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since: 01-14-09, id: 1804613, Profile Updated: 07-12-09
country: United States
Author has written 3 stories for Naruto, and Tsukihime.

Yo!

Name: Jolly

Gender: Male

Age: Old enough to drink and responsible enough not to overdo it.

I've become enthralled with several canon stories over the last couple of years that I'm VERY interested in writing fics for. Tsukihime, Fate/Stay Night, and Naruto to name a few.

Pairings that I'm a fan of:

Shiki/Hisui, Shirou/Rin, and Naruto/Hinata

Whenever I do write something, expect those pairings to be at the forefront of my writings. I'll never use polls as a way to decide what's going to happen in my stories. Also note that I will not write unless I already have a strong story outline in place and a good idea of what I want to happen in the early and late chapters. But as it's been said, "The journey's more important than the start or the end." Another thing you should be warned about is that I'm not unwilling to kill off characters (even seemingly "main" characters and/or my OCs) in a story for the sake of making it a good story. I have absolutely NO bias against any character, but don't be surprised to see a single character get killed off more than once in multiple stories.

I do like to make OCs, so if you're not a fan of them, I apologize in advance. I love stealth and am a prankster at heart. Nothing gets my blood rushing more than sneaking up on somebody and scaring the living hell out of them. Therefore, don't be surprised if most of my OCs are sneaky little pranksters, whether male of female.

All reviews are welcome! Positive, negative, neutral, and flames.

PLEASE leave me reviews! Feedback only helps me improve as a writer!

Also, please get a FF.net account so I can respond to your reviews... I won't disable anonymous reviews, but it's really annoying when an anonymous reviewer makes an excellent point or asks a good question and I have no way to correspond with them until I put out the next chapter...

Now onwards to my writing... The one thing that gets on my nerve when reading a story is grammar and spelling... Nothing gives me a headache quicker than: try read in a sentece tha tlooks lik this... Get my drift? I mean, there's a freaking spell check! USE IT!! What does this have to do with MY writing, you ask? Easy. You will never find my works to be completely littered with grammatical and spelling errors. Wanna know why? Because I plan on running my writings by a beta in some way, shape or form before I publish my work.

NOTE: Nix that last statement until further notice. My beta bugged out on me awhile back and never got around to replacing her. If you're interested, please shoot me a message to let me know!

Also note that I'm writing for the fun of it. For the majority of my life, I was an utter monster to my inner muse and kept her locked away. Well, no longer! All those little plot bunnies that I kept putting out of their misery? Yeah... I'm gonna go back and see if I can resuscitate a few of them...

When I update depends on my schedule, my mood and the amount of feedback I recieve. Okay, enough ranting! Time to get out there and start writing!

I'm also currently betaing eternalshiva's fic, A Small Crack in Perfection. It's a modern-day AU Naruto fic that is her vent-hole from her other fic, Twice Shy. It's a very adult fic, but also very well written and loads of fun to read and beta!

She's also agreed to beta my story, Mystic Eyes and the Demon Within, but can't seem to understand why I want her to. Easy answer is this: our styles compliment each other. I'm great with grammar and plotting, but she's an outstanding storyteller! So when I don't put enough detail into something, she's there with a cattle prod going, "Hey! You missed a spot!" On the other side of the coin: when she doesn't put a comma somewhere she's supposed to, I'm there tapping her shoulder going, "I think you forgot something..."

Oh, and I'm just kidding about that whole cattle prod thing... ~looks over shoulder quickly~

Story Status:

Mystic Eyes and the Demon Within: Chapter 17 - Complete! Posted!

Kitsune-san: Chapter 2 completed! Posted!

Walking a Different Path: Chapter 5 - 10 percent.

Legal Notice (I'm NOT putting one of these at the beginning of every chapter I write... It's annoying...): I do not own the rights to the canon stories, characters or universes related to any story I write. I am simply writing stories based on the aforementioned for recreational and skill-building purposes with absolutely no intent to make a profit on said stories. Note that I will write-in characters from time to time to improve my version of a storyline. These characters I DO own and request that you ask if you wish to use them in your stories.

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1. Kitsune san » reviews
Naruto is saved by a returning ANBU on the day of his birth. When the ANBU is charged with his protection, how will the events that follow change Naruto's life? Eventual Naruto/Hinata or Naruto/Ino if I end up continuing the story. M to be safe.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,993 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 6-18-09 - Naruto U.
2. Mystic Eyes and the Demon Within » reviews
Naruto/Tsukihime X-over AU Naruto/Hinata Shiki/Hisui - Konoha in ruins. The Tohnos go on vacation to a mountain known for it's foxes. How will their destinies change when Naruto and Shiki meet? What does Zelretch have to do with it all?
Crossover - Naruto & Tsukihime - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 17 - Words: 84,866 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 7-12-09 - Published: 1-21-09 - Naruto U.
3. Walking a Different Path » reviews
What repercussions could there possibly be for Konoha when Naruto finally loses his patience and drops his mask for good? Will a few harsh words change Sakura's outlook on her life? SasuSaku, minor NaruHina. M for language and possible gore later.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 4 - Words: 11,969 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-30-09 - Published: 5-26-09 - Sakura H. & Sasuke U.
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