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since: 04-02-09, id: 1887406, Profile Updated: 12-06-09
country: United States
Author has written 8 stories for Fullmetal Alchemist.

What is Hyperthia working on today?

Black Ice (revision): Not today. By the way, I have not begun to post any of the revised chapters yet! What is in that story now was my first attempt at revising it. This round, I am changing a lot. I don't understand why people are still reading that piece of crap; it says 'BEING REVISED' in the freaking summary! I personally don't read stories that say 'BEING REVISED' in their summaries. That story is embarrassing to me. Hahaha! Oh well, you either have bad taste, don't care, or you just want to spite me by reading it. I don't really mind. (twitch) Add it to your alerts if you want. Just keep in mind it's going to change quite a bit. I may never be satisfied with it :)

M: I'm back on it! My break is over, so I must work on it again. I have to have it done by March. Guess what!! I have a beta now!! Yay! Go give xElementFivex a big hug!

Mystery Diagnosis: Yes

Diaper Rash: (pending title) Working a bit on that (but not too much yet, because I need to focus on only a few things at a time...) Take a guess at what it's about!


Well, I guess I'll go ahead and write a bit about muhself, since people are looking at my profile now...

Name: Kelsey

Age: 20

What's sex? Am I an 'M' or an 'F'?: I am of the Female species

Activities: When I'm not hugging dragons, I enjoy hitting my roommate senseless, while singing the Pokemon theme song. I enjoy writing, art, music, and film. I also have an unhealthy obsession with the Bearsharktopus; come see my photo manipulations

Best dream I've ever had: I dreamed that I was harvesting berries and all of my animal friends came to help me (I'm talking deer, bears, rabbits, squirrels, turtles, skunks, birds, ducks, a moose, the works). It was pretty legit! Best part of said dream: I was naked. Best dream ever!

Pet Peeves: Mary-Sues, Gary-Stus and everything in between (I hate stories that are like, "Two FMA fans find a magic remote and get transported into the FMA universe! ROTFLBISCUIT!"). Massive OOCness (Ed would throw the biggest BTCH fit of his life if Mustang ever tried to pick him up and tickle him or bottle-feed him). And, most of all, I hate plagiarism; this has happened to me and, let me tell you, it's a terrible feeling when someone copies you, doesn't give you any credit, and then they get positive reviews. Then, when they get flamed by some of your readers, they insist that they didn't copy you, even though it's obvious that they did. I don't like that one bit. It's just disrespectful and unfair to those who trust you to write an original plot. Borrowing is expected on this site, and that I am okay with. It's when you copy and paste a huge chunk of someone else's work, and switch a few of the characters' roles; that is not okay.

Things I am guilty of: Honorifics/Otaku language. Though I keep it limited to Al calling Ed "Nii-san" and Ed calling Al "Aru," it is still something I am guilty of. I am trying to break the habit, but I don't plan on changing what I've already written. Just know that I don't do it to sound cool nor do I wish I was Japanese; I just think it's super cute when the brothers call each other those names... I also find the pronunciation "Aru" very interesting; in the Japanese dubs, Ed calls Al "Aru," which is kind of a play on words. "Aru" means "to exist." A major theme of the series is Al's struggle to find his place and exist as a human, despite being affixed to armor... Anyways, enough ranting... :)

Code of Honor: I will always put a disclaimer at the beginning of my story. I like to show respect to the original creators; if it weren't for them, I wouldn't have much to write about! If I ever borrow an idea from another writer, I will put their name on the end of the chapter and say something along the lines of, "If you like this story, then you will like..." There are a few authors here who inspire me, and I want to give them the respect they deserve. I also spell check everything I write. Though, because I am not perfect, I often miss things. If you read my stories and you notice a spelling/grammar mistake, please tell me so I can try to fix it. If I anticipate anything risque in my multi-chapter fics, I will warn you of it from the beginning (this includes yaoi, smut, lemon, lime, spanking, etc...) I always try to respond to all the reviews I get (especially if you have something substantial to say in your review). I like talking to you guys. If I don't respond to your review, it's nothing personal! I've just got college, film, music, and friends to focus on as well as my writing. If you guys ever want to chat, PM me or contact me on Skype! My Skype name is, of course, Hyperthia. Oh, and I will never, ever bottle-feed Ed (that is, unless he gets turned into a baby due to an alchemical accident hinthint). But bottle-feeding a sixteen year old is super creepy. Nuff said.

