Currently working on a Samurai Champloo fanfiction and a Bleach Ulquihime fanfiction.

This is my first foray into writing fanfiction. Or any fiction at all really, and so far I'm enjoying it immensely. I REALLY like constructive criticism more than I can possibly say. Sometimes when I read other people's work I start thinking. "This could have worked better here", or "isn't that word somewhat unnecessary and detracting?" So I hope you'll tell me if my pacing could use improvement, various vocab, grammar, punctuation, syntax, voice, etc. that could be improved upon.
Also, If you point it out. Please tell me how to fix it. Sometimes I notice the same things you've noticed. But I just leave it because . . heh . . . I don't know how else to write it.

Also, I read a lot and I do KNOW that I have a problem with regurgitating things that I've read without meaning to. So if I've accidentally stolen your plot line or even a small phrase or set list of words that is OBVIOUSLY yours, and not commonly used, then please tell me. It is a problem with my brain that I'm actively working to fix.

About myself:
I'm 20. Female. In college. Live in Hawaii. Enjoy most things. Dislike some things.

Fun Fact:
I painted the picture in my avatar.