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since: 12-03-08, id: 1759672, Profile Updated: 11-24-09
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Author has written 33 stories for NCIS, 24, Pushing Daisies, Mentalist, Lion King, and West Wing.

Okay, I'm Hayley. I live in the UK (as you can see) and I'm at secondary school. That's all I'm saying.

A little part of my profile for Tay (CatAmongPidgeons). A free spirit in the truest sense of the phrase.

~Dêem-me café, vou escrever.~ (Give me coffee, I'm going to write).

Proud Brigadier of the Tiva Rebellion Movement ("They're trying to get rid of us and if you weren't such a clotpole you'd see that!", Fighting Against the Overwhelming Forces of Tiva)
There is a FF forum for it, or you can find the link as my homepage.

Also Carey Sheen, the Weapons Specialist on a new Torchwood Role-Playing forum. We really need members, please check it out atwww.torchwoodgame.proboards.com

Check out my blog - http://latenightstroublesleeping.blogspot.com/

Please check out my community - there's some amazing pieces of fanfiction in there.

Some of my favourite TV programs (I could go on forever): NCIS, 24, The West Wing, Prison Break, Grey's Anatomy, Lost, The Mentalist . . .

I love reading, but have way too many favourite books and for some reason prefer fanfiction for TV.

The Time Series
What started as one story has developed into a sort of series. So in chronological order of when they occur, NOT when they were written, as some of them have not yet been.
Time Nor Tide - Focuses on Ziva from when she leaves NCIS until the beginning of Time Flies.
Time Flies - Focuses on everyone 17 years into the future. Plot, other than me messing about with the characters all grown up, is another one of these 'what would happen if Eli David discovered Ziva killed Ari' things that completely ignores Aliyah. Yeah, well I started writing it before that, so they can all go to hell.
Time Out - In planning but not yet written. Five years on from Time Flies.
Against The Clock - Series of oneshots set after Time Nor Tide and before Time Out.
From Time To Time - Series of oneshots set after Time Out.


I'm re-reading "Blood Red Snow White" by Marcus Sedgewick, and this passage, well, read it.

"The typewriter was a marvel of miniturisation, made from steel and rubber and ivory. A simple enough thing, though to him, a miracle in itself, for in that box was the potential to write everything that could ever be written. Every word, every sentence, every thought that could ever be, was waiting to be made from the machine in the box. Every single idea ever was in there. And that in itself was a wonderful idea."

I love it. I may put it on my blog.


A note on Jeanne-haters: OK, so you're Tiva fans. Are there Jeanne-haters who aren't Tiva fans? But the point is, you think Tony should be with Ziva. So it's a little irritating when he goes off and falls in love with his undercover assignment. You don't like him being with her. But why don't you like her? What's wrong with her? Here is some stuff I've heard - a) She's stuck up. Except, uhh, no, she really isn't. That's just your delusional need to hate her at work. b) She wants Tony to commit too soon when she asks him to tell her he loves her. But they had been dating for many months at this point, a lot of which we didn't see, so I can get where you'd misunderstand. Also, she's said it several times, and he was in sweet perfect boyfriend mode, can you blame her? Well, evidently you can, but I don't see why. c) She tries to frame Tony for murder. OK, this is the bit I really don't get. Were you all asleep when you were watching 'Internal Affairs'?! She didn't lie, she was just confused, blamed him and thought he did it. I don't ship Tiva. I pretty much HATE the thought of Tiva on the show. But Ziva's one of my favourite characters. When I read fics where Jeanne is jealous and malicious, I'm like - where did you get that from? When I read fics where people basically beat her up as much as possible, I think - how sick and twisted and sad this writer must be. In fact, it annoys me so much that I've just had a completely useless rant about it. Oh well, what's the point in a profile if you don't use it?

My ships:
NCIS - Jibbs (RIP Jenny), Tony/Jeanne
24 - Tony/Michelle (RIP Michelle), Jack/whoever-he-loves-at-the-moment (the man deserves some happiness, I don't care who with), Chloe/Morris, Anne Packard/David Palmer (RIP David Palmer)
West Wing - Josh/Donna, CJ/Danny, McBeth (RIP Leo/John Spencer), Charlie/Zoey, Abbey/Jed
Prison Break - Michael/Sara, Lincoln/Sofia, Lincoln/Veronica (RIP Veronica) & Sucre/Maricruz
Lost - Skate (sorry Jate fans, but . . .)
The Mentalist - Van Pelt/Rigsby and maybe Jisbon once they get rid of Red John

