| Pyralis Anacreon |
Author has written 65 stories for Fullmetal Alchemist, Dexter, Yu Yu Hakusho, Chronicles of Ancient Darkness, Harry Potter, Underland Chronicles, Maximum Ride, Ranger's Apprentice, Misc. Books, Beka Cooper series, Naruto, Alex Rider, X-Men: The Movie, Stargate: SG-1, Weeds, House, M.D., Hunger Games, Seven Kingdoms Trilogy, Death Note, Warriors, Dragonback series, Dark Visions series, White Collar, True Blood, Legend of the Seeker, Mentalist, Supernatural, Virals, Twilight, and Revolution. I write for a lot of fandoms, but rarely the same one more than once or twice. I read even more of them. I'm on Tumblr, Fictionpress, Livejournal, and the AO3 under the name Pyralis Anacreon, but I'm most active here. Pyralis' Writing Tips: Don't have big chunks of paragraphs, especially not right after each other. The wall of text will scare a reader away. Dialogue is your friend. Instead of the narrator telling the reader something, have one character explain it to another whenever possible. Get a sense for building tension, suspense, and drama. That's something that'll come with practice. For God's sake, if you know that you're someone who can't tell the difference between your, you're, their, there, and they're, get a freakin beta to catch it for you. Holding chapters hostage in exchange for reviews makes you come across as a six-year-old holding their breath until they get what they want. Don't be that kid. If it's good enough, the reviews will come. Don't insert song titles in your fic to plug your favorite music. In the beginning AN you could say, wrote this while listening to... but in the middle of the fic it's just a shameless plug. Write like you're speaking to someone, telling them a story. Punctuation is your friend. Keep reading books. You don't need to study grammar and spelling, read enough and it will become natural to know which word to use. Just keep reading books in general, actually. Navigating FFNet: Tips for finding the good stories Go to your favorite author's profile page. Look up their favorite stories. See if they're in a community. Use communities. Use the new filters to rank fics by number of favorites, reviews, or follows. Use the Word Count filter set to 100,000. Very rarely will badfic reach over 100,000 words. | |||||||
1. Shotgun Child reviewsThey are finally about to catch up with Tom Neville and his two prisoners. Now the real trouble starts. Part Three in the Singer Militia series.Crossover - Supernatural & Revolution - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,151 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 10-23-12 - Complete2. Bulletproof Smile reviewsThey're searching for their father, who went missing weeks ago. And Miles Matheson knows what happened. Part Two in the Singer Militia series.Crossover - Supernatural & Revolution - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,831 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 10-10-12 - Complete3. Gunpoint Politics reviewsDean Winchester was just eleven years old when the lights went out. Since then, things have changed a lot. Part One in the Singer Militia series.Crossover - Supernatural & Revolution - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,237 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 10-4-12 - Complete4. White Steel Serenity » reviewsPart 3 of the Mortal Conversion series. They've traded up the FBI for an even more powerful enemy. They will have to be smarter, stronger, and faster than ever before to avoid this new threat, and face the consequences of giving in to the wolf.Virals - Rated: T - English - Family/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,533 - Reviews: 21 - Updated: 4-16-12 - Published: 2-2-12 - Complete5. Sunset reviewsLater, Hermione will hear from all their friends that the same thing happened to them: he came, he was vibrant and excited, they made plans for some nameless future date and then he was gone. He didn't fade away.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,617 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3-12-12 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete6. Red Iron Symphony » reviewsPart Two of the Mortal Conversion series, must read Black Gold Legacy first. In California the Virals struggle to survive with FBI agent Desmond Ratheson tracking their every move, but the greatest threat they face may come from within. AU, complete.Virals - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 11,239 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 1-29-12 - Published: 1-26-12 - Complete7. Black Gold Legacy » reviewsMary Read wasn't hung. She followed the clues to the treasure, reset the traps, and found Anne Bonny again. Hundreds of years later, Tory Brennan and her Virals lift up a flagstone to find a black pit of nothing. They cannot save Loggerhead. AU, complete.Virals - Rated: T - English - Drama/Family - Chapters: 5 - Words: 10,162 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 1-27-12 - Published: 11-15-11 - Complete8. Something Wicked reviewsShe does not wake for her death. He does not collect her blood on a slide. She is not his victim - she is his mistake.Dexter - Rated: T - English - Family/Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 438 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-14-12 - Dexter M. & Debra M. - Complete9. Unending reviews20 things you really have to understand about SG-1. The people, the things they did, the ones they saved and lost, and the legend they left behind.Stargate: SG-1 - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 876 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6-13-11 - Complete10. Make It Right reviewsThe one where everyone is human - except maybe not. "Have you ever felt like you're forgetting something really important, and no matter how hard you try you can't remember what?" Castiel asks. "All the time," Dean replies. "Every single day."Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,114 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6-13-11 - Castiel & Dean W. - Complete11. The Lonely Ones » reviewsHarry's been lost for years, Hermione's half-crazy with the need for revenge and determined to raise an army. Ron never got to know his family before the Death Eaters got to them, and Draco Malfoy's a coward. Heavily AU.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 11 - Words: 24,544 - Reviews: 20 - Updated: 5-25-11 - Published: 6-3-1012. Legacy reviewsFour cases where she hunts Red John, and the one where she catches himMentalist - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,256 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-23-11 - Teresa L. & Red John - Complete13. Who Follow Death reviewsLike all reapers, Harlas doesn't remember his human life. This changes when the soul he goes to collect calls him 'Harry' and something returns to him. Eight 100 word drabbles to tell a story.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 762 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5-19-11 - Harry P. - Complete14. Never Lost reviewsThere is not a single reincarnation, not a single life, where they do not meet at least once. There is no alternate world where they do not feel this connection. Richard and Kahlan across time and space – was it worth it?Legend of the Seeker - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,273 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-3-11 - Richard Cypher R. & Kahlan A. - Complete15. RedemptionFour Richards that never were, and one that could be. Five short drabbles.Legend of the Seeker - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,463 - Published: 4-3-11 - Richard Cypher R. & Kahlan A. - Complete16. Dragon Heart reviewsThere is a story about a dragon who never lost and was always right, except for the one time it mattered. Short mythical medieval AU drabble.House, M.D. - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,092 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3-17-11 - L. Cuddy & G. House - Complete17. Ask Me Again, TomorrowA character study on Eric Northman, Viking, vampire, sheriff, and cold-hearted bastard. And how despite all those things he fell in love with a freakin' human.True Blood - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 349 - Published: 2-11-11 - Eric N. - Complete18. Twenty Things That Never Left the Marauders reviewsTwenty things that never left the Marauder's circle. One-sided Sirius/James if you want to see it that way, or just friendship.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 429 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1-19-11 - Complete19. Liar, Liar » reviewsSecond Year AU. The Chamber of Secrets goes differently, and Harry winds up in an Azkaban cell across from one Sirius Black. A story told in drabbles. No bashing, even if it might seem like it at first. Link to Russian translation on my profile.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Mystery - Chapters: 5 - Words: 21,630 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 12-23-10 - Published: 8-9-10 - Harry P. & Sirius B. - Complete20. Dark reviewsIt's not something you just wake up with. It creeps up on you slowly, sidles up sideways and smiles and asks your name. And before you know it, you've gone too far. Voldemort's descent into the Dark. No child grows up dreaming of genocide.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,414 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 12-20-10 - Complete21. Story Collection » reviewsA collection of story ideas which will probably never be written by me. Steal, plagiarize, and copy all you want. Some of them make less sense than others.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 20,056 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 12-12-10 - Published: 11-15-09 - Harry P. - Complete22. Little White Lies reviewsNeal Caffrey's past shows up in the form of a mystery man, but how far will he go to keep it secret? And Peter wants to know why Neal hates guns, why Neal didn't finish high school. Peter wants to know why he's dead.White Collar - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,394 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12-12-10 - Neal C. & Peter B. - Complete23. Reaper reviewsThen, after a while, she started to hate everything. This is what happens when you steal from monsters. Reap what you have sown, human.Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 995 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10-31-10 - Max - Complete24. Girl Of Ice reviewsKaitlyn's first boyfriend, trying to make sense of it all.Dark Visions series - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 893 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 10-11-10 - Complete25. We, In Defiance reviews...declare that you do not have the right to rule. Panem, the land bathed in child's blood and death and excess. And the games that children play, and the wars that children fight.Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10-6-10 - Complete26. Try reviewsWhat, you think they got the Flock right on the first try? Meet the ones who didn't quite make the cut.Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,059 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-16-10 - Complete27. Human reviewsThey are human and she is not. The Flock found death dates on their necks and Max wakes up in a lab.Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 679 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7-27-10 - Max - Complete28. Maximum reviews20 things you really need to know about MaxMaximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 428 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7-22-10 - Max & Fang - Complete29. Monster reviewsHow to become a monster in seven easy steps. The Flock, when they never met.Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,130 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7-12-10 - Complete30. Mud Magic reviewsThey're killing our magic. Hermione, one of the greatest magical scientists to ever live, finally solves the power issue. The purebloods thought it was the mud that weakened the magic. They were wrong.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 534 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 6-6-10 - Hermione G. - Complete31. Void reviewsHarry Potter is born without magic, but that doesn't make him a squib, or a muggle.Harry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 757 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 4-15-10 - Harry P. - Complete32. Vici reviewsVeni Vidi Vici: I came, I saw, I conquered. Kira wins. /Are you laughing, Light? Near wonders./Death Note - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 460 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-1-10 - Near & Light Y. - Complete33. Time reviewsFive easy steps into the darkness, and one chance at redemption. Jack, in six moments.Dragonback series - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,016 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4-1-10 - Complete34. Match reviews20 things about Katsa you really need to know. AU. /It wasn't supposed to be like this/Seven Kingdoms Trilogy - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 669 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3-18-10 - Complete35. Popularity reviewsThree people find a flier, and have very different reactions. Bonus points if you're a bloodline clan, or if you leave a broken, traumatized, avenger of a younger sibling behind.Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 412 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2-22-10 - Itachi U. & Neji H. - Complete36. Life reviewsIf Stephanie Meyer had dreamed of magic. If Rowling had written about vampires. Two Fusions sort ofCrossover - Harry Potter & Twilight - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,130 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2-3-10 - Harry P. & Bella - Complete37. Sentience reviewsOn the night of the full moon, a birdwatcher sets up his video camera to point at a little island, and falls asleep. What he finds in the morning is not footage of owls as he expected, but of cats.Warriors - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,047 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-31-10 - Jayfeather & Lionblaze - Complete38. Last reviewsFive glances at Death Note. And he sees L's dead face.Death Note - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 369 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-9-10 - L & Light Y. - Complete39. Shade reviewsThe story of two Gracelings' son. /Now he can't help but feel the irony./Seven Kingdoms Trilogy - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 506 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-5-10 - Complete40. Serpent reviewsHow Haymitch became the winner of his Hunger Game. Then she tells the boy about fear.Hunger Games - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,126 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-5-10 - Haymitch A. - Complete41. Demons reviewsWhy Wilson is still House's friend. He's more selfish than anyone knows.House, M.D. - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 648 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 1-3-10 - J. Wilson & G. House - Complete42. Tower reviewsWilliam Morgan is about to bust the biggest drug boss in California, Silas Botwin, who's been in the business for fifteen years, since his teens. But Morgan doesn't know what he's getting into.Weeds - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,495 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1-3-10 - Complete43. Organizations » reviewsTwo groups with experience in dealing with shady organizations meet. Both are less than happy about it.Crossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,333 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1-2-10 - Published: 12-31-09 - J. O'Neill & Max - Complete44. Respect reviewsA look at Snape