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since: 12-29-08, id: 1785435, Profile Updated: 12-20-09
country: United States
web: Homepage
Author has written 3 stories for Assassin's Creed.

I've lived in California all my life of 16 years. To me, school is such a chore. I can't wait to graduate... I can speak English fluently and a lot of French, about 3 years' worth of studying the language. I'd like to learn Japanese, Italian and Arabic. I would LOVE to travel the world at my own pace, but this world sucks toes, so I can't.-sigh- If any other writers need help writing their stories, let me know! I'm always available to help out. ;) When I ask people to review, I really really REALLY hope people do. It's not that I'm trying to rack up and boast about them, I just want to know what everyone thinks of the chapters put out. Other people's feedback is essential to my progress as a writer.

The stories I've written:

A Hidden Blade

If people have been keeping up, I redid all of the chapters before chapter 25. The storyline is the same, but without so much romance. After being given sound advice, I decided to change that. Altair doesn't seem to be the kind of guy to go from being all cold and callous to this 6 foot tall teddy bear in a few chapters. It looks like falling in love and fawning over a woman does not suit him, y'know? Sorry, y'all.

Altair and Raja are in Messina, which is the southern tip of Italy, but there are complications that will arise. I will not say when or what kind, but they will come. Chapter 29 will be up in 8-9 days.

Nereza's Serenade

A new story in sync with AC II. It's a little different from what I've written in the past and I hope everyone will like this new storyline I'm working with. I don't want to spoil anything, so I won't say much. Nereza, 23 and Ezio, 25 live on opposite sides of the war. It's obvious Ezio is a good guy-a womanizing good guy- and Nereza is a bad guy. But it'll get better over time. I know everyone will like it. Just don't kill me for deleting yet another story! The chapters will start to come every 6-8 days from now on, I think.

Leila's Tears, Heaven's Cry

Okay, I deleted this story. I'll explain why I did so. The story was going great, but the story was broken and incoherent in some chapters. The actions were shoddy and I KNOW I could've done better, so I will. The revised, much longer chapters will be up soon. I'll try my best to update every week on either a Tuesday or Wednesday.

The plot is the same as before for those who read it before I revised it. Altair is a little more reserved this time around, and more arrogant because this is before he handles the 9 and he learns how not to be haughty and overconfident. But Leila will have her own way of fixing those character flaws...

From My Time to Yours

I'm guessing everyone's smart enough to figure this one out. Another time-jumping story about a girl going to the past. 1st chapter due very soon.

Any questions? Just send me a message and I'll get back to you ASAP. I've tried many times to get my dad's scanner to work and it's not behaving like a bad pup, so my drawings will be on hiatus for a while. I'll let everyone know when I can get them on deviantart. I hope it's soon... You will not be disappointed in my future artwork!

Things/Characters/ Games and other things that interest me:

Batman

Transformers

Mad Men

History

Assassin's Creed

Sonic the Hedgehog

Marvel Comics-except for Elektra

DC Comics

300

Sin City

Star Wars

All kinds of music/people/cultures

Animals

50s,60s,70s,80s, and 90s movies

Astro Boy

Megaman

Marvel Vs.Capcom series

Dislikes/Things I think of as questionable:

Jonas Brothers

Hannah Montana

Mary Sues

Twilight-stupid vampires are taking over every aspect of life right now! so irritating! sorry if i offend anyone who reads my stuff!

racists

spiders

dumb people who think being stupid is cool

sagging of the pants

scantily clad women

tattoos

excessively violent and over sexed movies/TV shows

dependent characters

Character Bios:

For A Hidden Blade:

Altair Ibn La'Ahad: 6 feet tall, 200 pounds, honey brown eyes, black hair

Raja Nadirah Ai'in-La'Ahad: 5 feet 7 inches tall, 135 pounds, hazel eyes, black hair

For From My Time to Yours

Ezio Auditore Di Firenze: the same

Franceska(pronounced Francheska) 'Frankie' Greystone: 5 feet 10 inches tall, 145 pounds, brown eyes, black hair

For Leila's Tears, Heaven's Cry:

Altair: the same

Leila Saffar: 5 feet 3 inches tall, 130 pounds, dark brown eyes, jet black hair

For Nereza's Serenade:

Nereza Lombardi: 5 feet 7 inches tall, 135 pounds, green eyes, black hair

Ezio Auditore Di Firenze: 6 feet tall, 170 pounds, honey brown eyes, black hair

Elettra Lombardi: 5 feet tall, 120 pounds, blue eyes, blond hair

Note: The updates will come slower as of the beginning of the academic year. If my school situation changes to a better schedule, the updates will come sooner than before. I promise!

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1. Leila's Tears, Heaven's Cry » reviews
Leila is an orphaned rich girl living outside Jerusalem. One day, she discovers an enigmatic unconscious man in a forest. She takes him home and is met with hostility and Old World language. Where did he come from? Who is he? Altair/OC
Assassin's Creed - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 7,747 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-18-09 - Published: 12-2-09
2. Nereza's Serenade » reviews
Nereza's life is far from a beautiful symphony. There are notes that don't belong in her melody, but she doesn't know what to do with them. An arcane piece is thrown in and the music is in shambles. Can the girl fix this mess, or will she never finish it?
Assassin's Creed - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 18,426 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 12-13-09 - Published: 10-11-09
3. A Hidden Blade » reviews
Altair and Raja agree to marriage so that she can travel to Italy with the assassin's aid. Her aunt's son must be found somewhere in the country, or he'll never be reunited with his mother! As their quest goes on, they meet new friends and old enemies....
Assassin's Creed - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 68,690 - Reviews: 100 - Updated: 12-11-09 - Published: 3-19-09
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