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| Saraa Luna |
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Author has written 14 stories for Ginga series, Redwall, Aliens/Predator, Misc. Comics, and Transformers/Beast Wars. Review Exchange: taken from Anla'shok If you want me to review your story, review one of mine first, and say it's for a review exchange. Tell which story you want me to review and please specify whether you want constructive criticism or just feedback on the positive aspects of your fanfiction (Don't ask for criticism you might not handle. But I'm not vicious by a long shot, so don't worry. If there are large errors, however, I will point them out regardless of what you have asked.) I will do this on a 1:1 review ratio. You review one chapter; I review one chapter. I'll try to give as thorough reviews as possible, especially if you ask for critique, and so I won't accept single words, one-liners, or vague praise for this exchange. The point is to grow as authors, not to mutually flatter ourselves by saying how awesome we find the other. You review my story like you want me to review your story. If you give me nothing in a review, then I shall return the favor. If you're not sure if you've written a story in a fandom I know of, PM me. I can't guarantee to be able to give proper reviews in fandoms that I am not familiar with. My favorites list and profile is a good indication of what I'm familiar with, though I can handle OC character development and the like fairly well without being too familiar with the fandom. Already existing characters/series I'm unfamiliar with are something else entirely. Hello, and welcome to my rather badly put together page. You probably don't know who I am off of here (why would you?), so I'll introduce myself. My name for here and DeviantART is SaraaLuna. I have a fondness for the twisted in all regards. My username is Cafe Pero on FanFiction.Net's sister site devoted to original stories (Fictionpress.net) though I have nothing much up there, and my good friend Noratcat is on both DeviantArt and FF.net. He's the one collaborating with me on Echoes, and has his own stories. Do me a favor and go check them out. Pictures of my fanfiction cast in general can be found on my deviantART account, including most of The Reverse Taggerung Effect characters, Jackliss from Hunter's Bias, and several Rise of the Flitchaye characters. A stray commissioned image here and there of Mayu or Bat can found in Noratcat's deviantART favorites or by searching her name along with the Ginga tag. In progress stories: --Rise of the Flitchaye (completely rewriting from scratch / possibly becoming original story instead of fanfic) --Patches (updating irregularly) --Hunter's Bias (on hiatus/random updates) --The Reverse Taggerung Effect (reediting story)
http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/gallery/35398547 Rise of the Flitchaye: Vayig & Merco silliness: http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Gentlemen-Savages-295712748 Vosulo: http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Vosulo-314148689 http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Nuclear-Sketch-Bomb-304168712 Unintroduced character: http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Halisk-299905202 The Muteness of Martin aka Push: Dipper/weasel sketches: http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Anthro-Weasel-Sketches-320736071 Ashtip: http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Those-Bally-Mismatched-Peepers-321216464 http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Paranoia-323004895 Hunter's Bias: Jackliss: http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Jackliss-319034729 Jackliss and the Badblood (CONTAINS SLIGHT SPOILERS): http://saraaluna.deviantart.com/art/Staredown-319013255 Echoes of the Forgotten: Art can be found by searching Noratcat's favorites or by searching Mayu's name. Link to Noratcat's account: http://noratcat.deviantart.com/ Ice Burn: Carnis and Clarit sketches: http://shiitake-tissues.tumblr.com/post/42679343224/carnis-loves-being-medic-of-his-company-he-really | |||||||
1. Balanced » reviewsBefore one is pushed, they're balanced. Or they think they are. The fates of vermin and woodlanders intertwine in ways they didn't even know was possible, whether they like it or not. Collection of shorts; Push and Redemption Twining. 3rd Chapter: Farflit the fox cub learns about manners and dresses. He doesn't like them. Either of them.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,909 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-21-13 - Published: 1-29-132. Redemption Twining » reviewsIn the far north, a warlord seizes an abbey for his own and makes special plans; in the south, a desperate Juska tribe seeks out the prophesied Taggerung, and in the middle, a quarry of vermin struggles against a lurking evil nobeast can stop. But the three beasts tangled in their own lines of fate are going to eventually collide in one place: Redwall. And nothing can stop them.