Some of my friends on this site (all of them amazing writers).
VousDevezChanter - Writes NCIS, Doctor Who and Torchwood. Also, some of you who read Time Flies or Against The Clock will know that most of the credit for my stories goes to her. And she is a very annoying person who messes with my profile. I'm changing my password.
Tiva4evaxxx - Writes NCIS (very Tiva) and Bones (B&B) and Mentalist (Jisbon&VP/Rigsby).
FadeIntoTheBackground -
Currently writing her first fic. Harry Potter.
CatAmongPidgeons -
A Star Trek Voyager/Doctor Who fic (unfinished), NCIS and The West Wing (unfinished). And there's a Torchwood poem in there somewhere.
journalofcrime - Currently writing his first fic. Pushing Daisies.
CheerChickx -
NCIS and Sanctuary. Tiva (but not so heavy . . . yet) and Will/Helen (did I get that right?).
OzBabe -
Is currently writing her first fic. NCIS. Going to end up Tiva. Involves Ziva undercover as a teacher. =P Also has a few poems. Happy now Madi?
skycloud86 -
Mainly 24, and a little Will and Grace, and NCIS. Also a fantastic poet. Check him out on fictionpress too.
dizzy - in - the - izzy -
Avatar and NCIS. Heavily Tiva. Writing a high school fic, as her current main project, but is always UDing or posting something.
radnessISbadness -
So far has written Supernatural fics. Will hopefully get around to a NCIS one soon so I can review and know what the hell I'm talking about hint hint.
JaneDoe6247
- All her stuff got wiped out but once she gets it back up, I assure you it's fantastic. NCIS.
FliBbeRGibbIt - Written a couple of oneshots (Torchwood and Harry Potter) but is travelling at the mo. so too busy to write much. Amazing writer, also awesome reviewer.



