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Author has written 2 stories for Twilight. Twitter - Livejournal - Playlists - The Mystic Awards - Razzle Dazzle Awards - The Sparkle Awards - Red Moon Awards Yahoo: c7mariah I started writing February this year. That was my own creation and at the time I thought it was the best thing ever created. --chuckles-- I had another look on the first chapter while I was in the middle of my... 17th chapter, I think. Only then I saw that it was far from something good. So, I decided to rewrite it. After done with chapter 4, I had another idea for an original story and started going with that one. Five chapters later, I found an idea for Twilight. The two stories below are the result of that idea. The reason why I wanted to write about Dark Edward... How much can you read about his perfection? How much can one take the Gary Sue-ness? My answer: not long. I wanted to see him flawed, egoistic, hurt... anything else than the pretty boy he is in the real book. Yes, there are these Playboy-Edwards, Angsty-Edwards, and a whole lot of Gay-Edwards still hiding in the closet. All are fine with me, but I wanted some real darkness. That's what I'm trying to do with my own stories. UPDATE: The first chapter of The Shadow of Midnight is rewritten, and others will be soon. ;) Despite the fact that I'm an Estonian and English is my second language, English is something I'm extremely fond of. As a result, you can make some assumptions about my pet peeves. --nods-- Mhmh... That's right. If your story makes my eyes twitch from the worst possible English, I'll leave a comment, and it's bound not to be pretty. Just for clarification, I'm not a flamer but I am scrutinizingly honest. If I don't like something about your story, I will say it. If I like it, I'll state it. I always leave reasons to back up my opinions, as well. If you want me to review your story, send an email or a PM, but please, have a look at the reviews I have submitted. This way you'll know what to expect. You can find the stories I have reviewed from here: http://msmariahelena.livejournal.com/1999.html. If you want to get to know me better, send me an e-mail or PM; I am a very opened person and really nice once I've grown fond of you. You'll get an answer whether you want to say what you think about me, bash back, or just have a wish to know the real me. Why? I am just OCPD that way. :P If you think that you could take a one on one conversation with me, my Yahoo account awaits. If you want to bitch on everyone/request reviews on your stories/want to express your opinion on flamers, visit Georgasaurus' and Ever Heard of a Dictionary's The Literate Union forum. I am a member in that union, but that still doesn't qualify me as a flamer. ;)
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They are the shadows of midnight. They are unspeakable dark specters that haunt our dreams and spark our imagination. They are romantic yet emotionless. They are powerful and still they are vulnerable. They can be dreadfully scary and viscous, or gentle and kind. They have passionate feelings without emotion. They are ageless, although they each have an age. Vampires. I am a judge on the following sites:
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1. The Shadow of Midnight » reviewsAU/OOC/Canon/Darkward/EPOV: When he first saw Alice's vision of a new girl in town, his first thought was: easy meal. When the hunter and the prey met, she walked away still breathing. Why? *full summary inside* *darker than Away from the Sun* --On hiatusTwilight - Rated: M - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 27,347 - Reviews: 42 - Updated: 8-28-09 - Published: 7-19-09 - Edward & Bella2. Away from the Sun » reviewsAU/OOC/Canon/Darkward/BPOV: On her first night back in Forks, Bella meets a man named Edward. Little did she know that Edward was considering her as a meal... *full summary inside* *softer than The Shadow of Midnight* --On hiatus.Twilight - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 22,306 - Reviews: 47 - Updated: 8-23-09 - Published: 7-13-09 - Bella & Edward