Pyralis Anacreon
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since: 08-11-09, id: 2043348, Profile Updated: 08-09-12
country: USA
Author has written 65 stories for Fullmetal Alchemist, Dexter, Yu Yu Hakusho, Chronicles of Ancient Darkness, Harry Potter, Underland Chronicles, Maximum Ride, Ranger's Apprentice, Misc. Books, Beka Cooper series, Naruto, Alex Rider, X-Men: The Movie, Stargate: SG-1, Weeds, House, M.D., Hunger Games, Seven Kingdoms Trilogy, Death Note, Warriors, Dragonback series, Dark Visions series, White Collar, True Blood, Legend of the Seeker, Mentalist, Supernatural, Virals, Twilight, and Revolution.

I write for a lot of fandoms, but rarely the same one more than once or twice. I read even more of them. I'm on Tumblr, Fictionpress, Livejournal, and the AO3 under the name Pyralis Anacreon, but I'm most active here.

Pyralis' Writing Tips:

Don't have big chunks of paragraphs, especially not right after each other. The wall of text will scare a reader away.

Dialogue is your friend. Instead of the narrator telling the reader something, have one character explain it to another whenever possible.

Get a sense for building tension, suspense, and drama. That's something that'll come with practice.

For God's sake, if you know that you're someone who can't tell the difference between your, you're, their, there, and they're, get a freakin beta to catch it for you.

Holding chapters hostage in exchange for reviews makes you come across as a six-year-old holding their breath until they get what they want. Don't be that kid. If it's good enough, the reviews will come.

Don't insert song titles in your fic to plug your favorite music. In the beginning AN you could say, wrote this while listening to... but in the middle of the fic it's just a shameless plug.

Write like you're speaking to someone, telling them a story. Punctuation is your friend.

Keep reading books. You don't need to study grammar and spelling, read enough and it will become natural to know which word to use.

Just keep reading books in general, actually.

Navigating FFNet: Tips for finding the good stories

Go to your favorite author's profile page. Look up their favorite stories. See if they're in a community.

Use communities.

Use the new filters to rank fics by number of favorites, reviews, or follows.

Use the Word Count filter set to 100,000. Very rarely will badfic reach over 100,000 words.


