YamiRuss
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since: 10-29-09, id: 2129769, Profile Updated: 05-04-13
Author has written 8 stories for Yu-Gi-Oh GX, Pokémon, Yu-Gi-Oh, and Doctor Who.

My Stuff:

The Many Paths of Victory: Very King-esque in my ability to start strong and peter out. I wasn't pleased with the ending, but this one was the story where I tried writing in a first-person present voice, and it started off pretty well. I've often considered rewriting it to give it another try. Heavy influence from H. G. Wells.

The Unown Conspiracy: I love Doctor Who, and so this story was my first Professor Who story. I don't know if there will be a second. It sure was fun to write, though. Influenced by Stephen Moffat, if anyone.

The Duelist's Spirit: The conglomeration of all my Yu-Gi-Oh! stories. This one has gone through a variety of genres over time as I've tried different approaches. Journal style, sitcom style, third-person limited, third-person omniscient... Some of them worked alright, some of them did not. I started with the intention of everyone using tournament-level decks, but that got boring quickly and so I changed everyone to themed decks like on the shows.
The fifth arc is underway.

Valence: My first attempt at a pokémon adventure story. I don't know yet how long it will be. I've got the story figured out and the significant events surrounding the main characters, but an adventure story leaves a lot of room for OCs.

OC Submission:

I don't have a giant form. I just need to know the basics, depending on which story you're submitting for. Any extra information is acceptable. I accept them in reviews or through messages.

Name:
Age:
Sex:
Physical features:
Personality:
Occupation:
Background (with as much or little detail as desired):
Aspirations:
Deck theme/Pokémon (with nicknames):

Perpetual note: OCs still have to fit the overall story. Keep that in mind if I accidentally screw up your character.

Reviews:

Like everyone, I appreciate reviews. They don't have to be detailed analyses or critical improvement notes (which are very helpful), but some kind of note tells me that people are reading and actually want me to continue (I hope). Feel free to tell me I suck if I do, but do it in a helpful way (i.e., which part?).

Common writing tips:

I'm not perfect: I make typos as often as anyone else and require copy-editing to fix them. But these are some of my pet peeves that I might include in my review of your writing. (I just had this idea, but it was not directly inspired and so it remains incomplete. More will be added as it comes to me.)

  1. All punctuation should be inside quotation marks with the following exception: Question marks should be logical. If they are part of the quote, put them inside the quotation marks, but leave it outside if unrelated.
  2. Quotes by a new speaker start a new paragraph.
  3. Use spell check. Although you deserve some leniency for misspellings that form real words (e.g., "from" vs. "form"), there is no reason for you to have misspelled words that any basic spell check warns you about.
  4. Describe the scene and the appearance of your characters, but don't make it the focus unless it's relevant to the story. Someone wearing a clown costume for an undercover gig can focus on the appearance. Someone who is preparing for a duel or a pokémon battle should just have his or her attire described briefly as part of the setting.
  5. Their is a plural pronoun. Don't use their to describe one person's stuff. Use his or hers. English has no singular, gender-neutral pronoun.
  6. Keep your writing succinct. That doesn't mean every sentence should be short and choppy, but it does mean each sentence (and each paragraph) should stay on point. Definitely don't repeat the previous sentence by using synonyms just to pad word counts.
  7. It's vs. Its. It's is a contraction meaning "it is." Its is possessive.

1. In Search of a God » reviews
Bryan and Matt have searched, wondering how the god cards escaped their protection at Duel Academy. Holding only Uria, Lord of Searing Flames in his possession, Bryan is invited to a competition between the god cards. This is his one chance to return them to their rightful place, even if it means going up against the leader of the Hellfire Club himself.
Yu-Gi-Oh GX - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 14 - Words: 68,252 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 5-5-13 - Published: 7-15-12
2. Valence » reviews
The legendary pokémon of Perioble keep the ecosystem in balance. By awakening one of them, you have judged yourself and your rival as harbingers of chaos. Team Omega is on the move. Your defense is one pokémon. Choose wisely. *Accepting OCs.
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 27 - Words: 103,503 - Reviews: 83 - Updated: 4-21-13 - Published: 2-26-12
3. The End of Duel Academy » reviews
The Ghost Duelist and his Horsemen are ready to enact his plan to destroy Duel Academy. Without Matthew Luther returning to Duel Academy, can Bryan Knight do anything to stop the End of Days? *Part IV of "The Duelist's Spirit"*
Crossover - Yu-Gi-Oh & Yu-Gi-Oh GX - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 41 - Words: 225,166 - Reviews: 82 - Updated: 6-30-12 - Published: 2-21-11 - Complete
4. The Unown Conspiracy: The Murder of Emperor Alph » reviews
The events surrounding the death of Alph III have long puzzled historians of ancient Johto. Archaeologist Claire investigates the circumstances of the ancient emperor's death firsthand and discovers among new pokémon the threads of a murder conspiracy.
Crossover - Doctor Who & Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi/Supernatural - Chapters: 15 - Words: 34,312 - Reviews: 3 - Updated: 12-25-11 - Published: 9-26-11 - Complete
5. For Love and the Game » reviews
A brand new school year at Duel Academy always brings new challenges. Cocky freshmen claim dueling titles, romances change, and a sinister duelist lurks in the shadows. Part III of *The Duelist's Spirit*
Yu-Gi-Oh GX - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 31 - Words: 166,019 - Reviews: 103 - Updated: 1-20-11 - Published: 2-20-10 - Complete
6. The Many Paths of Victory » reviews
A tournament is being held in the Periodos region, hosted by the famous Professor Zamia. Can Jin win with his inexperience? Original characters
Pokémon - Rated: T - English - Sci-Fi - Chapters: 24 - Words: 106,787 - Reviews: 44 - Updated: 6-27-10 - Published: 12-6-09 - Complete
7. Legends of the Shadow Realm » reviews
Part II of *The Duelist's Spirit*. The shadows descend upon Duel Academy as the god cards begin claiming souls. What will happen to Bryan and the other Guardians? Original characters
Yu-Gi-Oh GX - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 20 - Words: 94,813 - Reviews: 14 - Updated: 2-5-10 - Published: 12-9-09 - Complete
8. Duel Academy » reviews
Part I of *The Duelist's Spirit*. At the world's premier four-year dueling college, Bryan Knight and Matthew Luther duel to make a name for themselves against dueling teams, Guardian Duelers, and international tournament duelists. Original characters
Yu-Gi-Oh GX - Rated: T - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 19 - Words: 65,254 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12-5-09 - Published: 10-31-09 - Complete