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Author has written 37 stories for Criminal Minds, In Plain Sight, Leverage, Suits, and Scandal. I have no idea what to put here and I fear my introversion and timidity will come through. I'm a fan of crime shows (among other shows) Criminal Minds, In Plain Sight, NCIS, White Collar...you name it and I've probably watched it or currently have it on my DVR. I guess you can say I'm a TV addict with no intentions on entering rehab. I'm new to creative writing, especially when it comes to sharing it.I'm big on reading and I will probably continue to read more than I actually write. I don't consider myself to be a writer (strange to hear considering my actually being here, but it's true). I've just found writing to be a little escape these days and who doesn't enjoy a good escape from life? As a result, I'm my biggest critic, and I'm not the most confident about my work. I don't know how to describe my writing style, random perhaps?I guess you can say I sort of freestyle with very little planning, so I welcome any reviews, whether it's good or bad, I'd like to think that I could use all the help I can get. : ) | |||||
1. You Saved Me reviews"Huck," she stated rather than asked. Her voice was but a raspy whisper to her own ears. "You couldn't sleep." She felt the bed dip beside her as he lay down on top of the comforter, hands behind his head, staring up at the ceiling."I would never leave you alone," Huck said with such a quiet conviction that she felt overwhelmed. Post- "Seven Fifty-Two". Oluck friendship.Scandal - Rated: T - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,097 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-6-13 - Olivia P. & Huck - Complete2. Look Up to the Sky reviewsWhen he was five he remembered looking up to the sky and feeling pure bliss because he always seen his father's smiling face looking down at him.When he was seventeen he looked up to the sky and all he seen was the black of night, because God stopped answering a long time ago. Inspired by "Profiler,Profiled" and "Restoration". Mentions of underage drinking and sexual abuse.Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,080 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4-12-13 - D. Morgan - Complete3. Unhinged reviewsTag to "He's Back".You're beautiful," Harvey said suddenly. "You're strong, and because you're strong, sometimes people think you're invincible. You're still human, Jessica. You're allowed to be human. You're allowed to hurt."He's just trying to get into your head." "I know that," she practically snapped before exhaling and meeting Harvey's eyes. "But why is it working?" she said sSuits - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,079 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 2-14-13 - Jessica P. & Harvey S. - Complete4. Catharsis reviewsIt was just like Harvey to want something, to need something, and to project it on those around him. Because Harvey Specter doesn't need. She understood it. For two hours, she could just breathe, and be Jessica and he could be Harvey and they could . . For two hours, they could just be free. Post Zane v. Zane.Suits - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,715 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 2-7-13 - Jessica P. & Harvey S. - Complete5. Joint Custody reviewsPost "High Noon". Mike is still getting high and not showing up to work and Jessica has had enough. There is some swearing and mention of drugs. Some Jarvey banter as well.Suits - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,355 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1-15-13 - Jessica P. & Mike R. - Complete6. A New Year and Nothing's New » reviews"I wonder what the ball is made of? It's so shiny! Ohh, I know!We should steal it!" He was really starting to think that no one understood what he meant by spending the holidays apart.Theteam brings in the New Year together.*Part 2 2012*Parker&the ball. *Part 3 2013* The Ball revisited.Leverage - Rated: T - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 8,872 - Reviews: 22 - Updated: 1-3-13 - Published: 1-3-11 - Nathan F. & Parker - Complete7. Winning the Battle Losing the War reviewsPart of him was surprised to see Jessica there. The other part of him knew she was coming. "Little do they know, we don't understand our relationship." "We're not going to discuss this," she said in a warning tone. "That's the problem, we never discuss it." Post "Sucker Punch". Harvey and Jessica deal with the fallout of Hardman and confront their relationship and each other.Suits - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,268 - Reviews: 24 - Published: 8-8-12 - Harvey S. & Jessica P. - Complete8. Trusting Me,Trusting You reviewsThe silence in the room was practically deafening. Harvey studied her intensely, her clenched jaw, the slight shake of the fists she kept making, and the wetness of her eyes. She was fighting back tears. A realization dawned on him and he voiced it before he had the right mind to keep it to himself. "You're not just