1. Shotgun Child reviews
They are finally about to catch up with Tom Neville and his two prisoners. Now the real trouble starts. Part Three in the Singer Militia series.
Crossover - Supernatural & Revolution - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,151 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-23-12 - Complete
2. Bulletproof Smile reviews
They're searching for their father, who went missing weeks ago. And Miles Matheson knows what happened. Part Two in the Singer Militia series.
Crossover - Supernatural & Revolution - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,831 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-10-12 - Complete
3. Gunpoint Politics reviews
Dean Winchester was just eleven years old when the lights went out. Since then, things have changed a lot. Part One in the Singer Militia series.
Crossover - Supernatural & Revolution - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,237 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 10-4-12 - Complete
4. White Steel Serenity » reviews
Part 3 of the Mortal Conversion series. They've traded up the FBI for an even more powerful enemy. They will have to be smarter, stronger, and faster than ever before to avoid this new threat, and face the consequences of giving in to the wolf.
Virals - Rated: T - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,533 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 4-16-12 - Published: 2-2-12 - Complete
5. Sunset reviews
Later, Hermione will hear from all their friends that the same thing happened to them: he came, he was vibrant and excited, they made plans for some nameless future date and then he was gone. He didn't fade away.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,617 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-12-12 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete
6. Red Iron Symphony » reviews
Part Two of the Mortal Conversion series, must read Black Gold Legacy first. In California the Virals struggle to survive with FBI agent Desmond Ratheson tracking their every move, but the greatest threat they face may come from within. AU, complete.
Virals - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,239 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-29-12 - Published: 1-26-12 - Complete
7. Black Gold Legacy » reviews
Mary Read wasn't hung. She followed the clues to the treasure, reset the traps, and found Anne Bonny again. Hundreds of years later, Tory Brennan and her Virals lift up a flagstone to find a black pit of nothing. They cannot save Loggerhead. AU, complete.
Virals - Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,162 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 1-27-12 - Published: 11-15-11 - Complete
8. Something Wicked reviews
She does not wake for her death. He does not collect her blood on a slide. She is not his victim - she is his mistake.
Dexter - Rated: T - English - Family/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 438 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-14-12 - Dexter M. & Debra M. - Complete
9. Unending reviews
20 things you really have to understand about SG-1. The people, the things they did, the ones they saved and lost, and the legend they left behind.
Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 876 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-13-11 - Complete
10. Make It Right reviews
The one where everyone is human - except maybe not. "Have you ever felt like you're forgetting something really important, and no matter how hard you try you can't remember what?" Castiel asks. "All the time," Dean replies. "Every single day."
Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,114 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-13-11 - Castiel & Dean W. - Complete
11. The Lonely Ones » reviews
Harry's been lost for years, Hermione's half-crazy with the need for revenge and determined to raise an army. Ron never got to know his family before the Death Eaters got to them, and Draco Malfoy's a coward. Heavily AU.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 11 - Words: 24,544 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 5-25-11 - Published: 6-3-10
12. Legacy reviews
Four cases where she hunts Red John, and the one where she catches him
Mentalist - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,256 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-23-11 - Teresa L. & Red John - Complete
13. Who Follow Death reviews
Like all reapers, Harlas doesn't remember his human life. This changes when the soul he goes to collect calls him 'Harry' and something returns to him. Eight 100 word drabbles to tell a story.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 762 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-19-11 - Harry P. - Complete
14. Never Lost reviews
There is not a single reincarnation, not a single life, where they do not meet at least once. There is no alternate world where they do not feel this connection. Richard and Kahlan across time and space – was it worth it?
Legend of the Seeker - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,273 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-3-11 - Richard Cypher R. & Kahlan A. - Complete
15. Redemption
Four Richards that never were, and one that could be. Five short drabbles.
Legend of the Seeker - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,463 - Published: 4-3-11 - Richard Cypher R. & Kahlan A. - Complete
16. Dragon Heart reviews
There is a story about a dragon who never lost and was always right, except for the one time it mattered. Short mythical medieval AU drabble.
House, M.D. - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,092 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-17-11 - L. Cuddy & G. House - Complete
17. Ask Me Again, Tomorrow
A character study on Eric Northman, Viking, vampire, sheriff, and cold-hearted bastard. And how despite all those things he fell in love with a freakin' human.
True Blood - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 349 - Published: 2-11-11 - Eric N. - Complete
18. Twenty Things That Never Left the Marauders reviews
Twenty things that never left the Marauder's circle. One-sided Sirius/James if you want to see it that way, or just friendship.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 429 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-19-11 - Complete
19. Liar, Liar » reviews