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1. Against The Clock » reviews
These are an ongoing collection of oneshots set in the future that I created for my NCIS fic Time Flies. May contain some back-stories for my OCs and various moments in the lives of the NCIS characters. Will NOT be in chronological order.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 25 - Words: 40,931 - Reviews: 135 - Updated: 11-22-09 - Published: 5-10-09
2. Time Out reviews
Third in the TIME SERIES. The Poland and D.C. teams are reunited in at a Navy Ball in Washington.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,856 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-17-09
3. Time Nor Tide » reviews
First in the TIME SERIES. Follows Ziva's move from NCIS back to Mossad and all that ensues. Prequel to Time Flies. COMPLETE.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 7 - Words: 11,133 - Reviews: 57 - Updated: 11-16-09 - Published: 8-1-09 - Ziva D. - Complete
4. Truth In Lies reviews
Poem set at end of Aliyah. Ziva's POV.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 505 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 11-3-09 - Ziva D.
5. The Campaign Trail » reviews
Set at the end of Santos' two terms in office, Santos fires Josh forcing him to become Campaign Manager for the Junior Senator of Massachusetts, a young Democrat aiming for President. K but up for language and safety. Adopted from CatAmongPidgeons.
West Wing - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 8 - Words: 8,711 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-30-09
6. Whispers reviews
One brief rebellion during Scar's reign. Includes my attempt at a song. Attempt being the operative word. "So pay attention and you'll hear it. And then you'll understand. They animals whisper. Mufasa." Rated for violence at the end . . . not bad, but .
Lion King - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,308 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10-12-09
7. Bloodlust reviews
Lisbon introspective drabble-y thing. Despite all of her pretence, she wants Red John dead.
Mentalist - Rated: K+ - English - General/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10-12-09 - Teresa L.
8. Second Shadow reviews
Poem. Ziva's POV on Kate early S3.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 285 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 10-2-09 - Ziva D. & Kate T.
9. Out Of The Office reviews
Established Jisbon rubbishy drabble thing for the one year birthday of Tiva4evaxxx's fanfiction profile.
Mentalist - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 9-21-09 - Teresa L. & Patrick J. - Complete
10. Hold Tight Onto The Past reviews
Tiva poem set after Judgement Day Part 2. Tony's POV.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 9-15-09 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete
11. Watching You Die » reviews
Alternate Kill Ari, because yes, I seem to have an obsession with that episode. Not much I can say, but read the teaser, at least, it's short, and you'll know immediately if you want to read on. COMPLETE.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - General/Family - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,364 - Reviews: 53 - Updated: 8-19-09 - Published: 4-27-09 - Ziva D. & Ari H. - Complete
12. Former Marine » reviews
Series of drabbles. We all know Gibbs is a 'former marine', not an 'ex-marine'. These are the reasons why.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 586 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8-18-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs
13. Two Letters reviews
Jenny's dying thoughts. Two letters she's written that matter. JIBBS.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 918 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 8-9-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs
14. Time Flies » reviews
Second in the TIME SERIES. It's 17 years into the future, and the team has been gradually split up and scattered across the globe. But Ziva's secret is discovered, and she must turn to her old friends for help. COMPLETE.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Crime - Chapters: 17 - Words: 25,115 - Reviews: 172 - Updated: 8-1-09 - Published: 1-19-09 - Complete
15. Time Flies Too Fast » reviews
The outtakes, extended extracts and extras excluded while writing Time Flies. Basically anything that happened during or around the week of Time Flies. Drabbles and oneshots. T for only a couple of chapters that I provide warning in the A/Ns
NCIS - Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,680 - Reviews: 12 - Updated: 7-20-09 - Published: 7-15-09
16. My Jacket reviews
Poem. Jibbs. Jenny leaving Gibbs. The whole 'jacket on the plane thing'. I'm actually rather proud of thisone, but I won't be in a few days.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 361 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 6-19-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete
17. My First Rule reviews
Introduction to an OC. Slight swearing. "Never be bored? You know that isn't always possible." She raised her eyebrows, "Agent DiNozzo, that is a defeatist attitude."
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,346 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-16-09
18. This Was His Day reviews
Tiva fluff/angst. Is that possible? Tony's birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY EMILY! Warning: Some mentions of child abuse.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,439 - Reviews: 23 - Published: 5-12-09 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete
19. When He Knew reviews
The first time Gibbs and Jenny met. There are a few versions, but this is mine. Rated for a tiny tiny bit of swearing. Small hints of Jibbs
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 848 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-25-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs & J. Sheppard - Complete
20. Wish I'd Never reviews
Post-ep to "Internal Affairs", so yeah, some spoilers. Tony/Jeanne angst. No real plot. Only read if you want to read Tony incredibly depressed and very probably insane. Only rated T because I'm not sure how you rate extreme depression.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,248 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 4-18-09 - Tony D. - Complete
21. Payment For Knowledge reviews
Poem, yes, again . NCIS. DUCKY! Dark and angsty I'm afraid - it's what I'm best at when it comes to poetry!
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 561 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-13-09 - Ducky M. - Complete
22. Her Game reviews
24. Poem. Set in Season 3 when Tony's interrogating Nina. Third person, but Nina's POV.
24 - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 703 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-4-09 - Nina M. & Tony A.
23. One Night reviews
JIBBS. Jenny's POV. The morning after/the day before. I really wish something like this had happened. Not sure if it could be K plus, so I'm being safe. Oneshot.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Romance/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 681 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-3-09 - J. Sheppard & Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete
24. Back To A Time reviews
Poem. Pushing Daisies. Olive's POV. Reflecting on how complicated her life has become.
Pushing Daisies - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-3-09 - Complete
25. I Cried reviews
Poem. Gibbs/Shannon. Gibbs talking to Shannon after she's died. Could probably be K.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 538 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3-3-09 - Leroy Jethro Gibbs - Complete
26. Without You reviews
24. Poem. Michelle/Tony. Michelle's POV. Probably could be K.
24 - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 409 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-3-09 - Michelle D. & Tony A. - Complete
27. Six Times She Defied Him reviews
Oneshot. Six times Ziva David defied her father, then she didn't have to anymore. Pre-seasons and post-seasons parts, as well as spoilers for 'Kill Ari'.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,372 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 2-9-09 - Ziva D. - Complete
28. Interrogation reviews
This is a tag to Time Flies, the full scene of Fabian interrogating the neo-Nazi in Chap. 6 as written by a friend of mine.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - General/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 658 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2-8-09 - Complete
29. Pretence reviews
TIVA poem. For Tiva4evaxxx, since it's her fault I came up with the idea. Tony's POV, based off his line in . . . 'Cloak' I think about pretending.
NCIS - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 435 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2-5-09 - Tony D. & Ziva D. - Complete
30. Silent Gunshot » reviews
There's a missing Marine who is McGee's cousin. His daughters show up. Conspiracy. Mentions of all team members minus Palmer and Director. No pairings.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - Crime/Mystery - Chapters: 9 - Words: 7,451 - Reviews: 48 - Updated: 1-18-09 - Published: 12-18-08 - Complete
31. Personal Hell reviews
24. Poem. Angst. Jack's POV. Post/end of Season 6. Rated purely for safety, could probably be K.
24 - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 550 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-14-09 - Complete
32. Irrelevant reviews
TIVA. Oneshot. My first fic with a pairing. Ziva tries to protect Tony. Kind of Moulin Rouge based. Christmas present for Tiva4evaxxx. Merry Christmas. I hope you like it.
NCIS - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,540 - Reviews: 30 - Published: 12-22-08 - Ziva D. & Tony D. - Complete
33. What She Thought She Knew reviews
Ziva's thoughts shortly after joining NCIS.Drabble. Oneshot.
NCIS - Rated: K+ - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 629 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 12-6-08 - Ziva D. - Complete
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