angry. You're hurt. I hurt you." Tag to 2.01 "She Knows".Suits - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,601 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 6-20-12 - Jessica P. & Harvey S. - Complete9. The Children of Derek Morgan reviewsShe needs him to believe in the fact that therein lays within him an inexplicable power that touches many….that saves lives in more ways than he could ever possibly fathom. Post-FoundationCriminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,995 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 4-11-12 - D. Morgan - Complete10. A Brother's Love reviewsHe silently prayed to a God he didn't talk to nearly enough when he heard the BANG. It's *his* job to protect to them...Leverage - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,024 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 2-29-12 - Eliot S. & Alec H. - Complete11. Speaking In Hypothetics reviewsThe Pearson-Hardman Holiday Party is in full swing.Mike's whiny and slightly Scroogy. Donna's buzzed and slightly frisky. But what's wrong with Jessica. What happens when the mentee becomes the mentor. Another exploration of the Jess&Harvey *dynamic*Suits - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,753 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 12-20-11 - Harvey S. & Jessica P. - Complete12. In With the New » reviews"As you may be aware, I brought you here to discuss the up and coming season. We kick off in a few days and I want to make sure you're all aware of the changes in store," SECOND CHAPTER SEASON 7Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 6,574 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 9-19-11 - Published: 9-19-10 - Complete13. My Brother's Keeper reviews"In the end it will be like the beginning where all they have is each other" Morgan and Reid deal with the aftermath of Prentiss' death and the aftermath of her return. Slight spoilers for season 7Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,582 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9-15-11 - D. Morgan & S. Reid - Complete14. Breaking the Unbreakable reviewsNo one ever wants to know about their heroes' dark moments;that would require the fog of blind faith and child-like awe to be lifted. The problem with witnessing the weak moments of the gods, was the realization of just how mortal all were in comparasionSuits - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,486 - Reviews: 18 - Published: 9-6-11 - Harvey S. & Jessica P. - Complete15. Harvey's Angels reviewsHarvey Specter is pretty but he sure as hell isn't dumb. Spoiler to 1x11.Suits - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,018 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9-3-11 - Donna & Jessica P. - Complete16. Ambiguity reviewsSome people come into your life for a reason, a season, or a lifetime. Somedays Jessica doesn't know which applies to Harvey.Suits - Rated: T - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,818 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 8-26-11 - Jessica P. & Harvey S. - Complete17. Voices of the Forgotten reviewsFamily wasn't about some kinship through blood or genes or even shared experiences.It could come in the form of a diverse group of individuals with dedication,loyalty, and undying support between them.But how many forgotten voices whispered in the halls?Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,069 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7-14-11 - A. Seaver & Elle G. - Complete18. ThirtyTwo Hours reviews"It's not your fault." As anyone in his field knew,the physical pain was easy. He longed for that pain. The emotional pain is what was hard.Leverage - Rated: T - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,993 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 6-14-11 - Eliot S. - Complete19. Solitude of Betrayal reviewsDerek Morgan has learned the truth about his friend and partner and he's never felt so alone. Post "Lauren", "With Friends Like These", and "Hanley Waters".Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Angst/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,798 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 4-12-11 - D. Morgan - Complete20. A Hero's Solace reviewsOnly one thing can make Derek Morgan's pain go away...or rather, only someone. Can Morgan tell her how he feels on a lonely Valentine's day? A CCOAC Valentine's Day gift fic for sangreal7.Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,867 - Reviews: 15 - Published: 2-22-11 - D. Morgan & P. Garcia - Complete21. Poor Mann's Mary reviewsMarshall introspection. Mary. He was always thinking of Mary. Thoughts of her consumed him, day in and day out. She plagued his every thought, every second, every day for years.In Plain Sight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,733 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1-28-11 - Marshall M. - Complete22. Coffee and Cream reviews"She knew it was wrong. She knew the moment she felt the spark when their fingertips touched upon her grabbing the napkin from his hand." Jordan Todd doesn't fit into the BAU but there's one thing that makes the dark days worth it...or perhaps someone.Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Friendship/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,366 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1-3-11 - Jordan T. & S. Reid - Complete23. The Scorpio and the Swan reviewsThey eyed each other for a long while, a hint of humor sparkling in both of their eyes. They both knew that this particular discussion would never be over and that their issues would never be solved, but they were both too stubborn not to try.Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,207 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11-14-10 - D. Morgan & A. Hotchner/Hotch - Complete24. Once Loved,Twice Lost reviewsA response to the Candy Land Chit Chat Author's challenge. Pairing is Reid and Garcia. Reid's father dies and he turns to Garcia for comfort.Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,041 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10-14-10 - S. Reid & P. Garcia - Complete25. An Unexpected Evening With The Boys » reviewsA late night in the office at the BAU has the men slamming back whiskey, revealing unexpected secrets, and sharing stories about women. Rated T for language and sexual innuendos. *three shot*Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,885 - Reviews: 35 - Updated: 8-18-10 - Published: 5-15-10 - Complete26. My Father's Son reviewsMorgan helps a fellow colleague in need, in the process discovering that there is more to Rossi that meets the eye. *2010 CM Profiler's Choice Award for Best Rossi/Morgan *Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,913 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 7-11-10 - D. Morgan & D. Rossi - Complete27. Satan's Heels reviewsA response to the Fanfic challenge Round Two.Strauss has a request.Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,474 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 7-2-10 - S. Reid & Erin S. - Complete28. Saturday Morning Delights reviewsDerek Morgan and Penelope Garcia have a little Saturday morning 'date' that unfortunately is broken. Cute,funny,unexpected little oneshot.Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,213 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6-3-10 - Complete29. Being There For Marshall reviewsMarshall has proven time and time again that he will always b there for Mary, but now it's Mary's turn to be there for him. M/M FluffIn Plain Sight - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,258 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 6-1-10 - Mary S. & Marshall M. - Complete30. Words Left Unsaid reviewsDerek Morgan had every intention of enjoying his night off. An unexpected visitor from his past leads to a slight change in plans as they confront their issues and have a long overdue chat.Criminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,949 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-15-10 - D. Morgan & Elle G. - Complete31. It Starts With Insomnia reviewsElle is spiraling downward, and she's increasingly aware of it as a result of her inability to sleep. The question is whether or not anyone else notices? A One-Shot. R & RCriminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,147 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-8-10 - Elle G. & D. Morgan32. LearJet Reflections reviewsA brief one-shot written from Derek Morgan's point of view. He reflects on what the team means to him.Criminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,353 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-8-10 - D. Morgan - Complete33. Unsub: BAU reviewsThey catch them everyday, but what happens when the unsub is one of their own? one shotCriminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,315 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-1-1034. Tears Shed reviewsIt's five years later and Garcia still can't suppress the anguish and pain of loss. There is always hope on the horizon and for every loss there is a gain. one shotCriminal Minds - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,092 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5-1-10 - P. Garcia - Complete35. Christmas Cheer reviewsFour of the BAU's finest, will do whatever it takes to avoid a lackluster Christmas with Prentiss. one shotCriminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,087 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-1-10 - S. Reid & P. Garcia - Complete36. The Aftermath reviewsWith two members of the team in pain, it's not suprising that Derek Morgan blames himself. one shotCriminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 675 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5-1-10 - D. Morgan - Complete37. The Letter reviewsSpencer's reaction after reading that fated letter by Gideon. one shotCriminal Minds - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 492 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5-1-10 - S. Reid - Complete