Second Year AU. The Chamber of Secrets goes differently, and Harry winds up in an Azkaban cell across from one Sirius Black. A story told in drabbles. No bashing, even if it might seem like it at first. Link to Russian translation on my profile.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Mystery - Chapters: 5 - Words: 21,630 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 12-23-10 - Published: 8-9-10 - Harry P. & Sirius B. - Complete
20. Dark reviews
It's not something you just wake up with. It creeps up on you slowly, sidles up sideways and smiles and asks your name. And before you know it, you've gone too far. Voldemort's descent into the Dark. No child grows up dreaming of genocide.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,414 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-20-10 - Complete
21. Story Collection » reviews
A collection of story ideas which will probably never be written by me. Steal, plagiarize, and copy all you want. Some of them make less sense than others.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 20,056 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-12-10 - Published: 11-15-09 - Harry P. - Complete
22. Little White Lies reviews
Neal Caffrey's past shows up in the form of a mystery man, but how far will he go to keep it secret? And Peter wants to know why Neal hates guns, why Neal didn't finish high school. Peter wants to know why he's dead.
White Collar - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,394 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-12-10 - Neal C. & Peter B. - Complete
23. Reaper reviews
Then, after a while, she started to hate everything. This is what happens when you steal from monsters. Reap what you have sown, human.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 995 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-31-10 - Max - Complete
24. Girl Of Ice reviews
Kaitlyn's first boyfriend, trying to make sense of it all.
Dark Visions series - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 893 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-11-10 - Complete
25. We, In Defiance reviews
...declare that you do not have the right to rule. Panem, the land bathed in child's blood and death and excess. And the games that children play, and the wars that children fight.
Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10-6-10 - Complete
26. Try reviews
What, you think they got the Flock right on the first try? Meet the ones who didn't quite make the cut.
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,059 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-16-10 - Complete
27. Human reviews
They are human and she is not. The Flock found death dates on their necks and Max wakes up in a lab.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 679 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-27-10 - Max - Complete
28. Maximum reviews
20 things you really need to know about Max
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 428 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-22-10 - Max & Fang - Complete
29. Monster reviews
How to become a monster in seven easy steps. The Flock, when they never met.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,130 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-12-10 - Complete
30. Mud Magic reviews
They're killing our magic. Hermione, one of the greatest magical scientists to ever live, finally solves the power issue. The purebloods thought it was the mud that weakened the magic. They were wrong.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 534 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-6-10 - Hermione G. - Complete
31. Void reviews
Harry Potter is born without magic, but that doesn't make him a squib, or a muggle.
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 757 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 4-15-10 - Harry P. - Complete
32. Vici reviews
Veni Vidi Vici: I came, I saw, I conquered. Kira wins. /Are you laughing, Light? Near wonders./
Death Note - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 460 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-1-10 - Near & Light Y. - Complete
33. Time reviews
Five easy steps into the darkness, and one chance at redemption. Jack, in six moments.
Dragonback series - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,016 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-1-10 - Complete
34. Match reviews
20 things about Katsa you really need to know. AU. /It wasn't supposed to be like this/
Seven Kingdoms Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 669 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-18-10 - Complete
35. Popularity reviews
Three people find a flier, and have very different reactions. Bonus points if you're a bloodline clan, or if you leave a broken, traumatized, avenger of a younger sibling behind.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 412 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-22-10 - Itachi U. & Neji H. - Complete
36. Life reviews
If Stephanie Meyer had dreamed of magic. If Rowling had written about vampires. Two Fusions sort of
Crossover - Harry Potter & Twilight - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,130 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-3-10 - Harry P. & Bella - Complete
37. Sentience reviews
On the night of the full moon, a birdwatcher sets up his video camera to point at a little island, and falls asleep. What he finds in the morning is not footage of owls as he expected, but of cats.
Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,047 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-31-10 - Jayfeather & Lionblaze - Complete
38. Last reviews
Five glances at Death Note. And he sees L's dead face.
Death Note - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-9-10 - L & Light Y. - Complete
39. Shade reviews
The story of two Gracelings' son. /Now he can't help but feel the irony./
Seven Kingdoms Trilogy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 506 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-5-10 - Complete
40. Serpent reviews
How Haymitch became the winner of his Hunger Game. Then she tells the boy about fear.
Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,126 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-5-10 - Haymitch A. - Complete
41. Demons reviews
Why Wilson is still House's friend. He's more selfish than anyone knows.
House, M.D. - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 648 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-3-10 - J. Wilson & G. House - Complete
