ni ni bong! Thanks for checking out my fanfiction.

I'm pretty much known for my humorous writing, with creativity, quality prose, and variety being other good points people have noted. My main collection of short stories is "The Ember Island Lighthouse," but I sometimes publish one-shots individually in order to fill out (or take advantage of) the character-filters. I also have a number of short multi-part tales, and I'm currently working through a novel-sized tale, with plans for more. On that note, check out the above poll and weigh in.

So check my works as you like, or see the same stuff on deviantArt (http://loopy777.deviantart.com) or Archive of Our Own (http://archiveofourown.org/users/Loopy).

11 Ways to Tell You're Reading a Story by Loopy777

11. All the sentences are long, and nary a statement is made without at least one comma. In fact, it would probably be more accurate to say that sentences wear commas like jewelry.

10. Purple prose abounds, but not in the way you usually see it. Instead of long paragraphs of descriptions, characters will ruminate on what they're sensing, and adjectives will randomly pounce like guerrilla fighters in the wilderness. More often than not, all of this description will somehow manage to tie in to one or more ongoing themes, whether or not it's appropriate or likely.

9. Nothing quite reaches the level of darkfic. There are plenty of bleak situations, yes, even tragic ones, but one of three things happens: a) The heroes don't gives in to despair and there's always hope, b) it happens to a minor character no one can care much about, or c) the situation is so sudden and out of nowhere it is in fact darkly humorous. This is not psychologically significant in any way.

8. Any romance will be chaste romance. If it weren't for the odd kiss every so often, it'd be hard to tell if the pairings are actually romantic in nature or merely an example of two very supportive friends. This is not psychologically significant in any way.

7. Any romantic angst will be quirky romantic angst. Pairings will rarely suffer from external forces trying to keep them apart, and no character will attempt to break off a romance for the other party's perceived good. Instead, all the conflict will come from the characters struggling to even tell if they're attracted to each other, and then after they acknowledge it, they'll still waffle on deciding if the romance is worth the lifestyle compromises they'll have to make for it. This is not psychologically significant in any way.

6. Every single character thinks in a highly rational manner , and will be given to frequent bouts of dispassionate self-analysis. Yes, even the crazy ones. Especially the crazy ones. This is not psychologically significant in any way.

5. Don't look for stories about the main pairings of the original cartoon. In fact, don't look for the main characters of the original cartoon. Minor characters and strange crack-pairings rule the day.

4. It doesn't matter how inappropriate it is for the story, there will be comedic elements. This is not psychologically significant in any way.

3. Sokka or Mai. Just... Sokka or Mai. This is as psychological as it comes.

2. Serious works will often include, if not feature, characters of ambiguous, unusual, or absent morality. The presentation of these characters makes it look like that kind of behavior is being advocated.

1. Fight scenes. Fight scenes with more detail than can ever be narratively justified. Also, expect the best action sequences to randomly stop and give the POV character's full resume in a mini-essay on how awesome they are.

Update 4/4: I finished my detailed and fully spoilerly review of the latest Avatar comic, "The Search - Part 1." I'm not going to reveal if I liked it or not, but my full plot summary and analysis has been called the funniest thing since Sokka discovered meat, so it will probably be worth your time:

http://loopy777.deviantart.com/art/Searching-for-Love-363403379

http://loopy777.livejournal.com/13373.html

Retroactive

My current ongoing series is a mix of psychological horror and adventure thrills starring both Suki and Azula, with other strong roles being held by Sokka and Ty Lee. I can't tell you much without revealing some major spoilers, but if you get to Chapter 3 and you're not intrigued, then you can quit reading with my blessing. Many reviewers have described the story as one of the most unique efforts in ATLA fan-fiction, so if you're looking for something new and interesting, you could probably do worse.

I've created some supplementary material for the story: a map showing the journey of the main character, and a "playlist" of orchestral pieces that inspired each of the chapters up through Chapter 14. As certain of the music are character themes from ATLA itself, they can be a bit spoilerish, so I recommend not listening until you've read at least Chapter 10.

