| Rookie's eyes |
Author has written 3 stories for Metal Gear. Favorite games include Metal Gear Solid Series, Metroid Series, Arkham Asylum, Uncharted, Legend of Zelda Favorite movies include Star Wars, Alien trilogy, Predator 2, Iron Man + 2, The Rock, Dark Knight, Current projects: The Exploits of Philanthropy, The First Encounter Statistics: Name: Classified (I'd Tell you but then i'd have to kill you) Aliases: Rookie's Eyes, Jake Steel, The Legendary Mercenary (Don't I wish) Age: 17 Gender: Male Birthplace: Wisconsin Current Location: Classified I haven't been writing long, but in the time I have I've found it even more fun than reading someone else's work. I can change whatever i want whenever i want. Plus i get to share them with people who enjoy stories as much as I do. Unfortunately, editing my own story is a bit harder than editing someone else's. This is where my readers, that's you guys, come in. Please review my storie(s). Tell me it's awesome, It's great, it's Ok, you don't like it, or even 'IT MAKES (insert horrible movie here, maybe cloverfield) LOOK GOOD!' Gasp. I really want some detailed reviews to base my skills on and so i know how i can improve for my following stories. only with feedback can i acheive my goal of a story which encompasses the very definition of 'AWESOME!!'. deviantART! My first few projects are simple colored character concepts, You are welcome to propose changes and I will surely be posting better versions as i familiarize myself with Photoshop. http://rookieseyes.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d32dot9 (Shotmaker) http://rookieseyes.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d31jk00 (The Machinegun Kid) http://rookieseyes.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d31ah2c (Pyre Trooper) Opinions: I don't care if you don't wanna hear, I'm gonna tell you anyway. Pairings: Some characters are okay, but there are very few. They have little if any place in MGS. the only ones that would make sense to me would be Naked Snake/EVA or Otacon/Naomi, but that's because they actually happened! A story that isn't a porno shouldn't have graphic sex. It just wouldn't feel right to go from a serious story to detailed "doing it", Unless of course it is a story about love. Oh, if your going to write a legend of Zelda fic, I myself am considering one, make Link mute like he is in the games. It just seems more Zelda to me. But if i see more than one "Hey! Listen!" from that stupid fairy I swear I will break my computer. OC's are cool and all but they should never be better than the main character and they can't dominate a fic more than the main themselves. Then it isn't so much fan as it is fiction. If you're going to write a fic, finish it! or offer to pass it on to another author who can. There are too many authors who start the first 5,000 words of a decent story and never finish or take two years to do it with months inbetween updates! I just can't read like that. Then if you see the update months later, you go to the chapter and you're like "What the hell! who's this OC?" (however, I should be lenient on this considering my recent hindrances with college) If you're not going to take my advice and quit a fic then please announce it. I've spent too much time waiting and hoping for a discontinued fic to update. Currently... As i write this i am working on the story board for TEoP, expect lots of explosions. All I'm sayin'. Keep those reviews coming... I have a few more on their way, I've already made plans for a few, including: Damned Salvation - Python was left for dead by the only man he had respected for all these years. After all they had been through, he was tossed aside, only to be rescued by a group of scientists. Follow python's training and the obstacles that lead up to his final conflict with his old comrade, Naked Snake. Fox Alive - Life seems like a shadow since Gray Fox's defeat at the hands of his rival, Solid Snake. Since Fox's return to the living, he feels as if he is a ghost in the world of humanity, getting more distant as the time passes. He must face Snake in combat once more, so that he may once more feel truly alive, and so that his soul may find respite. These stories coming soon to a computer near you... If you have ever stared at a computer screen for hours and hours reading stories that people who have no lives whatsoever and have enough obsession with something to write a story about it have written, and you are one of the aforementioned people, copy and paste this into your profile. if you think life without computers would be useless then copy and paste this into your profile. If you probably need a life but have no intentions of getting one, copy this and paste it in your profile. If you actually take the time to read other people's profiles, put this in yours. If you've ever wondered what you're like in a parallel universe, put this on your profile. Weird is good, strange is bad, and odd is when you don't know which to call someone. Weird is the same as different, which is the same as unique, therefore weird is good. If you are weird and proud of it, copy this onto your profile! | |||||||||
1. Metal Gear Solid: The First Encounter » reviewsA Rookie's novelization of Metal Gear. FOXHOUND operative Solid Snake is called upon not only to save his ally Gray Fox from the Commander, but to cripple Outer Heaven's latest war machine before it can use its new weapon to dominate the world!Metal Gear - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 46,881 - Reviews: 63 - Updated: 4-7-12 - Published: 10-12-10 - S. Snake & G. Fox2. Metal Gear Solid: Resurrection » reviewsNovelization of MG2 Solid Snake for the MSX. Zanzibar Land has hoarded an arsenal of nuclear weapons. US intel confirmed a new metal Gear is being constructed and their leader is Big Boss, back for more. Snake's mission isn't over yet!Metal Gear - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 31 - Words: 61,384 - Reviews: 79 - Updated: 10-9-10 - Published: 11-18-09 - S. Snake - Complete3. The Exploits of Philanthropy » reviewsFollow the escapades of Philanthropy, a fringe Anti-terrorist group which is determined to take down the Metal Gear derivatives which are popping up all over the globe. The Army's Gear is only the first in Snake's struggle against the nuclear threat.Metal Gear - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 3,670 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2-28-10 - S. Snake