42. Tower reviews
William Morgan is about to bust the biggest drug boss in California, Silas Botwin, who's been in the business for fifteen years, since his teens. But Morgan doesn't know what he's getting into.
Weeds - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,495 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-3-10 - Complete
43. Organizations » reviews
Two groups with experience in dealing with shady organizations meet. Both are less than happy about it.
Crossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,333 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-2-10 - Published: 12-31-09 - J. O'Neill & Max - Complete
44. Respect reviews
A look at Snape being sent to take Harry to Hogwarts. He knows this boy is not his rival but he hates him all the same
Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-29-09 - Severus S. & Harry P. - Complete
45. Gates » reviews
A meeting at the Gate, between two people who have experience with dying.
Crossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,440 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 12-27-09 - Published: 12-20-09 - D. Jackson & Edward E. - Complete
46. Alchemist reviews
Edward Elric, as seen by ten mutants.
Crossover - X-Men: The Movie & Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,462 - Reviews: 39 - Published: 12-18-09 - Xavier, C. & Edward E. - Complete
47. Hook reviews
Alex finally quits. Defeat is a bitter taste in the back of his mouth.
Alex Rider - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 518 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-30-09 - Alex R./Cub - Complete
48. Rebirth reviews
The Nine-Tails in present day. But he's really just a fluffy red fox with severe ramen cravings. Right?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 758 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-30-09 - Naruto U. & Kurama/Kyuubi - Complete
49. Aftermath reviews
The Flock never talks about their future. They were not meant to live in the aftermath.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 343 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-15-09 - Max - Complete
50. Know reviews
Beka will someday have to decide between her friends and her job. You cannot even hope.
Beka Cooper series - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 730 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-15-09 - Complete
51. Fields reviews
Life after prison labor is so easy that it's hard. Bo's not sure he can do this. Rash fic
Misc. Books - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 452 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-15-09 - Complete
52. Steel reviews
A look at Ed. Ed is simply Ed. The boy who failed to bring back his mother
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 578 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-15-09 - Edward E. - Complete
53. Look reviews
Why Will can only be a Ranger. It's like hitting a target.
Ranger's Apprentice - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 629 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-25-09 - Complete
54. Killer reviews
Every day she regrets keeping him from returning, but never enough to actually let him leave. This is not her little boy.
Underland Chronicles - Rated: T - English - Family/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 667 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-13-09 - Grace & Gregor - Complete
55. Ad Infernum reviews
The Flock isn't playing around anymore. Things have changed a lot, in three years. The bomb is ready about ten seconds later. First in a trilogy.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-10-09 - Max & Nudge - Complete
56. Not reviews
Itex doesn't exist and neither does the Flock. Things are not as they should be. And they suffer for it. And for just a moment, she flew.
Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,592 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 9-9-09 - Max & Angel - Complete
57. One reviews
Jeb and Max, on his regrets. He's not allowed to have them. Drabble.
Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 379 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-9-09 - Max & Jeb B. - Complete
58. Fear reviews
Gregor, post-war. Going backwards is hard. He is twenty-five on the day he wakes up to find that he cannot recall her face.
Underland Chronicles - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 728 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-30-09 - Gregor & Luxa - Complete
59. Nobody's reviews
Yuusuke's no hero, and he'll let no one say otherwise. Heroes don't get up, because they don't fall.
Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 600 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-24-09 - Yusuke U. & K. Kuwabara - Complete
60. Protectors reviews
Because there's Harry Potter and Just Harry. And heroes aren't allowed to bleed.
Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 654 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-24-09 - Harry P. - Complete
61. Fire reviews
Things are different, but still the same. There is a story told 'round the fire, of a woman who loved the Forest, and of the Forest who loved her back.
Chronicles of Ancient Darkness - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,561 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-24-09 - Complete
62. Flowers reviews
Five senses in five years. And a sixth she doesn't gain until it's too late. Shiori knows her son is special.
Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,001 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-24-09 - Kurama M. & Shiori M. - Complete
63. Imagine reviews
Four times Deb sees his mask almost slip, and the one time it actually does. And how Dexter plays his sister.
Dexter - Rated: T - English - Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 792 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-21-09 - Complete
64. Greatness reviews
Al thinks of Ed, and what his brother can do. Slight AU
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 830 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-13-09 - Alphonse E. & Edward E. - Complete
65. Perfect reviews
Roy thinks Ed's perfect, and he wants to strangle him for it. Slight AU
Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 618 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-13-09 - Roy M. & Edward E. - Complete