If I ever break the Code of Honor, hit me.

As far as what I like to read... I will read just about anything, as long as it (at least) has an interesting concept. I like a variety of stories; I'm not picky, and I'm not afraid to read new things. Grammar/spelling mistakes by other writers do not faze me. I can look past all of that and enjoy a story for what it is (unless the grammar/spelling is so atrocious that it takes away from the story). I'm pretty open-minded, but if it meets one of the items on my pet-peeves list (points above) I will not read it. I'm sorry, but I won't. If I do happen to read it, I will try to leave you a friendly review. However, if I ever see someone plagiarize, I will let you have it (evil laugh). Don't get me wrong; I am a very nice person, and I love to help people when they need it. I love to give writers praise where they deserve it. But once you cross a line and you disrespect your fellow writers, you will hear from me.

That's all you need to know! :)

xoxoxoxo


MY ARTWORK!!~

Bad Day

Bad Day

Black Ice

Black Ice Cover Art

Ed and Bobo

Mystery Diagnosis

What is Happening to Me?

Going Home

Asleep On the Job

Harvesting Berries

Dreams and Reality line art. I will have the colored version up sometime next week.

Miscellaneous

Look out, Ed! It's the BEARSHARKTOPUS!!

Hohenheim of Light

Oh My, Edward...

Bean!Ed on a Bubble Warning: Extreme Cuteness!


I almost always review everything I read; I do this because I like getting reviews and I want to return the favor. I don't always give very helpful reviews, but I've been getting better about it. There are times when I don't review though, because there is simply nothing nice I can possibly say. I'll give constructive criticism if I feel the author really needs it, but I am not one to give flames (unless the story is offensive). So since I make an effort to review your stories, I would like it if you did the same for me :)

I like criticism! I want it! Flames aren't cool, but if I ever receive one, I'll just step back and re-look at whatever I wrote, because perhaps they have a good reason to flame. I tend to value whatever people say about my stories, whether they be positive or negative. You guys motivate me and give me ideas. :)


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1. Harvesting Berries reviews
Edward harvests berries with all his animal friends. CRACK.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,644 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11-24-09 - Edward E. - Complete
2. The Advantages of Painted Nails reviews
Mustang has fallen asleep on his paperwork... again. Riza gets her revenge. Mild language and use of the term "butt-rape"
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,562 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 11-19-09 - Riza H. & Roy M. - Complete
3. Mystery Diagnosis » reviews
Edward notices his body is going through some awkward changes. Dismissing it as puberty, he goes to the Colonel's office. When Ed arrives, however, he realizes that it may be more serious than just puberty... Slight AU. WARNING: Contains awkward moments!
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 33,880 - Reviews: 107 - Updated: 11-14-09 - Published: 6-28-09 - Edward E.
4. Kids Say the Darndest Things reviews
Edward has a very interesting question for Trisha... Just a short drabble I came up with this morning. Edward is very cute! Haha
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,079 - Reviews: 24 - Published: 10-31-09 - Edward E. & Trisha E. - Complete
5. Bad Day » reviews
Have you ever just had one of those days? Edward wakes up on the wrong side of the bed, and things only go downhill as the morning progresses. When Mustang pushes Ed over the edge, can he mend his mistake? Parental Roy/Ed Rated for some language.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 11,921 - Reviews: 46 - Updated: 10-29-09 - Published: 10-20-09 - Edward E. & Roy M. - Complete
6. Black Ice » reviews
It was just a simple late-night drive to the liquor store. Now, after surviving a terrible car accident, Ed must face some of his darkest nightmares. Parental Hughes/Roy/Ed. M for lang., violence, and implied rape. Slight AU. BEING REVISED
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Suspense - Chapters: 9 - Words: 23,773 - Reviews: 80 - Updated: 9-22-09 - Published: 4-26-09 - Edward E.
7. Passion In His Eyes reviews
Based on an FML story. Roy waits for Edward to say it: "I love you, Roy." Roy/Ed Contains bad yaoi.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,328 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-19-09 - Edward E. & Roy M. - Complete
8. Eyelash reviews
12-year-old Edward Elric comes back from another mission, and he's not in the best of moods. So Havoc cheers him up. Brotherly!Havoc/Ed. WARNING: May cause cuteness-induced seizures. Rated for language.
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,006 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 7-1-09 - Edward E. & Jean H. - Complete
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