being sent to take Harry to Hogwarts. He knows this boy is not his rival but he hates him all the sameHarry Potter - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12-29-09 - Severus S. & Harry P. - Complete45. Gates » reviewsA meeting at the Gate, between two people who have experience with dying.Crossover - Stargate: SG-1 & Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,440 - Reviews: 26 - Updated: 12-27-09 - Published: 12-20-09 - D. Jackson & Edward E. - Complete46. Alchemist reviewsEdward Elric, as seen by ten mutants.Crossover - X-Men: The Movie & Fullmetal Alchemist - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,462 - Reviews: 39 - Published: 12-18-09 - Xavier, C. & Edward E. - Complete47. Hook reviewsAlex finally quits. Defeat is a bitter taste in the back of his mouth.Alex Rider - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 518 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-30-09 - Alex R./Cub - Complete48. Rebirth reviewsThe Nine-Tails in present day. But he's really just a fluffy red fox with severe ramen cravings. Right?Naruto - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 758 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-30-09 - Naruto U. & Kurama/Kyuubi - Complete49. Aftermath reviewsThe Flock never talks about their future. They were not meant to live in the aftermath.Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 343 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-15-09 - Max - Complete50. Know reviewsBeka will someday have to decide between her friends and her job. You cannot even hope.Beka Cooper series - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 730 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11-15-09 - Complete51. Fields reviewsLife after prison labor is so easy that it's hard. Bo's not sure he can do this. Rash ficMisc. Books - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 452 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11-15-09 - Complete52. Steel reviewsA look at Ed. Ed is simply Ed. The boy who failed to bring back his motherFullmetal Alchemist - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 578 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11-15-09 - Edward E. - Complete53. Look reviewsWhy Will can only be a Ranger. It's like hitting a target.Ranger's Apprentice - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 629 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9-25-09 - Complete54. Killer reviewsEvery day she regrets keeping him from returning, but never enough to actually let him leave. This is not her little boy.Underland Chronicles - Rated: T - English - Family/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 667 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-13-09 - Grace & Gregor - Complete55. Ad Infernum reviewsThe Flock isn't playing around anymore. Things have changed a lot, in three years. The bomb is ready about ten seconds later. First in a trilogy.Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 809 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-10-09 - Max & Nudge - Complete56. Not reviewsItex doesn't exist and neither does the Flock. Things are not as they should be. And they suffer for it. And for just a moment, she flew.Maximum Ride - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,592 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 9-9-09 - Max & Angel - Complete57. One reviewsJeb and Max, on his regrets. He's not allowed to have them. Drabble.Maximum Ride - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 379 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9-9-09 - Max & Jeb B. - Complete58. Fear reviewsGregor, post-war. Going backwards is hard. He is twenty-five on the day he wakes up to find that he cannot recall her face.Underland Chronicles - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 728 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8-30-09 - Gregor & Luxa - Complete59. Nobody's reviewsYuusuke's no hero, and he'll let no one say otherwise. Heroes don't get up, because they don't fall.Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 600 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-24-09 - Yusuke U. & K. Kuwabara - Complete60. Protectors reviewsBecause there's Harry Potter and Just Harry. And heroes aren't allowed to bleed.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 654 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-24-09 - Harry P. - Complete61. Fire reviewsThings are different, but still the same. There is a story told 'round the fire, of a woman who loved the Forest, and of the Forest who loved her back.Chronicles of Ancient Darkness - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,561 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8-24-09 - Complete62. Flowers reviewsFive senses in five years. And a sixth she doesn't gain until it's too late. Shiori knows her son is special.Yu Yu Hakusho - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,001 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8-24-09 - Kurama M. & Shiori M. - Complete63. Imagine reviewsFour times Deb sees his mask almost slip, and the one time it actually does. And how Dexter plays his sister.Dexter - Rated: T - English - Crime - Chapters: 1 - Words: 792 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 8-21-09 - Complete