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 12 - Words: 70,762 - Reviews: 60 - Updated: 5-19-13 - Published: 2-25-133. Building the Break » reviewsHe had come a long way from being the paranoid, insecure fifth-base-block of a gestalt team to becoming one of Lord Megatron's personal fighters. But was that really a good thing? Seeing what he'd lost- and gained- Breakdown wasn't sure. [Breakdown's past; merged continuities that lead up to Prime. Image (c) ManicDraconis]Transformers/Beast Wars - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,575 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 4-16-13 - Published: 4-13-13 - Breakdown4. Twisted Paths » reviewsIt's not often a vermin raised by woodlanders meets a woodlander raised by vermin. But when they do, the results are interesting, to say the least. Particularly when they involve a certain foul-mouthed otter and fox family... Collabs with Quavera-Tava. Story crossover.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 13,287 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 4-4-13 - Published: 8-10-125. Patches » reviewsVermin aren't innocent- not by a long shot. But their morality spectrum isn't always black to the woodlanders' white. Sometimes, even in the darkest pitch, there are tinges of grey. /Shorts companion to The Reverse Taggerung Effect. Chapters 4, 5, 12, and 18 contain darker implications/violence; read at own risk.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 20 - Words: 71,858 - Reviews: 58 - Updated: 3-15-13 - Published: 3-1-126. Ice Burn (Beyond the Western Deep) » reviewsBTWD fanfic. "There was one thing to be said for the Tamian: they might've been soft, flighty tree-jumpers unaccustomed to the bite of war, but when they left someone alone, they didn't do it in the middle of the freezing tundra." History of the lonely Omega Canid in the Land End's Tavern.Misc. Comics - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 26,881 - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 2-23-13 - Published: 2-9-13 - Complete7. Rise of the Flitchaye (Rewrite) »Anyone fighting animals has to take care not to become one. Long before Garraway Bullow and her northern holt in Mariel were fierce rivals with the Flitchaye, there were others, and long before the Flitchaye were driven back, they weren't. Even cannibals can take a twisted stand.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,648 - Updated: 2-1-13 - Published: 12-22-128. The Muteness of Martin aka Push » reviewsRedwall has problems. Their current champion is immature in all ways possible, for one. But when a group of desperate woodlanders and vermin arrive and bring Hellgates to the abbey doors, the Redwallers realize there's a tragedy set in motion that will leave nobeast unscathed... even with the sacrifices made to stop it.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Family - Chapters: 20 - Words: 132,526 - Reviews: 69 - Updated: 1-29-13 - Published: 6-29-12 - Complete9. Jokes reviews"Okay, so an otterbeast leader, horde-beast leader, and tribe chief all meet in middle of a clearing-" "Merco, SH'RUP, we all heard that one thousands of times!" Vayig the Flitchaye doesn't take jokes well like Merco does. Accented first person. Rise of the Flitchaye ONESHOT.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,941 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1-26-13 - Complete10. None the Wiser » reviewsA vermin actor separated from his troupe meets a woodlander actor separated from his. Not being fighters, panic ensues when they meet, and both beasts create a plot to slip by their dangerous enemy. It's just unfortunate they chose disguises that are respective opposites... again.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 22,237 - Reviews: 27 - Updated: 12-21-12 - Published: 10-16-12 - Complete11. Echoes of the Forgotten » reviews"You said you would never mention that!" That was what Cross said to Ben upon her previous litter's mention. But the question remains- what happened to them after their mother left? The answer lies through the eyes of Cross's daughter. Collab w/ Noratcat.Ginga series - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 129,912 - Reviews: 18 - Updated: 9-10-12 - Published: 5-2-1012. Hunter's Bias » reviewsEven the Yautja have their flaws, and fragility exists in different forms. Unfortunately for a quiet ooman and his coonhound, the same fragility that exists in him doesn't in a curious and sadistic Badblood who's stalking the forest... if any kind of fragility is in there at all.Aliens/Predator - Rated: T - English - Drama/Horror - Chapters: 2 - Words: 12,584 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 8-11-12 - Published: 8-1-1213. The Reverse Taggerung Effect » reviewsThe protagonist is not necessarily a hero, whether they come from heroic origins or not. The Taggerung Denya entered a vermin family with woodlander roots. He came out with them. Another otter cub entered a vermin family. She didn't. Not that she minded any.Redwall - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Family - Chapters: 20 - Words: 197,341 - Reviews: 72 - Updated: 2-22-12 - Published: 12-19-11 - Complete14. Birds and Bees Do What? reviewsSome woodlanders tactfully introduce their offspring to the idea of reproduction with the birds and bees. Others, like vermin, aren't so fortunate to have such an outlet. Even if the cub is a woodlander. T for mild sexual references; ONESHOTRedwall - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,694 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 2-5-12 - Complete
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