Map: http://fav.me/d5o10wo

Playlist: deviantArt (http://fav.me/d5qnnqp) or LiveJournal (http://loopy777.livejournal.com/12183.html)

Mai's Ramblings

My most famous work is a comedic analysis of every ship in (or not in) "Avatar: The Last Airbender". Inspired by the hilariously negative "Zero Punctuation" video game reviews, this fic showcases the dour Mai ripping apart various canon, fanon, and crack pairings. This series originated on Avatar Spirit (http://forums.avatarspirit.net/index.php?topic=15149.0), and it is there that you can enjoy the full experience, with added graphics and author-notes. If you're just interested in seeing the individual Ramblings as intended with a funny graphic at the top, you can also check out the series on deviantArt (http://loopy777.deviantart.com/gallery/6994066). Those who don't care to may still enjoy the fanart that has been produced for the fic:

Screen Manipulation of Zuko in Spongebob boxers (from "Mai on... Kataang"), by Kyoshi Fan: http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/abishtu/zubobpants.png

Drawing of Fire Lady Mai and her opinion of Loopy777, by Archaes8: http://archaes8.deviantart.com/art/Mai-on-Loopy-101455966

Screen Manipulation of Mai promoting the fic, by Kyoshi Fan: http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/abishtu/MaisRamblings.png

Drawing of Mai helping Loopy777 compose a Rambling, by Archaes8: http://archaes8.deviantart.com/art/Mai-s-Ramblings-103177105

Drawing of Mai and the ships she rambles about, by Shootingstar07: http://i36.tinypic.com/sce0lz.jpg

Logo/SigPic by PsuedoEthnic: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/jetfirespam/Mai-Ramblings/maisr-sig.png

Mai spends some quality time with Loopy777, by Archaes8:http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll303/eriksshideler/Loopai.jpg

SigPics featuring Mai, by Butterfinger:
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm5/winxminime/MaisRamblings3-1-1.jpg
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm5/winxminime/MaisRamblings-1.jpg
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm5/winxminime/MaisRamblings2-1.jpg

Mai's Ramblings on TVTropes: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/MaisRamblings

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1. Retroactive » reviews
There's a dark secret hidden in the Avatar world, a secret that unites Suki and Azula in the most terrifying way imaginable. It is a secret that will burn the four nations, before the night is past and the dawn reveals the survivors. It is a secret that may just hide in *your* life, too. Based on an idea by Lavanya Six. Now featuring Azula's War.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Mystery - Chapters: 22 - Words: 127,821 - Reviews: 200 - Updated: 5-12-13 - Published: 7-2-12 - Suki & Azula

2. Best Served Cold » reviews
For want of a nail, Azula and Sokka meet as children and discover some strange similarities. But will revenge, racism, and self-hatred keep them from becoming friends, and possibly more? A tale of emotion and suspense of which Romeo and Juliet wish they were worthy.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 4 - Words: 24,535 - Reviews: 30 - Updated: 2-14-13 - Published: 2-12-13 - Sokka & Azula - Complete

3. The Ember Island Lighthouse: A Beacon of Insanity » reviews
A collection of short stories, united only by a LOOPY creative drive that makes for a unique, insightful, and often humorous experience. Now featuring a brand new look at the Siege of Ba Sing Se.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 107 - Words: 106,845 - Reviews: 610 - Updated: 1-29-13 - Published: 6-17-09 - Iroh & Lee

4. High Noon reviews
Isn't Mai/Longshot a great idea for a crackship? I thought so, too.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 778 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11-8-12 - Mai & Longshot - Complete

5. Secret Origin reviews
One-shot Maiko story, in which Zuko discovers something new about the woman he loves and Mai gets Meta about something other than her rival ships and her reception with the fandom. Come one, come all, and discover the super-secret origin of Mai! Or, at least, one rather unique idea about it.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,088 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-24-12 - Zuko & Mai - Complete

6. Maikka Week 2012: Trapped in Ba Sing Se » reviews
This is an AU to Book 2's finale, wherein Sokka is left behind in Ba Sing Se to help plan the Invasion. Disguised as a Kyoshi Warrior, Mai is dispatched to deal with him. The proverbial hilarity ensues, along with action, intrigue, angst, and custard tarts!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 44,543 - Reviews: 45 - Updated: 8-19-12 - Published: 8-5-12 - Sokka & Mai - Complete

