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since: 05-06-10, id: 2353956, Profile Updated: 10-24-11
country: USA
Author has written 5 stories for Star Wars, and Gears of War.

Hola! Welcome to my corner of the net! I hate writing about myself, but I though my profile looked a little blank, so here we go!

real name- Jennifer. . . don't stalk me. Please.

world of origin- earth, country of origin-America.

I hate writing biography's. I feel awkward writing this. I love to write creatively, such as fan fics (duh) poems and random short stories. Most of my fics on here will be about Kotor one, Burn Notice, or Scrubs. Those are my absolute favs. I still feel awkward writing this. My life is amazingly hectic, with marching and concert band, cross country, theater, school, and of course, my writing. But I wouldn't have it any other way.

I'm a little strange. I like to hunt more than I like to shop (a LOT more) and I'd rather listen to country music that hip hop or pop. I love to train hunting dogs, and am currently working with a hard-headed sweetheart named Dash. :) He’s a black lab, my personal dog, and just got his Master hunting test Title. (kudos to those who know what I'm talking about.) I just got a new puppy that I'm going to train, she's a female yellow lab named May, short for mayhem! That's her in my profile pic. I'm your nice little country girl, the only time I feel completely at peace is when I'm surround by open fields, trees, livestock, and dogs. Most girls my age have dreams of becoming an actress or a model, a doctor or a lawyer. Not me. I want to have my own ranch with a barn and one of those beat up old Chevy trucks. Bright red. :)

I still feel awkward.

I'm currently re-writing one of my stories, One true love into One More Time. It's my first honest to goodness story, and I am completely in love with it. Most of my stories will be original. I tend to write "What if?" stories, things that my imaginations have dreamt up, even if I like the way it was done previously. I tend to jump around completely, so if the main character was one way, don't expect them to act the same way in a different fanfic. I live for reviews, and I respond to each one as soon as I can and send anyone who reviews a preview of the next chapter (if its a multi-chapter fic.)

My strengths- I love originality and it shows in my writing. All of my stories have a little something extra in them, something that I've asked myself "what if..." and then set out to answer it.

My weaknesses- I'm not very good with grammar and spelling, and I'll admit to it. I really do try to catch all the little errors, but I'm not perfect. Also, if I get bored with a story or have lost interest in it, I might abandon it. I like to write, and if I don't enjoy what I'm writing, I tend to lose my creativity and the story just dies otherwise. If it's a story I’ve posted on here, it probably wont happen, but if you like a story, tell me! It helps a lot in times when my muse has abandoned me to know I still have readers out there.

I just wanna say a huge thank you to my beta rockforthecross74. You are great, thanks so much for the help. Everyone, go read her stuff, its great! (after you read and review my stuff first, lol) Also, a shoutout to my gears beta, Kade Riggs! Thanks so much for all your help!

I love y'all and hope you keep reading!

So I've done a little bit of movie making for KotOr, and I would love for my readers to go check it out! Here's the link to the first one, with many more to follow!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9KSXwmrhPA&feature=youtube_gdata

4/3/11- Story Updates

So just wanted to say my laptop decided to crash and now I have lost all my work on any of my stories. That's why it's taking so long to update any more chapters on any of my stories. So Sorry guys! Especially to my One More Time fans, I had written the next chapter and was two seconds away from sending it off to my beta when my computer conked out on me. T.T I'm trying to get it rewritten as fast as I can, but I just cant seem to mount up enough courage to work on it. Bare with me guys, I'm working on it!

I had the next chapter for A Father's Love complete, but the same thing happened to it as One More Time. I will get back to work on it, but it might take a while to get it finished and out of beta. Thanks for your patience!

Also I've started a goofy little side story, KotOR- The Musical. No promises on how frequent or infrequent the updates will be for this fic. This is my random fic that I write on to get the creativity flowing. Should be fun though! Go read it and tell me what you think!

So that's about it. Sorry to keep you waiting, but these things happen, right? So go cheer me up by reviewing one of my stories! Thank you!

Just wanted to leave you all with a quote I found to be inspiring- "It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. We ask ourselves, 'Who am I to be brilliant, gorgeous, talented, and fabulous?'. Actually, who are you not to be?" - Marianne Williamson.

Summary rants-I assume many writers on this site are here to improve their writing and get feedback from their readers. That being said, I'm tired of reading summaries that say 'please read' or 'sorry I can't write summaries' or 'story is better than summary'. If you can't write a summary, why should I assume your writing is any better? In truth, many stories have fine summaries, until you get to the part about apologizing for it being bad. STOP APOLOGIZING FOR YOUR WRITING! I refuse to read a story where the author flat out states the summary is bad. Summaries are actually not that hard. Just tell what your story is about! If it sounds interesting and original, YOU WILL GET READERS! A lot more than you would if you start out by saying your writing sucks!


1. A Father's Love » reviews
Dom Santiago lost everything in the war against the locust. Fifteen years later his daughter, Sylvia Santiago, emerges under a new name. Will they recognize each other? And, more importantly, will they forgive each other?
Gears of War - Rated: T - English - Family/Adventure - Chapters: 20 - Words: 126,181 - Reviews: 172 - Updated: 4-26-13 - Published: 2-19-11 - Sylvia S.
2. The Blood of Innocence » reviews
The heart of a killer is a hard one. After brutally murdering three of the COG's most prized doctors, Clarissa Rogers is thrown in The Slab to rot along with the effluent of humanity. Fighting to survive with the worst of the worst, she struggles to untangle the woven threads of her past, and the mystery of her imprisonment.
Gears of War - Rated: T - English - Mystery/Crime - Chapters: 3 - Words: 7,051 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 7-8-12 - Published: 5-30-12 - Marcus F.
3. The Last Christmas reviews
Join in on the last Christmas Dominic Santiago spends with his family before E-day. A look at the family Dom loved and lost when hell broke through their streets. Guest stars include Marcus Fenix and the Cole Train!
Gears of War - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,922 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-26-11 - Dominic S. & Maria S. - Complete
4. One More Time » reviews
LSF Revan left, and has been gone a long time. When she returns, she finds Carth in the arms of another woman. Is it too late for them? Walkthrough of the second game with Revan and the whole gang, with a few additions thrown in to keep things fresh.
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 8 - Words: 49,978 - Reviews: 37 - Updated: 7-10-11 - Published: 9-14-10 - Revan & Carth O.
5. Kotor The Musical » reviews
Yep, you read the title right. A walkthrough of the first KotOR game, complete with music, dancing, and plenty of things going BOOM!
Star Wars - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 8,871 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 5-31-11 - Published: 4-3-11 - Revan & Carth O.