7. Lin's Ramblings reviews
Remember the fan-favorite Mai's Ramblings series, where the most bitter personality in Avatar held forth on every ship under the sun? Well, Lin Bei Fong is giving it a try, and bringing all the snark, sarcasm, and wild misinterpretations that you could want. This is the most hilarious ship-bashing the world will ever see! Updating irregularly.
Legend of Korra - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,778 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 6-27-12 - Korra & Mako

8. Last Stand of the Freedom Fighters » reviews
After they met the Avatar, but before their leader Jet would encounter Zuko in Ba Sing Se, something happened to break the Freedom Fighters up and send them out into the world. This is the story of their last battle, and their last moments as friends.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 25,334 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 2-16-12 - Published: 2-8-12 - Jet & The Duke - Complete

9. Know When to Walk Away reviews
Zuko and Azula decide their Destiny with a game of cards, and someone is playing with a loaded deck. Whose side will Mai decide to support? Hint: You already know the answer to this.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,523 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 2-6-12 - Zuko & Mai - Complete

10. Levers & Journeys » reviews
Long Feng recruits a healer from the rural Earth Kingdom for his last trip to Ba Sing Se, but she may be more important to his journey than he realizes. LJ Crackpairing Exchange entry. Romantically philosophical.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 6,383 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-18-11 - Published: 12-14-11 - Song & Long Feng - Complete

11. A Flame of Thrones » reviews
It's Suzuki Week, so I'm spinning a yarn for the lovely couple in an Alternate Universe that will keep them on their toes. A series of vignettes.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,973 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 12-11-11 - Published: 12-6-11 - Zuko & Suki - Complete

12. Legacy » reviews
Aang and Katara have married and begun raising a son, but how will Tenzin deal to with legacy? Who knows? But this lighthearted take on the matter might give a clue or two. Now updated with a Jinora sequel.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,342 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 9-20-11 - Published: 7-9-11 - Katara & Aang - Complete

13. Maikka Week 2011: Partners in Blades & Other Tales » reviews
The main story is an AU based on two of my previous works, "Dowry" and "Control," where Mai finds herself in a sham marriage with Piandao the Swordsman. What crazy AU adventures get started when Sokka arrives? We'll see, we'll see.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 11 - Words: 35,772 - Reviews: 43 - Updated: 9-18-11 - Published: 9-4-11 - Sokka & Mai - Complete

14. Showdown in the West » reviews
Wild West AU oneshot. Baron O'Zaye is looking to disrupt the Big Cattle Drive, and only Sleeping Boy and his posse of Native American and Mexican spiritualists can stop him! Updated now with a Korra-based sequel!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Western/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,979 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 8-19-11 - Published: 8-17-09 - Aang & Ozai - Complete

15. Plan of Attack reviews
Entry for Tokka Week. It's the Blind Bandit and the Lazy Lionturtle, taking on all comers from the professional circuit!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,328 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-3-11 - Sokka & Toph - Complete

16. Uncertainty of Attraction reviews
Aang has moved on, and thinks Zuko should put the moves on Katara. But is mutual attraction really as reliable as it seems?
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,073 - Reviews: 21 - Published: 6-26-11 - Zuko & Katara - Complete

17. Control reviews
This? This is why you don't buy a wife. Entry for Piandao Shipping Week, companion piece to "Dowry."
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,275 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-23-11 - Mai & Piandao - Complete

18. The Magnificent Two reviews
Smellerbee and Longshot seek redemption on the herding trails.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Western/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,845 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6-13-11 - Longshot & Smellerbee

19. Dawning » reviews
What's a Water Tribe Princess to do when her Tribe has been conquered and her life given to the evil man responsible? Take the fight to the enemy, of course.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,629 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 6-8-11 - Published: 6-6-11 - Zhao & Yue - Complete

20. Much More Than a Lifetime » reviews
Aang is forcibly sent to the Eastern Air Temple to continue his Avatar training, and makes a special friend.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,640 - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 5-25-11 - Published: 4-17-11 - Aang & Mai - Complete

21. Foresight reviews
On his way home, Bumi stops to have his fortune told... and have fun messing with people, of course. Written for the Rare/Crack Pairing Fic Exchange.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,362 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-29-10 - Bumi & Aunt Wu - Complete

22. Lady on Fire reviews
Sokka and Ty Lee are on a secret mission together, but between the devious opposition, the distracting flirtations between our heroes, and WANG FIRE, things surely aren't going to go according to plan. Written for the Rare/Crack Pairing Fic Exchange.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,475 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 12-19-10 - Sokka & Ty Lee - Complete

23. Airship of Looooove! » reviews
In aka Arashi's Book 4 fic, there comes a point where the main gAang is stuck on an Airship with nothing to do but get into funny romantic moments. This... is that story!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 9 - Words: 12,816 - Reviews: 30 - Updated: 10-14-10 - Published: 10-4-10 - Sokka & Toph - Complete

24. Maikka Week 2010: Age of Maikka and Matchmaking » reviews
Two series of stories featuring Mai and Sokka as a couple. The first is an AU starting in Book 2, and the second will be a series of comedic shorts. If you like snark, sarcasm, blades, and boomerangs, you should enjoy these pieces very much.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 18,881 - Reviews: 29 - Updated: 10-3-10 - Published: 9-19-10 - Sokka & Mai - Complete

25. Goodbye reviews
How many times do friends have to say goodbye? Entry for Shipping Month 2010 - Mai/Ty Lee prompt.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,188 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 8-13-10 - Ty Lee & Mai

26. Day of Glorious Vengeance reviews
Striking like a deadly ninja, Suki restores the honor of the Kyoshi Warriors. Entry for Shipping Month 2010 - Mai/Suki prompt.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 945 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 8-11-10 - Suki & Mai - Complete

27. Sokka's Maikka Rambling reviews
A one-shot sequel to the explosively popular "Mai's Ramblings." Entry for Shipping Month 2010 - Mai/Sokka prompt. Also including the information for Maikka Week 2010!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,111 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-6-10 - Sokka & Mai - Complete

28. What Could Be reviews
Could Zuko and Suki forge a future together? Entry for Shipping Month 2010 - Zuko/Suki prompt.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,123 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-5-10 - Zuko & Suki - Complete

29. Dowry reviews
Mai has been married off to a Gentleman Swordmaster. Naturally, she's less than thrilled. Entry for Shipping Month 2010 - Mai/Piandao prompt, companion piece to "Control."
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-5-10 - Mai & Piandao - Complete

30. What a Choice reviews
Azula reflects on the two teenage boys in her life, and reveals just how wrong she is in the head. Entry for Shipping Month 2010 - Azula/Sokka/Zuko prompt.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,035 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-5-10 - Sokka & Zuko - Complete

31. Not Mine: A Tale of Sokka reviews
Entry for Capt-BA's "Badass Sokka" contest. It's probably safe to say that Sokka does much pwning in this story, but you never know.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,465 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 5-27-10 - Sokka & Suki - Complete

32. More Than Meets the Head Mounted Optical Sensors reviews
Aangus Prime wages his battle to destroy the evil forces of the Firecons! This crossover between "Avatar: The Last Airbender" and "Transformers" is more than meets the eye, it's a parody in disguise! Collect them all!
Crossover - Transformers/Beast Wars & Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,634 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 11-10-09 - Optimus Prime & Aang - Complete

33. Mai's Ramblings » reviews
Mai's secret thoughts on all the Avatar ships- you know the funny is coming when the driest, most critical personality in the show decides to let it all out! Everything Avatar is analyzed and described in the most ridiculous way possible! A fan favorite!
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 59 - Words: 69,082 - Reviews: 246 - Updated: 10-3-09 - Published: 10-25-08 - Sokka & Mai - Complete

34. Nemesis reviews
The proverbial in-character Sokkla romance. Naturally, it's something of a tragedy... or is it?
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,646 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 4-29-09 - Sokka & Azula - Complete

35. The Shadow of the Blade reviews
A look at a Piandao/Mai romance. Because Mai doesn't get enough "crackship" stories.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 448 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-20-09 - Piandao & Mai - Complete

36. Duel: A Tale of Sokka and Suki reviews
Sokka and Suki have some fun sparring on Ember Island. Some light romance and combat description.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,226 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 10-25-08 - Sokka & Suki - Complete

37. Style reviews
In the Western Air Temple, Sokka and Zuko have a friendly match to determine the better swordsman. Short story, combat description.
Avatar: Last Airbender - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,316 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 10-25-08 - Sokka & Zuko - Complete

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